View Full Version : Dragon Fall
leecherboy
June 10, 2006, 06:51 AM
For those who don't know, Dragon Fall is a legendary spanish parody of Dragon Ball that was published over 10 years ago, and ran off for several years, with around 40+ chapters. Its authors were Nacho Fernandez and Alvaro Lopez.
Here's a teaser, the cover of the first chapter, #0:
http://dreamers.com/galeria/imagenes/a131.jpg
So, you can find the raw here:
http://rapidshare.de/files/22642866/Dragon_Fall_Especial_0.zip.html
And some notes of your interest:
-If the raw looks so wonderfully good, it's thanks to rykarreolacr, who kindly pointed me towards the best existing scan
-You read it left to right, western style
-This chapter is the first one that came out. It was double-sized, and began at that point of the story. However, the next ones will start the story from the beginning.
-The translation for it got so big, I'll split it in 3 posts so your head doesn't explode. :p
Said that, enjoy! :amuse
Dragon Fall #0 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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First off, the names:
Celulitis (Celula in spanish, Cell in japanese): In Spain, the word 'Celulitis' means both the 'Cellulitis' disease and the 'Cellulite' cosmetic condition. Here, it means the latter one (that's the main reason behind the jokes).
Vegetal (Vegeta): 'Vegetal' means 'vegetable', and a person who is in comma, as well.
Trakatranks (Trunks): this is just the loud noises something would do when falling.
Chiqrilin (Krilin): he's named after the "Galletas Chiquilin", a famous brand of cookies some years ago in Spain.
Soson Goku (Son Goku): the word 'soso' means dull, as the word 'soson' means 'a very dull one'.
Chun Gohan (Son Gohan): something that is 'chungo' means that it sucks, basically.
Numbers XVI, XVII & XVIII (#16, #17 & #18): nothing special here.
Tente (Dende): named after a brand of building toys of the same name, if memory serves.
Duende Tarugo (Duende Tortuga in spanish, Muten Roshi in japanese): 'Duende Tortuga' means 'Turtle Goblin', whereas 'Duende Tarugo' means 'Dumbass Goblin'.
Discolo (Piccolo): 'discolo' means 'naughty'.
Kagarrot (Kakarrot, Goku's original name): you may know by now, 'cagar' means 'to take a dump'.
Pompon (Popo): a 'pompon' is one of those fluffy balls. In english, the word is spelled in the same way, so you probably knew that.
Duende Sakarin (Duende Karin in spanish, Karin in japanese): a pun with 'sacarin'.
Vietnamek (Namek): yep, a pun with Vietnam.
Kehu-ron Dragon (Shenron Dragon): the expression '¡que huron!' means 'what a greedy one!', or something like that. By the way, it's pretty much outdated by now.
Kome-jame-ha (Kame-hame-ha): both 'come' and 'jama' mean 'eat', so it could be translated as 'eat this ha'.
Mr. Patan (Mr. Satan): 'patan' means 'clumsy'.
Peskaito (Kaito): 'pescaito' means 'little fish'.
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Up until now: Vegetal and his son Trakatranks are about to face Celulitis' lethal attack (no, they aren't going on a diet), but the android tuns out to be really deadly. He's about to absorb androids XVII and XVIII, and reach perfection, but Chiqrilin is there to attempt to stop him. Will he make it? Who knows...
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Trak.-We're not afraid of you, Celulitis, we'll crush you between us two...!
Box: It's his father (though they look like Pixie and Dixie)
Text on handkerchief: I love androids
Veg.-No.
Veg.-I will get rid of him alone...
Trak.-But dad, that's too dangerous!
Trak.-You can't be so reckless now!
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Veg.-I'm sure I can take care of him alone...!
Veg.-And don't call me "dad", it freaks me out!
Veg.-I'll crush him with my eyes closed!!
Veg.-Well... I may open them a little...
XVII-What?
Cel.-[Kiddo! Me wants!]
XVIII-No!
Chiq.-Shit!
Arrow: Don't say foul words!
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XVIII-Number XVII!
XVIII-Spit him! Spit him! Spit him!
Text on bag: stones
Veg.-Well, well...
Veg.-After all, we may see something interesting...
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Trak.-What's gonna happen now that he's absorbed one of the androids?
Veg.-Yes! Yes!
Veg.-It's wonderful!
Note: I'd say he's friggin' ugly!
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Chiq.-Uh oh, I don't like this...!
Cel.-I'm not the Celulitis you knew...[I'm so strong!]
Cel.-I've taken a step towards perfection, though I'm still missing another one...
Trak.-Shit!
XVIII-Uh oh, he means me...
XVI-I won't let you touch number XVIII!!
Goku-No, don't do it, that's not the way!
Gohan-Think before rushing it!
Gohan-Pass it towards the center of the field, don't be silly!
Goku-Come on, dribble him, you can do it!
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Cel.-Well, well...
Cel.-Just what I thought...
Note: No, I'm not explaining anything! Absurd humor is like that...
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Veg.-Mmmm, I like this...
XVIII-Lessee, I had some emergency clothes around here... [No, not that! Mmmm...][I like this!]
XVIII-Chiqriliin...!
Chiq.-Uh?
XVIII-You wouldn't let Celulitis hurt me, would you?
Chiq.-Oohh!
Veg.-How wonderful!
Veg.-Such a beauty!
Veg.-You look really made to fight!
Veg.-What a body! Such power!
Cel.-But I can be even more powerful, did you know?
Veg.-Oh, yeaaah?
Veg.-Please, please, do it!
Trak.-No, dammit!
XVIII-Uh?
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Cel.-[Tee hee, touchies, touchies]
Chiq.-Uh, wha, wha?
Veg.-Good, he's done what I wanted, now he'll achieve perfection and I'll be able to use all my power...
Chiq.-Shit, she looked so good!
Cel.-Oh yeah, and she tasted good, too...!
Sound:Bamf![Again...]
Veg.-Good, you did it, now we can fight! Come on, let's start!
Veg.-Wow!
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Chiq.-Shit!
Box: Sorry about repeating this word so much, but it's the only foul word the censorship allows us to say.
Trak.-I gotta stop him, I must bring out all of my hidden power.
Chiq.-Shoot, he's the Hulk!
Chiq.-I never thought you could bring out so much power, but why don't you move?!
Trak.-I can't, I'm way stuffed, don't let him find out...
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Cel.-Come on, bring it on...
Cel.-Let's see how strong you have gotten...
Note: Several "tromps" later...
Cel.-Tsk, tsk, you've disappointed me...
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Cel.-You current situation puts you in a disadvantage against me...
Cel.-I can react to you attacks, no matter how powerful they are...
Cel.-But you can't do the same...
Cel.-Allow me to demonstrate...
Chiq.-I gotta be seeing things...!
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Cel.-So? What will be your next move?
Trak.-S... Shit...! You... You've... beaten me...!
Cel.-Of course! Now that I've achieved perfection, I am invincible!
Cel.-And no one will stand against me!
Cel.-No one... will... stand...!
Cel.-Bwaaaaaah! How boring! Nobody will ever fight me! I won't have any more fun!
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Cel.-Bwaaaah, how dull, how boring, I don't want this to end yet...
Alvaro-Say, what did you have to draw in here? [Uh? Lazy you?]
Nacho-I don't quite remember...[Shoot, how shocking!]
Sign: Sorry for the trouble
Trak.-You don't want this to end yet...?
Trak.-Say, Celulitis!
Note: What a sissy!
Trak.-I think I got an idea...
Trak.-If you're so eager to keep on fighting, why don't you give us a second chance? Give us some time to prepare ourselves, and then create a tournament in which we'll all fight against you...
Cel.-Yes!! I think that's a brilliant idea! I'll spare your life till you're all ready and then I'll call up the great tournament!
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Cel.-I'll give you ten days to get ready, more than that would be wasteless waiting... [He, he, he][I'm such a bastard...]
Trak.-Just tell me something, Celulitis, why do you do this? What is your purpose?
Cel.-My purpose...? I never put that much thought into it, you see...!
Note: There's no doubt he has Soson Goku's cells!
Cel.-Bye!
Chiq.-Are you stupid, man? Who told ya to help him?
Trak.-Don't worry, he doesn't know that Soson Goku and Chun Gohan are training in that room where a year passes in a day...
Trak.-In ten days we'll all be ready to finish him...
Trak.-Won't we?
Trak.-Won't we?
Chiq.-I gotta be seeing things...!
Note: What? If Toriyama photocopies his drawings, we won't stay behind!
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Later, in a far away place...
Cel.-This place looks alright...
Cel.-Let's go for some do-it-yourself!
Cel.-Perfect! (Like me!)
Sign: Don't smoke the weed
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Next day, on the televisions all around the world...
TV-News: In the Penguin Village, Arale Norimaki once again broke in half the local police's patrol car while she was chasing a butterfly...
TV-"Yoyo!" was what she said...
Du.Ta.-What's wrong? Did the antenna got fucked up?
Cel.-Kwak! Kwak!
*Translation note: "El Juego de la Oca" (The Game of the Goose) is a board game as popular in Spain as the "Snakes and Ladders" game in America. In fact, it's so popular it got its own TV Show. I needn't to say, "El Gran Juego de la Celulitis" is a parody of that show.
Cel.-Don't miss in ten days this very important event, in which the whole earth's future will be decided...
Du.Ta.-It's... It's him... Celulitis!
Cel.-Because, unless any of the contestants beats me, Celulitis, the earth will have no future!
Box: That day, the future catastrophe was made clear... The last TV program in history would be a reality show!!
[br]Posted on: June 10, 2006, 04:48:52 AM_________________________________________________Page 19
Later, on heaven...
Dis.-So, you also saw him on TV...
Chiq.-Yeah, we were in the Duende Tarugo's house when he showed up!
Veg.-That monster won't destroy anything while there's a single breath left in me!
Chiq.-Speaking of which, Trakatranks, what a haircut!
Trak.-It was my mother, I didn't want to...!
Pom.-Soson Goku and Chun Gohan should be outta the training room soon, time's almost up.
Dis.-After all that time training, they sure are expected to look somewhat different...
All-They're out!
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Gohan-Wow! Gross...
Goku-Sorry about the shades, guys, but the environment change is too sudden...
Signs: mini golf, tennis courts, shooting field
Dis.-I sense a huge change in them both... Have they increased their level slightly? Or is it because of the shades?
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Goku-Celulitis is still alive, right? I feel his energy...
Veg.-Kagarrot has increased a lot his power level, I know it...
Gohan-Listen, mister Discolo, I need new clothes, I want yours...
Gohan-I don't think you've understood me, mister Discolo...
Dis.-These humans are so weird...
Goku-Now there are some matters to settle...
Chiq.-Are you talking about Celulitis?
Goku-No, that's not it. Now that there isn't a God in heaven, there won't be balls, so we'll have to find a substitute...
Goku-I'll use the teleportation to search for him...
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Using the teleportation, Soson Goku made it to the place where the last Vietnamek inhabitants still lived...
Goku-This kid is Tente, I think some of you already know him, they told me that even though he looks like this, he's very intelligent and will make a fine God...
Pom.-Alright! I'll bring the dragon's model!
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Chiq.-So you're gonna reactivate Kehu-ron dragon's power, huh?
Tente-Well, yes, but before that I think we should talk about my fares...
Veg.-Listen, shitty kid, they have gone lookin' for you at the end of the world 'cause you're the only one able to reactivate the dragon!! Do it or I'll KICK YOUR ASS all the way back!!
Tente-Well, that's it...
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Goku-Well, since we have settled this, I say we go down to the earth to get ready for the fight...
Goku-Bye.
Veg.-He's so calm about it!
On the way there, they stop for a while in the Duende Sakarin's tower:
Goku-Yeah, we have been training in God's palace, look how strong I have gotten, look...
Goku-It looks like I don't even know how strong I've gotten...
Arrow: Something offensive.
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Time flies by. During the first five days of Celulitis' deadline, our heroes warm up their engines and try some soft exercises...
Someone-Pass it!
Someone-Show-off!
All-Oooooooh, he made it past the superwarrior level!!
After this, Soson Goku decides to spend the next five days having fun with his son, while the rest of them keep on training...
Someone-All right, let's play doubles, but no arm-stretching, got that?
Gohan-Are you sure this is ok, dad?
Goku-You bet it's ok!
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Suddenly, on TV, three days before the deadline...
TV-And a clear contestant in the Big Game of The Celulitis has made his appearance...!
TV-He's the great wrestling champion, Mr. Patan!
Arrows: Haircut style: "Jackson Five"
Brain style: "Planet of the Apes"
MrP.-I saw Celulitis' ad in TV, and I must say I wasn't too impressed...
MrP.-That guy is nuts, nobody could destroy the earth by himself...
MrP.-I'll face that guy, I'll make him see his foolishness, and then I'll rip him off and put his head on top of a stake!
MrP.-I'll smash him!
MrP.-I'll crush him!
MrP.-I'll blast him!
MrP.-I'll pretty much hurt him!
Chiq.-It seems we'll have some extra garbage lying around in the fight...!
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And the great day arrived! The attention of millions of people (most of them under their beds) was set on this building...
The contestans eventually came...
Chiq.-So, did your mother let you come to fight?
Gohan-Well, the thing is, when she saw me like this, she snapped and she hasn't recovered yet...
Goku-It looks like a fine day today, doesn't it, Vegetal?
Trak.-Hey! Do you remember we took Android number XVI to my mom's factory to repair him?
Trak.-He's already fixed, and improved for combat...
Trak.-And with a more sophisticated design!
XVI-Hi.
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Chiq.-Look who's here...
MrP.-Hum!
MrP.-I never thought so much crowd would gather at my big show.
MrP.-Well, I'll do my best to provide a good entertainment...
Goku-Hey, look!
All-The door is opening!
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Veg.-I can't see anything...
Trak.-What will be his purpose?
Cel.-Welcome to the Big Game of The Celulitis! The fun will start soon!
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Cel.-Please, take a seat while I explain the game's rules...!
Cel.-The rules are quite simple: you'll take turns to fight against me. The one who dies, loses, and may also be required to pay a fee...
Cel.-In the unlikely case I wind up dying, you'd save the Earth, but as I said, that's just a hypothesis.
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Chiq.-Listen, Trakatranks, I'll sit behind you, ok? I have a bad feeling about this...
Veg.-(That Celulitis is too conceited... We'll have to teach him...)
Cel.-And now, the Celulitis' Game starts...!
Trak.-Listen, Soson Goku, how can you be smiling under these circumstances? Do you know something we don't? Or are you so confident we'll win?
Goku-Oh, no, it's not that! I'm just remembering some funny jokes and stuff...!
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Trak.-Be more serious! You look like you don't care if Celulitis kills us all and destroys the Earth!
Goku-Oh! Will he do that?
Goku-Waaaah! I'm scared! What's gonna happen?
Gohan-But dad, we were training for this fight, your power is above anyone else's...!
Goku-Oh, yeah, sure! Well... then... ok...
Dis.-What a fool, fuck!
Cel.-So... listen...
Cel.-Isn't anyone coming out first?
Cel.-I'm getting bored...
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Goku-Ok!
Goku-I'll go myself!
Cel.-Perfect! It'll be a pretty entertaining start!
Cel.-I'll catch ya, I'll catch ya!
Sound: Run, run
Chiq.-[Oh, god...!]
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Goku-Alright, now I'm serious! [Kome! Jame!]
Goku-Haaaa!!
Cel.-Kiaaa!
MrP.-It's a trick...! [Word!]
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Goku-I... I give up... [Ouch...][Hurts!][Man, it stings!]
Cel.-And who's gonna fight me now? [Am I gonna have to destroy the Earth already?][So disturbing!]
Cel.-Very well, let the next one step out forward...
Gohan-Bastards...
Cel.-Well, Chun Gohan, so you've decided to go out after your father, right? So it all stays in family...
Goku-Perfect, all goes according to my plan, Celulitis doesn't know that Chun Gohan has a dormant power greater than mine, he just needs to be provoked out...
Cel.-I detect in you a dormant power greater than your father's, I think I just might need to provoke you out...
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Gohan-You see, mister Celulitis... I don't like fighting...
Cel.-(Goddammit...! If I don't get this boy angry, my name isn't Celulitis...!)
Cel.-Nah! I'm sure you don't want to fight me because you're scared of me! [That's it, I got him!]
Gohan-No, it's not that, it's just that I don't feel like doing it...
Cel.-I know! What if I kill your friends, huh? Wouldn't you get a little bit angry?
Chiq.-L... Listen, don't drag us into this!
Cel.-I have another idea to get him angry...!
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XVI-Say... Hi... What's up...?
Cel.-Were you trying to surprise me? Did you think I was that stupid?
Cel.-Don't you know you could have hurt me, dammit!
XVI-Sorry... I didn't mean...! Bwaaaah!
Cel.-Alright, but don't do it ever again! [Got it?]
Cel.-Where was I? Oh, yes! How to angry this bug out! Well, well...
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XVI-Die!
Cel.-Don't say I didn't warn you...!
Gohan-Ieeeh!
XVI-Chun Gohan, fuck, do something, don't be a pussy!
Cel.-Well, I think we won't be having any more interruptions...
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Gohan-That's it, now you have seriously pissed me off... You must be tired of living... [Me, a pussy!]
Cel.-Is this guy drunk?
veg.-Cooooool! When Celulitis is done for, I call me dibs for a fight with him!
Gohan-It seems your whole plan backfired, Celulitis...!
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Chiq.-It's number XVIII! She's alive!
Cel.-Ieeeeeeh! I'm not perfect anymore! How shameful!
Dis.-He's lost his advantage!
MrP.-It's a trick...![Word!][br]Posted on: June 10, 2006, 04:50:05 AM_________________________________________________Page 41
Cel.-Shit, shit and thousand times shit!*
Gohan-He's inflating!
Cel.-Uaaaaah!
Dis.-He's lost the control of his power, now he's suffering a Celulitis attack!
Cel.-Nooooo!
Cel.-He,he,he,ho,ho,ho...
Chiq.-What's up with him?
Veg.-It may be the hysteric laughter of those who are desperate...
Cel.-Hu, hu, hu, poor little fools, as soon as my body can't keep up with the tension building up, it'll give way and then I'll unleash all the destructive power I have over you and the Earth, do you understand?
*It's been so long since we used that word, we just couldn't hold it in anymore...
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Goku-Say, I didn't quite got it... What do you mean?
Cel.-Kkk...! What I mean, bug-brained one, is that at a given time I'll explode, and then I'll kill you all, and destroy the Earth...!
Cel.-Ku,ku!
Veg.-What!?
Veg.-Me? You're gonna kill me? You want me to hit 'cha...? [Don't screw with me! Threats to me! Come on, man!]
Dis.-Vegetal, stop acting like a fool, you're gonna kill us all!
Veg.-That won't happen!
Goku-Oh! I just remembered something...
Goku-You all wait here!
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Trak.-Where... did they go?
Chiq.-I don't know, but Soson Goku must have a plan. I'm sure of it!
In the next neighbourhood...
Goku-Look, Mr. Peskaito, I just remembered you had never seen Celulitis, and since he's blowing up...
Cel.-...Beaten by a retard...
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Dis.-Huh?
Veg.-That big energy discharge... Celulitis has blown up!
Trak.-And Soson Goku's energy has disappeared!
Chiq.-Soson Goku's dead...!
Gohan-My father... has died...
MrP.-It's a trick...![Word!]
Dis.-Wait a moment, I feel a presence...!
Trak.-Where?
All-Celulitis!
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Chiq.-B... But how...!
Cel.-Poor little morons, there is an organ in my pinky finger's nail which can regenerate me completely. Fortunately for me, the explosion didn't damage it...
Cel.-And now you're too weak to repel my attack, nothing will stop me from destroying the Earth!
MrP.-No! I will stop you!
Cel.-You! Ha, ha, hwaa!
Cel.-Hwaa, hwaaarggh!
Dis.-He's dead! From an outrage of hysterical laughter!
Veg.-What a guy! His jaw even got dislocated, there!
Chiq.-But I'm not too sure, we'd better cut that pinky finger's nail...
Veg.-Shut up, you coward!
XVI-I never thought I'd say this, but Mr. Patan has beaten Celulitis!
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Later, in heaven...
Chiq.-Mr. Pompon, you sure know how to reanimate people...
XVIII-What... What happened?
Chiq.-Everything's ok, Celulitis vomited you in the middle of the fight and Soson Goku finished him off, and I brought you here while you recovered...
Chiq.-Wanna fuck?
XVIII-I wouldn't get involved with you even in my dreams, dwarf!
XVIII-Octopus!
Gohan-At last, now the almighty Kehu-ron dragon will appear before us!
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Tente-Looks like that Kehu-ron has prospered, he got such a chain store build up! [Shoot! What a greedy one!]
Gohan-Er... is someone there?
Girl-Are you customers? Come closer and make your petition on the mic. Way of payment?
Gohan-Well... er... We summoned Kehu-ron and...
Girl-Oh my god, another one on promotion, I don't know when we'll get to make some cash!
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Trak.-We want to talk to Soson Goku, from beyond.
Girl-Very well, that service is covered up with the promotion, the connection is up...
Goku-Hey boys, what's up? It's been some time!
Gohan-Dad...!
Veg.-Soson Goku, you've screwed up all my plans with your strategy of carrying Celulitis with you! Like you don't care about me no more...! [Dang!][I'm not into those games!]
Goku-Well, it was an idea I came up with suddenly, it doesn't matter anymore. However, Celulitis managed to regenerate and went back to earth, what happened in the end...?
Chiq.-Oh, don't worry, we have taken care of him, now everything's alright... [Well, almost everything...]
Trak.-And all this leads us the question: Soson Goku, when do you want to be resurrected?
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Goku-Oh, but, am I dead?
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Trak.-B... But how...? You didn't realize...?
Goku-Oh, yes, it's true! It's just that my deaths are so "special" that I don't even realize... He, he!
Dis.-Well, then... What are you gonna do?
Goku-Well, that's a matter I must discuss with Mr. Peskaito, I'll catch up with you later...
Veg.-What does he want to discuss with Mr. Peskaito?
Chiq.-Don't know...
Goku-Alright, that's it, we've talked that over!
Goku-So... it looks like it got decided unanonimously that I, ehem, because I'm a moron, won't be resurrected anymore... [Ehem][Well, I...][Please, don't hit me no more!]
Pes.-What'd you expect! The asshole's left me without a home! [And without a car!][I've only got left the fucking monkey!]
Goku-But I think Chun Gohan will be raised finaly even without me, we may see each other soon...
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Trak.-Soson Goku!
Gohan-Dad!
Dis. & Veg.-[The competence is over! Cool!It rules!]
Girl-Well, the wish hasn't been specified yet. Isn't anybody going to ask for something?
Chiq.-Ehem! Could it be me who asks for the wish...?
Trak.-Well, after this I think everything is in order. I guess I'll go back to my era...
Trak.-I'll miss you...
Gohan-We'll miss you too, you make a better company than your father. And you, Chiqrilin, what did you ask for?
Chiq.-Well... A little readjustment in number XVIII's emotional circuits, he, he...
Gohan-So, now I'll go home. I guess we'll part ways here, won't we?
Chiq.-Indeed, I hope we meet again soon.
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All-[We won big time!!]
MrP.-It's a trick...!
Chi.-How nice, Mr. Soson Goku gets me pregnant again, and then he winds up dying...!
Chi.-Running away from our responsabilities, aren't we? [What am I gonna do with this bulk, now?]
Gohan-But, mom...
Note: End. Of all this mess...
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rykarreolacr
June 10, 2006, 07:15 AM
Ah ah thanks this is great!!!!!!!! Awesome translation!!!!
I still remember when I first read Dragon Fall some years ago, and I thanked God for speaking Spanish. :grin
Ths parody is "teh bestest", well at least till chapter 24, the end of the Vietnamek Saga.
After that it gets so confusing and strange (and bad).
But the first 24 chapters and the specials are great :smile-big
God, I feel so tempted to scanlate this... But I'm too busy, have exams next week at college, and Raruto is very time-taking...
If nobody scanlates it, and if I find little time... no I can't... this chapter is too big!!!! it'll take for ever. :scry
Maybe I'll scanlate chapter 01 when the great leecherboy gives birth to the translation... who knows...
leecherboy
June 10, 2006, 07:26 AM
Thanks! :p
And I so totally agree with you that after the 24 it gets pretty worse...!
Also, I forgot to say it (too much things to post), but I'll appreciate any corrections and comments on the translation... :amuse
rykarreolacr
June 10, 2006, 07:31 AM
Hey man I forgot to ask you this before:
- How long did you take to translate such enormous chapter?
- How often are you planning to translate the chapters?
*offtopic mode on*
Off to sleep now... gotta wake up early to watch England vs Paraguay, this World Cup is so cool!!!! :smile-big
Viva Italia!!!
¡¡¡Viva Costa Rica!!!
*offtopic mode off*
leecherboy
June 10, 2006, 07:51 AM
-Well, I did it in three or four days, most of the time fighting against my english dictionary and googling for things (just kidding :p)
-I don't have such thing as an schedule, but I guess I can translate a chapter per week... :amuse
rykarreolacr
June 10, 2006, 08:00 AM
I really would like to do this you know... (I mean scanlating)
But the time!!! There's none!
*suicide mode on*
Well, when you're done with chapter 1, I'll scanlate it. Depending on the time it takes, and how hard it was, i'll decide if I should and can do it.
*suicide mode off*
Buenas noches mi amigo!!! (we are writing in English so that everyone understands what's going on with this Dragon Fall thingie) :p
destinator
June 10, 2006, 08:10 AM
Maybe I got a bit time to scanlate it...lets see what I can do...
vlado
June 10, 2006, 08:16 AM
Ooo , como estas mi buen amigo ryka , bien?come esta tu otro bien amigo dragon fall?[br]Posted on: June 10, 2006, 06:12:11 AM_________________________________________________I can clean the raw if you guys whant , make it look hq :D?
leecherboy
June 10, 2006, 08:20 AM
hola! :smile-big
if you can make it look better than what it already is, please do so :amuse
by the way, there was some misnumbering with the translation on the pages (had to add +2 to each one), it's corrected now
destinator
June 10, 2006, 08:25 AM
Stupid rapidshare wont let me download the file...well if you should really clean to HQ i would take it =)
vlado
June 10, 2006, 08:35 AM
sample of what i can do
this
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/9236/dragonfallespecial000201mr.jpg
to this
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/3729/dragonfallespecial000203po.jpg[br]Posted on: June 10, 2006, 06:33:32 AM_________________________________________________and i can make it look like this in 1-2 minutes per page with a teqnique i've developed :D
destinator
June 10, 2006, 08:42 AM
vlado you are hired xD
vlado
June 10, 2006, 08:54 AM
you do the tipesetting , i'l do the cleaning? , do you have yahoo messenger?
destinator
June 10, 2006, 08:58 AM
icq/msn only :/
vlado
June 10, 2006, 09:44 AM
well , we'l have to comunicate somehow....[br]Posted on: June 10, 2006, 07:17:25 AM_________________________________________________cleaned the raw , *took 3 hours :(( , it was a long run but it looks hell'a good :D*
Problem now is the size , the hq takes 18 mb of zize ziped....oh well...
Rapid share link
http://rapidshare.de/files/22689596/Dragon_Fall_Especial_0.rar.html
Save File link
http://www.savefile.com/files/1820716
destinator
June 10, 2006, 10:05 AM
Btw are the pages arranged like japanese mangas (right to left) or left to right?
njt
June 10, 2006, 10:06 AM
Thanks for bringing us this :D. Was funny :) Much appreciated too :ossu
destinator
June 10, 2006, 12:31 PM
I already doing the first pages. Lets see how long it will take. Maybe I'll finish it until tomorrow :)
Btw still looking for some cool fonts (:[br]Posted on: 10 June 2006, 15:01:54_________________________________________________http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/7558/dragonfallespecial000047ew.jpg
Thats how it will look like. Hope you like it.
rykarreolacr
June 10, 2006, 03:18 PM
Btw are the pages arranged like japanese mangas (right to left) or left to right?
Left to right, western style.
Wow, first page looks neat!!! Great job guys, I'm truly impressed. Seems like I won't have to worry about Dragon Fall after all.
vlado
June 10, 2006, 04:03 PM
Greate job des , glad i can team up with you :D , i'l clean whatever you guys give me , heck ryka , if you gime the raruto raws i'l clean them if you whant....
leecherboy
June 10, 2006, 04:05 PM
It's true, it looks so cool like that! So fast! :amuse
Edit: in page 42, the word 'time' was missing. Yep, I'm such a nit-picky one :p
vlado
June 10, 2006, 05:41 PM
I'm romanian so my english grammer may not be perfect but isn't this
I've only got left the fucking monkey!]
suposed to be
I only have left this fucking monkey!]
