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arialph
May 30, 2007, 09:35 AM
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/9135/basicchallenge1zg4.png
Please critic/rate my work... this is the 2nd time i attempt a cleaning challenge and the first time i finish one. =D

also please guide me if you find any wrong spots... thank you very much

Vato Loco!
June 03, 2007, 01:37 AM
Can't see the picture.

arialph
June 03, 2007, 09:52 AM
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/9135/basicchallenge1zg4.png

Please critic/rate my work... this is the 2nd time i attempt a cleaning challenge and the first time i finish one. =D

also please guide me if you find any wrong spots... thank you very much

EDIT: Lol sorry didn't notice

yoniekai
June 04, 2007, 08:29 AM
looks great. i cant find any other major flaw except the borders. they're too thick. usually HQ scans use 2 px thick borders (no anti-aliasing). the polygonal lasso tool is the best for the job.

Vato Loco!
June 04, 2007, 02:04 PM
Ok, first your borders. They need to be completely re-done following this (http://mangahelpers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=6796) tutorial. No buts, just follow it. Secondly, your whites are extremely dirty where the trees are and there's still quite a bit of dust in the other whites as well. In every panel. Didn't really check your blacks but from what I can see with out going back into photoshop, they're good. You missed quite a bit of white lines, and there's some black and white lines that need to be stroked.

All of the red boxes are highlighting where there should be white lines, all the blue boxes highlight where a line either needs to be re-stroked, completed or connected.

Note: the blue boxes are for example, except the one that connects the white line. There are way more lines that need stroked than I pointed out. Really, any line that looks broken should be completed and re-stroked.

http://i16.tinypic.com/4lpbe5v.png