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pokopori
December 27, 2007, 12:12 AM
Well here it is!

Sad part is, it took me about 1.5 hours to do ONE page :scry This is the second edit I've done since starting photoshop a week ago. I don't think its too bad but PLEASE give me criticism! Thanks!

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/9770/completezy6.th.jpg (http://img508.imageshack.us/my.php?image=completezy6.jpg)

Obxist
December 27, 2007, 03:38 AM
kay lets see... my first opinion is... too small and too blurry... looks like u used gaussian blur too much (sorry if wrong)... and i recommend too use PNG to save it...

theres still dirt on the dialogue ballon....

i believe this one at max should took 30 minutes to clean the page (without typesetting)
the RAW is Tank-RAWs so rather than you blacken the black i suggest you to pay more attention regarding dirt... because mostly to clean tank-RAW means remove dirt on the page ... i believe with a little leveling we could get all black become black and white become white...

overall MQ

shadow771
December 29, 2007, 07:39 AM
use a simpler page that doesn't have grays in it if u want to learn right.

but its very good for a first try :)

practice and u will get better