Kilik
June 10, 2006, 05:48 PM
actually wouldn't that make more sense as "I only have this fucking monkey left!"?
vlado
June 10, 2006, 06:04 PM
yeah , it sound better and makes sense...
Daioten
June 10, 2006, 06:18 PM
or even: "This is all the fucking money I've got left!" :smile-big
destinator
June 10, 2006, 08:04 PM
Well I can change it anytime...psd files 2 win. Well it takes a lot of time. I guess I wont finish it before monday...I almost did the first 10 pages and its a bit time-consuming...but lets see whats possible
vlado
June 10, 2006, 08:27 PM
K , can't wait to read it , i read the translation with the raw next to it *damn me* , but i'm steal eager to see it , maybe we'll do other chapters to?*this is a special chapter not included in the storyline*
destinator
June 10, 2006, 08:43 PM
I guess we can do more of it. Its incredible funny and entertaining.
rykarreolacr
June 10, 2006, 09:24 PM
I guess we can do more of it. Its incredible funny and entertaining.
Wait till you see first chapter XD Funny as hell
*this is a special chapter not included in the storyline*
It is a special chapter, but you can include it in the story line later on, as a matter of fact, if you don't include it, the story won't make any sense.
The right way to read Dragon Fall is this one:
- From "Dragon Fall 01" to "Dragon Fall 30"
- "Dragon Fall Special 0"
- "Dragon Fall Special 00"
- From "Dragon Fall 31" to "Dragon Fall 38"
- "Super Dragon Fall Turbo 1"
- From "Dragon Fall Turbo 39" to "Dragon Fall Turbo 47"
- "Dragon Fall GTI Summer Special"
- "Dragon Fall GTI Special 2"
It's really confusing, I know...
leecherboy
June 11, 2006, 07:52 AM
Alright, reread the raw yesterday and spotted some tiny remarks I had overseen, so I added them in pages 7,10,15 and 51. Also, did some fine tuning in Trakatranks' speech in page 14, and Gohan's speech in page 32. Everything else is ultimately fine (though, if the order of the words sounds weird in English, you may rearrange them)...
And that order rykarreolacr said is almost fine, but he doesn't want to believe me when I say #0 came out first and is in fact the first one... :amuse
But I'll probably end it in chapter 30, because it ends a cycle and because thinking of translating #00 gives me the creeps... and isn't worth it.
rykarreolacr
June 11, 2006, 08:24 AM
I know chapter 0 came first... but it fits perfectly after chapter 30...
I think you should translate till chapter 24, after that, it's just... weird. Like a mixture of Evangelion, Back to the Future, random horror movies, and some more crazy shit.
I think the authors started smoking to much pot...
destinator
June 11, 2006, 08:46 AM
Oh cool I got almost 20 pages finished now...gonna look into the changes you made later.
rykarreolacr
June 11, 2006, 09:08 AM
Way to go des! Looking forward to the release :grin
vlado
June 11, 2006, 12:46 PM
Gg , oy ryka can you post the raws here?
So i can start cleaning...?
destinator
June 11, 2006, 12:49 PM
Hrhr well I'll finish it soon, probably 2-3h till I can upload it :) Stay tuned.
Btw vlado, a somfg thank you too you because the cleaning would have taken forever for me...!
vlado
June 11, 2006, 12:51 PM
OOo , greate how many pages left?
destinator
June 11, 2006, 12:53 PM
11 left and proofreading/wachting :)
But I am doing a little a Wc break at the moment :)
vlado
June 11, 2006, 12:57 PM
lol , a wc break =)) , well when you finish it send me a pm with it and i'l prof it :D and edit what's necesary , altrough that my english isn't perfect so send it to khal to :D
destinator
June 11, 2006, 01:46 PM
If leecherboy is around at page 49 there is something standing right from the tv and there is no translation :)
leecherboy
June 11, 2006, 02:44 PM
(Haa, I can't login on weekends... :s)
You mean "¡Horreur!"? That's french for "The horror!"... Honestly, I assumed I didn't have to translate that... :amuse
destinator
June 11, 2006, 02:48 PM
Well xD I thought it meant that but I wanted to be sure not that I'll upload 20mb and you tell me afterwards that I translated it wrong xD I gonna start uploading in a few mins :)
vlado
June 11, 2006, 03:08 PM
:D , that sound greate :D
destinator
June 11, 2006, 03:36 PM
Uploading now...9mb. Hope the savefile thing works gonna put the link in here later!
http://www.savefile.com/files.php?fid=4011714
If you like/dislike things don't fear to tell me...also corrections and erros please in here.
If this should be fine with you people then I'll post this as the final version...otherwise I gonna make a second release :)
vlado
June 11, 2006, 03:44 PM
I just reinstaled my sucky bucky windows , and instaled opera and what do i see IT'S DONE :D?
downloading now....[br]Posted on: June 11, 2006, 01:43:46 PM_________________________________________________Actualy send file sucks , from the speed keeps decresing till it gets to 0 , i can't download it.
abdulahi
June 11, 2006, 04:05 PM
thanks for the translation Leecher, but i guess my help of Scanlating it aint needed it anymore.
seems like vlado and des are doing a great job. mabye i'll provide you guys with an extra hand after my exams.
this was funny, and i look forward to the others.
@des if you want other fonts, i've got plenty.
destinator
June 11, 2006, 04:27 PM
sry vlado...I was uploading it and then my net broke down >.<
well gonna do it now...
http://rapidshare.de/files/22799242/Dragonfall_Special_0.zip.html
abdulahi
June 11, 2006, 04:34 PM
i couldnt download it as welll from savefile.com
thanks des,
im redownloading now.
destinator
June 11, 2006, 04:35 PM
Lol very funny. I always have problems with rapidshare and savefile worked extremly good for me, thats why I upped it there. Well next time sendspace/rapidshare :)
abdulahi
June 11, 2006, 04:50 PM
rapidshare all the way. can say i ever had a problem with them, but i have a few ups and downs with savefile. anyways great scan guys.
vlado
June 11, 2006, 05:40 PM
downloading[br]Posted on: June 11, 2006, 03:35:29 PM_________________________________________________greate job , looks perfect :) proofed it no mistakes *i think*
destinator
June 11, 2006, 05:45 PM
Well then... I gonna make a extra release thread to get some attention for it :)
destinator
June 11, 2006, 05:55 PM
For those who don't know, Dragon Fall is a legendary spanish parody of Dragon Ball that was published over 10 years ago, and ran off for several years, with around 40+ chapters. Its authors were Nacho Fernandez and Alvaro Lopez.
Here's a teaser, the cover of the first chapter, #0.
Thanks a lot to:
leecherboy(who made this possible)
rykarreolacr for the nice raw
vlado(for the somfg hq)
Download here:
http://rapidshare.de/files/25273788/dragonfallspecial0.zip
Here are some teaserpics that you can see the style of it.
http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/1668/dragonfallespecial000147ud.jpg
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/3919/dragonfallespecial000256og.jpg
The names:
Celulitis (Celula in spanish, Cell in japanese): In Spain, the word 'Celulitis' means both the 'Cellulitis' disease and the 'Cellulite' cosmetic condition. Here, it means the latter one (that's the main reason behind the jokes).
Vegetal (Vegeta): 'Vegetal' means 'vegetable', and a person who is in comma, as well.
Trakatranks (Trunks): this is just the loud noises something would do when falling.
Chiqrilin (Krilin): he's named after the "Galletas Chiquilin", a famous brand of cookies some years ago in Spain.
Soson Goku (Son Goku): the word 'soso' means dull, as the word 'soson' means 'a very dull one'.
Chun Gohan (Son Gohan): something that is 'chungo' means that it sucks, basically.
Numbers XVI, XVII & XVIII (#16, #17 & #18): nothing special here.
Tente (Dende): named after a brand of building toys of the same name, if memory serves.
Duende Tarugo (Duende Tortuga in spanish, Muten Roshi in japanese): 'Duende Tortuga' means 'Turtle Goblin', whereas 'Duende Tarugo' means 'Dumbass Goblin'.
Discolo (Piccolo): 'discolo' means 'naughty'.
Kagarrot (Kakarrot, Goku's original name): you may know by now, 'cagar' means 'to take a dump'.
Pompon (Popo): a 'pompon' is one of those fluffy balls. In english, the word is spelled in the same way, so you probably knew that.
Duende Sakarin (Duende Karin in spanish, Karin in japanese): a pun with 'sacarin'.
Vietnamek (Namek): yep, a pun with Vietnam.
Kehu-ron Dragon (Shenron Dragon): the expression '¡que huron!' means 'what a greedy one!', or something like that. By the way, it's pretty much outdated by now.
Kome-jame-ha (Kame-hame-ha): both 'come' and 'jama' mean 'eat', so it could be translated as 'eat this ha'.
Mr. Patan (Mr. Satan): 'patan' means 'clumsy'.
Peskaito (Kaito): 'pescaito' means 'little fish'.
Summary and Names by leecherboy!
vlado
June 11, 2006, 06:40 PM
well , if you guys provide raws and translations , i'l clean and i hope that you'll tipeset it.
rykarreolacr
June 11, 2006, 06:43 PM
Great job!!
It came out wau earlier then what I'd expected. ;)
But what about me? I'm "teh raw providah" :grin
well , if you guys provide raws and translations , i'l clean and i hope that you'll tipeset it.
I will privide raws, i think I've already posted chapter 1 somewhere, yeah here it is:
http://rapidshare.de/files/22637072/Dragon_Fall_01.zip.html
destinator
June 11, 2006, 06:48 PM
Argh I am sorry. The forum wont let me edit my first post >.< gonna mention ya later and in chapter 01. I am really sorry :/
rykarreolacr
June 11, 2006, 07:20 PM
Argh I am sorry. The forum wont let me edit my first post >.< gonna mention ya later and in chapter 01. I am really sorry :/
Ha ha, don't worry... you guys desrve 99.9999% of the credit anyway.
abdulahi
June 11, 2006, 08:49 PM
i already said but great work guys.
in the future if you guys require any extra help (other then tranlation) count me in.
once more great work on the first chapter :leepose
rykarreolacr
June 12, 2006, 05:48 AM
There's a mistake on page 45, last panel. Seems you forgot to erase a part...
leecherboy
June 12, 2006, 06:46 AM
OMG, it looks so great, I almost feel the urge to throw away the one in my shelves to print this in its stead...! :amuse
Though, the explanation in page 18 seems cut off, but it's not such a big deal...
leecherboy
June 12, 2006, 07:25 AM
Heh, you're lucky I had some free time this weekend... :amuse
So here's the beginning of the story!
MQ Raw (provided by rykarreolacr) to be found here:
http://rapidshare.de/files/22637072/Dragon_Fall_01.zip.html
About the translation, I did my own translation of God's new name (Diox-> Godh), so you can understand it better. In fact, oddly enough in this series, you'll get the jokes behind this chapter's new names without me even having to explain anything...
So, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall #1 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
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Page 2
Our story begins when a foreign object from outer space falls upon a green-bluey planet we all pretty much know. And nothing will be the same anymore!
The beginning
Page 3
No text
Page 4
Sign: Beware of dog (don't step on it!)
Katakana on wall:"Comemela, Pepe"="Eat my d**k, Pepe"
Katakana on wall:"Pepito, capullo, oe, oe, oe"="Pepito, lucky bastard, yay, yay, yay"
Door-Knock! Knock!
Gohan-Who will it be?*
Katakana on wall:"Mamon"="sucker"
Katakana on floor:"Caca"="poop"
*Note: Well-known sentence, overused in this kind of scenes
Page 5
Gohan-Ah!
Gohan-Say, little one, are you lost?
Page 6
Gohan-Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow! It hurts!
Gohan-Fgrrssjj! Damn kid...! Who do you think you are?
Gohan-You don't attack people as you please!
Gohan-Uf!
Gohan-The little hooligan!
Page 7
Gohan-The big asshole!
Arrow: Yep, Chun Gohan's in an outrage of fury.
Goku-Ow! Guh! Ow! Ouch.
Note: As we saw in the last chapter, Soson Goku's the man when it comes to screw up houses.
Page 8
Goku-Kkkk...
Gohan-Argn!
Gohan-My house, damn it...
Gohan-I'm gonna have to rebuild it, and it will be such a slow heavy work...
Gohan-I'm too old for these things!
Note: Fuck! Debris are still falling!
Gohan-Uh?
*"Crunch": The sound of a brain getting cracked, losing a huge quantity of encephalic mass
Page 9
Gohan-No! Make it quick, please!
Goku-Grandfather?
Goku-Where am I?
After all this mess, Chun Gohan decided to adopt the 'stupid' (lined out) confused kid in his house, naming him as Soson Goku and assigning him 'the worst' (lined out) some of the house's tasks. That way, he lived 'enslavedly' (lined out) happily there with his new grandfather, until a doomed Halloween night, when...
Page 10
Goku-Grandfather, I have pee-pee...!
Gohan-Alright, you can go out. But don't forget you have to serve dinner soon...
Text on book: Learn japanese in 3 weeks
Gohan-What now? Which new calamity might fall upon this house?
Page 11
Yes, in that doomed night was revealed Soson Goku's ability to turn into a terrible beast that... that... Well, whatever...
Goku-Huba!!
After his grandfather's disappearance, Soson Goku, who came back to normal, kept on living in the remains of the house, which he fixed to the best of his abilities...
His life went by easily and relaxedly until, some day...
Page 12
Wilma-Looks like there's an individual inside there, but his brain activity is slim to none...
Wilma-So, he must be sleeping it out...
Wilma-Good!
Wilma-Here I go!
Wilma-I'll take this stone away to help my way in.
Wilma-He didn't even wake up. This'll be too easy.
Wilma-Ball-scanner on...
Wilma-Found it!
Wilma-How nice! How nice!
Page 13
Wilma-Oops! What am I doing? It'll be no good if he wakes up!
Goku-Jrrzz! Murmm!...
Wilma-What... what was that?
Wilma-I got what I wanted. Let's make a run for it...
Sound: Run, run!
Wilma-Kiiiiiin!!
Goku-Uh? What?... Who? I've just dreamt someone was around here...
Goku-Ah! My grandfather! It isn't here!
Goku-Sniff! Sniff! Someone has really been around here!
Note: Shoot, and he seemed stupid...
Page 14
Goku-Sniff! Sniff! He's gone that way! He can still be seen...!
Goku-Come here! Don't go away!
Wilma-Ow!
Page 15
Goku-Owowow! Ow! It hurts so much! What a hard thiing...!
Wilma-Help meeee! I can't stand up!
Goku-Who are you? Why do you have a shell?
Wilma-(I'd rather not stand against this wild beast.)
Goku-Ah! He had eaten a sir...!
Goku-Mmm...!
Goku-No, it's a lady...
Page 16
Wilma-Are you happy now? You've blinded out my Mecha-Suit! Now I'll have to manage without it!
Goku-But... who are you? And why were you inside that Meka-whatever...?
Goku-And why did you want to take my grandfather away? Huh?
Wilma-Now I only have left a couple of vehicles without weaponry nor armour! You've screwed it big time, you know? You are a brute!
Page 17
Goku-You... You're the one who turned my grandfather into a ball!
Wilma-Well... I... can't remember me ever doing something like... What grandfather?
Box: My grandfather. We lived together in his house till one night everything collapsed while I was sleeping, and when I woke up I found that ball and a note...
Note: I'm your grandfather. I've been turned into this. Please, watch over me and never leave this place.
Goku-So aren't you the witch that destroyed our house and enchanted my grandfather?
Wilma-Me?
Goku-You have special powers, right?
Wilma-Well, in fact, I do have some power you don't... But I've never used it against anyone!
Wilma-He, he.
Goku-Ah! Then, you are a good witch! Aren't you?
Page 18
Goku-And why did you want to take my grandfather away?
Goku-Maybe to turn him back into a human?
Wilma-(Guess I'm gonna have to explain it to him, or I won't see the end of it...)
Wilma-For starters, look at this...!
Goku-Ah! Are them more enchanted sirs?
Wilma-No, fool, they are the Kehu-ron balls!
Box: These balls are eight in total, plus a white one. The legend has it that they belonged to Godh, who used them in his billiard games, until his heart condition kept him from doing so. Then, he imbued the balls with the power, when gathered, to summon the great dragon Kehu-ron, who has the ability to grant a wish, whatever it may be, to whoever summoned him. His power is limitless.
[br]Posted on: June 12, 2006, 05:24:56 AM_________________________________________________Page 19
Goku-And how does any of that relate to my grandfather?
Wilma-It doesn't! It doesn't relate at all!
Wilma-Mmmm... Look, if you lend me that ball, I promise I'll ask Kehu-ron to give you your grandfather back. Deal?
Goku-Deal!
Wilma-(No... It can't be that easy. It must be a trick! He can't be that stupid...! There must be something wrong with that ball!)
Wilma-Er... How about you coming with me and carrying it yourself? It'd be safer to you...
Goku-Deal!
Wilma-Either he's a dumbass or he's more clever than me...!
Wilma-Well, then we'll go together. I'll have to get us a vehicle to carry the two of us...
Goku-Deal!
Wilma-By the way, I still don't know your name. What is it?
Goku-Soson Goku.
Wilma-Yeah, pretty logical. My name's Wilma...
Goku-Wilma! Ha ha ha, like the Flintstones' !
Note: Shoot, and he seemed stupid! (again)
Page 20
Wilma-Now I'll get a vehicle, and you'll see there is no magic business in it...
Wilma-This is a molecular pill. They're produced by the Pill Corporation. Inside it you can store any product previously miniaturized through an industrial process. Do you understand?
Goku-No.
Wilma-Doesn't matter. If we water the pill now with cold water, it'll stimulate the altered molecules and the product will recover its original size. You'll see...
Wilma-I always carry on me a thermos with cold water, and another one that warms the water and keeps it hot, you need them to handle these pills...
Wilma-Watch the reaction, now the pill will unmaterialize and the vehicle will dilate.
Wilma-Now you'll see what a masterpiece of technology appears right before your eyes... he he he!
Page 21
Wilma-I don't get it! According to the catalogue, in the G-5 one there should be a four wheeler!
Wilma-And what will be here?
Wilma-Magazines?
Wilma-This is the pill where my *G$%>00 father hides his porn mags!!!
Wilma-And what will I do now? I only have another pill with a vehicle!
Wilma-Yes, here it is! The V-7 one. But it's a motorboat. It's not bad, but you need a fluvial path!
Goku-Say, Wilma, here are a lot of pricks and balls and...
Wilma-Kids don't read this stuff!!
Goku-Ah!
Page 22
Wilma-We'd need a river to sail upon on the motorboard. Is there some river near here?
Goku-This way!
Goku-There!
Wilma-Oh my god, now we'll have to walk all to way to the plain to use the motorboat! What's gonna happen to us?
Goku-Why do you want to use the motorboat!
Wilma-To travel on long distances, you fool!
Wilma-Come on, let's get the equipment ready and collect this garbage back!
Page 23
That way, Wilma and Soson Goku begin their travel in search of the next Kehu-ron balls...
And, at least, they made it to the plain...
Wilma-4 hours... 4 hours down those horrible almost vertical slopes! I don't feel my feet anymore...!
Goku-You're a very delicate girl. You're lacking nourishment.
Wilma-Don't say bullshit!
Wilma-Well, now we can bring out the motorboat. Let's look for a clear area.
Wilma-Here, we'll just have to get it on the water. I'll seize this chance to fill up the thermos...
Wilma-Uh?
Wilma-Wahoo! A vehicle! Someone that can take us by car, in a faster way!
Page 24
Wilma-Heeey! Heeeere! Stop, please!
Goku-Ah! What a big critter!
Yansha-Well! What do we have here? Can I take you anywhere?
Wilma-Yes, please, can you take both me and the brat to the coast?
Page 25
Yansha-Brat? What brat? I don't see any...
Yansha-Uh?
Goku-Look, Wilma, I've hurt the monster...!
Yansha-My truck! Damned shrimp! I'll kill hiim...!
Wilma-Easy! Easy!
Yansha-Anyway, let's see! Who are you?
Wilma-Well, my name's Wilma, and the kid's Soson Goku. We're going to the coast to meet someone...
Yansha-Well, you're lucky, I'm going that way. My name's Eneryansha.
Goku-What? Energyzer?
Yansha-No! It's Eneryansha! I'm so fed up with that question!
Page 26
Yansha-I'm heading exactly for the Duende Tarugo's house, a somewhat weird guy. You can get any thing from him, as long as you have a fitting trade currency...
Goku-Look, it's one of those magazines that...
Wilma-What does this mean?!
Note: Shoot, what a repressed girl!
Yansha: That... you see, that's the kind of goods the Duende Tarugo loves. I have a full load of that stuff in the truck.
Wilma-(I see... So these mags are the trade currency... Well, with my mags I might get something off that guy...)
Wilma-Well, alright, let's get on the truck! Forgive my rudeness, ok?
Page 27
Wilma-Is your truck ok?
Goku-What is a truck?
Yansha-Well, the damage doesn't seem that big, it might run without too much trouble.
Yansha-Very well! Get on, and let's hit the road...!
Wilma-And... do you mind if I call you Yansha, for short?
Yansha-I don't care...
Wilma-(The ball-scanner points toward the same direction we are going to...)
Wilma-How nice! That Duende Tarugo is in our way to where we want to go!
Goku-What is a "tarugo"?
Yansha-(Now she's way too happy... My gosh, what's wrong with this girl?)
Page 28
A couple of hours later...
Yansha-Uff! This is making me sweat...!
Wilma-Say, there is a lot of room in this truck, right?
Yansha-Yes, it has everything you could think of, you'd say it's my home...
Yansha-In the back side of the cabin, I have a fridge and a portable stove for my meals, besides a handy pill kit. I'm almost self-sufficient.
Goku-And what is this?
Yansha-Nooooooo!! Don't touch that button!
Page 29
Opt.-What am I doing here? I must fight the deadly Decepticons!*
Opt.-I'll get the matrix!
Goku-Oh, it was for that...
*Note: Really bad voice acting.
Page 30
Yansha-I'll kill this brat! I'll kill him, I'll kill him, I'll kill hiim!
Text on hammer: I hurt
Wilma-Hit him! Hit him!
And the journey resumes, at a slightly slower pace...
Wilma-Say, why are you coming with us, despite not having the truck anymore?
Yansha-Because I'm taking the packet to the Duende Tarugo and...
Yansha-The packet!
Yansha-Arrgg!
After this... ehem... stupid interruption, the journey goes on...
Page 31
And a scene we knew, repeats itself...
Wilma-I can't bear it!
Wilma-The coast! At last!
Wilma-Come on, we're almost there!
Yansha-That is the Duende's house!
Du.Ta.-Mmm, looks like they're coming towards here...
Note: more Soson Goku and the Duende Tarugo to come next month!
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destinator
June 12, 2006, 08:03 AM
Cool thing. Now I only need vlado for the HQ cleaning:)
rykarreolacr
June 12, 2006, 08:23 AM
Que rápido!!! Iba a decirte la traducción de los textos en katakana, pero por lo que veo tu tbn sabes leerlos!! :grin
I already sent to vlado the raws from chapter 2 to 5 so he can work on them, if anybody else wants them, here's the link:
http://rapidshare.de/files/22815963/Dragon_Fall_02-05.zip.html
leecherboy
June 12, 2006, 08:29 AM
*humble mode off*
Yep, I can read some katakana, and I also get most of the references, I'm pretty much awesome myself!
*humble mode on*
sorry about that :p
rykarreolacr
June 12, 2006, 08:32 AM
Yo llevé 6 meses de japonés hace un año y me las arreglo en hiragana, katakana y conversaciones básicas...
If that was humble mode... XD
leecherboy
June 12, 2006, 08:36 AM
Well, it wasn't humble mode... I'm always in humble mode, and I just turned it off for a while :amuse
njt
June 12, 2006, 08:52 AM
Well, it wasn't humble mode... I'm always in humble mode, and I just turned it off for a while :amuse
Yet again, Awesome work!!!
(also considering the time you are taking to do the translations, Thanks a bunch :ossu)
p.s. I'm a KOF fan too^^; Though my favorite one was 95-97... The Orochi saga was just awesome :o
vlado
June 12, 2006, 10:51 AM
Well , started cleaning it , hope i get it done by the end of the day :D , i'm low on time ..[br]Posted on: June 12, 2006, 08:06:58 AM_________________________________________________done
Rapidshare link
http://rapidshare.de/files/22856667/Dragon_Fall_01_HQ.rar.html
Savefile dosn't work right now , will try later if you can't get it des.
[br]Posted on: June 12, 2006, 08:50:46 AM_________________________________________________http://www.savefile.com/files/9561217[br]Posted on: June 12, 2006, 08:51:02 AM_________________________________________________sorry for the delay , but i played cs :D , really greate raw , took 10 minutes to clean
leecherboy
June 12, 2006, 12:19 PM
Yet again, Awesome work!!!
(also considering the time you are taking to do the translations, Thanks a bunch :ossu)
p.s. I'm a KOF fan too^^; Though my favorite one was 95-97... The Orochi saga was just awesome :o
yay thanks mister! :)
I also love '97 for its story, though I prefer '01 for its combos...
By the way, I corrected two words at the end of page 11. I didn't spot any more mistakes, so it should all be ok now...
vlado
June 12, 2006, 12:59 PM
Raw 2 cleaned
Rapidshare link
http://rapidshare.de/files/22865194/Dragon_Fall_02.rar.html
savefile's not working
leecherboy
June 13, 2006, 02:24 AM
Ok, corrected "and"->"an" at the beginning of page 12, now I promise everything is fine... :p
Oh, and a note to des: maybe I should have said this, but if I surround a whole speech in parenthesys, it's just to show when a character's thinking, so please don't include them xD
rykarreolacr
June 13, 2006, 02:36 AM
Raw 2 cleaned
Rapidshare link
http://rapidshare.de/files/22865194/Dragon_Fall_02.rar.html
savefile's not working
I checked out the clean... awesome!!!!
You've gotta teach me how to do that!!!
vlado
June 13, 2006, 08:18 AM
It's not to hard :D , i'l make a tutorial on how to do it if you let me help on cleaning raruto , and let me see the releases before you release them :D[br]Posted on: June 13, 2006, 05:56:45 AM_________________________________________________http://mangahelpers.com/forum/index.php?topic=4846.new#new , you wanted to know how i clean manga didn't you ryka?
abdulahi
June 13, 2006, 08:23 AM
It's not to hard :D , i'l make a tutorial on how to do it if you let me help on cleaning raruto , and let me see the releases before you release them :D
check out the tutorials in MH. i believe theres a few on cleaning. however i for one welcome a new one and i know your cleaning are great, so may i also get a copy of this tutorial if you make one. EDIT: just saw your thread thanks
thanks for the translation leecher. now looking forward to vlado and des work on the scan.
vlado
June 13, 2006, 08:37 AM
eh, it's a verry easy to clean manga , wait till you see me doing d.gray man in 2-3 hours per page.
Damn that's a hard to clean manga.
well i alredy did my part :D , waiting for des to tipseet :viagra :sasufire :xp
Gold Knight
June 13, 2006, 08:54 AM
Pretty cool, rykarreolacr, leecherboy and vlado! Thanks ^^
vlado
June 13, 2006, 09:35 AM
preaty cool?DO YOU WANT ME TO MAKE EXA BITE YOU? :D *of topic , thx , lol*
rykarreolacr
June 13, 2006, 10:03 PM
Pretty cool, rykarreolacr, leecherboy and vlado! Thanks ^^
You forgot des...
I'm not doing much here anyway, just providing the "RAWS"
destinator
June 14, 2006, 05:57 AM
lol well I wont do this chapter until the weekend...the weather is super nice here in germany and I've to fight my allergic of pollen at the moment >.<
vlado
June 14, 2006, 08:23 AM
i'l be waching the o.c :D , my new pashion *MUHAHAHA* *wird cough**wird cough*
leecherboy
June 15, 2006, 02:32 AM
How'd you like this? Here I bring you a new DF chap!
Here's the HQ raw (provided by rykarreolacr, cleaned by vlado):
http://rapidshare.de/files/22865194/Dragon_Fall_02.rar.html
Oh boy, this one cracks me up everytime...
