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poukram
December 19, 2007, 07:38 AM
After much time spent on photoshop, here is the result.

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/3499/challenge1finisheder7.png

Please rate and tell me if anything is done wrong and how i can make it better.

Obxist
December 27, 2007, 03:49 AM
okay here u go... fast rating

on panel 5 where Kakashi talk with shikamaru... you redraw the baloon ... i believe its too thick..

all the redrawings line on the tree is not blending with the real one.. try to blend it..

still got detail loss on some faces..

nice try and overall its MQ

shadow771
December 29, 2007, 07:35 AM
its good for your first but u need to make the white lines smoother and work on the back ground with the burn tool (shadows 25%) and u should be ok (panel 8)

u need to fix choji's sign on his armor(panel 8)

and as obxist said the the balloon look's squarely, u dont need to re-draw it just open the raw use M tool then cut it with V tool. then use the line tool 1px and make sure anti is checked.

poukram
January 01, 2008, 10:20 AM
thank you for your advises, I'll try to redo some things when I get back home.
But I don't really know how to use the burn tool to make the redrawn lines smoother.