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MagicBunny
April 21, 2007, 09:46 PM
This is my attempt at editing/cleaning a page and i was wondering how i did.

This is the original
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4931/342001kv6.th.jpg (http://img143.imageshack.us/my.php?image=342001kv6.jpg)

My attempt at cleaning
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/8189/image1dx1.th.png (http://img143.imageshack.us/my.php?image=image1dx1.png)

PLz offer some feedback

Sai_the_Shaman
April 21, 2007, 11:48 PM
I think it looks really good. If only the scans I translate were that clean. It would make the transcribing process before I translate a lot easier lol

Vato Loco!
April 22, 2007, 12:46 AM
Could you please re-size it to 1200, it's easier to judge that way.

The things I can tell mostly from this size are that your borders need to be re-done, it looks like you tried, and put complete borders around the panels. There shouldn't be any at the edges of the panels that touch the edge of the page. The whites still have dust in them. In the third panel, that rectangular part of the wall touching the edge of the page should be white.

The re-drawing looks pretty good from what I can see at this size.

MagicBunny
April 22, 2007, 07:49 PM
Ill follow your advice. This was really only practice to c if i was doing good or not