Oh, and some notes:
-Actually, there is a name missing in the new names list, but I decided not to include it so I don't spoil the fun off you (aren't I nice?)
-If you see some mispelling in page 25... it's intentional, hu, hu, hu! (no, it really is :amuse)
-There are some references that could be discussed, but I won't start that in the first post...
So for now, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall #2 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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The names for this chapter:
Puas (Puar): "puas" means "spikes".
Chicha (Chi-chi): "chicha" translates loosely into "meat", and is also slang for "chick" in general, and "a piece of ass" in particular xD.
Yumas (Gyu-mao): this one's a brand of Spanish shoes.
Pililaf (Pilaf): "pilila" is the spanish term for "wee-wee".
Page 2
The Duende Tarugo
Page 3
Yansha-Goo... Arf, arf. Good morning... Arf. We're looking for the Duende Tarugo... Arf. Do you know him?
Du.Ta.-That's funny, because I'm that Duende you're looking for, and this is my disciple, the Turtle.
Yansha-We... bring you some gifts to earn your... your favor...
Yansha-You, shrimp, the packet!
Goku-Yes, I'm carrying it...!
Yansha-Put it down here...!
Du.Ta.-(Mmm... this kid doesn't seem that much bright...)
Page 4
Du.Ta.-Well, well... What do we have here?
Yansha-There are over hundred and fifty issues of these mags you like so much, mister Duende...
Wilma-[Let's see... Where did I put the pills?]
Sound: Search, search
Du.Ta.-Then, come on, Turtle, open it so I can see them!
Turtle-Er, yes...
Page 5
Turtle-Where did you come from?
Ool.-Hey, let go!
Du.Ta.-Let'im be, Turtle, I'm gonna check the goods...!
Du.Ta.-I like this one... And this one... And this one...
Du.Ta.-I own this one... I've read this one... This one...
Yansha-That's it... I have so earned my reward!
Goku-Do you live in this house?
Ool.-I wish!
Yansha-He must have sneaked in sometime along the journey, while we weren't looking. He's got some nerve!
Ool.-It's your fault. You shouldn't take so much time to pee...
Page 6
Du.Ta.-I hugely appreciate your gift, now let's get you a reward...
Wilma-LISTEN, LISTEN, geezer, I also have some of that, look...!
Du.Ta.-In there?
Wilma-Yes, here...
Du.Ta.-Oh no! But, what is this?
Wilma-What's wrong? You don't like it?
Du.Ta.-It's wonderful! The videos I have desperately been searching for years!
Du.Ta.-This gift is really precious to me, now you'll get your reward...!
Wilma-How nice, how nice!
Yansha-Hey! What about me?
Page 7
Du.Ta.-Follow me, I'll look for something to give you in exchange...
Du.Ta.-What did I have around here? Let's see...
Wilma-This, this, we want this, thank you!
Du.Ta.-Well, that's fine, if you want them, keep them... What will she need them for?
Du.Ta.-(I used them to make a bigger bulge in my pants...)
Sound: Scratch, scratch
Du.Ta.-But I wanted to give them another present, what was it? Let's see, remember, remember.
Du.Ta.-Oh, yes!
Du.Ta.-Kinder!!
Kinder-[Surprise.]
Page 8
Du.Ta.-This is the Kinder balloon, it's alive and it can carry on him any person for any given distance, that's my gift...
Du.Ta.-(But they don't know the balloon only carries on him those whose intelligence is lower than an air-filled balloon's, he, he,he, I'm so twisted...)
Goku-Hop!
Wilma-Yeah, so cool...
Yansha-Listen! What do I get? Do you have anything left?
Du.Ta.-Oh, yes! Just a moment, I think I had something around here that...
Du.Ta.-I think you'll like this. They brought me this one from the Orient's faraway lands...
Page 9
Yansha-Iaaaaarrggh!
Du.Ta.-It's very intelligent and very clean, it'll be an ideal partner for you.
Yansha-And why should I want a damn kissing teddy bear, huh?!...
Yansha-Iuaaaah!!
Du.Ta.-Its name is Puas, and I think you'll get to be best friends.
Page 10
Yansha-I disagree...
Turtle-Mister Duende, more visitors have arrived!
Turtle-This already looks like the Waikiki hotel!
Du.Ta.-And who are you?
Chiq.-Nice to meet you, mister Duende, I'm Chiqrilin and I bring this gift to you...
Chiq.-I know you're in for the young ones, I guess this one will be really precious to you...
Du.Ta.-Why, if it isn't Chicha, the Yumas ogre daughter!
Page 11
Chicha-Uf, I was so scared!
Chicha-Mr. Duende, this ball-headed shrimp kidnapped me and put me in that bag while I was coming here to deliver a message from my father.
Du.Ta.-Is that so?
Chiq.-Look, Mr. Duende, I'm a resourceless kid, I just hoped you'd set my life straight with one of your special gifts...
Du.Ta.-Well... I must say your behaviour wasn't that fair, sonny, so it's impossible for me to award you... [If it had been another one...]
Du.Ta.-But if you want, I can accept you as my disciple and teach you the job...
Du.Ta.-And what's your father's message, Chicha?
Chicha-It's a help request, you have to come to our castle as soon as possible!
Du.Ta.-Well, in that case, I'll have to go there right now, so this visit is over. We have to go.
Page 12
Wilma-The ball-scanner points now towards another direction, the second last ball is westwards...
Du.Ta.-Westwards? We're going that way, maybe we can bring you nearer to your destination, if you wait for me to get ready...
Du.Ta.-I see you have gotten Puas wet. I warn you, you shouldn't do it again, as it would be a very bad thing if he was kept underwater for a long time...
Yansha-Would it be dangerous?
Du.Ta.-Indeed, and it would also be dangerous if he was run over by a truck, caught in the middle of a H-bombing or put into a meat grinder...
Du.Ta.-You'd lose a friend...
Turtle-Hmf! What a master I have, he's worse than a kid.
Goku-Say, why do you wear a mask?
Turtle-No, there is really NO SUCH THING worse than a kid.
Arrow: Exactly! He's a MUTANT hero turtle!
Page 13
Turtle-(What could I give this brat so he doesn't spread this around?)
Turtle-(An ass-kicking?)
Turtle-Look, kid, I'll give you my stick if you promise not to tell people about my ears... Ok?
Chiq.-Well, I'll stay here as Mr. Duende's disciple... Sorry about before.
Chicha-Shut up, you octopus!
Wilma-Soson Goku, now where did you get that stick?
Goku-That turtle gave it to me so that I won't tell people about his ears. He's so nice.
Du.Ta.-Very well, let's put ourselves into motion, are you all ready?
Page 14
Du.Ta.-Good, the vehicle's ready for the travel, we can go whenever you're ready.
Du.Ta.-I trust you with the house until I'm back, I hope you take care of it.
Yansha-So, it seems like I'll go with these people in the end, it could be interesting. [The gal is too hot!]
Wilma-Let me do it, geezer, I'll drive!
Du.Ta.-Waaah!
Page 15
Back on earth...
Wilma-But come on, it wasn't THAT BAD, was it?
Chicha-DAD, we've arrived!
Du.Ta.-Ah, the Yumas ogre!
Yumas-Ah, mister Duende! I'm glad you could make it, I was in dire need for your help, thanks for bothering to come here.
Du.Ta.-Let's skip to the point. What do you need me to do? Maybe to put down the Fry-Pan Mountain's fire?
Yumas-Actually, no... That was put down someday it rained a lot, the problem is that I forgot the keys inside the castle, and today the locksmiths are away.
Page 16
Du.Ta.-And why should I be able to open your door, in the first place? Can you explain so I get to understand it?
Yumas-Well, Mister Duende, as you're a master, it's just expected from you to have a master key, isn't it?
Du.Ta.-Just how in the heaven's name did I get to be a teacher for this mentally ill?[Arf! I'm too old for this!]
Du.Ta.-Alright, I'll help you this time, but there won't be a second time, got it?
Du.Ta.-So, I'm going to use my most legendary devastating technique: Kome-Jame-Ha!
Yumas-Oh, Mister Duende is going to use his most legendary devastating technique... What was it again?
Du.Ta.-First take a deep breath. SNIIIIIRRFF!
Page 17
Katakana: "Tarugo"
Page 18
Du.Ta.-Oh my god, though it's just expected, at my age... I can't keep it hard for that long...
Wil.& Yan.-Yeah, we got ya.
Du.Ta.-It's not what you think!
Du.Ta.-But that won't keep me from performing my legendary technique. Now you'll see!
Du.Ta.-Kooomee!
Du.Ta.-Jaaaameee!
[br]Posted on: June 15, 2006, 12:31:31 AM_________________________________________________Page 19
Du.Ta.-It's about time you stop doing the assholes, isn't it?
Du.Ta.-Fuck... now it's slipped out of my mind... Where was I? Oh, yes! Er, Kome... Jame... [Think, think][Wonder, wonder]
Du.Ta.-Ha!
Page 20
Wilma-Good, you've made it!
Yumas-You're so great, Mr Duende!
Du.Ta.-(At my age, that's the most I can do.)
Sounds:Defcon 1
Ah-ooooh-gah! Ah-ooooh-gah!
Weee! Weee! Weee!
Warning! Warning!
Page 21
Yansha-Will I be able to learn that technique from you someday, Mr Duende?
Du.Ta.-Hu hu, I doubt it, mastering the Kome-Jame-Ha requires a lot of years' worth of mediation and way too hard training, and not getting laid in 150 years...
Yansha-150 years? That is... too much time.
Yansha-I think I'm beginning to understand why he's so horny.
Goku-Kooomeee...!
Goku-Jaaameee...!
Du.Ta.-He he he, the little kid.
Goku-Haaaaa!!
Note: We warned you!!
Page 22
Yansha-Did... did you see that... Mr Duende? He did perform the Kome-Jame-Ha even without mediation nor training nor...
Yansha-Mr Duende! Why are you lying there like that? Why are you crying?
Page 23
Goku-Ha, ha, ha! How fun! How fun! Again! Again!
Du.Ta.-This kid is not normal! [I'll have to deal with it!]
Yumas-My... my house!
Chicha-(What a man!)
Wilma-Come on, let's search the ball amongst the ruins before Yumas snaps out of it...!
Page 24
??-I made it! This thing WORKS!
??-It really is a devastating weapon!
??-Say, but what about my cigarrettes?
Wilma-Look Yansha, I found it!
Sign: Hey! I'm here!
Yansha-Say, Wilma, some things around here are a little...
Page 25
Yansha-Uagh!
Xonxa-Xonxo, you're a weirxo!
Xonxo-Well, ok, but what xo I xo?
*Characters from the Superlopez spanish comic. They're aliens who morph into the first person they see.
Yansha-T... there's some weird shit happening around here, isn't it?
Wilma-Ehem, what if you get off me?
Yansha-Oh, yeah, sure.
Du.Ta.-Say, kid, would you like to become my disciple? I'd help you hone your skills and become a great fighter...
Goku-What is a discable?
Page 26
Wilma-They haven't still snapped out of it?
Chicha-Oh boy, yours isn't human!
Goku-Gng!
Chicha-What's wrong?
Goku-Don't... don't squeeze me there like that, if you do it my strength gets drained away!
Yansha-Great! This is an interesting discovery!
Yansha-That kid's weak point is...
Yansha-But of course, and mine...!
Page 27
Yumas-My... my house...
Someone-Snap out of it, man!
Wilma-(Well, it's about time we scram off here to search for the next balls. Look, now that's funny, according to the ball-scanner the two of them are together!)
Pil.-The oracles have spoken to me, the time has arrived... The time when I'll gather all the power I need for my plans...
Pil.-Eight balls... eight balls as the source of an almighty power that is the key of IT ALL...
Pil.-And when that key is in my power...! When I gather the 8 balls...! No single power or being on earth will stop me from finding at least WHERE IS WALLY!! HA, HA, HA!
Page 28
Pil.-I've been finding for years the bearded old guy, the dog, the umbrella, the toaster, the dotted crocodile... BUT NEVER WALLY!
Pil.-But that is over!
Let's leave for now our puzzling character, and go back to our main heroes...
Yumas-My... My house...
Du.Ta.-Looks like it was a serious shock to him...
Chicha-Yes, he gets like that everytime someone destroys his house...
Wilma-And when will he snap out of it?
Chicha-I don't know, this is the first time.
Wilma-Well, ehem, it's time for us to go! Sorry for the trouble...! [He][Let's flee!]
Chicha-Listen, Soson Goku, when we grow up, will you marry me?
Goku-Yikes...
Page 29
Yansha-Listen, Wilma, do you mind if I go with you? I don't know where to go anymore.[Will they buy it? Or they won't?]
Yumas-AAAARRRRGH! Where is that kid?!
Wil & Du.Ta & Yan-[Mom... Help... Aaah... Nooo...]
Box: The horror, so scary! Even the authors crapped their pants!
Goku-Who, me?
Yumas-You've unleashed my rage, kid, my REVENGE will be TERRIBLE!
Yumas-RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!!
Goku-What? Want me to run?
Page 30
Goku-Deal...
Yumas-T... This... kid... This kid ain't normal.
And now, let's go back to our puzzling character...
Pil.-We can't miss, we carry the two balls with us so they lend us their power! MY TRIUMPH IS NEAR!
Someone-Sir, we located the track of one of the balls, it's travelling through the plains at great speed.
Pil.-Very well, let the birds come down!
Page 31
Pil.-Stop right there! Pililaf commands you to!
Goku-I've been told to run, and I will!
Pil.-Huh? He doesn't stop.
Pil.-Ready for interception!
Page 32
Goku-Beep beep!
Pil.-Fu... Fuck, what a rush!
Goku-Look! They are more shrunk down sirs!
Wilma-What? Where did you find them?
Wilma-We got them! We got the eight balls! Now we can summon Kehu-ron!
Yansha-Oh, yeah? So nice!
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vlado
June 15, 2006, 08:04 AM
GOO DEEEEES!!!!TIPESETING BIEACH :D
destinator
June 15, 2006, 01:29 PM
I guess I'll start tomorror...or even today so expect a release at the weekend :)
destinator
June 15, 2006, 01:50 PM
Thanks to you both. I will upload the new version now. Fixed the bubble and the explanation and added rykarreolacr to the credits list =)
vlado
June 15, 2006, 02:17 PM
so far away :( , dun dun dun
destinator
June 15, 2006, 03:06 PM
I guess I wont do more than 2 chapters a week. But this one is going really well already finished almost 1/2 of it :)
The only thing I am not really sure about is how I will do the japanese part at the beginning but I gonna hold that for the end :)
destinator
June 15, 2006, 05:40 PM
GOO DEEEEES!!!!TIPESETING BIEACH :D
OMG what about let me finish chapter #1 first ;) ?
Gonna start this chapter at the weekend :)
edit: Well I was lucky...sometimes late at night rapidshare is working for me =)
rykarreolacr
June 15, 2006, 05:45 PM
Ha ha, this is great!!!
Another great translation!!! :grin
leecherboy
June 16, 2006, 02:14 AM
thanks! :p
And the things I wanted to know:
-I know in "that page", that's S.L. himself, but what the heck is he saying? (is that even english/spanish?)
-Who are the guys in page 24?
-What's the name of the Duende Tarugo's plane? (I'm guessing something about "fire"...)
leecherboy
June 16, 2006, 02:20 AM
For the japanese part, you might want to add a blank page at the end to house the explanations... (in fact, you could do that in all the chapters, to include the names' list... :amuse)
destinator
June 16, 2006, 03:09 AM
Yeah, I was already thinking about this extra name page thing but lets see how I'll do that :)
destinator
June 16, 2006, 09:34 AM
For those who don't know, Dragon Fall is a legendary spanish parody of Dragon Ball that was published over 10 years ago, and ran off for several years, with around 40+ chapters. Its authors were Nacho Fernandez and Alvaro Lopez.
Dragon Fall #1 - The beginning
http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/5139/dragonfall0100019zz.jpg
Download here http://rapidshare.de/files/24260306/dragonfall1.zip
If you like there is already a special out. You can find it here http://mangahelpers.com/forum/index.php?topic=4809.msg73104#msg73104 .
vlado
June 16, 2006, 09:41 AM
gg[br]Posted on: June 16, 2006, 07:41:14 AM_________________________________________________and can you please say hq raw cleaned by vlado in the next chapter?
destinator
June 16, 2006, 09:43 AM
gg[br]Posted on: June 16, 2006, 07:41:14 AM_________________________________________________and can you please say hq raw cleaned by vlado in the next chapter?
no no no =) Say it earlier ^^ I hope I dont forget that until I'll finish #2 =)
vlado
June 16, 2006, 09:58 AM
And you didn't put the name page. , but we need the names per chapter , we'll have to talk to ryka and leacher
destinator
June 16, 2006, 10:01 AM
I didnt included the name page because in my opinion there wasnt a need to explain anything.
Probably because I already read the special =)
vlado
June 16, 2006, 10:10 AM
Yeah , oh well , go on on 2
destinator
June 16, 2006, 10:12 AM
No no I will try something out...check in here later in about 10-30 minutes =)
vlado
June 16, 2006, 10:13 AM
Your joking right?[br]Posted on: June 16, 2006, 08:13:02 AM_________________________________________________oh , and install yahoo messenger , we really need to talk about this :D
destinator
June 16, 2006, 10:17 AM
Install msn ;) I dont really want a third instantmessanger o.O and yahoo hmz :P
vlado
June 16, 2006, 10:55 AM
I can't get msn to work here beacause i'm in romania , don't exactly know how ,but it's beacause of my isp.
We had a few viruses come threw msn..//[br]Posted on: June 16, 2006, 08:19:00 AM_________________________________________________cleaned 03 , but this is not provided by ryka , damn that bastards link , got banned on rapidshare *don't know why" for 2 hours , and beacause i was bored i saved every image from the pdf file :( on dula's link that i also found on my own :D
savefile link
http://www.savefile.com/files/1653167
rapidshare blows my dick
leecherboy
June 17, 2006, 03:29 AM
(So you've discovered the Dragon Fall pdfs, isn't it? :amuse)
Actually, in chap 3 there was originally a misplaced page, so I fixed it for the HQ raw here:
http://rapidshare.de/files/23291895/DragonFall03.rar.html
(Also, did a little renaming in some pages' titles, for a better reading)
I still can't download chap 1 scanlation, gotta wait some more... T_T
destinator
June 17, 2006, 03:46 AM
No problem =) Uploaded to sendspace: *removed because of new version*
leecherboy
June 17, 2006, 04:03 AM
I finally got to read it... It's wonderful!! :smile-big
And even though there wasn't too much space, the japanese part looks alright, too!
Oh, and the only mistake seems to be the hammer at page 30, but that's just me being nit-picky... :amuse
destinator
June 17, 2006, 04:10 AM
Damn *smacks head* its in the details =) I'll include that when I add the name page =)
rykarreolacr
June 17, 2006, 04:18 AM
vlado is a jackass!!! If rapidshare doesn't work for you, just tell me!!! I would have uploaded somewhere else...
Now, tell me which chapters you need, and where I should upload them.
vlado is mad at me, for a reason only we know :scry
About the chapter: It looks great!!!! Awesome!!!! :grin
vlado
June 17, 2006, 05:49 AM
i got banned on rapidshare so i can't upload files there...but i can download :D[br]Posted on: June 17, 2006, 03:49:27 AM_________________________________________________oy ,and leacher , thx , greate job , and thx for taking the time to translate this into english
leecherboy
June 19, 2006, 03:02 AM
By the way, I said there was a name missing in DF #2, didn't I? Here it is :amuse
Kinder balloon (Kinton cloud): Kinder is a italian trademark of chocolate sweets, with products as Kinder Surprise (mentioned directly here) or Kinder Chocolate.
vlado
June 19, 2006, 04:12 AM
lol that was the big name?i know kinder , and isn't it swedish?oh well i love it and ther's eaven a joke about it.
What dose a canibal say when he sees a pregnant woman?
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KINDER SURPRIZE MUHAHAHA!!!!![br]Posted on: June 19, 2006, 02:10:56 AM_________________________________________________oy and leecher , how many languages do you know man :D , you also have a preaty vast general knowlage
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leecherboy
June 19, 2006, 07:18 AM
I know spanish and... english. Yay for me! :amuse
Nah, I just try to translate the best I can... :p
vlado
June 19, 2006, 07:39 AM
and what about the kanji that you translated?
leecherboy
June 19, 2006, 07:44 AM
If you're talking about the katakana in chapter 1, yes, I know the charts of katakana and hiragana, but that is too far from "knowing japanese"... T_T
If you're talking about the "fire" kanji in chapter 2 (in Duende Tarugo's plane), I think I remember that from the "Yaiba" series... :amuse
vlado
June 19, 2006, 08:49 AM
lol , so you know katakana and hiragana :D?that's the hardest part of japanese :)
Oh well , i know romanian and i curently em learning spanish , italian , french , japanese , and english >_>
destinator
June 19, 2006, 08:51 AM
katakana and hirangana arent that hard o.O but kanjis... >.<
vlado
June 19, 2006, 08:55 AM
yeajh
leecherboy
June 20, 2006, 07:02 AM
Well, I'm back again, for this week's DF translation!
In this one, be ready for some weird stuff...
Here's the fixed HQ Raw (the original issue had a misplaced page):
http://rapidshare.de/files/23291895/DragonFall03.rar.html
Oh, and if you're wondering how I know what that girl in page 22 says, even though you don't get to see shit in the raws... it's just because I have cosmic powers (now wasn't that obvious? xDDD)
So now, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall #3 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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The few names for this chapter:
Bubu (Bu): that's just how we got his name translated in Dragon Ball's spanish edition.
Lazo Lila (Red Ribbon): "lazo lila" means "violet ribbon", and it's probably renamed like that so it gets a nice "L.L". Also, "lilas" is slang for "the cops".
Page 2
Soson Goku and his friends have managed to gather all the magic balls at last. The things just get worse from here on. The mystic forces have gone wild and someone has to keep them in order... the trouble comes when there is more than one guy up to the job.
Abracadabra
Page 3
Yansha-It doesn't seem to happen anything...
Goku-What should happen?
Wilma-Wait a moment! One, two, three.. There are eight!
Yansha-So what?
Wilma-There should be eight plus the white one, and here are eight including the white one! We are still missing a ball...!
Wilma-But how? The ball-scanner doesn't show any other ball around, the signal shows that all the balls are here...!
Wilma-But here are the balls Soson Goku and I owned, plus the two we just got! Where...?
Page 4
Wilma-Bring'im here! Search'im thoroughly!
Sounds: Ouch! Eeek! Ow!! And what is this?
Yansha-[Shoot!]
Wilma-And this...?
Wilma-The ball-scanner recognizes it! It's the ball that was missing!
Wilma-And it's different to the rest of them, like the white and the black ones.
Wilma-Dang, the one who created them must have been a design freak!
Wilma-Where did you get that ball? [Shoot, I've left him stark naked!]
Yansha-I... I had no idea... Some Moorish person sold me that as an useful lucky charm for drivers. [I should have asked for a four leaf clover!]
Ball-[It's here!]
Page 5
Wilma-Well, if this ball works or not, there is only one way to know...
Wilma-Now I've changed the configuration, with the white one in the middle...
Yansha-So the energy channels better?
Wilma-No, so it all looks prettier...
Yansha-They're reacting!!
Wilma-Yes, yes, yes!!
Yansha-Fuck!
Page 6
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Page 7
All-It's him!!
Wilma-The Kehu-ron dragon!!
Kehu-ron:What? Where?
Page 8
Kehu-ron: Forgive my confusion... It's been so long since anyone's summoned me, I've almost forgotten my name.
Kehu-ron: Now on to your wish...
Wilma-At least! Now I'll see fulfilled my greatest wish!
Wilma-Wait a moment! Now that I think about it, I've never considered what wish I'd ask...
Wilma-Say... You had thought up a wish?
Yansha-Huh? No... What about you?
Yansha-What is that I wish for most? What could it be? What?
Wilma-Waaaaaaaah!! We gotta think something, fast!
Goku-I wanna pee.
Page 9
Goku-How funny! I wanted to pee, and I just happened to do it!
Goku-Did you see that?
Kehu-ron:I've fulfilled your wish.
Kehu-ron:And the next time you want to call me for these stupid things, better think it again.
Page 10
Box: Once the wish is fulfilled, the balls spread again around the world...
Wilma-Nooorrggll!
Page 11
Goku-Say, Wilma, where did the balls go? You've already asked the dragon for a wish?
Goku-Why do you stare at me like that?
Goku-[Hurts!]
Wilma-No, you'd even say I'm to blame here, for not having thought up a wish![Hmf!]
Yansha-Well, after all this, I think it's time for a hard-earned rest, and I know a place that...
Wilma-Good, we'll rest, but as soon as we have recovered, we'll go look for all the balls again, and this time I'll have my wish well thought up...!
Yansha-Well,ok. [Why does she include me?]
Box:And now that our... ehem... heroes are about to rest from this... ehem... epic adventure, it's time for us to change to another scenario while we wait for them to go back to the... ehem... action.
Yansha-Listen, the one who knows the place is me!
Box: The truth is, there is no hurry, is there?
Page 12
In an isolated arcane fortress... A trascending fact is going to take place...
Gohan-Oh power of the shadows, join at my request!
Gohan-Let the blackest coat of darkness cover this dark shrine!
Gohan-Let the hellfire shine in the forge of the greatest palladin from the forces of evil!
Page 13
Gohan-Well, yes... I'd say some coat of darkness covers me...
Gohan-Glglglgl...
Arrow: Yes, he's Chun Gohan!
Page 14
Gohan-You!
Gohan-You... are...!
Gohan-The Guyver!!
Page 15
Bubu-All right, let's stop joking!
Bubu-I'm Bubu!
Bubu-The most powerful wizard on Earth and part of the foreign country!
Gohan-Very well! I wasn't expecting anything less! Now listen, wizard Bubu: I'm your master and I'm gonna command you a mission!
Bubu-Er... Could you explain to me what you just said? I didn't know those new ones...
Bubu-I can say until "part of the foreign country".[He, he, we're even, now!]
Gohan-I should have guessed his mind would yet be empty of data.
Gohan-Ehem... Is there something you already know how to do by yourself?
Gohan-No! No! Forget it! I get the idea!
Gohan-Well, I'll have to explain the whole purpose of your mission, in the most elementally clear way... [What an odd feeling of Deja-Vu!]
Bubu-I know what you want from me: you want me to put my power at your service so that this Soson Goku guy is destroyed, don't you?
Page 16
Bubu-Don't be so surprised, I'm a very powerful wizard and I can read minds. I knew what you called me for from the beggining...
Gohan-Then why did you play fool?
Bubu-I'm also quite the joker, tee, hee, hee...
Bubu-But I warn you, the destruction of that Soson Goku shall better be funny, or else, I won't do it!
Gohan-Well... I think that for a wizard as powerful as you, there won't really be a problem in finding a way to make his destruction funny... now will there be? [What a seriousless guy, fuck!]
Bubu-Good, good, good, I like that! I was so totally into having fun! This is so gonna rule!
Gohan-Well, now we have to track Soson Goku down, with your powers I don't think it'll be a hard task...
Page 17
Someone-Stop right there!!
Gohan-Huh? Who?
Hebime-We have detected a mystic energy discharge of supra-atomic proportions greater than the maximum armonic level, which breaks all the commandments in this physical universe. We, the Peskaito Shins, will put things back into order!!
*These guys are from the "Orion" series, a manga by master Masamune Shirow.
Bubu-And what's the whole point of you guys?
Hebime-We are the special patrol against spirits, hellspawn, succumb to our power! [Screw you]
Gohan-I don't like this, wizard Bubu! Make them disappear before they pose a threat!
Page 18
Fuuzen-But fools! We are already a threat to you, metaphysical criminals!
Gohan-Quick, Bubu, return his attack, let's not take any risks here!
Susano-Watch your words, you heretical sacrilegious! [Chew on this!]
Bubu-Chun Gohan?
Bubu-You have provoked Bubu's rage!
Page 19
Fuuzen-Agh...! KOFF!! Urgh!
Bubu-My beans fart-like attack never misses.
Susano-That's a shameful attack, nobody deserves to die like that!
Susano-I'll avenge my partner's death!
Bubu-Honestly, I never thought it would work!
[br]Posted on: June 20, 2006, 05:02:20 AM_________________________________________________Page 20
Susano-Fuck... what a... crash...! [Man, it hurts so much!]
Bubu-Oooooh! [I'm the best!]
Hebime-This fight is already getting ridiculous! We must put a stop on this now!
Hebime-Hey, mister Bubu, we are willing to dialogue a peaceful ending out of this!
Page 21
G.V.-You can't dialogue with an enemy like that, it's too risky...
G.V.-Dispose of him as soon as possible!
Seska-Him...!
Hebime-The Grand Venerable of the Peskaito Shins!
G.V.-He's taking advantage of your weak points...
G.V.-You must strenghten your aura so you hide yourselves from his perceptions.
Susano-Protect our weaknesses... That's it! I was such a fool!
Susano-How could I forget I'm as blind as a bat!
Susano-You won't mock me now, freak!
Susano-Don't try your luck, or you'll be getting some, huh? Don't fuck with me!
Bubu-[Haw haw haw]
Hebime-Let's prepare the antiwizardry spell to neutralize him! Now!
Page 22
Text on fan: Grow up soon
Monster: Ouuuuugh!
Susano-I think we missed something!
Hebime-Is that so? No shit.
Pai-Yakumo!
Text on fan: Go to hell
Text on bus: Cosmic trolley bus
Page 23
G.V.-Well! Are we gonna do things the right way, or what? Let's join our power to finish him!
Hebime-Come on, everybody!
Seska-Let's join our forces!
Susano-In the great tornado! [I'm the best at everything I do]
Page 24
All-We're ready!
Page 25
All-Succumb to the supertornado!
Page 26
Bubu-Shit!
G.V.-We... we made it...
G.V.-By the way, what was it all about?
Note: Actually, Chun Gohan has been inconscious since Susano kicked him, we didn't say so before outta lazyness.
Alvaro-[Anything wrong?]
Page 27
Someone-Oh, man!
??- Those foreigners in the special patrol always get there before us!
Gohan-Uuuuunng!
Page 28
Gohan-What?!!
Gohan-My shrine, destroyed!!
Gohan-What about Bubu? Is this all that's left of him?
Gohan-And what will I do now?! It was required a power collected through generations, an astral conjuction and a Leonard Nimoy's joke to summon him! How will I repeat the unrepeatable circumstances?
Gohan-There is some hope, but I need to wait for a couple of decades, at least... I hope that ignorant is still alive then...
Note: And now, let's project ourselves towards the future...
Page 29
Approximately a year later, on the same place... (shoot, what a coincidence).
Wilma-Well, at this time we are already close to the next Kehu-ron ball, we may not run into any other hindrance!
Goku-How cool! Everything is so big!
Nacho-We are projecting ourselves towards the future!
Alvaro-Yeah, like Kaneda!
Katakana on cap: "Wilma"
Wilma-Of course Yansha could have come with us, but he's still recovering from the day you got the hang of the Kome-Jame-Ha and left the house full of holes! They're still picking up bricks in the villages around there! [And my dad has cut me out of his will! Snif!]
Goku-But now I master the attack! [Tee hee]
Wilma-Yeah, and that scaares me!
Wilma-I've decided that, after gathering the balls, my wish will be to recover my dad's trust. I wouldn't be able to live without it! (without his inheritance, that is)
Note:This chick must have been born with gloves on
Page 30
Wilma-The new ball-scanner is way more precise, that'll make things easier.
Signs: The ball is here.
And you, here.
Got it?
Wilma-And thank god we already got one of the balls; we were lucky it got stuck in what was left of my parents' house, fate is on our side!
Wilma-Come on! We're not that far from it!
Ope.-Located position of B-5. It travels at constant speed towards the northwest...
Comm.-Good, send the tracking unit to analyze its track.
Page 31
Unit-We're checking its track, it hasn't been that long since they went by here.
Unit-The energetic print there shows that they travel on a motorized vehicle.
Unit-However, there is a very powerful trace of energy from those ruins, that can altere our readings; there might have been a metaphysical storm a long time ago, there...
Sol.-Roger, we'll save in memory the analysis' results, prepare an interception according to them...
Sol2.-Look, sir! Androids!
Sol3.-[Look, sir, chinesemen footsteps!]
Page 32
Comm-Good, get the interception squad going, for our supreme commander's sake! [And for heeaven's saake!]
Comm-Let us charge against the invaders with all the might of the Lazo Lila!
Comm-Attack!
To be continued... the month it is.
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vlado
June 20, 2006, 07:04 AM
Is this the raw i cleaned fixed , or the original raw fixed?and greate translation , des is on it :D
leecherboy
June 20, 2006, 07:11 AM
It's the HQ raw you cleaned, and thanks :p
vlado
June 20, 2006, 07:14 AM
:) , saw that to , and again .thx. for the translations and for all of your trouble , but i don't think pps actualy read dragon fall.
I was looking at the rapidshare downloads metter on chapter one , and only 22 downloads.
But chapter one really sucked so i can see why =)) , chapters to 2, 3 really are awesome , i couldn't stop laughing :)
leecherboy
June 20, 2006, 07:17 AM
Well, maybe it's because people are on exams, and all that...
When people "return" and we get on the news page (hopefully ^^), maybe more people will read it...
vlado
June 20, 2006, 07:18 AM
Yeah :D , i'l talk to njt :) , any other greate spanish manga parodies out there :D?
Bleach , Hellsing or smth?
We could make a scanlation group Evil-Spanish-Parody =))
leecherboy
June 20, 2006, 07:24 AM
Haha, no, there are not that many good parodies out there, though I can list them for you :amuse
-Dragon Ball Esede (this one is short, but good)
-Evan SD (from the Evangelion series, is somewhat funny)
-Fool Metal Alchemist (I haven't even seen this one, so I don't know if it is any good)
Those should be the best ones left, but they aren't as good as Dragon Fall or Raruto, and I don't even know if we can get raws...
rykarreolacr
June 20, 2006, 07:27 AM
I'll talk to njt about some promotion.
Great translation leecherboy.
Out of those parodies I only know Fool Metal Alchemist...
leecherboy
June 20, 2006, 07:30 AM
Yeah, the other two parodies I mentioned are somewhat old, and, after a quick search, I didn't see any raws... but they were worth listing :amuse
rykarreolacr
June 20, 2006, 07:32 AM
I found a couple of pics of Esede
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v669/riojano0/02dbgt1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v669/riojano0/02dbgt2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v669/riojano0/02dbgt3.jpg
leecherboy
June 20, 2006, 07:36 AM
Yep... ain't it funny?
Esede was a issue parodying a lot of anime series (with 3 pages per series), and Esede GT (the Dragon Ball one) was a special issue for Dragon Ball... :amuse
vlado
June 20, 2006, 07:38 AM
Fool Metal Alchemist and Dragon Ball Esde sound preaty nice :) ,i'l google and e2k for raws , torrents etc.
I'l let you know if i find them :D[br]Posted on: June 20, 2006, 05:37:29 AM_________________________________________________OOo ,so esede parodyed more mangas :D sweet
leecherboy
June 20, 2006, 07:43 AM
Ooh? How'd you like this? I already found the raws for "Esede Gete" (I guess they don't call me "leecherboy" for nothing... :p)! But I guess I won't post the link here... ^^
vlado
June 20, 2006, 07:46 AM
just read the first 3 chapters of canuto . and frankly , it sucks big time....[br]Posted on: June 20, 2006, 05:46:14 AM_________________________________________________lol esede gete? ooo nice , esede was a magazine or what?
leecherboy
June 20, 2006, 07:48 AM
Not a magazine, more like a special issue with 24 pages... :amuse
vlado
June 20, 2006, 07:49 AM
special issue of what?
leecherboy
June 20, 2006, 07:55 AM
It's just a one-shot issue that parodied the whole GT saga... I'll see if I can upload it... :amuse
vlado
June 20, 2006, 08:02 AM
K , any parody manga that you think it's worth it and you can translate pm me and i'l start cleaning the raws :D
I'l tipesett to beacause des is kinda laying it of :D
destinator
June 20, 2006, 08:10 AM
I think I'll finish everything till the end of the week in perfect editons without any erros ( at least I hope so ) ^^
vlado
June 20, 2006, 08:12 AM
slaker , i talked to njt waiting for he's pm now , i asked him if he can talk about dragon fall in the news :D
destinator
June 20, 2006, 08:18 AM
slaker , i talked to njt waiting for he's pm now , i asked him if he can talk about dragon fall in the news :D
I got a life sucker ;p also it takes a lot of time to make all the pages >.<
leecherboy
June 20, 2006, 08:21 AM
Oh, Perfect Edition! That sounds so cool! (and I thought I heard that name before... ^^)
Take your time, des!
By the way, I upped the Esede Gete raw here, if anyone wants to read it (though the cover page could be bigger):
http://rapidshare.de/files/23589125/Esede_Gete.rar.html
I don't know when I'll get to translate it, honestly... :p
destinator
June 20, 2006, 08:27 AM
Oh, Perfect Edition! That sounds so cool! (and I thought I heard that name before... ^^)
Take your time, des!
Lol really, me too xD
Well perfect just in the way of the last correction you gave me,killing this brackets I forgot somewhere and the namepages ^^
destinator
June 20, 2006, 09:10 AM
thanks! :p
And the things I wanted to know:
-I know in "that page", that's S.L. himself, but what the heck is he saying? (is that even english/spanish?)
-Who are the guys in page 24?
-What's the name of the Duende Tarugo's plane? (I'm guessing something about "fire"...)
1. maybe nuff said o.O ? dont know even it does not really fit
3. well kanji for fire, the seconds is no ->indicates ownerships of something like english 's and the last one is not identifiable xD
vlado
June 20, 2006, 04:25 PM
you know kanji to?OMFG i'm the only one here that donsn't know :D
vlado
June 20, 2006, 04:26 PM
copy cat , ryka said that :D , leecher i can't find fool metal but i found some nifty pics and they are verry hilarious :D
destinator
June 20, 2006, 04:30 PM
well I learned japanese for 1 week and know about 150 basic kanjis ^^
chapter 2 is already typesetted...working on the things tomorrow....
abdulahi
June 20, 2006, 09:06 PM
thanks for scanlating this des. and also to you vlado for cleaning. but how can i forget leecher for translating
vlado
June 21, 2006, 05:54 AM
loooool 150?wew in just a week?from where????
leecherboy
June 21, 2006, 07:31 AM
1. maybe nuff said o.O ? dont know even it does not really fit
Yeah, that was my guess, but it's badly written... xD
So, if you want, correct it to "Nuff said!"...
leecherboy
June 27, 2006, 02:34 AM
Here I am again, for a weekly chapter of Dragon Fall!
In this one, the fight against the Red Ribbon, just like you remember it (or maybe not)! :amuse
Here's the MQ Raw (provided by rykarreolacr):
http://rapidshare.de/files/24243932/Dragon_Fall_04.zip.html
(Oh, and the next chapter may come up a little late, because next week I'll have my last University exam, and that is no laughing matter...)
So now, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 04 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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The only new name in this chapter is Dr. Gore, but you probably know "gore" means "extreme violence" in english...
Page 2
Kehu-ron came and went away, Bubu came and went away, and our hero (more or less) Soson Goku didn't even realize, but now the Lazo Lila is on for some action, and even that absent-minded Kagarrot won't be able to ignore it. A good one is coming this way...
This is war!!
Page 3
Goku-Let me drive now!
Wilma-You, driving? You think I'm crazy? I'd sell my body to the science before that!
Gen.-Good! Start the attack!
Sol.-[Crap, I forgot the donuts!]
Wilma-Iaagghh!!
Page 4
Wilma-Aaah! What is that?
*Sound of a roaring crowd, hearing it through a funnel
Goku-That guy attacked us! I'm going to stop him!
Page 5
Wilma-Aaahh! No please! I haven't yet been with a guy!!!
Gen.-Well, in these times, that has some merit... But it's some other business we're here for...
Arrow: He's just bought a house, that's why he's smiling.
Gen.-Check her!
Sol1.-She's clean, boss! I swear!
Sol2.-Please! We won't do it again!
Sol.-Sir! I found it!
Wilma-Say what?! All this mess to steal our ball?!
Wilma-Jackasses!
Page 6
Gen.-Good, we got what we came looking for, someone shut this girl's trap!
Wilma-Mmm!
Gen.-We can't leave behind witnesses of our actions!
Gen.-Kill them when we are long gone, these things give me the creeps!
Page 7
Sol.-Say, lady... Is it true that you haven't been with any boy?
Sol2-[Stupid!]
Sol.-So cool!
Wilma-(Why did I say anything? There's no helping it, they're gonna kill me!)
Wilma-(Dang!)
Sol.-Ready to aim!
Sol2-Sir, the resistance approaches our position!
Sol.-What? How did you find out, soldier?
Sol2-Looking towards there! Sir!
Sound: Pee-poo! Pee-poo!
Page 8
Sol.-Don't try your luck, or you'll be getting some! Got it?
Sols-[Run, run]
Wilma-Mmm!
Leader-Come on, someone unhand that girl!
*The guy is "Grey", from an old manga series
Wilma-Who are you?
Leader-We're the resistance, doll, we have been battling the Lazo Lila's army for months. What did they want from you?
Sign on back: I kick butt!
Page 9
Wilma-What? Who are they? And why do they want the b...? Well, whatever...
Wilma-And you, wake up!
Leader-We'll be able to talk about these matters more at our leisure if we go to our militar base. It's not that far from here. Want to come?
Wilma-Yeah, we'd rather go to a safe place. Those guys could be back!
Leader-That is our base!
Page 10
Box: Later...
Leader-In this strongly armed base, we've gathered every person who wanted to join forces against the Lazo Lila's army; we pick up any kind of volunteers.
Wilma-But who are those "lilas"?
Page 11
Leader-In this graphic you can watch the development of the Lazo Lila's army...
Leader-They have spread around the globe...
Leader-That army appeared some year ago and they're growing, setting their bases in strategic locations. They're not yet a real threat for the world nations...
Leader-However, a war machinery like what they own represents a potential danger too big, we must go dismantling their bases one at a time...
Leader-At this moment, we're heading to one of those bases, on the icy territory of Jinglebell, we'll set the population free and take their fortress.
Sign: Death Steel Mushroom
Page 12
Meanwhile... On the planet's orbit...
Plane-Stop, identify yourself!
D.V.-So we got almost all of them now...
Page 13
Black-Indeed sir, they've all been gathered, save for one that has just been found...
D.V.-And they're already in our battle station, huh?
D.V.-In that case, report to the station's high commander that I'll go myself to supervise the last stages of the instruction.
Black-Wha?
Black-But sir, I don't know whether Dr. Gore will agree...! He insisted on carrying on the building without interferences!
D.V.-The Death Steel Mushroom must be finished under the set deadline, that battle station must be the ultimate power in the Universe... or at least, at this side of the Mississippi. I want to be there at the time it starts being operative.
D.V.-As for those rebels that threaten to mess our conquering plans... There's nothing to worry about, I've already taken care of that. Our special agent will get rid of the most dangerous ones.
Page 14
And in some well-armed reinforced base...
Wilma-The ball-scanner shows that we're heading to a group of five balls, but the rest are scattered...
Wilma-What will I do? Once we get those five, I'll have to go get the others, I don't know if I should stay more time with this ones, they sure are resourceful, and the guy is worth a screw...
Sol-We have visuals with the foe's battle station!
Sol-Everybody, run to the projector! And those three: the elf gal, the stupid gal and the goateed guy, stop the sodomy and get dressed, we're also talking to you!
Leader-Well, this is the Lazo Lila's army battle station, with more than a kilometer of armoured structure and defensive batteries, also with a main weapon that features some fucking power...
Leader-But it's still in building phase, and though it's almost finished, I've known that the main weapon still doesn't work.
Page 15
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Page 16
Gore-Supreme Commander, it's an honor to have you here in such a critical time for this project!
D.V.-Spare me the irony, I know too well you don't want me meddling around now, but I have some good reasons to be here! Take me to the operation center!
Page 17
Leader-Well... The vigilance around the station is permanent, and more zealous in the building zone...
Wilma-(Inside there are five balls... We must get them no matter what.)
Leader-Well, it's show time, let's get rid of the camouflage and start the assault!
Page 18
D.V.-I see the armament generators are fully operational.
Gore-Chssst! That's a secret, nobody out of this walls must know!
Black-Yeah, our trick to make the resistance believe that our main weapon doesn't work was really neat...
Sign: Main weapon out of service. Sorry for the trouble
Black-Didn't I say so? Here they are!
Leader: Attack!
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All: Repel the attack!
Box: 1=Termonuclear grenade
Leader: They're burning us with their welcoming, let the mobile base crush them with everything it has!
Sol-Huh?
Sol-What happens? The polar night's solstice already?
Base-[Take this!]
Sol-Dang!
Page 20
Black-The resistance's forces move forward!
D.V.-We can't let them! Doctor Gore, activate the main weapon!
Gore-Everything's set!
??-Grrr!
Arrow: He's in trance
Oper.-Main weapon activated, fire on target!
Page 21
D.V.-Aah! This'll teach them respect!
Black-(Oh my god, this is so gross!)
Gore-Power off!
Someone-Soson Goku... wake up!
Goku-Glglgl...
Someone-Fucking wake up now!!
Goku-Uh! Wha...?
Godh-It's me... GODH!
Goku-Oh my god!
Godh-No, Godh!
Page 22
Godh-I'm the almighty lord of heaven and earth, and I've come to talk to you...
Goku-But why?
Godh-Because it seems to be written somewhere that the future of the world will be in your hand, and this may be the right time...! [What can we do?]
Goku-Ah.
Godh-Listen, you'll go to the holy land of Sakarin and you'll receive the teachings of the Duende Sakarin, the one who taught the Duende Tarugo... I know that says nothing good about him... [Oh well...]
Godh-The truth is, there is no time to find anything better, so go, and may his teaching prove useful to you in your quest for the Kehu-ron balls.
Sol-I got you, rebel!
Goku-Wilma, I wanna tell you something!
Wilma-You? I'm freaking out!
Page 23
Wilma-What? Go to some far off place now that we're so close? Dooon't even think about it!
Goku-But, it's...
Leader-Poor little boy, that's what happens when you get hit in the head.
Leader-Let's see, we're retreating, activate module two of the mobile base!
Black-Sir! Watch this!
D.V.-It's not possible!
Gore-Hey! Let me! I wanna watch it too!
Base-[Mom?]
Page 24
Base-Retreat.
D.V.-The resistance is a bunch of foolish clowns!
D.V.-Aaagh! It burns me up!
Wilma-What an interesting defensive system has this installation!
Leader-Yes, but the only disadvantage is that with every module we lose a hundred square meters. [It's claustrophobic!]
D.V.-Special agent! Follow that mobile base and bring me any of those retards so we may question them.
Agent-Your orders.
Page 25
Meanwhile, in the runaway base...
Wilma-Listen, you pain in the butt! You're already making me sick with that load of bullshit about the Duende Sakarin!
Goku-But, it's...
Leader-Wait a sec! What are those Kehu-ron balls? Are they that powerful? May they be able to help us defeat the Lazo Lila?
Wilma-Eh... Uh... Well... [Not sure, the truth is...]
Leader-If it's like that, we must get them, and if we're required to go to the land of Sakarin for it... WE'LL GO!
Leader-We'll take you there and wait for some progress on your part!
Goku-Good.
Wilma-But... it's...
Leader-Say no more! On to the holy land of Sakarin! All is for the cause!
O'Con.-Stop fondling my boobs, Dr. Fleishman!
Dr.Fle.-Come on, O'Connell! Don't fight against nature! A man, a woman... You know what I mean!
Page 26
Leader-That's Sakarin's Tower, the irreducible village of warriors who guard it is at its feet.
Leader-We'll wait for you here. Go find that Duende. When you're back, we'll resume the battle...
Wilma-Shitty kid... If you hadn't popped the fucking balloon, you could have come here by yourself...
Goku-But! It's not my fault my hair is this spiky!
Alvaro-Nacho! Nacho! Let me draw this one!
Wilma-[Don't raise your voice to me like that, motherfucker!]
Nacho-Fuck...
Page 27
Wilma-How will the tower defenders be? I hope they're not the violent type...
Goku-Look, and this staff? Where did it come from?
Someone-Halt intruders!
Asterix-What are you here for? Speak or defend yourselves!
Asterix-You ain't saying anything? Good! Then it's my turn!
Goku-This dwarf is crazy!
Page 28
Wilma-You have screwed it now! What's gonna happen?
Goku-Did you want him to hit you?
Wilma-Say... Excuse us, we're looking for someone called Duende Sakarin, do you happen to know where is he?
Arrow: Soson Goku's staff is that fabulous magic staff that appears and disappears depending on when the authors remember to draw it (I know it's confusing).
Alvaro-[It won't happen again!]
Nacho-[I need phosphorus]
Text on matches box: Matches
Both-[We promise!]
Vitalst.-You're looking for the Duende Sakarin?
Getafix-Only someone really prepared may meet the Duende Sakarin.
Wilma-We have to meet him no matter what, and we're ready! We come from far away!
Arrow: Look! It's there! We didn't forget!
Page 29
Getafix-I mean physical preparation. More exactly, in the climbing field.
Full.-The Duende Sakarin lives at the end of the column.
Wilma-B... But you can't even see its end!!
Full.-But you don't have to go up now!
Wilma-Ah! Is he coming down? I'd appreciate it! I... I have fear of heights...! Did you know?
Vitalst.-No! First, you have to earn the right to go up fighting against the guardian of the tower...
Wilma-"The right", he says... But weren't you the Sakarin Tower's guardians?
Asterix-No way! We were already living here when someday the public works service arrived and built up the whole thing ...
Page 30
Getafix-Here it is!
Getafix-The guardian of the tower!
*This is "Neko", the publisher company's pet.
Wilma-But... but it's just some unworthy cat! HA HA HA.
Wilma-Listen, lend me that stick, I'll take care of it myself!
Page 31
Wilma-Well, it wasn't that hard... Was that your invincible warrior?
Asterix-Well... We never said it was invincible, we just said you had to fight fim... And actually, you are its first opponent...
Alvaro&Nacho-[Haw, haw! Revenge!]
Wilma-What?
Vitalst.-Do you think anyone's been crazy enough to attempt to climb that tower?
Wilma-Oh my god!? What kind of nonsense are we gonna do?
Getafix-You can't choose now! You must go up!
Wilma-Look, since you were the one who wanted to get there, you climb it!... You'll tell me all of it later, ok? [Right? Will he buy it?]
Goku-Don't know... What if I get lost half-ways?
Wilma-DON'T SAY NONSENSE! How can you get lost going just straight?
Wilma-The truth is, I can expect anything from this kid. Ok... I'll go with you.
Page 32
Wilma-Do you happen to know the tower's height?
Vitalst.-Well... In the really really clear days, the highest point appears to be seen, but it may be an optic effect.
Wilma-Yeah... I guess...
Tower-Very high.
Wilma-Oh my god! We can die trying!
Wilma-(My only solace is that if I faint and fall, I'll be able to take this lousy kid with me...)
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destinator
June 27, 2006, 02:35 AM
Ah looks cool. Damn I wanted to finish everything yesterday but guess what MH wasnt working so I could do anything :(
vlado
June 27, 2006, 03:38 AM
Nice , kinda short this week huh :D?
leecherboy
June 27, 2006, 03:46 AM
Hehe, short? What is?
The translation is as friggin' huge as ever... :amuse
rykarreolacr
June 27, 2006, 05:35 AM
Great work man!! ;)
leecherboy
June 27, 2006, 07:52 AM
Thanks! xD
And took my time (almost one hour), but my **** internet connection allowed me to correct a typo in page 19...
destinator
June 27, 2006, 07:56 AM
For those who don't know, Dragon Fall is a legendary spanish parody of Dragon Ball that was published over 10 years ago, and ran off for several years, with around 40+ chapters. Its authors were Nacho Fernandez and Alvaro Lopez.
Link: http://rapidshare.de/files/24258362/Dragonfall2.zip
Cover:
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/9550/dragonfall0200010gv.jpg
Thanks to the team and the few readers we have =)
leecherboy
June 27, 2006, 08:04 AM
With those amazingly edited chapters, we're sure to get more readers :amuse
And, the series is gonna get better in a few chapters... :p
ibra87
June 27, 2006, 08:25 AM
It's great thx. But des, some of the translations here don't make any sense. Hope you guys can correct them. ;) Though it's still thumbs up to you guys.
leecherboy
June 27, 2006, 08:30 AM
I'm to blame for any mistakes in the translations... :amuse
But where are them? :blink
destinator
June 27, 2006, 08:45 AM
Well yeah it reads good for me too. Tell us more ibra =)
ibra87
June 27, 2006, 08:46 AM
I'm to blame for any mistakes in the translations... :amuse
But where are them? :blink
Not really mistakes, just..ermm.. english grammer mistakes.
I am sorry I don't have time to find so many, but here's one at page 8:
This is the kinder balloon and it can carry on him any person for any given distance, that's my gift.
Here you shouldn't write on him. And a second thing is that in English you say "it" about things, where it's typical for languages like Spanish and German to have "him" or "her" instead. ;)
and the same for the next thing that the hermit says, where you probably must remove "on him".
Good job, leecherboy. I enjoyed this chapter a lot. Keep it up!
destinator
June 27, 2006, 08:52 AM
Maybe you should become our grammar script proofreader =)
ibra87
June 27, 2006, 08:55 AM
Maybe you should become our grammar script proofreader =)
haha :P Well if I have time, then why not? But maybe I'm gonna start Raruto 2 animation soon so that'll keep my busy.
Btw, I suck at English grammar.
Edit: took this from another topic about Mr. Fulllswing. One guy described what you guys should do:
I read the chapter. Editing looks good, but there's a fair number of English mistakes. Get a proofreader who can do more besides putting the script through MSWord. A few sentences could be re-structured.
But besides that, good release.
destinator
June 27, 2006, 09:33 AM
If you want check out the dragon fall 3 script...I'll wait till you got through it =) (if you want)
vlado
June 27, 2006, 11:04 AM
:) well greate as usual :) thx leachy , any more greate parodies?Espada Gete , Fool Metal Alchemist :D
Have you found anything mi amigo muy inteligente ":)))))))"
leecherboy
June 28, 2006, 04:19 AM
Hehe, no, there aren't any more of them, you know, only Canuto and Joputo... :amuse
Though, if daioten starts translating Joputo, I guess I'll help him :p
ibra87
June 28, 2006, 02:03 PM
Yeah just send ^^ When I have the time I will do it for you (though I can't promise you anything since I really do suck at english grammar).
destinator
June 28, 2006, 02:10 PM
Well would be nice if you do it...I already killed all bubbles and now I am just waiting for your corrections =)
ibra87
June 28, 2006, 04:01 PM
hmm where is the translation?
destinator
June 28, 2006, 04:06 PM
Here ya go http://mangahelpers.com/forum/index.php?topic=5064.msg78620#msg78620 =) Thanks a lot for doing it =)
Btw I moved the posts to the #3 translation thread =) (just in case you should look for them)
ibra87
June 28, 2006, 04:50 PM
Yoh...
strikethrough means need correction
underlined is the correction
bold is a comment (very useful at some points :P]
There were some other mistakes which were too small to actually matter. Hope this helps (especially since I'm very tired now, so it might be a bit baaah)
Oh, and I'm not so sure if the "thought up" is right to use that way. Just too tired to think of how to do it (srry :P). You could make it: You thought of a wish?
Page 3
Yansha-It doesn't seem to happen anything... Nothing seems to happen...
Goku-What should happen? is supposed to (not that important, but sounds better ;))
Wilma-Wait a moment! One, two, three.. There are eight!
Yansha-So what?
Wilma-There should be eight plus the white one, and here are eight including the white one! We are still missing a ball...!
Wilma-But how? The ball-scanner doesn't show any other ball around, the signal shows that all the balls are here...!
Wilma-But here are the balls Soson Goku and I owned, plus the two we just got! Where...?
Page 4
Wilma-Bring'im here! Search'im thoroughly!
Sounds: Ouch! Eeek! Ow!! And what is this?
Yansha-[Shoot!]
Wilma-And this...?
Wilma-The ball-scanner recognizes it! It's the ball that was missing!
Wilma-And it's different to the rest of them, like the white and the black ones.
Wilma-Dang, the one who created them must have been a design freak!
Wilma-Where did you get that ball? [Shoot, I've left him stark naked!]
Yansha-I... I had no idea... Some Moorish person sold me that as an a useful lucky charm for drivers. [I should have asked for a four leaf clover!]
Ball-[It's here!]
Page 5
Wilma-Well, if this ball works or not, there is only one way to know...
Wilma-Now I've changed the configuration, with the white one in the middle...
Yansha-So the energy channels better?
Wilma-No, so it all looks prettier...
Yansha-They're reacting!!
Wilma-Yes, yes, yes!!
Yansha-Fuck!
Page 6
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Page 7
All-It's him!!
Wilma-The Kehu-ron dragon!!
Kehu-ron:What? Where?
Page 8
Kehu-ron: Forgive my confusion... It's been so long since anyone's summoned me, I've almost forgotten my name.
Kehu-ron: Now on to your wish...
Wilma-At least last! Now I'll see fulfilled my greatest wish fulfilled!
Wilma-Wait a moment! Now that I think about it, I've never considered what wish I'd ask for...
Wilma-Say... You had thought up a wish?
Yansha-Huh? No... What about you?
Yansha-What is that I wish for most? What could it be? What?
Wilma-Waaaaaaaah!! We gotta think something, fast! Waaaaaaaah!! We gotta think of something, fast!
Goku-I wanna pee.
Page 9
Goku-How funny! I wanted to pee, and I just happened to do it!
Goku-Did you see that?
Kehu-ron:I've fulfilled your wish.
Kehu-ron:And the next time you want to call me for these stupid things, better think about it again.
Page 10
Box: Once the wish is fulfilled, the balls spread again around the world...
Wilma-Nooorrggll!
Page 11
Goku-Say, Wilma, where did the balls go? You've already asked the dragon for a wish?
Goku-Why do you stare at me like that?
Goku-[Hurts!]
Wilma-No, you'd even say I'm to blame here, for not having thought up a wish![Hmf!]
Yansha-Well, after all this, I think it's time for a hard-earned rest, and I know a place that...
Wilma-Good, we'll rest, but as soon as we have recovered, we'll go look for all the balls again, and this time I'll have my wish well thought up...!
Yansha-Well,ok. [Why does she include me?]
Box:And now that our... ehem... heroes are about to rest from this... ehem... epic adventure, it's time for us to change to another scenario while we wait for them to go back to the... ehem... action.
Yansha-Listen, the one who knows the place is me!
Box: The truth is, there is no hurry, is there?
Page 12
In an isolated arcane fortress... A trascending transcending fact is going to take place...
Gohan-Oh power of the shadows, join at my request!
Gohan-Let the blackest coat of darkness cover this dark shrine!
Gohan-Let the hellfire shine in the forge of the greatest palladin from the forces of evil!
Page 13
Gohan-Well, yes... I'd say some coat of darkness covers me...
Gohan-Glglglgl...
Arrow: Yes, he's Chun Gohan!
Page 14
Gohan-You!
Gohan-You... are...!
Gohan-The Guyver!!
Page 15
Bubu-All right, let's stop joking!
Bubu-I'm Bubu!
Bubu-The most powerful wizard on Earth and part of the foreign country!
Gohan-Very well! I wasn't expecting anything less! Now listen, wizard Bubu: I'm your master and I'm gonna command you a mission!
Bubu-Er... Could you explain to me what you just said? I didn't know those new ones...
Bubu-I can say until "part of the foreign country".[He, he, we're even, now!]
Gohan-I should have guessed his mind would yet be empty of data.
Gohan-Ehem... Is there something you already know how to do by yourself?
Gohan-No! No! Forget it! I get the idea!
Gohan-Well, I'll have to explain the whole purpose of your mission, in the most elementally clear way... [What an odd feeling of Deja-Vu!]
Bubu-I know what you want from me: you want me to put my power at your service so that this Soson Goku guy is destroyed, don't you?
Page 16
Bubu-Don't be so surprised, I'm a very powerful wizard and I can read minds. I knew what you called me for from the beggining beginning...
Gohan-Then why did you play fool?
Bubu-I'm also quite the joker, tee, hee, hee...
Bubu-But I warn you, the destruction of that Soson Goku shall better be funny, or else, I won't do it!
Gohan-Well... I think that for a wizard as powerful as you, there won't really be a problem in finding a way to make his destruction funny... now will there be? [What a seriousless guy, fuck!]
Bubu-Good, good, good, I like that! I was so totally into having fun! This is so gonna rule!
Gohan-Well, now we have to track Soson Goku down, with your powers I don't think it'll be a hard task...
Page 17
Someone-Stop right there!!
Gohan-Huh? Who?
Hebime-We have detected a mystic energy discharge of supra-atomic proportions greater than the maximum armonic (you mean harmonic?) level, which breaks all the commandments in this physical universe. We, the Peskaito Shins, will put things back into order!!
*These guys are from the "Orion" series, a manga by master Masamune Shirow.
Bubu-And what's the whole point of you guys?
Hebime-We are the special patrol against spirits, hellspawn, succumb to our power! [Screw you]
Gohan-I don't like this, wizard Bubu! Make them disappear before they pose a threat!
Page 18
Fuuzen-But fools! We are already a threat to you, metaphysical criminals!
Gohan-Quick, Bubu, return his attack, let's not take any risks here!
Susano-Watch your words, you heretical sacrilegious! [Chew on this!]
Bubu-Chun Gohan?
Bubu-You have provoked Bubu's rage!
Page 19
Fuuzen-Agh...! KOFF!! Urgh!
Bubu-My beans fart-like attack never misses.
Susano-That's a shameful attack, nobody deserves to die like that!
Susano-I'll avenge my partner's death!
Bubu-Honestly, I never thought it would work!
Susano-Fuck... what a... crash...! [Man, it hurts so much!]
Bubu-Oooooh! [I'm the best!]
Hebime-This fight is already getting ridiculous! We must put a stop on to this now!
Hebime-Hey, mister Bubu, we are willing to dialog dialogue a peaceful ending out of this!
Page 21
G.V.-You can't dialogue with an enemy like that, it's too risky...
G.V.-Dispose of him as soon as possible!
Seska-Him...!
Hebime-The Grand Venerable of the Peskaito Shins!
G.V.-He's taking advantage of your weak points...
G.V.-You must strenghten your aura so you hide yourselves from his perceptions.
Susano-Protect our weaknesses... That's it! I was such a fool!
Susano-How could I forget I'm as blind as a bat!
Susano-You won't mock me now, freak!
Susano-Don't try your luck, or you'll be getting some, huh? Don't fuck with me!
Bubu-[Haw haw haw]
Hebime-Let's prepare the antiwizardry spell to neutralize him! Now!
Page 22
Text on fan: Grow up soon
Monster: Ouuuuugh!
Susano-I think we missed something!
Hebime-Is that so? No shit.
Pai-Yakumo!
Text on fan: Go to hell
Text on bus: Cosmic trolley bus
Page 23
G.V.-Well! Are we gonna do things the right way, or what? Let's join our power to finish him!
Hebime-Come on, everybody!
Seska-Let's join combine (not sure :P, can also be -> Let's join forces <-) our forces!
Susano-In the great tornado! [I'm the best at everything I do]
Page 24
All-We're ready!
Page 25
All-Succumb to the supertornado!
Page 26
Bubu-Shit!
G.V.-We... we made it...
G.V.-By the way, what was it that all about?
Note: Actually, Chun Gohan has been inconscious unconscious since Susano kicked him, . we We didn't say so before outta lazyness laziness (unless it's on purpose he's talking like that).
Alvaro-[Anything wrong?]
Page 27
Someone-Oh, man!
??- Those foreigners in the special patrol always get there before us!
Gohan-Uuuuunng!
Page 28
Gohan-What?!!
Gohan-My shrine, destroyed!!
Gohan-What about Bubu? Is this all that's left of him?
Gohan-And what will I do now?! It was required a power collected through generations, an astral conjuction and a Leonard Nimoy's joke to summon him! A power collected through generations, an astral conjuction and a Leonard Nimoy's joke were required to summon him! (OR "It required a power collected through generations...") How will I repeat the unrepeatable circumstances?
Gohan-There is some hope, but I need to wait for a couple of decades, at least... I hope that ignorant is still alive then...
Note: And now, let's project ourselves towards the future...
Page 29
Approximately a year later, on the same place... (shoot, what a coincidence).
Wilma-Well, at this time we are already close to the next Kehu-ron ball, we may not run into any other hindrance!
Goku-How cool! Everything is so big!
Nacho-We are projecting ourselves towards the future!
Alvaro-Yeah, like Kaneda!
Katakana on cap: "Wilma"
Wilma-Of course Yansha could have come with us, but he's still recovering from the day you got the hang of the Kome-Jame-Ha and left the house full of holes! They're still picking up bricks in the villages around there! [And my dad has cut me out of his will! Snif!]
Goku-But now I master mastered the attack! [Tee hee]
Wilma-Yeah, and that scaares scares (unless she's yelling.. i can't see that in this script :( ) me!
Wilma-I've decided that, after gathering the balls, my wish will be to recover my dad's trust. I wouldn't be able to live without it! (without his inheritance, that is)
Note:This chick must have been born with gloves on
Page 30
Wilma-The new ball-scanner is way more precise. That'll make things easier.
Signs: The ball is here.
And you, here.
Got it?
Wilma-And thank god we already got one of the balls; we were lucky it got stuck in what was left of my parents' house, fate is on our side!
Wilma-Come on! We're not that far from it!
Ope.-Located position of B-5. It travels at constant speed towards the northwest...
Comm.-Good, send the tracking unit to analyze its track.
Page 31
Unit-We're checking its track, it hasn't been that long since they went by here.
Unit-The energetic print there shows that they travel on a motorized vehicle.
Unit-However, there is a very powerful trace of energy from those ruins, that can altere alter our readings; there might have been a metaphysical storm a long time ago, there...
Sol.-Roger, we'll save in memory the analysis' results, prepare an interception according to them...
Sol2.-Look, sir! Androids!
Sol3.-[Look, sir, chinesemen footsteps!]
Page 32
Comm-Good, get the interception squad going, for our supreme commander's sake! [And for heeaven's saake!]
Comm-Let us charge against the invaders with all the might of the Lazo Lila!
Comm-Attack!
To be continued... the month it is.
leecherboy
June 29, 2006, 02:48 AM
Heh, I never expected to have so many grammar mistakes... *hits head against wall*
But I still have some pride to fight back xDD (just kidding, I appreciate what you did):
-That "thought up" also sounded weird to me, but in birthdays, isn't it ok to say "he thought up a wish"?
-In page 4, it shouldn't be "a useful", but "an useful", as "a" can't be used before a word that starts in vowel (or did I lose it? :amuse)
-In page 17, yeah, I mean "harmonic" (that metaphysical stuff kills me)
-In page 20 (not really a mistake) you forgot to strikethrough "dialog"
-In page 23, "join our forces" isn't alright?
-In page 26, it's "laziness", yeah
-In page 29, it should be then "I've mastered the attack". And "scaares" is alright, because she's yelling, you guessed right
Oh, and good job! You can correct the chapter 4 translation whenever you're ready! (it's just next to this topic)
ibra87
June 29, 2006, 06:04 AM
You're mostly right. And I was too tired so I forgot to strikthrough stuff and underline too srry :P
The "join our forces" is alright. No problem. It's just that it's more common to say "join forces". But no problem, really.
However about "an useful", it's wrong. It does start with a vowel, but when you say it, it starts with a "JU" voice, which makes it "a useful" and not an. ;) It's about how you hear it, not how you spell it.
Zenith
July 02, 2006, 07:32 PM
the link on the first post is invalid. =(
poracle
July 03, 2006, 01:22 AM
The first rapidshare link is dead, it says that the file has been removed by uploader... Please provide new link.
destinator
July 03, 2006, 02:06 AM
Uhm I am sorry http://rapidshare.de/files/24260306/dragonfall1.zip should work.
Adam_xx
July 03, 2006, 02:08 AM
Thanks THE WHOLE TEAM for doing this! xP
Gold Knight
July 03, 2006, 02:59 PM
I'll go ahead and create a board for Dragon Fall, seeing there are so many threads for it. ;)
leecherboy
July 04, 2006, 02:33 AM
First of all, let us humbly thank njt for mentioning us in the news page! *bows*
And then, let us humbly thank Gold Knight for giving us our own sub-forum! *bows*
Well, now that my last exam is finally over, I can enjoy some temporary inner peace to treat you to yet another DF chapter!
In this one, The RedRibbon Strikes Back (bad joke), and number 8 attacks!
Here's the raw: (reupload: 28/09/06)
http://www.savefile.com/files/113761
If you notice something funny in the title, yep, it's supposed to "rhyme"...
Oh, and about "that pun" at the last page, I wasn't planning on translating it fully... until I came up with that. So, if it sounds weird, just bear with me... :amuse
(And by the way, this one's is the last "dark pitch cover page", for your information...)
And now, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 05 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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(No new names in this chapter)
Page 2
The mushroom, or the toadstool, or the fungus, or whatever, it's about to be attacked by the resistance. And Soson Goku just grows a brain for the moment; and Wilma is fed up with it all. What else do you want?
Let us charge on with the stick that gets long!!
Page 3
Box: In the middle of the fight to beat the deadly Lazo Lila's army, our heroes Soson Goku and Wilma are about to meet the great Duende Sakarin...
Wilma-Arf! Gasp! Agfs!
Wilma-Say... So... Soson Goku...! We... We have been climbing... this column... like monkeys since this rotten morning...! I don't dare to look down now!
Goku-And yet you can't see it end...
Wilma-All this is some serious bullshit! What the heck are we doing in this situation, in the middle of a war that beats us? Furthermore, I can't keep going, I'm all worn out! Couldn't you rest for a minute?
Goku-I think... I think I'm going to rest now.
Goku-Because I... can't go on. [So hungry...]
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Wilma-Ungh!
Wilma-Eeeek! I lose my footing!
Wilma-This is the last time this brat involves me in his screwed-up plans... THE LAST TIME!! [The asshole's so heavy!]
Box: X hours later...
Wilma-[Agggh!]
Wilma-[I can't... Water... Air... Food... Guys...]
Arrow: Li'l stars.
Box: And, at last...!
Wilma-I see it! I see its end!
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Wilma-The Duende Sakarin's house!
Wilma-Argn!
Wilma-Woah!
Wilma-We finally made it! Mr Duende! Are you there?
Goku-[Ow, it stings!]
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Sakarin-I'm the Duende Sakarin. You must be the ones who beat my grandson in a fight. [He's been like this since yesterday...]
Sakarin-Tell me what you're looking for, and I'll see what I can do for you.
Wilma-So we... We're looking for... looking for... [Ah ah aaah]
Sakarin-Yes?
Wilma-At-choooo!!
Wilma-Excuse me... ehem... I suffer some slight allergy to cats, I can't be near them.
Goku-We've come looking for the knowledge that allows us to beat the Lazo Lila's army and gather the Kehu-ron balls...!
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Wilma-How could you spit all that in a row?! HUH?
Goku-Well... I memorized it, and that's why...
Sakarin-What a weird couple!
Sakarin-From what I gather, you have been sent here by Godh...
Wilma-Wow, what a smart cat!
Sakarin-Hey, show more respect, I'm a hermit...!
Sakarin-And eehh... I think I know what you want from me...
Sakarin-There is a legend which states that someday the world will be in a danger so huge all their inhabitants will see the end of their lives closing in...
Wilma-What a bastardish legend...!
Sakarin-Silence! That day, it's said the world will be saved by a kid with nil intelligence quotient and psychodelic haircut...
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Goku-Well, I can take this out of my pocket now...
Nacho-[You think they'll buy that?]
Alvaro-[Not sure, not sure...]
Sakarin-Huh?
Sakarin-Oh! It's the fabulous magic staff that stretches, it's proof the legend has come true...
Goku-Uh?
Goku-No, this staff is totally useless, I just carry it around because it was given to me... [Dang! Don't take it away...]
Sakarin-Oh! The fabulous magic staff that is totally useless! And who gave it to you, if we may know?!
Goku-Well... Some turtle so I wouldn't tell people about its ears...
Sakarin-Turtle? Ears? [Say, National Geographic?]
Wilma-I'm geddin' tired o' diz, an' my alleggy just getz worzz. Let 'im giff ya whatevva he wantz, and letz get oudda here...
Goku-What are you saying? I don't understand you. [Vocalize, dear...]
*Bamfff: Noise of a gas grenade letting go its smelly gas load (A.N.).**
**Shit, dude, the things you learn while reading comics. From now on, when I hear "Bamfff", I'll know what it is (T.N.)
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Wilma-Aaggh! So disgusting!
Goku-This... This stench...!
Sakarin-Uack!
Agent-They've fallen under my control. Nobody escapes from Special Agent Stink Bomb!
Agent-I'll take the girl to interrogate her. Out of the three, she's the only one who seems to know shit...
Agent-I'll immobilize her to ease her transportation...
Text on spray: Freeze there, dude!
Text on etiquette: ACME brand
Agent-Well... "Ease" is just a way of putting it... ARF! HNMMF! I'm sick and tired of this part of the script!
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Text on plane: Slave 1, Tenerife 0
Goku-Uh... Wha?
Sakarin-Someone has come and taken away that posh girl that was with you! [And in my own house!]
Goku-What? Wilma?
Goku-Man, that's unfair! I have to find her, I can't go back by myself!
Sakarin-Ah, well, about that...! Here's what you've come looking for... I think you need it urgently!
Sakarin-Here, this magic kidney bean will give you what you most need in this situation: INTELLIGENCE AND INITIATIVE.
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Goku-Munch. [Puagh! Tastes like hospital food...]
Goku-I must rescue Wilma! She's been surely taken to that battle station! I'll go with the others and we'll go back there!
Sakarin-[Man, what an impetuous boy...]
Goku-I'll use this to go down!
Sign: To descend to floor level
Sakarin-Noooo!! Wait, don't do that!
Sakarin-Fool! That lever removes the wedges that hold the tower to the column to get it down to the floor...! But only after some buffer or check has been put below!
Goku-I... As I can read now, I got excited with the first sigh I saw and...
Nacho-[He's not that clever...]
Alvaro-[We can't do miracles...]
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Both-Uaaah!
Someone-By Tutatis! The sky has fallen on our heads!
Someone-My house! My house!
Cacofonix-But if I haven't sung now!
Sakarin (in katakana)-Bastard!!
Goku-I have to get back to base! [Run! Run!]
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Referee-Safe!
Sign: Silence, lazing area
Alvaro-Boeh... let's drop that... we don't want to leave the plot line...
Nacho-Yeah, it's pretty screwed up by now.
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Meanwhile, in a far, far away land...
Plane-[Close formation!]
Wilma-Brrr!
D.V.-Good job, Special Agent Stink Bomb!
Agent-My pleasure.
Agent-And now let's talk about my fare. This time only, and given the nature of the job, you'll get a special discount.
D.V.-What special job? IT WAS YOUR MISSION!
Agent-Look, I usually don't do prisoners, capturing without destroying is an extra for me, you know?
D.V.-You friggin' wish! You are a Lazo Lila's soldier!
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Wilma-C... C... Could anyone pay some att... att... attention to me, as I'm... I'm the pri... prisoner?[Brrrr!]
Wilma-Sniiiirf![Anyone has a kleenex?]
Wilma-Cleclecleclec!
Leader-So she's been captured! I kinda should have guessed when I saw that plane going at full speed, with Lazo Lila's emblem, and with a sign: "Carrying a kidnapped girl. Do not disturb"
Goku-We must go back before she gets hurt!
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D.V.-As you can see, little missy, you are in the command sector of the Death Steel Mushroom.
Wilma-And what do you do here?
D.V.-This fortress, apart from the obvious purposes, serves as headquarters for our project of conquering the world!
D.V.-From this impregnable lair I'll command Earth's fate!
Wilma-And what about the Kehu-ron balls I detected in here? Where did you hide them?
Gore-Those balls you're talking about are an essential part of our main weapon. THEY BELONG TO US!
Wilma-(Perfect, all goes smoothly. Now I know where I am and where are the balls... The only thing left to ask them is how to get out of here without being spotted...)
Wilma-And how the hell can you...?
Alarm-Emergency! Attack! Combat mode on...!
Wilma-[Wah, it scared me!]
D.V.-Shut up, shitty girl! Now you'll see how this war machinery works from the inside!
D.V.-Proceed with it!
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Wilma-No, no, lemme go! Help meee!
D.V.-Well, ok, let her go! I guess you won't ask any more questions now.
D.V.-And now, let's lead the counterattack.
Leader-ALRIGHT, we must open a breach to sneak through there while the fight stays outside. Can you make it?
Lun.-We'll keep them busy for some time, don't you worry.
Leader-Then charge!!
Gero-No way, they're at it again...
D.V.-Ha, ha, ha! They really are fools.
Black-Dang!
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Sol-Shoot... They... they're back!![Mommy... I wanna go home!]
Sol2-[Dammit!]
Leader-Get ready to open a breach in the structure and follow the plan accordingly!
Leader-This time victory will be ours!
Really loud Wiliams' epic soundtrack.
leecherboy
July 04, 2006, 02:38 AM
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D.V.-Activate the main weapon at once!
Wilma-Baddies, you baddies!
Ope.-A wave of rebels has gotten past the fire line!
D.V.-Intercept them with artillery!
Black-I think it'd be wise to assure the fortress' insides... [Not like we needed it or something. Go figure.]
D.V.-[Nobody asked ya, fuckin' nigga!]
Gore-Very good! If they make it through, my android #VIII will be waiting for them!
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Sol1-Warning, they breached through the perimeter!
Sol2-Spread it! They breached through the perimeter!
Sol3-Don't worry, reinforcements are on their way there! [And don't scream at my ear!]
Sol4-What is a perimeter?
Goku-Good, we're in. Now we must get to the command center.
Leader-You're drunk, aren't you! Getting inside was easy, but the plans of this place look like a Michelin Guide!
Leader-Now we should hide in a place nearby to a computer terminal, from which we can gather data that allows us to get to the command center without...
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Leader-What... what was that?
Goku-[Where? Where? Where?]
*You may recognize "Gunmn", by master Yukito Kishiro.
Wilma-I must find the balls and get outta here...!
Sol-Me too... She kicked them into the back of my throat... Uuuuungg!! Warning... She's escaping...
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Leader-Remember about the plan we were to follow? FORGET IT!
Goku-I'll get her!
Goku-Kome... Jame... Ha!!
VIII-Bwaaaaah!! He hurt me!
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Leader-BUT COME ON! What's with the crying now? [Isn't it annoying?]
Goku-Like she was never hit before!
VIII-Precisely... It's only been a week since Dr. Gore built me, and I have no experience in life...
VIII-Snif!
Leader-OH, my angelical immaculate creature! You have moved my heart with your touching story! Let me be the one who opens you to new experiences and fills up your void...!*
Leader-In other words, come 'ere so I fuck you whole...!
Sol-Oh, oh!
Sol-Dr. Gore will have to be told his android just switched sides...!
Gore-What? Number VIII betrayed us? That's inconceivable! But destroy her too, just in case!
Gore-What? How? That's your problem, not mine!
PC-[Ag! So ugly!]
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Meanwhile, outside, the battle keeps the soldiers busy.
Lun.-Pummel them! No mercy!
Lun.-Brr, so cold! Atchoo!
Lun.-Brr, so cold! Atchooo! SMASH THOSE BASTARDS, COME ON! Atchoo! Aaah, so noisy! I'm scared! AATCHOOOO! GET THEM! RIP THEIR BALLS OFF!
Sol-Shoot, dude, talk about the girl in "The Exorcist"!
VIII-Follow me, dear, I'll take you to the command center...
Leader-S... Shoot... What a girl...! And she said she... she had no... experience... Arf, arf... [I'm worn out! She's a love machine! Shoot!]
Goku-What have you been doing? Arm wrestling?
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Ope.-Outside the soldiers are pinned down by the ongoing battle!
Ope.-The invaders keep on coming here along with Android #VIII!
Ope.-And the girl we captured escaped and is still missing!
Ope2.-I lost my contacts!
D.V.-Ok, enough, I got that! (sigh)
Gore-We must make sure that girl doesn't get to the main weapon!
*He's in trance again.
Wilma-Fuck!
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Gen.-Halt! You won't make it past here!
Gen.-Give yourselves in or die! No... better die directly!
Leader-Oh my god!
VIII-Run, this way![Man, what a mess!]
VIII-SHIT!
Leader-[Fuck, can you even see its bottom?]
Arrow: One of those useless stupid bridges. A mere excuse for a Indiana Jones-like scene!
Text on box: Telebox
Text on screen: Hi
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VIII-Hold on to me! I'll take you to the other side!
Leader-Where's Soson Goku?
VIII-He must have got lost!
Gen.-Holy mother of god, what a fall!
Sol-Unlucky!
Gen.-They chose suicide over defeat!
VIII-Oh, what a silly miscalculation...!
Leader-[Bitch!]
Gore-Uh-huh! You won't make it past here!
Wilma-Crap!
Gore-Give up! It's the end for you!
Gore-And...
Wilma-And now, tell me: where are the balls?
Gore-Mercy, mercy, I'll tell you!
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Gore-There they are!
Wilma-I remember you saying they were a part of the main weapon... [Bluffer!]
Gore-They are, without that support, the connection box would be wobbly and wouldn't make contact!
Box:Meanwhile...
Sakarin-Oh, I forgot to tell the kid that the kidney bean's efectiveness level depends on the person's sillyness level!
Sakarin-And he didn't seem that clever to me, to tell the truth...!
Goku-Uh?
Wilma-Well, anyways, I'll be taking the balls with me, and while I'm at it I'll disable your annoying weapon!
Gore-Bwaaa! I worked so hard to design it! [Life is so cruel]
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VIII-I am ever so sorry, does it hurt much? [Me, as I'm a cyborg...]
Leader-Bah, don't get depressed for me, I'm an experienced guy and...
Black-The girl flees from the main weapon sector with the balls...
D.V.-Good!
D.V.-Divert her to the processing center. I'll go there...
Wilma-Fuck!
Wilma-Ouch!
D.V.-Uh-huh! I got ya!
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D.V.-You made it this far, but the fun's over. Now my laser sabre will settle the battle! [I'm the best at these things!]
D.V.-Owowooww!! I'm getting burnt!
D.V.-How could I forget again that I can't move my arms with this shitty cape?
Black-Sir!
Lun.-Good job, girl! Now I'll finish up the whole task!
Lun.-Tagged! You're it!
D.V.-Agh! I lost! So annoying!
Wilma-BUT COME ON!! What does this mean?!
Lun.-But don't... don't you even know... the game's rules? The battle ends when a soldier gets to the other faction's commander and does... Well, that...!
D.V.-We were a too big army, and as we were getting bored by not fighting against anyone, we created the resistance and stuff... [What's wrong with you?]
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Leader-I told you that wasn't the fire exit!
D.V.-Dude, that's the resistance leader! What's up?
Leader-You see, resisting all the way. So, have we already beat you?
Wilma-Enough!! Now I've gotten angry!!
Wilma-Soson Goku! Wherever you are! This is a house! You hear? A house!
Text on panel: Broadcast -- Whole station
Wilma-"Never misses..."
Sol-Fuck! I just shot once!
Sol-That was a one in a million shot!
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Goku-I just leaned against a wall and...
D.V.-What was that? What happened?
Leader-I think someone screwed up your whole place...
Wilma-Aaaahh! Some rest!
Text on wall: No coughing
D.V.-Uak! [I had li-"ke no bi"-sions of this coming!]
Tarugo-I knew I'd find you here...! I was looking for you because I was offered to participate in the great martial arts tournament; and as I don't want to make a fool of myself, I'm gonna sign in this little monster...!
Wilma-No friggin' way, the little monster stays with me! I need him for my quest for the balls!
Tarugo-Well... The prize for the winner may be some well earned bucks, and...
Wilma-You're gonna have so much fun, you'll be able to use your Kome-Jame-Ha whenever you want!
Goku-What is the "Come Jama whatever"?
Tarugo-(Oh my god! I wish I didn't need the money!)
------------[br]Posted on: July 04, 2006, 02:37:19 AM_________________________________________________Shoot, ryka, you didn't even give me time to post the second part! xDDD
rykarreolacr
July 04, 2006, 02:42 AM
Yay!!! Grin
Another great release!!! ;)
Sorry... problem fixed. It looked like a short chapter :grin XD
leecherboy
July 04, 2006, 02:44 AM
Short chapters? I wish they were like that! xD
Oh, and thanks :p
rykarreolacr
July 04, 2006, 02:46 AM
I meant that when I posted before I thought it looked shorter than usual... turns out it was only the first hal.f XD
destinator
July 04, 2006, 04:09 AM
#5 already xD? I am not even dont with part 3 yet....gonna keep up soon
destinator
July 04, 2006, 04:24 AM
Uhm thanks for the translation and I moved them to the correct thread =)
ibra87
July 10, 2006, 06:34 AM
Here's my poor proofreading again :P I must say I couldn't find many mistakes in this one, so leecherboy, I see you're improving pretty fast :thumbs (I bet it's "less lazy :p)
striketrhough is the mistake
underline is the correction
bold is comments
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Kehu-ron came and went away, Bubu came and went away, and our hero (more or less) Soson Goku didn't even realize, but now the Lazo Lila is on for some action, and even that absent-minded Kagarrot won't be able to ignore it. A good one is coming this way...
This is war!!
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Goku-Let me drive now!
Wilma-You, driving? You think I'm crazy? I'd sell my body to the science before that!
Gen.-Good! Start the attack!
Sol.-[Crap, I forgot the donuts!]
Wilma-Iaagghh!!
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Wilma-Aaah! What is that?
*Sound of a roaring crowd, hearing it through a funnel
Goku-That guy attacked us! I'm going to stop him!
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Wilma-Aaahh! No please! I haven't yet been with a guy!!!
Gen.-Well, in these times, that has some merit... But it's some other business we're here for...
Arrow: He's just bought a house, that's why he's smiling.
Gen.-Check her!
Sol1.-She's clean, boss! I swear!
Sol2.-Please! We won't do it again!
Sol.-Sir! I found it!
Wilma-Say what?! All this mess to steal our ball?!
Wilma-Jackasses!
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Gen.-Good, we got what we came looking for, someone shut this girl's trap!
Wilma-Mmm!
Gen.-We can't leave behind witnesses of our actions!
Gen.-Kill them when we are long gone, these things give me the creeps!
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Sol.-Say, lady... Is it true that you haven't been with any boy?
Sol2-[Stupid!]
Sol.-So cool!
Wilma-(Why did I say anything? There's no helping it, they're gonna kill me!)
Wilma-(Dang!)
Sol.-Ready to aim!
Sol2-Sir, the resistance approaches our position!
Sol.-What? How did you find out, soldier?
Sol2-Looking towards there! Sir!
Sound: Pee-poo! Pee-poo!
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Sol.-Don't try your luck, or you'll be getting some! Got it?
Sols-[Run, run]
Wilma-Mmm!
Leader-Come on, someone unhand that girl!
*The guy is "Grey", from an old manga series
Wilma-Who are you?
Leader-We're the resistance, doll, we have been battling the Lazo Lila's army for months. What did they want from you?
Sign on back: I kick butt!
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Wilma-What? Who are they? And why do they want the b...? Well, whatever...
Wilma-And you, wake up!
Leader-We'll be able to talk about these matters more at our leisure if we go to our militar military base. It's not that far from here. Want to come?
Wilma-Yeah, we'd rather go to a safe place. Those guys could be back!
Leader-That is our base!
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Box: Later...
Leader-In this strongly armed base, we've gathered every person who wanted to join forces against the Lazo Lila's army; we pick up any kind of volunteers.
Wilma-But who are those "lilas"?
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Leader-In this graphic you can watch the development of the Lazo Lila's army...
Leader-They have spread around the globe...
Leader-That army appeared some year ago and they're growing, setting their bases in strategic locations. They're not yet a real threat for the world nations...
Leader-However, a war machinery like what they own represents a potential danger too big, we must go dismantling their bases one at a time...
Leader-At this moment, we're heading to one of those bases, on the icy territory of Jinglebell, we'll set the population free and take their fortress.
Sign: Death Steel Mushroom
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Meanwhile... On the planet's orbit...
Plane-Stop, identify yourself!
D.V.-So, we got almost all of them now...
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Black-Indeed sir, they've all been gathered, save except (or what do you mean?) for one that has just been found...
D.V.-And they're already in our battle station, huh?
D.V.-In that case, report to the station's high commander that I'll go myself to supervise the last stages of the instruction.
Black-Wha?
Black-But sir, I don't know whether Dr. Gore will agree...! He insisted on carrying on the building without interferences!
D.V.-The Death Steel Mushroom must be finished under the set deadline, that battle station must be the ultimate power in the Universe... or at least, at this side of the Mississippi. I want to be there at the time it starts being operative.
D.V.-As for those rebels that threaten to mess our conquering plans... There's nothing to worry about, I've already taken care of that. Our special agent will get rid of the most dangerous ones.
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And in some well-armed reinforced base...
Wilma-The ball-scanner shows that we're heading to a group of five balls, but the rest are scattered...
Wilma-What will I do? Once we get those five, I'll have to go get the others, I don't know if I should stay more time stay longer with this these ones, they sure are resourceful, and the guy is worth a screw...
Sol-We have visuals with the foe's battle station!
Sol-Everybody, run to the projector! And those three: the elf gal, the stupid gal and the goateed guy, stop the sodomy and get dressed, we're also talking to you!
Leader-Well, this is the Lazo Lila's army battle station, with more than a kilometer of armoured structure and defensive batteries, also with a main weapon that features some fucking power...
Leader-But it's still in building phase, and though it's almost finished, I've known that the main weapon still doesn't work.
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Gore-Supreme Commander, it's an honor to have you here in such a critical time for this project!
D.V.-Spare me the irony, I know too well you don't want me meddling around now, but I have some good reasons to be here! Take me to the operation center!
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Leader-Well... The vigilance around the station is permanent, and more zealous in the building zone...
Wilma-(Inside there are five balls There are 5 balls inside... We must get them no matter what.)
Leader-Well, it's show time, let's get rid of the camouflage and start the assault!
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D.V.-I see the armament generators are fully operational.
Gore-Chssst! That's a secret, nobody out of this outside these walls must know!
Black-Yeah, our trick to make the resistance believe that our main weapon doesn't work was really neat...
Sign: Main weapon out of service. Sorry for the trouble
Black-Didn't I say so? Here they are!
Leader: Attack!
Posted on: June 27, 2006, 02:33:50 AMPage 19
All: Repel the attack!
Box: 1=Termonuclear grenade
Leader: They're burning us with their welcoming, let the mobile base crush them with everything it has!
Sol-Huh?
Sol-What happens? The polar night's solstice already?
Base-[Take this!]
Sol-Dang!
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Black-The resistance's forces move forward!
D.V.-We can't let them! Doctor Gore, activate the main weapon!
Gore-Everything's set!
??-Grrr!
Arrow: He's in trance
Oper.-Main weapon activated, fire on target!
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D.V.-Aah! This'll teach them respect!
Black-(Oh my god, this is so gross!)
Gore-Power off!
Someone-Soson Goku... wake up!
Goku-Glglgl...
Someone-Fucking wake up now!!
Goku-Uh! Wha...?
Godh-It's me... GODH!
Goku-Oh my god!
Godh-No, Godh!
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Godh-I'm the almighty lord of heaven and earth, and I've come to talk to you...
Goku-But why?
Godh-Because it seems to be written somewhere that the future of the world will be in your hand, and this may be the right time...! [What can we do?]
Goku-Ah.
Godh-Listen, you'll go to the holy land of Sakarin and you'll receive the teachings of the Duende Sakarin, the one who taught the Duende Tarugo... I know that says nothing good about him... [Oh well...]
Godh-The truth is, there is no time to find anything better, so go, and may his teaching prove useful to you in your quest for the Kehu-ron balls.
Sol-I got you, rebel!
Goku-Wilma, I wanna tell you something!
Wilma-You? I'm freaking out!
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Wilma-What? Go to some far off place now that we're so close? Dooon't even think about it!
Goku-But, it's...
Leader-Poor little boy, that's what happens when you get hit in the head.
Leader-Let's see, we're retreating, activate module two of the mobile base!
Black-Sir! Watch this!
D.V.-It's not possible!
Gore-Hey! Let me! I wanna watch it too!
Base-[Mom?]
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Base-Retreat.
D.V.-The resistance is a bunch of foolish clowns!
D.V.-Aaagh! It burns me up!
Wilma-What an interesting defensive system has this installation! (what?? Didn't get this one :s)
Leader-Yes, but the only disadvantage is that with every module we lose a hundred square meters. [It's claustrophobic!]
D.V.-Special agent! Follow that mobile base and bring me any of those retards so we may question them.
Agent-Your orders.
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Meanwhile, in the runaway base...
Wilma-Listen, you pain in the butt! You're already making me sick with that load of bullshit about the Duende Sakarin!
Goku-But, it's...
Leader-Wait a sec! What are those Kehu-ron balls? Are they that powerful? May they be able to help us defeat the Lazo Lila?
Wilma-Eh... Uh... Well... [Not sure, the truth is...]
Leader-If it's like that, we must get them, and if we're required to go to the land of Sakarin for it... WE'LL GO!
Leader-We'll take you there and wait for some progress on your part!
Goku-Good.
Wilma-But... it's...
Leader-Say no more! On to the holy land of Sakarin! All is for the cause!
O'Con.-Stop fondling my boobs, Dr. Fleishman!
Dr.Fle.-Come on, O'Connell! Don't fight against nature! A man, a woman... You know what I mean!
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Leader-That's Sakarin's Tower,. The irreducible village of warriors who guard it is at its feet.
Leader-We'll wait for you here. Go find that Duende. When you're back, we'll resume the battle...
Wilma-Shitty kid... If you hadn't popped the fucking balloon, you could have come here by yourself...
Goku-But! It's not my fault my hair is this spiky!
Alvaro-Nacho! Nacho! Let me draw this one!
Wilma-[Don't raise your voice to me like that, motherfucker!]
Nacho-Fuck...
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Wilma-How will the tower defenders be? I hope they're not the violent type...
Goku-Look, and this staff? Where did it come from?
Someone-Halt intruders!
Asterix-What are you here for? Speak or defend yourselves!
Asterix-You ain't saying anything? Good! Then it's my turn!
Goku-This dwarf is crazy!
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Wilma-You have screwed it now! What's gonna happen?
Goku-Did you want him to hit you?
Wilma-Say... Excuse us, we're looking for someone called Duende Sakarin, do you happen to know where is he?
Arrow: Soson Goku's staff is that fabulous magic staff that appears and disappears depending on when the authors remember to draw it (I know it's confusing).
Alvaro-[It won't happen again!]
Nacho-[I need phosphorus]
Text on matches box: Matches
Both-[We promise!]
Vitalst.-You're looking for the Duende Sakarin?
Getafix-Only someone really prepared may meet the Duende Sakarin.
Wilma-We have to meet him no matter what, and we're ready! We come from far away!
Arrow: Look! It's there! We didn't forget!
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Getafix-I mean physical preparation. More exactly, in the climbing field.
Full.-The Duende Sakarin lives at the end of the column.
Wilma-B... But you can't even see its end!!
Full.-But you don't have to go up now!
Wilma-Ah! Is he coming down? I'd appreciate it! I... I have fear of heights...! Did you know?
Vitalst.-No! First, you have to earn the right to go up fighting against the guardian of the tower...
Wilma-"The right", he says... But weren't you the Sakarin Tower's guardians?
Asterix-No way! We were already living here when someday the public works service arrived and built up the whole thing ...
Page 30
Getafix-Here it is!
Getafix-The guardian of the tower!
*This is "Neko", the publisher company's pet.
Wilma-But... but it's just some unworthy cat! HA HA HA.
Wilma-Listen, lend me that stick, I'll take care of it myself!
Page 31
Wilma-Well, it wasn't that hard... Was that your invincible warrior?
Asterix-Well... We never said it was invincible, we just said you had to fight fim... And actually, you are its first opponent...
Alvaro&Nacho-[Haw, haw! Revenge!]
Wilma-What?
Vitalst.-Do you think anyone's been crazy enough to attempt to climb that tower?
Wilma-Oh my god!? What kind of nonsense are we gonna do?
Getafix-You can't choose now! You must go up!
Wilma-Look, since you were the one who wanted to get there, you climb it!... You'll tell me all of it later, ok? [Right? Will he buy it?]
Goku-Don't know... What if I get lost half-ways?
Wilma-DON'T SAY NONSENSE! How can you get lost going just straight?
Wilma-The truth is, I can expect anything from this kid. Ok... I'll go with you.
Page 32
Wilma-Do you happen to know the tower's height?
Vitalst.-Well... In the really really clear days, the highest point appears to be seen, but it may be an optic effect.
Wilma-Yeah... I guess...
Tower-Very high.
Wilma-Oh my god! We can die trying!
Wilma-(My only solace is that if I faint and fall, I'll be able to take this lousy kid with me...)
leecherboy
July 10, 2006, 08:44 AM
Yay, I'm improving! :p (when you see chapter 06's translation you'll forget that "lazy" part xD)
So, for my reply:
-In page 13, yeah, "except" is okay (I thought "save for" = "except for"?)
-In page 24, that's just another way of saying "This military installation has an interesting defensive system" (unless I'm wrong?)
5il3nc3r
July 10, 2006, 08:55 AM
Is your raw in french?
Cuz I have the whole series (I think) in french and was wondering if it was a translation of japanese or if it was drawn by french ppl.
And if you want translation, I could provide (I can go from french to english)
you tell me
§ıĿ
leecherboy
July 10, 2006, 09:04 AM
Say what?? :blink
Dragon Fall in french?? Dragon Fall, the Dragon Ball parody, in french?
I never heard anything like that...
As I said before, Dragon Fall is 100% spanish, and the raws are in spanish.
And about helping with the translation, you're very kind, but I'm pretty confident in my skillz... :p
destinator
July 10, 2006, 09:07 AM
Here we go another release. Hope you enjoy it and thanks to all who downloaded the other chapters :)
Cover
http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/9568/dragonfall03014ps.jpg
>>>Download Here<<< (http://rapidshare.de/files/25453895/dragonfall3.zip)
5il3nc3r
July 10, 2006, 09:14 AM
Yes, dragon fall, the dragon ball parody, in french.
I have something like 12-15 volumes (it's been a while so I don't know exactly)
And I'm not doubting your skillz, but since right now I'm jobless, I have about 16 hours a day, 7 days a week free so I have plenty of time to translate :P
And since I already have the manga cleaned and in a language I understand perfectly, I can most likely give a "perfect" translation. But of course, since this appears to be your project, you're free to do as you please, I'm merely offering my own §ĸıĿĿz ;)
§ıĿ
leecherboy
July 10, 2006, 09:26 AM
Yay! Awesome scanlation!
And thanks to njt too, who keeps on advertising us! :smile-big
leecherboy
July 10, 2006, 09:36 AM
Oh, I didn't mean to sound, like, rude, but it just surprised me a whole lot... I mean, I never knew it was translated to french (and on physical paper, you say? Explaining all the jokes? For me not knowing, I must be getting old... :amuse)
The truth is, I also am jobless, and I also have lots of free time, so the translation goes smoothly...
But if you want to help, could you compare the translations I eventually release with the french translations you have in your issues and comment if there's some major difference? I'd appreciate that. And thanks for the support :)
5il3nc3r
July 10, 2006, 09:49 AM
Don't worry, I didn't think you were being rude, I just felt like clarifying. But it's not on paper however, it's a scanlation, like the ones you're doing, only in french, and I can't really compare with the spanish version but there are plenty of jokes (that make sense) :P
I'll check about comparing the two however, so we'll see :)
"Gambatte" as they would say :)
§ıĿ
rykarreolacr
July 10, 2006, 10:45 AM
Woo hoo!!
destinator
July 10, 2006, 10:49 AM
Yeah we got over 100 downloads now...thats far better than before njt made his little newspost =) <3 njt
ibra87
July 10, 2006, 02:24 PM
about page 24, right it like: "This military installation has an interesting defensive system"
because it's more understandable imo ;)
leecherboy
July 11, 2006, 08:15 AM
Oooh, just look at the cover page...! *dances around like a madman*
I was so aching to get to this arc! (Yaay!)
Yes, "that part" actually scored a "Man, Now That Is Hard To Translate" in my ranking. Fortunately for you, I love that kind of challenges... :amuse
And about that, this chapter also features some funky typesetting notes, just so you know...
Here's the raw: (reupload: 28/09/06)
http://www.savefile.com/files/113767
Oh, and translated that minor pun in my own way ("sheesh kebab" for "shish kebab", that was surprisingly witty for me xD)
Now, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 06 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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New names for this chapter:
Brujah (Duende Grulla in spanish): "grulla", pronnounced as "gruya", means "crane", while "bruja" means "witch"
Te Sin Pan (Tenshinhan): literally, "tea without bread"
Havoc (Chaos): this is just another word for "chaos" in english
Chu Li (Chun Li): "chuli" means "coolie"
T.Bogie (T.Bogard): nothing special
El Pito (The Pitt): "el pito" means "the prick"
King Chapa: this name is unchanged, but "chapa" can also mean "load of bullshit"
Miau (Mai): "miau" is "meow", the sounds cats do
Page 2
After the death mushroom failure (and I'm not talking about the "amanita phalloides"), here comes the Great Tournamet of Domino... I mean, of Martial Arts. Who will win? Will Soson Goku grow smart? Will I stop asking questions...?
A new instalment of the Great Tournament (sigh)!!
Page 3
Tarugo-We're finally here!
Wilma-We must find out where is the tournament.
Sign: XXV Great Tournament of Martial Arts. Village of Lepe.
*Lepe is a famous village in Spain where very dumb people are supposed to live.
Another sigh: Great Tournament of Martial Arts. Village of Lepe. Organized by: House of Culture
Another sign: Signings
Tarugo-Come on! The sooner we sign you in, the earlier you can start your training.
Wilma-Say, Mr. Duende, what's with the robe?
Page 4
Tarugo-Listen, I'm the Duende Tarugo. I want to sign me out, because I'll get into a monastery. My grandson will fight in my stead, ok?
Wilma-Cheater! First he signs in, then he sneaks away! [He hasn't changed a bit!]
Tarugo-Shut up, you ignorant! You don't know how people kick ass in this tournament! I signed in just to buy some time!
Wilma-So? They only accepted becoming a monk as a valid excuse for signing out?
Brujah-Precisely, as always, the old baldy is a loser... [He he he]
Tarugo-What? You! The Duende Brujah!*
*Pronnounced as "Bruyah"
Brujah-It's been so long since the last time! Though, not enough for you, I guess. My disciples and I have come to win this tournament...
Page 5
Brujah-We've been rivals for years, and our schools have never reconciled...
Brujah-That's why I would like to settle our arguments, so you can participate from the victory my pupils will obtain...
Tarugo-You're flattering me... [Humf!]
Brujah-These are my disciples: Te Sin Pan...
TSP-My pleasure.
Brujah-...And Havoc.
Havoc-Hi.
Tarugo-Then... I've also signed my disciple in, Soson Goku, who will perform my legendary devastating technique, Kome-Jame-Ha...!
Brujah-I've always thought that was a ridicule name for a martial art...
Tarugo-Anything wrong? I could have named it in a really sucking way like... what can I say... "Vital Wave" *, couldn't I?
*That's the name we got for it in the first Dragon Ball spanish dubbing.
Brujah-Nonsenses aside, I'm glad I met you here. You'll be a witness to the event that will finally take my school to glory and fame.
Brujah-And also, I'll get some cash, which always comes in handy, he, he...
Page 6
Tarugo-Well, it doesn't matter... With your Kome-Jame-Ha you'll put them in their place. Huh?
Goku-And what was that? I forgot!
Tarugo-What's that "I forgot" crap?
Goku-And by the way, who are you, sir?
Wilma-The explosion of the Lazo Lila's battle station must have damaged his brain... Things only do get worse...
Wilma-You could have said so earlier, dear...
Text on sign: No post --ing sign --s (the part in italics is cut off)
Tarugo-And the tournament starts in two days... I guess I'll have to spend my time teaching him all the stuff again... [Well, there's not that much teaching to do...]
Wilma-Well, I'll spend some time buying me new clothes and tiding myself up...
Wilma-It's on you, isn't it?
Tarugo-Why do I have the feeling that I'm gonna screw it up big time? [Snif!]
Box: And the tournament day arrived. People from all the corners of the planet (yep, well, I know the Earth is round, that was just an idiom) closed in to watch an incredible event...
Page 7
Ann.-Welcome you all to the most important sporting event in the planet: THE GREAT MARTIAL ARTS TOURNAMENT!!
Ann.-In this competition opponents with a colossal power will clash!
Ann.-And only one will be crowned as this great tournament's winner!
Text on cap: Vital Force
Ann.-The mightiest fighters have gathered for this event! Coming up, the preliminaries to determine the chart of contestants to fight on the ring will take place!
Page 8
Referee-All of you here will have to get a number to decide your fighting order! The tickets are there!
Text on ticket machine: Your turn
TSP: He, he... That dumb Duende Tarugo's disciple won't make it past the first round...
Chu Li: What a ticket!
Ann.-Very good, the preliminaries order has just been established. Let's get this tournament started...
Note on margin: No, Alvaro, we authors aren't allowed!
Page 9
Tarugo-The preliminary rounds should have started by now.
Wilma-Say, Mr Duende, if you weren't willing to fight, why didn't you sign any of your disciples in?
Tarugo-There's no way I could. Chiqrilin just stayed keeping watch over the corpse of the turtle, that passed out from a heart failure the other day after receiving a phone call... [...I think it was from National Geographic...]
Tarugo-About the ogre Yumas, I think he got interned in a rest home, and her daughter Chicha, who has already grown up, is currently missing...
Wilma-[ (Dang, what a soap opera!) Come on, forget it... ]
Brujah-Yeah, everything related to the Duende Tarugo is way depressing.
Brujah-It must be part of his nature...
Tarugo-Well, putting aside that winning or losing matter, the truth is your ugly fashion sense marks you as an obvious loser!
Brujah-Repeat that if you dare!
Tarugo-Ragged down!
Brujah-Baldy!
Tarugo-Punk!
Wilma-[Shameful!]
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Ann.-Contestant Te Sin Pan, qualified!
Staff-Aw!
Ann.-Contestant Dhalsim, qualified!
Ann.-Contestant... er... Soson Goku... well... qualified... me thinks...
Goku-Ah, I had to hit the other one?
Fighter-I... I... I give up...
Page 11
TSP-Hmf... Looks like that Soson Goku also qualified for the tournament...
Havoc-Patience.
Dhalsim-He has a very strong chi, you'll have some trouble with him.
TSP-[Where did you come from?]
Ann.-Contestant Chu Li, qualified!
Honda-Aaaagooooooddddhiiiiittttt...
Bogie-[Jesus, the shivers!]
Ann.-Contestant Frank Castle, disqualified for technique not allowed!
Puni.-What? The only surrendered enemy is the dead enemy!
Page 12
Ann.-Fight #114: Havoc versus Bogie!
Bogie-The big asshole!
TSP-I did tell you already! Don't go around doing the freak! You have no powers nor can do jack!
Havoc-Yeah... When someday the time comes and something happens, I'll do the laughing... Patience...
Ann.-We have already the chart of the tournament contestants!
Page 13
Box: Chart of contestants of the great tournament (of martial arts)
Miau, Japan
Soson Goku, Some far off place, you know
El Pito, Imagine
Page 14
Nacho-The alignment for the fights has been decided!
Alvaro-[Some huge mental effort it took us...]
Sign on top: The fucking master!
Ann.-The first fight will take place in a few seconds!
Ann.-The opponents are about to get on the tournament's great ring!
Ann.-The great martial arts tournament has just started!!
Text on both sides of ring: If you fall here, you're screwed
*"Nontiendo": pun with Nintendo and "no entiendo" ("I don't understand")
Page 15
Tarugo-We've arrived at the right time!
Wilma-Look who's here!
Yansha-Well, well! Wilma, Mr Duende, what a coincidence!
Wilma-Why did you come here?
Yansha-Well, as you did seem to be spending a huge amount of time searching for the damned balls, I came to see the tournament so I wouldn't get bored...
Text on Yansha's shirt: Puas boy
Yansha-By the way, I shaved Puas' tail, I was fed up of dealing with its spikes everyday.
Arrow-Sheesh Kebab
Ann.-The first opponents are getting onto the ring right now: El Pito and King Chapa.
Chapa-Yeah!
Page 16
Ann.-It seems the first fight is gonna be pretty intense!
Tarugo-And now shut up! I don't want to miss a detail!
Ann.-The fight starts!
Pito-Doesn't matter how much monkey hopping you do, you won't be able to dodge my attacks...!
Pito-I'll sweep you off the ring! Start calling for first aid!
Chapa-In that case, if I can be granted a last will, can you stop smiling like that? For Christ's sake, you're creeping me out!
Page 17
Tarugo-Hmf! Such a couple of clowns! [Is this a great tournament?]
Dhalsim-Don't underestimate them, they radiate a very strong chi!
Chapa-You're not gonna win! Not only because you're a bunch of muscles without any brain vitals, neither because you're uglier than an orangutan's fetus...!
Chapa-...But simply put, because you're as slow as a berry's growth, and you're as inaccurate as my ass hole!
TSP-Well... That guy doesn't stop talking like a geek, but he kicks ass...
Goku-What is a geek?
Page 18
Pito-GET OFF ME!
Pito-Fuck!
Chapa-Shoot, I can't say anything to you, sonny!
TSP-Well, well! They're both very good. How could this turn out in the end?
TSP-I wouldn't like to fight that hulk, it gives me the creeps...
Chapa-You know something? I think I know the reason of your so original name!
Chapa-It refers to the least horrid part of your body, proto-vomit!
Pito-Ha!
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Chapa-I... I see you're... a very... tough guy.
Pito-[Me always! Haw!]
Ann.-Well! It's getting harder to guess who'll be the winner!
Ann.-Such a thrill, ladies and gentlemen!
Chapa-I'm gonna have to use my special technique! [Shit, my beloved katana!]
Ann.-Oh my god, he'll be using his special technique! Beware, all of you!
Chapa-
I never, you know?, tho [i]--ught I'd hav-- e //
to face a guy as hor --rible a-- s //
you. And life surp --rises y-- ou //
just like that, ev --ery sin-- gle //
day. Because, it just hap --pened to me t-- he//
other day, I was s --o cooly wal-- king //
down the street --and met a guy-- who //
offered me to p --articipate i-- n //
a competition o --f throwing -- boo- //
gers, and wh --en I woke-- up //
the... //
Page 20
Chapa-
...And that way, when I have something --that I mi-- ss, no //
matter if the --re's somethin-- g left, becaus --e first o-- f all //
comes my ow --n esteemed-- self-estee --m (if you'll forgive the-- repeti- //
tion) that mak --es fight ti-- ll the en --d with my techn--iques, //
in the sam --e way as us-- ual... //
*Typesetting note: the "//" means the end of that line, and letters in italics (delimited by double-dashes) should be cut off (I just included them for the sake of completion)
Chapa-And said that, and hoping my speech wasn't too lenghty, I must thank you, respectable audience, who was so kind as to listen to me!
Ann.-H... Holy god! It was worse than ever!
Ann.-King Chapa has beaten his own record!
Ann.-But, however, El Pito is still standing!
Chapa-I knew it...
*Noise of such a mass falling down...
Page 21
Ann.-El Pito has been defeated! Thus, King Chapa qualifies for the next fight!
Ann.-Now it's customary for the winner to grant us some words...
Ann.-...But we'll make an exception this time... Let's resume the tournament...
Chapa-Dang!
Ope.-Let's see, someone bring me the announcer!
Ann.-And now, the second fight of this tournament: Soson Goku vs Dhalsim!!
Chapa-Bah [You're dull...]
Page 22
Tarugo-At last, the time has come! The Duende Brujah will swallow his words!
Wilma-Owww!!
Yansha-Ainngg!!
Brujah-He doesn't seem that bright, to have made it past the preliminary...
Page 23
Ann.-The fight starts!
Helper-[Hey, buddy!]
Tarugo-Come on, let's go, you can do it, you can do it!
Dhalsim-You don't know who you are up against, bratty kid. I'm too much for you, you'd better give up, for your own good. [He!]
Goku-Good, deal...
Ann.-Co... Contestant Soson Goku disqualified for out of bounds! [And he's so cool about it!]
Neko-[What a feeling of Deja Vu!]
Page 24
Ann.-Winner, Dhalsim!
Dhalsim-Well, then... So nice... [Yeah, I won, wow]
Goku-That sir was very nice, I followed his advice...
Page 25
Ann.-Well... er... Now... Let's say we use to... advance to the next... fight...
Ann.-B... But before that, as... we got some free time... then... let's take half an hour off for a snack...! Deal?
Tarugo-It's the end... I'll never get over it... My school's prestige got totally owned... [I feel so tired]
Goku-Say, Wilma, what are we doing next? I'm bored.
Tarugo-Him! Him! Someone hold me, or I'll kill him!
Wilma-Take your time.
Wilma-Look, dear, if you want to make yourself useful, why don't you go search for the missing Kehu-ron balls? You can read the ball-scanner, can't you? Then come on, move it...!
Yansha-Isn't it risky to assign him such a task? I don't care a shit if anything happens to him, but what if the loses the balls?
Wilma-He can lose the pancreas, for all I care! I don't mind anything anymore; I just want to get him out of my sight and enjoy the show, since the ticket wasn't that cheap. [That hand...!]
Yansha-[Ops!]
Page 26
Ann.-Third fight! T.Bogie vs Chu Li.
Ann.-This fight might be really something. Both fighters have a truly fierce look on their faces.
Ann.-The fight starts!
Page 27
Ann.-Er... The opponents... say... fight or what?
Ann.-The audience is leaving!
Bogie-(Man... So embarassing... I... don't dare to fight against a girl... And less against one as cute as her...)
Chu Li-(Don't know... he's so handsome it'd sadden me to hit him... What if I spoil him? The horror!)
Ann.-Look, girl, come here!
Ann.-That's it! Touched! As in fencing! Winner Chu Li! To hell with it!
Chu Li-Sorry, I didn't mean to hurt you... BWAAAH!!
T.Bogie-B... But then... I've lost?
Ann.-[Fuck!]
Page 28
Goku-Let's see if I understand this gadget from Wilma... There are some lights and arrows that move and blink... Oh, I know! It's a geimbo!
Louse-Hey!
Kid-Mom, I think I have lice...
Zangief-Dirty littlë kid! Stucking thë wholë facë in my cotton candy!
Goku-Uh? I can't see!
Zangief-Now I'll havë to throw it, but you...!
Zangief-Will go along it!!
*Typesetting note: yeah, just like in the raw, Zangief's "R"s should be reversed, and his "O"s should be crossed like a "zero"
Page 29
Goku-Man, what a brute guy...! This thing hasn't even started to lose speed... [Say, this smells good!]
Goku-The truth is, I'm starting to get hungry, and if I don't get something to my mouth soon...
Goku-Oh shoot, this place rings some bells...! I think I forgot the staff around here...*
Ann.-And now, finally, the last fight of the first round of this great tournament of martial arts!
*Er... Did you buy that, or not...?
Page 30
Ann.-The opponents are Te Sin Pan and Miau!
Brujah-The decisive moment has come! We can't sink as low as that baldy dumbass...!
Text on fan: Hello!
Ann.-Oh my god, not another couple...! If they get like the last one...!
Ann.-Well... then... the fight starts!
Page 31
Ann.-Opponent Te Sin Pan rushes to attack!
Ann.-But Miau blocked his opponent's attack with a technique...! Ehem... Well, with a technique!
Page 32
Ann.-Looks like contestant Te Sin Pan has gotten sorta dizzy!
Brujah-But what...?
Wilma-Mr Duende, please, don't give in to the hysteric laughter, or you'll suffocate! Don't you see?
Tarugo-Tee... hee... ggg...
TSP-Damned girl... You won't be able to pull that trick on me again...!
Text on fan: Go get fucked off!
TSP-I'll smash you!
Don't forget... We'll be waiting for you next month!!
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leecherboy
July 12, 2006, 08:50 AM
Ah, I just took a quick look at Dragon Fall's french scanlation. The translation is alright, and they seem to want to go over chapter 24 (they have guts, I'll give them that)...
But, even if I sound too cocky (I'll take that risk :amuse), I'd say my translation is way better, as it's not that literal... Besides that, they seem to translate the character names instead of explaining them, and, well, they oversee some little details... And if you don't believe me, look at their version of chapter 06's pages 19-20 ("that part", as I like to call it), and you'll see I just completely wiped off the floor with them... (he he, I'm so evil sometimes :p)
@ibra: ok, that's fine with me :)
5il3nc3r
July 12, 2006, 07:24 PM
Yea, I guess you got a point, but I'm not even sure who did the french translation (I got it from a friend years ago). And I only have up to "Chapter" 15, when they're running away from that squid planet or something.
No idea where to get the rest (and I don't care that much). Maybe when you're done (a few months from now) I'll take yours and so I'll have 'em in english instead of french (like I said before, I may be born in french, but I'm better in english overall than in french; and I like english more than french for most of what I do except actual speech)
§ıĿ
P.S.: Keep up the good work :)
Moenova
July 14, 2006, 03:09 AM
It's been a long time since i read those comics so I'll Ask ... Were are the dialogs of Riddly Scott :darn? He is my favorite Hero from Fanhunter. :smile-big
Any how Good Work man.
leecherboy
July 14, 2006, 03:48 AM
Ooh, a fan of Ridli Scott? I guess I ain't the only freak around here... (just kidding xDD)
But, if I'm not wrong, he doesn't get to speak in this chapter. Though you know he'll have his moments of glory later...
And thanks for the support! :p
(On a completely unrelated note, I thought I'd let all of you know I added the raw for chapter 06)
ibra87
July 14, 2006, 04:45 PM
I see, so you're already finished with chapter 6 while someone you-know-who I know is @ chapter 3 :p I'll try to proofread it later on.
destinator
July 14, 2006, 04:46 PM
I see, so you're already finished with chapter 6 while someone you-know-who I know is @ chapter 3 :p I'll try to proofread it later on.
Bully anyone xD? I am already at chapter 4 my dear fellow =)
ibra87
July 14, 2006, 04:48 PM
Bully anyone xD? I am already at chapter 4 my dear fellow =)
What the? *downloads chap 3* Btw, you're still slower than leecherboy :p
ibra87
July 14, 2006, 05:01 PM
Great chapters guys. I still don't understand what the connection between chapter 1 and 2-3 is though.
leecherboy
July 15, 2006, 03:23 AM
Hehe, ibra, don't mess with the typesetter (and the moderator), or you'll get pwned! xD
And by the way, I just did the last corrections... (it seems "that part" kept me busy enough)
leecherboy
July 15, 2006, 03:27 AM
Connection between chap 1 and 2-3? What do you mean?
Don't they follow the original storyline?
ibra87
July 15, 2006, 04:16 AM
Connection between chap 1 and 2-3? What do you mean?
Don't they follow the original storyline?
It seems as if chapter 1 is VS. cell, while 2 and 3 are about litle goku?
leecherboy
July 15, 2006, 04:24 AM
I thought ryka and me had made that clear... :amuse
Chapter 0 is a special issue (that came out to catch people into reading it, from what I gather) that started in the middle of Cel's saga.
And chapter 1, 2 and forward tell the story from the beggining... :)
ibra87
July 15, 2006, 04:24 AM
I thought ryka and me had made that clear... :amuse
Chapter 0 is a special issue (that came out to catch people into reading it, from what I gather) that started in the middle of Cel's saga.
And chapter 1, 2 and forward tell the story from the beggining... :)
oh, my bad X-P
vlado
July 19, 2006, 09:58 AM
And we now have a name ESP like the dragon ball counter strike module game =)) Evil Spanish Parody = Earth Special Forces =)) funny!!!
leecherboy
July 19, 2006, 10:09 AM
And don't forget Extra Sensory Perception... lookie mom, we have psychic powers! xDD
rykarreolacr
July 19, 2006, 10:10 AM
What about "Especially Stupid People". It really fits you guys. :grin
leecherboy
July 19, 2006, 10:12 AM
Whaat? I'll get you for that...! :amuse
leecherboy
July 20, 2006, 03:47 AM
Well, it's that time of the week again, and here's another chapter!
That guy in the cover page is... Doom? Death? Sheesh, I can't remember...
Here's the raw: (reupload: 28/09/06)
http://www.savefile.com/files/113782
If you think the title doesn't really suit the chapter, it's not MY mistake... :amuse
And yeah, those are "rhymes" in the title and those both in page 5...
I guess I shouldn't really have explained in detail the pun on page 10, but I'm just too kind...
Oh, and I can't forget: starting from this chapter, Soson Goku is "guaranteed" to "always have a mouth"...
Now, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 07 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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(No new names in this chapter)
Page 2
Te Sin Pan making a fool of himself, Soson Goku remembering the old song "Time will go by" and lots of demons everywhere. Nacho and Alvaro are getting crazier by the second.
That dumb Goku pup finally got to shoot up!!
Page 3
Ann.-Contestant Miau has blocked Te Sin Pan's attack using something... slightly harder this time...!
Brujah-Snap out of it, dumbass! Don't you see she's fooling you?
Havoc-Geez, what a crash!
Wilma-Yansha, quickly, bring some water, he's going to pop something...!
Tarugo-H... Haar! Hwagh! Arf! [Tee hee heee...!]
TSP-Enough! You've made me use my most fearsome technique!
*Man! Now this is new stuff!
TSP-Arms multiplication!
Jesus-[Miracle!]
Page 4
TSP-Gluc! [Pwagh! What a chemical taste!]
TSP-Aaggh!!
Page 5
TSP-This sucks! [Dang!]
TSP-Seems like I got the wrong vial...!
TSP-Let's see, let's see...
Brujah-Dammit, I told him already to drop those vials and shit! What a shame!
Tarugo-Blepblepblepblep! [Yahoo!]
TSP-Finally! Now I got this done!
TSP-And you'll be gone!
Without even trying, I got some rhyme running...
Page 6
Ann.-Ehem... Due to all the irregularities commited by contestant Te Sin Pan, he was going to be disqualified at first...
Ann.-...But since the jury laughed a lot, they'll oversee it this time.
Ann.-So, come on!
Ann.-Last round!
Page 7
TSP-Say, if I've hit you with my six arms and I've broken every one of your ribs, why don't you fall down?
Miau-Ah...! Y... You did... that to me?
Miau-Ploum!
TSP-Uff, she bought that!
Page 8
Ann.-Winner of the fight: Te Sin Pan!
Miau-[Owow, it hurts so much!]
TSP-Geez, suggestion really does work. Alright, let's take the antidote to recover my normal aspect... and let's put some ice pack on my nuts... Jesus, she kicked them good, it really stings!
Brujah-Heh, heh, heh, looks like things are going our way! Next round will be ours too!
Box: Meanwhile, a lot of kilometers away from there...
Goku-Listen, Mr Cat...
Sakarin-Yeah?
Sakarin-AAARRRGH! YOU! IT'S YOU!
Goku-Well, I...
Page 9
Goku-Wait! I have just come to get my staff back!
Sakarin-Oh, yes, that stick, then I'm sorry, I used it to make an antenna for my TV... I'm sorry you came for nothing... [Shit happens...][And now scram, come on...]
Sakarin-Wait a moment! Are you still looking for the Kehu-ron balls?
Goku-Yes...
Sakarin-Then listen!
Sakarin-The being that sent you here, Godh, is also the creator of the balls; if you go to his place, he'll guide you in your search! [Well, that's my guess!]
Goku-Is that so?
Sakarin-Come, I'll show you how to get there... Be careful with the garden, it's my plantation of magic kidney beans and other weeds, each variety serves a different purpose...
Goku-Me, as I don't like vegetables...
Sakarin-Look, that thing that disappears amongst the clouds is the gas tube; if you follow it you'll get to the other side, where Godh's house is located. You'll have to climb on your own. Any question?
Goku-What is a cloud?
Text on gas: Butane gas
Page 10
Box: After some merry explanations, Goku starts the climbing...
Box: ...That turns out to be as never-ending and tiresome as the last one...
Plane-Boss! Answer me! Is anybody there?
Box: But at last reaches its end...
Goku-La puta! A castle in the sky!*
*"La puta!" means "Holy bitch!", and "Laputa: A Castle in the Sky" is an anime movie by master Hayao Miyazaki
Page 11
Goku-Hello? [Who manages here?]
Sign: Don't smoke the weed
Pompon-Uh?
Pompon-And who are you?
Goku-My name's Soson Goku; the cat from below sent me here to meet Godh, or something like that...
Pompon-What? The Duende Sakarin sends you? Then you must be the retarded kid with horrible hairstyle from the legend! I'll go warn Godh!! [Damn him! The shit has hit the fan!]
Page 12
Godh-I already know, Mr Pompon [You're so fucking loud]
Pompon-Sir!
Godh-It was me who talked to you in your hard times, who created the Kehu-ron balls, the almighty lord on Earth...!
Goku-Oh, yes? Who?
Godh-It's obvious we won't make any progress if you brain stays like that, so I'll use my power to restore your mind and bring up your potential... [I'm not that sure it'll work, but...]
Godh-Given your special nature, I'll just be able to recover the mental capabilities lost by the reaction of that incompetent cat... [He and his damned kidney beans... Such a quack!]
Sounds: Xfrrzzz!! Nyeik! Chrrip! Sparkkle! Sparkkle!
Page 13
Box: After that, Soson Goku descends back to earth, to resume his searching for the balls...
Pompon-It's done, Mr Godh, I've already sent him down...
Godh-Good, Mr Pompon, all goes according to the plan...
Godh-He'd better not know that he'll be facing later the fearsome Discolo, the great king of devils; now he just must focus on finding the balls and going back to the tournament... [Such hard times!]
Box: Meanwhile, in the tournament, the second round of fights starts
Ann.-And now, the ones to fight again on the ring will be... Dhalsim and King Chapa!
Chapa-[Well, this'll ve very thrilling, undoubtedly. What is more: I'd add that...]
Page 14
Ann.-The fight starts!
Chapa-Good, let's see what you can do to counter my certain kill techniques...!
Dhalsim-This.
Chapa-Brute.
Ann.-Well, ladies and gentlemen, this tournament is getting really interesting, the contestants show their claws with more ferocity each time!
Dhalsim-[Bah! His chi sucked!]
Ann.-Now the second fight in the second round will be starting in a few seconds (ta-ta-ta-taa), and it will pitch Chu Li against Te Sin Pan.
Chu Li-Snif!
TSP-Oh my dear lord! Not another chick!
Tarugo-If your pupil wins this fight I'll eat my beard!
Brujah-Then I'll be bringing you bread and mayonaisse to help it in!
Tarugo-Before that you'll be eating your jacket!
Brujah-Sit up here and dance!
Tarugo-Conceited!
Brujah-Baldy!
Tarugo-Yip!
Brujah-Butt-ugly!
Wilma-I am not here... This is not happening... Brandon Lee isn't dead...
Page 15
Ann.-The fight starts!
TSP-Huh! [Let's go!]
TSP-(Mmm! I know!)
TSP-(Yeah, I'll do that!)
TSP-Ah! You should be ashamed, you won your first fight in such a pitiful way, and besides that your indecision made your opponent suffer a dishonorable defeat! How will you reply to that? Uh?
Chu Li-SHUT UP!! Sob!
TSP-I... I think I was on the right track... maybe I should have been more... subtle...
Page 16
Ann.-Well... then... The truth is, the funny technique of contestant Te Sin Pan must be too sophisticated for me... Because I don't understand it at all...
TSP-(Good, after this her psyche should be weakened! I'll beat her without trouble and I'll be bragging to my heart's content!]
Chu Li-I give up! I can't go on...
Ann.-Well, ok, then... Winner of the fight: Te Sin Pan!
Ann.-Really, you surprised me! What a sophisticated effective technique! You're a master!
TSP-It... it was nothing.
TSP-(Maaan I wanted to fight...!)
Page 17
Box: In the meantime, Soson Goku, thanks to his regained intelligence, has gathered the Kehu-ron balls once again... (misteries of life...)
Goku-What do I do with them? Should I take them back to Wilma?
Box: But with the (minimal) gained intelligence, appears a derived illness... wickedness!
Goku-What if I summoned* Kehu-ron by myself? She doesn't need to find out! [He he]
Goku-Let's see, let that Kehu-ron dragon come out! Er... Yeah!
*Watch out for the big-head's way of speaking! This is unheard of!
Page 18
Goku-Are you the Kehu-ron dragon?*
*They weren't formally introduced last time
Kehu-ron:(Oh my, the kid from last time!)
Kehu-ron:That's me, indeed... Now speak your wish...
Goku-Wait a sec, let's see if I got that right...! You can grant any wish, whatever it is, right?
Kehu-ron:Euhh... Yes, I can...
Kehu-ron:(Well, seems like he's understood it this time!)
Goku-Then... could you get pink stripes?
Kehu-ron:(I hate this job... And above that, I hate this kid...)
Goku-Ha, ha, ha! He looks like a lollipop! I think I got the hang out of this!
[br]Posted on: July 20, 2006, 03:46:20 AM_________________________________________________Page 19
Ann.-And now, finally, dear audience, we get to the seventh and last fight! The final round! Dhalsim versus Te Sin Pan!
Brujah-I hope this teachs you something, baldy. Watch our victory and cry! [Haw haw haw]
TSP-(I don't trust this guy, he's very weird, and I'm sure he's hiding something...)
Page 20
Dhalsim-[Haw haw haw]
Nacho-Gotit gotit gotit...! We'll take that away!
Alvaro-Dang... If we don't mock our own mistakes, they prey on them later, you know... [The temptation was huge. We had to do that...]
We appreciate the collaboration of Total Boringness Inc. (T.B.) and Rotring Isograph in this page. Thanks.
Page 21
Ann.-The fight starts!
TSP-I have to watch out my steps... I'll study him without getting too close...
TSP-V... Very definite... yeah man...
Tarugo-(Yipee! Yipee!)
Havoc-[Jesus, what a hit! The shivers!]
Ann.-Shoot... Really... We had never seen a final battle as... well... as short as this one... I... guess... This must be undoubtedly the weirdest tournament of martial arts in all its history...
Page 22
Ann.-The winner of this installment of the great tournament of martial arts is... Dhalsim!
Ann.-Want to give some speech! You can enlarge on it as much as you want... [If you don't, this'll get too short...]
Dhalsim-The fight isn't over yer.
Dhalsim-My opponent is still alive...
Tarugo-Yeah! Yeah! Hit 'im hard!
Wilma-Mr Duende, please!
Dhalsim-I can reveal it now: I've come to this tournament to face the strongest contestant and kill him with my bare hands... And show you my power like that...
Page 23
Dhalsim-Actually my name's not Dhalsim, but I'll give you a clue; my true name also starts with "D"! [And I'm veeery evil...]
Ann.-AH! Are you Count Dracula! [So scary!]
Discolo-No! I'm the lord of darkness! Discolo, the great king of all devils, thousand thunders, lightings and thunderstorms! [And thousand millions of thousand demons!]
Tarugo-No, not him! How could it be?
Wilma-You know that beauty? [Don't screw with me!]
Discolo-In this day, with the total destruction of my opponent, I'll celebrate the arrival of my infernal reign! The era of chaos has arrived!
Someone-[What is him about?]
Someone-[He's stoned!]
Page 24
TSP-[I want my mommyy!]
Discolo-Come here! I need you close for this special moment!
Sound: Boo-boo-boo, booboobooboom boomer!*
*This was an advertising for the "Boomer" bubble gum, where a gummy hero stretched beyond measure
Havoc-I can't let him kill Te Sin Pan! [He owes me fifty bucks!]
Havoc-I'll use the Fist of the Sun technique!
TSP-Owowowow! Traitooor! [Bitch!]
Havoc-Oh, oh... [You screwed it, bro...]
Discolo-... Looks like you need some practic accuracy lessons...
Page 25
Tarugo-Uh-oh, this is bad...
Brujah-Very bad...
Wilma-Coward! What about your disciple, huh?
Brujah-[Forget that]
Discolo-Lesson one...!
Page 26
Discolo-Tsk, tsk, I don't think he'll ever learn...
Wilma-And how do you two know this green dude?
Tarugo-Well, let's say...
Brujah-He was our master...
Ann.-L... Listen... mister Discoloco... As you're... so, like, strong... We can forget for now that the another guy is alive and finish the match so... so the tournament doesn't stay hung up, then later, when we're finished... you do what you want with him, deal?
Discolo-Hum, alright, if you let me be after that...
*"Discoloco" means "Crazydisc"
Page 27
Ann.-So now that you've beaten the rest of the contestants, you still have to beat the ultimately last ones! M. Bison, Balrog and Vega!
Text on Balrog's shirt: Looking for my hair-dresser
Balrog-Wait a sec, he called you Bison, and that's me!
Vega-And you Balrog, and that's me!
M.Bison-And you Vega, and that's me!
Vega-I am Balrog!
Balrog-No, that's me!
Vega-But how can you have two names?
Balrog-I like them both and that's it!
M.Bison-Imposters!
Ann.-Shoot!
Discolo-Well, pleased to have fulfilled the requirements, now I'll go back to my plan...
Discolo-Come here, don't escape! [You thought I wasn't looking, uh?]
TSP-[Man! He caught me!]
Page 28
Discolo-It'll be over in a moment.
Tarugo-Geez, what a smash!
Brujah-Yeah, dude, he hasn't lost the touch.
Discolo-Now's the time to claim my kingdom and summon my army of infernal creatures!
Discolo-HWA, HWA, HWA! I'm the rocks!
Ann.-Misters, all it seems to reckon that this is the end of the world as we knew it...* And I never saw a tournament's instalment so full of irregularities!
Ann.-It's the end of the tournament.
*...And I feel good (note from Michael)
Tarugo-I only see a solution, we must join forces like the last time...
Brujah-Humm. Ok, but don't let's do it ever again, huh?
Page 29
Tarugo-(I remember the times when he teached us both, by then we hadn't realized how he really was... He didn't seem that green... But then he showed his flame from within, the dark evilness that sorrounded him... and he looked really cool... We had such a great time!)
Tarugo-(But we wound up deciding that the best way to improve was to terminate him so there'd be no one more expert than us in those arts... A very wise idea...)
Tarugo-(It was the Duende Brujah who better devoted to our master's teachings... I... I've always been a slowpoke and too lazy to focus...)
Tarugo-(But I never admitted to this because of my pride...!)
Brujah-So what, we go down kick his ass? Or are you staying here dreaming asleep?
Tarugo-Oh, yeah! Sorry!
Brujah-That was always your problem, the lack of initiative!
Page 30
Tarugo-Halt, Discolo!
Brujah-We've come to stop you once again!
Brujah-Well, in fact we came to see the tournament, but it got fucked up...
Discolo-Why, if it isn't my dear disciples...
Tarugo-Very well, what was the technique you used to destroy him that time?
Brujah-Ah, I don't know! Wasn't it you who did it?
Tarugo-But we decided you were going to do it!
Brujah-Me? But it was precisely you who said you were going to do it!
Tarugo-[Asshole!]
Brujah-[Retard!]
Discolo-(Well...! The truth is neither one destroyed me, but I got so convinced that one of them had actually done it, that I stayed idle for years, until the other day I realized about everything and I got angry!) [Man! What a waste of time!]
Page 31
Wilma-What do you think will happen?
Yansha-Well, they both might die.
Wilma-No, I mean something bad!
Goku-Hi, Wilma, I'm back!
Goku-Know something? I found all the balls!
Wilma-Is that so? Then bring 'em, we need them more than ever!
Goku-No, I've already used them...
Goku-And I asked for a...
Wilma-No, don't tell me! I'll die a happy woman without knowing it!
Box: Meanwhile...
Discolo-Very good! Then you'll be facing my demonic army!
Wilma-...And he goes and tells me... I've never seen such a dumb kid... so... so...! Grmbfjltx... on stripes!
Page 32
Tarugo-Uh-oh, I don't like this, either...
Brujah-I don't think they'll let us choose...*
*We love Claremont!
Discolo-My horde of demonic creatures will dispose of you right now, you useless pair!
Chu Li-Say, Soson Goku...
Chu Li-Aren't you going to do anything to help out?
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destinator
July 20, 2006, 09:59 AM
Omg you're too fast for me^^ and if I see all the text I dont want to start ^^ Good work keep it on :)
leecherboy
July 20, 2006, 10:05 AM
Well, thanks! :p
And sorry for being that fast... xD
Maybe I'll start translating Joputo (www.joputo.tk) just for fun, so as to not get too bored... :)
destinator
August 16, 2006, 09:13 AM
Here we go another release. Hope you enjoy it and thanks to all who downloaded the other chapters :)
>>>Download Here<<< (http://rapidshare.de/files/29610671/dragonfall4.zip)
As a little sidenote I am not that sure if I'll do the rest of them. I just had this one left on my HDD and still wanted to finish it.
Time will show.
leecherboy
August 17, 2006, 02:41 AM
Awesome! xD
...
Well, I don't think I'll beg you to stay though I probably will, but I'll be hoping you do :)
leecherboy
August 21, 2006, 04:43 AM
Well, summer vacation is over, so it's about time I resume my translating (even though we don't have an editor available right now to scanlate these)
This time, the cover page references an old anime series, and actually explains something about that series' title... xD
Here's the raw: (reupload: 28/09/06)
http://www.savefile.com/files/113785
You know Dragon Fall is a spanish comic, and you know Spain is all about bullfighting... So yeah, if you've been expecting it, here's the first bullfighting reference! :amuse
And in this one there's yet one more rhyme (you gotta love rhymes, though they're annoying to translate), this time in page 13...
And here's some trivia stuff (too minor to include it in the translation): in page 20, Gohan is actually paroding one of the characters from the Mafalda latin comic.
So there, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 08 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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New names for this chapter:
Rolex (Raditz): It's a well-known trademark of watches
Puyajin (Saiyajin): "puyas" are the spear-like blades bullfighters stick into the bulls
Page 2
So in this chapter Soson Goku happens to marry and has a son. What? This looks like a soap opera? Yeah, that's what I think too, but don't complain to me, as I'm just a courier.
That dumb Goku pup (now for real) finally got to shoot up!!
Page 3
Goku-W...what? What are you talking about?
Chu Li-I can't believe it! I already expected you to not recognize me, as I changed my look and signed in under a false name so my father wouldn't notice!
Chu Li-But how can you ignore what's happening right before your eyes?
Wilma-Oh, well, ignorance's something that plays a big part in his character.
Wilma-And, excuse me... You are...?
Chu Li-I'm Chicha, the Yumas ogre daughter!
Chicha-When we met, I got so impressed by your strength and power that I decided to spend the rest of my life to become worthy of you, and that's how I became a fighter. But in this tournament you've completely disappointed me with your insane performance! You're the shadow of yourself!
Chicha-And you haven't even shot up, at your age! Look at you, you're a dwarf!
Wilma-She's got that right. Aren't you at the age to shoot up?
Goku-Is that so?
Page 4
Goku-Well, that's it! Just kinda forgot...
Goku-What a mistake!
Goku-Man [Gee! I even got teleported!]
T.Bogie-This dude ain't normal...![Fuck]
Chicha-I heard that a long time ago...
Brujah-You haven't beat us yet...!
Tarugo-Shut up, you masoquist!
Discolo-Very well, as you wish... You'll have a second session, and this time it's on the house...
Discolo-Hwa, hwa, hwa...! I'm very evil and I like Julio Iglesias!
Page 5
Brujah-Ouch!
Tarugo- Mouth-off!
Brujah-Agh! My sunglasses got broken!
Brujah-No! Not the suuun!
Hellraiser-Well, well. Let's see what happens with this one...
Tarugo-My glasses, quickly, I can't hold it!
Discolo-Hya, hya, hya!! Since I'm having a blast, I think I'll offer any willing volunteer the chance to try and stop my unleashing of the final apocalypse!
Page 6
Someone-Get down there!
Someone-Aumph!
Someone-Man, he's so heavy now!
Discolo-Well, well, we're so daring today!
Discolo-I'll toast you with my demonic wave! [Need some practice]
Goku-I don't fear you! I'll block your attack!
Page 7
Yansha-You think he'll beat him?
Wilma-The truth is, I'm not sure of anything...
T.Bogie-I should go down!
Chicha-No! Not you! You'll get hurt!
Discolo-And now, to establish my kingdom of terror, I'll summon someone way more powerful and evil than me!! My son Junior!!
Junior-Aah, I'm so evil! I'll kill everyone! I hate peace and soap operas! [And still don't know why...][I'll kill the Ewings!]
Page 8
Discolo-Grow up, and reach your maximum status of power! [Fuck, I'm all itchy...]
Wilma-Well, well, the guy has some looks, considering his parsley face...
Discolo-Welcome to your kingdom, Junior!
Junior-I hate you calling me that way... It's embarassing...
Page 9
Junior-Shoot, I fragged daddy... I'm so evil...! I just can't get any more evil than this! My evilness has already hit the bottom! What could I do now? [Dang, being this evil is too much...]
Junior-That's it! I'll turn good! [Like Magneto!]
Junior-And as a good will gesture, I'll give, in a posthumous way, my title of champion of this great tournament to that wretch my daddy owned before croaking. [Poor man... A pity... He was a good man... He was in the bloom of life...]
Junior-[So, come on, hurry with it]
Ann.-Ye... Yeah! Ri... Right on!
Ann.-This way, this toasted brat whose name I don't know because his driving license got burnt, gets regarded as the champion of the great tournament of martial arts!
Page 10
Godh-I'll use my power to resurrect Discolo's victims...! [This month was time for a miracle...!]
Goku-Wilma, look, it's Godh...!
Wilma-Yeah, man, and I'm the queen of Saba!
Wilma-Aaaagh!! It's him, he's back!
Wilma-Damn Discolo! You won't hurt anyone again! I'll finish you myself! Die, die, diiieee...!
Godh-[Ow! Ouch! Guh! Lady, you want me to not resurrect anybody? Uh?]
Tarugo-[Wilma, dear!]
Chicha-(Mmm... Don't know... Bogie's so hot... But I still see something in Goku...)
Chicha-(Will it be the toasting?)
Ann.-So, come on, outta my stadium, we have to disinfect it!
Traka.-[Oops, I went back way too far!]
Page 11
Box: After these transcending facts (no, no, no trace has reached nirvana...) we take a wide leap in time, in which nothing remarkable happened... Well... Yes: Chicha, in spite of the tender sincere love she felt for T.Bogie in the end, turned out choosing Soson Goku, because he had a bigger one... Though it took her quite some time to profit from her new partner...
Goku-Say, Chicha, do you think that thing can be put inside that other place? I find it quite complicated... [Dang, so difficult!]
Text on Chicha's book: Practic guide to violation
Text on Goku's book (upside-down): Sex for retards
Box: After this, we take another leap in time, the time this charming couple took to have their first son (many more than nine months...) and the time until the cute offspring became four years old (the age at where most kids start smoking). He could only mimic his father's behaviour, but, luckily for him, his mother was there to fill that intelectual emptiness...
Chicha-C'mon, c'mon, I won't let my son grow as stupid as his father. Read all this until new order, and I want you in my quantum physics class tomorrow...
Gohan-Shoooot... Mom...
Text on books: Hawking's Physics -- Evolution of the Species
Text on Gohan's book: The Capital
Page 12
And some good day, in the Duende Tarugo's house...
Chiq.-Mr Duende, look, it's Soson Goku!
Tarugo-Please, Chiqrilin, you know I don't like those jokes...
Tarugo-Geez, it is true... [Hail Mary, full of grace, ahahahaha...]
Tarugo-What's that you're carrying around? A pet?
Goku-Hello everybody! I've come to introduce you to my son, Chun Gohan *.
*The sequel...
Text on Gohan's book: Teo masturbates**
**Teo was a series of educative little books for childrens, which featured a kid called Teo. Obviously this one never came out
Tarugo-The horror! It's horrible! The unthinkable has happened! It's reproducing itself!
Ool.-It's the plague, the apocalypse!
Chiq.-We should have cut it off the root, while we still could! Now it's not only him!
Tarugo-Penitenciagite, penitenciagite!
Page 13
Tarugo-So... how is like... what happened... like then?
Goku-Well... The truth is, I don't remember anything, I just know that someday I woke up, and Chicha was jumping all over the place, with a look of satisfaction on her face...*
Goku-I think she was screaming something like "I knew it! I knew that with hypnosis I'd make it!"
*Without even trying...
Goku-And then she started to grow some gross belly...
Goku-...And as she wasn't eating enough to get that beautiful, I thought it was some kind of illness, so someday I whooped her a straight to the belly, and this guy fell to the floor... ...I think he hit his head...
Tarugo-Aaah, the horror, history repeats itself!
Ool.-It's the plague of the apocalypse!
Chiq.-There's no hope, he'll be like his father!!
Tarugo-Penitenciagite! Penitenciagite!
Page 14
Meanwhile, above the earth...
Goku-... And as I was telling you, this is my first son, well, mine and Chicha's, of course... And I say first because there'll be more of them, or at least so she says, and... [Ha, ha, ha...]
Tarugo-Listen... Chiqrilin... Doesn't this remind you of that scene in "Ultimatum to Earth"?
Page 15
Goku-Wait a sec! I sense some energy reading!
Tarugo-No... it's the gas! I left it on...! [Crap!]
Goku-It's some kind of creature! It emits a powerful energy and it'll be right here in no time!
Ool.-Bravo, master!
Chiq.-Such sharpness! Such perception! Such precision!
Gohan-That's my daddy!
Page 16
Chiq.-Aagh, such looks, he surely is a sissy!
Gohan-Hwa, hwa, hwa.
Ool.- Half-girl!
Rolex-Well, that's enough! This is serious! My name is Rolex!
Chiq.-Yeah, you're right, that's some serious problem...
Gohan-Hahhaha.
Rolex-I belong to the lineage of the space warriors, and I'm from the Puyajins race!!
Chiq.-Puyahhhahhahwaa!!! [Arf, arf! Teeheehee]
Chiq.-That's ridiculous!
Rolex-This is the end...! Nobody takes me seriously... Dad was right, our family is doomed...!
Page 17
Rolex-This sucks! It's depressing! I need a cigarrette...
Tarugo-This is Soson Goku's work, I know! The whole house filled with gas, and he knows nothing better than to throw a match! I'll...
Goku-No, I am down here...!
Rolex-I AM ROLEX, Puyajin warrior from planet Vegetal, and I'm looking for my brother Kagarrot! [Ah, that just was so good! I needed that cigarrette!]
Page 18
Rolex-It's you! You are Kagarrot! [I'd recognize that dumb face anywhere!]
Goku-Uh, wha? What did you call me? [You want me to get angry?]
Rolex-Enough! Your true name is Kagarrot, and you belong to the Puyajin race, fearsome and fierce space warriors well-known for our ability to stick harmful painful "puyas" into our enemies!*
*See explanation for "puyajin"
Rolex-But, for some reason, your intellectual quotient belongs to the granitic minerals kingdom, so you can't behave as a Puyajin! You're a shame to our race and that's why I'll eliminate you!
Goku-Ah... But wait, won't you give me the chance to join you so I redeem my actions? It's just typical...
Rolex-Mmm... Yeah, I know it's typical... Though in your case... Well, ok! Do you want to join us and stuff?
Goku-No! I'LL NEVER join some blood-thirsty monsters such as you!
Goku-(I've always wanted to say that at these situations...)
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Rolex-Fine, that's a dumbass down!
All-[Yay, yay, yay, hit him hard, Rolex!]
Tarugo-[My home!]
Rolex-With your pitiful energy you won't last a single second!
Gohan-Ah, my nose itches so much! Aaat... AAAT...!
Gohan-CHOOOOH!!
Rolex-Afggh, my pacemaker... My pacemaker... just s... to... pped...
Gohan-Dude, so gross! I just pwned my uncle! When I tell my schoolmates, I'm gonna be da numbah one!
*Got dead
Page 20
Nap.-They got Rolex!
Veg.-Well, we now know what we wanted to! Get my airship prepared!
Ool.-Say, what do we do with him?
Chiq.-Don't know... Search his pockets... [Let's see, let's see...]
Goku-Mysonyousavedmylife...! Thanksthanksthanks!
Gohan-("Geezerz")
Tarugo-[Tsk, so annoying!]
Goku-Wait a sec! I think I'm sensing another powerful energy... [Beep beep]
Tarugo-No! Youdon'tsenseanythingatall! Anythingatall! Isthatclear? [I already got homeless!]
Goku-Geez, old man, get a grip!
Page 21
Goku-Uh? The energy trace has been diverted!
Someone-It was me...!
Chiq.-Uh?
All-Discolo! The great king of devils...!
Discolo-Yeah, yeah, I know the rest of it, please spare me...
Discolo-I came for a very serious reason!
Page 22
Discolo-You must come with me immediately to Godh's palace!
Discolo-He and I have to show you something! [And no dirty thoughts! And no refusing!]
Box: Soon enough (don't ask us how), in Godh's palace...
Tarugo-Art deco, nice taste.
Goku-This place has shrunk down a little since the last time I was here, right?
Gohan-That's called "growing", dad.
Godh-I appreciate you coming here this steadily, as I have to make public some facts now of transcending importance [Hold tight, here comes...]
Page 23
Godh-For starters, you must know Discolo and me... are the same person!
Goku-Of course, geezer, of course... [His age got him]
Godh-Enough bullshit! You have to know that, in the beginning, I came here to become Godh, but the one who was in charge didn't judge me worth it, so I duplicated myself to be two against one, kicked him out of here and got the job! [Fuck!]
Goku-Please, you blood pressure...!
Box: "My evil part was Discolo, great king of devils, that fleed away to spread chaos and bad grooves around the world."
Discolo-[Haw haw haw haw haw]
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Godh-But now, even though Discolo has changed sides, Earth is in grave danger again, and that's where you come in, Soson Goku.
Godh-That guy you so easily took care of identified himself as an space warrior from the Puyajin race, and what's more important, he identified you, Soson Goku, as one of them...
Goku-Oh, yeah!
Godh-And worst of all, more of them are coming! For the time being, we have repelled them, leaving them on orbit to buy time!
Godh-But we must do something now!
Discolo-Puyajins are destroyers of worlds! They devastate planets and sell them to fast-food factories!
Chiq.-I got it! The thing we should do is warn them that we have one of them, and threaten to eliminate him if they don't desist on invading us!
Tarugo-[Yeah, yeah!]
Discolo-No...! The solution's not that simple. I have to ask your complete collaboration for a plan I have in mind!
Page 25
Discolo-Right now you're very strong, but you haven't received a suitable training and you haven't got a chance against two or three of them... (Rolex did forget to say it, but the other ones are way stronger than him). But there is a master in the beyond who will teach you everything you need to learn.
Discolo-But to get there, you'd have to die first, so you access the beyond; meanwhile, I'll be teaching your son, as I've seen he has potential...
Goku-And once I've trained, how do I come back?
Discolo-Don't worry, we'll take care of that...
Goku-Alright, your plan seems feasible to me...
Discolo-(Haw haw haw... I made all that up, and he believed it...) [So cool!]
Discolo-As you're a hard nut to crack, we'll have to use conclusively effective methods to carry out the hard procedure or your defunction.
Tarugo-Hey! Let me, let me, I'll take care of that! [At least I want the first strike!]
Goku-How nice! They worry so much for me to achieve my goal! Now I see how much they appreciate me!
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Goku-And... By the way... When I get there, who do I ask for? What's that master's name?
Tarugo-[Crap! Me without my camera!]
Discolo-E... Uhh... Peskaito! That's it, he's... Peskaito! [And he's blue! And has antennas! Yeah!]
Goku-Ops... Am I still here?
Discolo-Uff... that's it!!
Tarugo-How gory! The last time I saw a face like this was in a Pizza Hut!
Page 27
Discolo-Now I'll take this shrimp with me to train him! [I'll throw this...]
Gohan-Dad...
Discolo-And you, kid, stop being a pussy, I'm gonna make a man out of you! [Dammit]
Discolo-So, let's go!
Godh-I trust they'll make it. Earth may be in grave danger...
Tarugo-Chiqrilin, look for the phone number of Te Sin Pan, Yansha and the rest!
Chiq.-Here?
Pompon-Listen, Godh, I'm not cleaning "this".
Page 28
Discolo-Now I'll fulfill part B of my plan. I'll eliminate the brat and become the only almighty defensor of the Earth...
Discolo-"Oh, I can't understand how I could have dropped him when I was flying that high!"
Discolo-"Nor how he could fall in such a bad place!" [Hawhahaw]
Discolo-Hasta la vista, baby!
Gohan-[Waaah! Bungee without ropee!]
Discolo-Now, let's get ready!
Box: Meanwhile... Beyond time and space...
Goku-L... Listen, lady, I'm a married man, and...
Page 29
Dredd-Prepare yourselves to be judged!
Dredd-We are the law.
Goku-Er... Before anything else... Could I ask for a favor?
Goku-Could you tell me where can I find some guy called Peskaito?
Text on Genma's sign: Aaarrrgg! We pandas cannot talk!
Dredd-The guy you're asking about lives at the end of the Serpent Road, 3rd door to the right...
Goku-Ah... Thanks...
Dredd-Not so fast, presumed innocent! You're going to sign your inmigration paperwork...!
Text on Genma's sign: I am also in the complaints department!
Page 30
And time passes by...
Someone-This is the turn number... (blench!) 43...!
Someone-Goddammit!
Someone-Wait till I get my hands on the jerk responsible for this!
Page 31
Gohan-What am I gonna do...? They killed my father and left me here, in this wasted terrible jungle...!
Gohan-Snif!
Someone-Hey kid, cheer up that face!
Box: Duende Tarugo's house...
Tarugo-I'm glad all of you have come, since the situation is really grave!
Tarugo-First of all... Soson Goku has died!
Tarugo-Wait a moment! There is more!
Tarugo-By the looks of it, some kind of alien space warriors called Puyajins have decided to come invade the Earth. They are very tough guys and it'll be hard to defeat them, but I count on you to hold them off...
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Tarugo-I see you're courage and bravery itself...
Tarugo-Then know this: if Soson Goku died, is because he wanted to train in the beyond to become a powerful warrior! [So, aren't you envious?]
Wilma-Oh my god, he was even sillier than I thought!
Yansha-And to think it would have been enough to tell him some C-4 was homemade chocolate...!
Goku-Dang!
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leecherboy
August 28, 2006, 04:07 AM
Here's da next translation, unlocked by beating the game on "Hard" without losing any round!
If the cover page looks cool to you, that'd explain why some american dudes "copied it off them" to make some issue #2 of some american comic called "Dragon: Blood & Guts"... xD
Here's the raw for ya: (reupload: 28/09/06)
http://www.savefile.com/files/113794
And before you complain, I already know that song's title is mispelled, so it's not my fault...
About page 23, in the original it was a way unfunny spanish radio showdown... So I applied my Lv. ?? Translation Skills, and guess what? Now it's an international cable TV showdown. Heck, I even mentioned the Mythbusters in there... (I just love those two guys' work... :amuse)
So there, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 09 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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New names for this chapter:
Ulom (Oolong): nothing special here
Lancha (Lunch): "lancha" means "motor boat"
Babosa (Baba): "babosa" means "slimy"
Nappalm (Nappa): a kind of explosive, if you didn't know
Page 2
Gohan-[Tee hee hee]
Soson Goku's still lost in that Beyond. Chun Gohan's lost in the wild jungle (doing the hippy). Wilma's still searching for her balls. And an ominous threat closes on the Earth. Uf, so scary.
Vegetal arrives (and so on)
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Demon-At the end of this road lives Mr Peskaito.
Goku-S...Say, isn't it a little too long?
Goku-And why is it called the "Serpent Road"?
Demon-Here's the answer to both questions.
Text on box: Incentive
Demon-With the incentive we give to the travelers around here, they feel like the journey gets shorter, you see? Run, "Incentive", run, you'll catch him!
Sounds: Tuppita, chomp, tuppita, chomp, tuppita
Tarugo-By now, Soson Goku must have started training in the beyond. Ah, I envy him so much!
Page 4
In the "right here".
Wilma-Say, Discolo, where's Chun Gohan? I want to talk to him.
Discolo-He's nowhere. He disappeared in mysterious circumstances.
Wilma-WHAT?
Discolo-I'm not his babysitter, you know? And besides, I'm too busy training. If you need him so much, you go look for him!
Wilma-(How rude! Sheesh... I just wanted to know if he'd lend me the Kehu-ron ball he carries, as I'm gathering them again... Well, there's always the ball-scanner to search him with...)
Wilma-Dang! So far? I'll have to ask daddy for money! [Maaaan... Not fair]
Goku-It... it finally stopped, at last... Holy mother of god, I'm all beat!
Page 5
Goku-Peskaito's house! I did it! I'm at the end of the road!
Goku-I'm...!
Goku-Mister Peskaito... Hello! It's me! I've arrived!
Page 6
Monkey-Houba?
*This monkey is Marsupilami, from the Spirou & Fantasio belgian comic
Goku-M... Mister Peskaito?
Goku-Is that you?
Peskaito-No, I'm here! And I'm so fed up no-one can tell me and my pet apart! [I'm not that monkey-faced... I think!]
Goku-[Ah, it's true! Blue and with antennas, Discolo told me!]
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Wilma-Well, these lizardies won't bother me no more! [To think they wanted to gnaw my new mecha-suit!]
Wilma-The ball trace leads to that waterfall deep there!
Page 8
Wilma-It's next to here!
Wilma-I better explore without getting spotted...
Wilma-Let's see what...
Gohan & Timon & Pumba - Akuma matataaa! What a wonderful phrase!
Page 9
Wilma-I'm sick of it! I'm sick of this fucking family of asshooooles!!
Gohan-Shoot... Who's this hysteric gal?
Nap.-L...Listen... boss... I guess the laundry fees are included in the danger bonus, right? Because I have got totally...
Veg.-Shut up, don't mention those nasty things, or I'll also start puking!
Gohan-So I've decided to give up on any kind of fighting. My friends here convinced me to join their community, and from now on I won't embrace materialism, nor violence, nor lotto tickets.
Wilma-Am I ever so glad to hear that. [How nice, I haven't had to kill for it!]
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Wilma-And what kind of place is this?
Gohan-According to what my friends told me, this was an experimentation field to recreate dinosaurs cloning their fossile DNA and combining it with amphibies', toads' and so on. But the first results weren't that successful...
Gohan-So there, say hi to my mother for me and tell her not to worry, I'm quite fine here and I'll be hoping you are powerful enough to stop the Puyajins!
Wilma-What? Will you ignore everything while these madmen come and own us all? Won't you stand up against them?
Wilma-I won't either, and since I'm the one at charge, you will actually do it!
Gohan-Listen, Wilma, it's about to hit the five o'clock, and we rather not walk around the jungle at that hour!
Wilma-Oh, no? And why?
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Gohan-I bet you don't know why crocociles are so slim?
Wilma-YES, I DO!! OK!?
Wilma-I'm damned! I'm so damned with this family! Why? Whyyyy?
Gohan-Man, if you'll get like that...! I think I'll go... You're right, I've gotten spoiled living in this place, where everything's so easy. I think I should take the risk and be useful to the ones who are counting on me, and if I don't make it through, at least my sacrifice will have been worth it...
Page 12
Peskaito-The rules to learn under my tutelage are very strict...
Peskaito-And there's an indispensable requirement to get to be teached by me!
Goku-Is that so? What is it?
Peskaito-You have to tell me some joke or make me laugh in any way! [I get too bored alone with the monkey!]
Goku-What?
Goku-(But I have no idea about that telling jokes stuff!)
Goku-(What can I do? What...?)
Goku-(Wait a sec! I think I know how!]
Goku-You said to make you laugh in any way, didn't you?
Peskaito-Indee...
Peskaito-Owowow! Tee hee hee hee! Owowow! My shin bone!! Tee hee hee hee! Son of a bitch! Tee hee hee hee! Owowow!
Goku-I... only knew this one method...
Page 13
Meanwhile, in the Duende Tarugo's house, some intensive training is going on.
Lancha-Te Sin Pan, your energy drink.
Ulom-We were lucky they decided to start training again, huh, Mr Duende?
Tarugo-Not at all. The outcome of the battle is still uncertain... I'm beginning to think it wouldn't be a bad idea to consult my sister, the clairvoyant Babosa, about the future of the upcoming fight... I think she advertises her phone number on TV... [Ehem!]
Ulom-I'll go look for it...
Chiq.-Man, that Te Sin Pan is so lucky! That was just some coincidence that schizophrenic girl met him in that disco, and she has been stuck to him like glue since then.
Yansha-Yeah, some guys get all the chicks... I'm not yet sure about Wilma being interested in me! And I even got me these scars so I'd look more snobbish! [Some cutter work it took me]
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Wilma-Hey, Discolo...!
Discolo-Yes? What do you want now?
Wilma-Chun Gohan wants you to train him for the fight...
Discolo-Oh! Of course... This time you spent surviving in the jungle was part of your training, you knew that? [Son of a bitch! Still alive!]
Gohan-Is that so? So cool!
Wilma-Snif, I'd have never believed it... The kid's a hero...! Bwaaah...!
Gohan-Wilma, please, you've been like that for three hours already!
Babosa-Oh ball of magic power more than 15.000 bucks worth, still to be paid in handy instalments... Show me the immediate future and unveil the outcome of this hard fight.
Page 15
Tarugo-What was that?
Babosa-Don't know. There must be some jamming. [Get started, fuck]
Babosa-That's it, I see it! Some powerful warriors from a far world demolish and destroy everything at sight.
Babosa-...But the war isn't won yet, and it has to be settled in a distant place!
Babosa-All the pieces seems to fit together along with Discolo, great king of all devils.
Babosa-And now the fee, bro. This'll cost you several grands... You pay or my buddies smack you, it's your pick...!
Peskaito-Well... Once... ehem!... passed the admission test, we'll start the lessons. [Critteeer!]
Goku-Ehem! He, he... I'm sorry... I...
Page 16
Peskaito-To start things off... You have to concentrate your energy in the exercises, so you get the expected results...
Peskaito-...And once you've learned to channel your whole energy, you'll know how to use it properly, whether to hold a fight for all the time...
Peskaito-...You want, or to use it all at once to neutralize a really tough opponent... If you'll excuse me...
Peskaito-Argn! [Fucking there!]
Peskaito-Look, let's skip the theory. Let's start with the practice: you have to hunt down that bug there.
Peskaito-No, no, no!! With this mace I was about to give you!
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Peskaito-Look, let's drop that either! Let's move on to the next practice phase!
Peskaito-You must learn to channel your whole energy by means of exercises that provide a useful training!
Goku-And what's that mean? [Don'tgetit!]
Peskaito-You'll know soon enough...! Ya ha ha ha ha haa!!
Meanwhile, on Earth...
Wilma-Are you sure this training isn't too dangerous?
Discolo-Drop that, it's about time he stops being a dim-wit!
Discolo-It's for his own good...
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Soson Goku's "indirect training"...
Goku-[One, two, three, jump... one, two, three, jump... One, two, three...]
Peskaito-This indirect training is really helping out. He's making the planet look like new.
Peskaito-I think I'll suggest him to wipe the Serpent Road...
Signs: Works, Metro
Box: And time goes by...
Nap.-Watch out, boss, here comes the Hubble!
Veg.- Supplies are almost out and I need to shave. We must put a stop to this now!
Sattel.-Noobs!
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Chun Gohan resumes the training... To the best of his abilities...
Discolo-When you get used to that weight, I'll add some more.
Discolo-(Crap, he made it alive!)
Chicha-Where's my "widdle" boy?
Nurse-Easy, lady! Drop that thermic load!
Sign on wall: I.C.U
Godh-The Puyajins are working a great pressure over our control... We won't be able to keep them there much longer...
Godh-May our fighters be prepared already!
Yansha-Say, you wake him up, or do I do that?
TSP-You do it, but make it quietly. If Mr Duende notices, he'll get us another two hours of beating!
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Chicha-What's that about my "widdle" boy and superwarriors from another planet whacking one another?
Discolo-It's what he decided.
Sign on wall: Be quiet
Gohan-Dat'z righd. I dook dhad decizion by myzelf...
Chicha-You shut it! This is not your business!
Gohan-Bud... Id'z juzt pard of dhe zame plan... When Dizcolo killed fadher he explained do me...
Chicha-He killed who!?
Discolo-(Real smooth, kid.)
Chicha-Who told you to kill fadher... I mean, Zozon... Er... My husband!? Monster! Kiwi face!
Discolo-Say what? What did you call me? I do have my pride!!
Gohan-Pleaze... I am zick...
Chicha-SHUT UP!!
Wilma-[I... ehem! will come back later...]
Page 21
Peskaito-Just keep going...! Ok, perfect!
Building-I'm too high.
Peskaito-I always wanted to make my little house some floors higher.
Goku-Buff... After this, I guess I really have done a lot of exercise...!
Peskaito-I can't make up anything else... I guess I'll just have to fire him out. [Too bad]
Peskaito-I'll go think what techniques he's supposed to have learnt all this time.
Page 22
Vegetal-We made it! We have recovered the control!*
Godh-No! They've broken free!
Peskaito-...And doing this sorta motion with the hand, you perform an "Attack of Peskaito". Don't forget to shout it loud enough, to clearly state the copyright... Houba.
Goku-And that thing that's floating its way through, what's it? [It bugs me to no end]
*"Control" is a spanish brand of condoms, but no, they didn't lose their rubbers. Re-read the last chapter, c'mon...
Page 23
Peskaito-I guess something's happening on Earth. It has all the looks of being an abstract icon - exclamative or interjective - of the graphic narrative around there... I'll tune in and see...
Goku-Listen, if you catch Discovery Channel, I'm game! [You know the Mythbusters?]
Peskaito-They're the Puyajin Warriors from planet Vegetal! They're gonna invade the Earth! [Yeah, but Fox TV beats them all the way...]
Goku-Ah, that's what I was waiting for! I must go back now! [If I want to laugh I watch Comedy Central...]
Peskaito-Don't be in such a hurry, you can't go back to the another world unless they get you resurrected! Besides, you still have to pay the registration fee, it doesn't pay itself! [Forget that, I prefer Eurosport...][ (Man, I'm so greedy I even surprise myself) Lesseee... It'll beeee... ]
Tarugo-So they're arriving!
Tarugo-Good, this is what we'll do. I'll find out where the alien airships will fall, and I'll be taking Chiqrilin, Havoc, Te Sin Pan and Yansha there with me. Let Ulom and miss Lancha go pick Chun Gohan from the hospital, and... Wilma, weren't you looking for the Kehu-ron balls?
Page 24
Wilma-Yes, indeed, I want to ask the dragon for...
Tarugo-That can wait, make him resurrect Soson Goku!
Wilma-What? Have you gone nuts?
Tarugo-Don't argue with my orders, this is an emergency. Go gather them all and do what I told you to!
Tarugo-Discolo, you'll help her gather them. Make it quick, I'm counting on you...
Veg.-Fifteen minutes to land!
Veg.-Computer choosing area!
Page 25
Guided by Duende Tarugo's keen senses, our friends start the search for the landing place...
Tarugo-No doubt about it, all straight. To the north! To the north!
...That gets unpleasantly time consuming...
Chiq.-Say, Mr Duende, you're sure it'll be around here?
Tarugo-According to my calculations... Let's see...
Meanwhile, thanks to Discolo's powers, the Kehu-ron balls get gathered again...
Wilma-I still think you were somewhat rude. If that woman didn't want to give us the ball that landed in her house's hall, you needed not to stick the ball into her the anal way and take it out through her ear. [Even saying "Then enjoy it, enjoy it!"]
Discolo-[I know what I'm doing...]
Page 26
Wilma-Appear, Kehu-ron dragon!
Kehu-ron- Here I am! Now speak your wish!
Wilma-We want... er... well... we command you to get Soson Goku resurrected, who is currently in the beyond!
Kehu-ron- And... and wouldn't you like to ask for another thing? Why does it need to be that? If you don't know what to ask for, I...
Discolo-The truth is, if you ask me...
Page 27
Demon-Mister Soson Goku, they're sending you back to earth...
Goku-Goodness, that's nice!
Goku-Well, see ya, I'm being called back there...
Dredd-Wait a sec, things are not that simple here, you can't go from this world to the another like taking a walk in the park! There are procedures, paperwork, signatures here and there...! And all that has to be done now!!
Goku-[What if I say I don't carry a pen?]
Dredd-[I knew you'd say that!]
Sign: Eternal grace
Sounds: Ha ha ha ha ha
Page 28
Sign: Emergency hospital
Lancha-We're blasting outta here!
Ulom-You know something? I think you did a good job at handling a woman as spineless as miss Chicha.
Lancha-To hell with all! [I love it when the plans suceed]
Page 29
TSP-Listen, Mr Duende, I'm starting to wonder about your orientation sense!
Tarugo-Er... I... Listen... Wait a sec! They weren't even going to fall where we were trying to get to! [Stay away, critter!]
Tarugo-What a silly mistake!
Arrow: Ozone's hole
Tarugo-But then... Where are they falling?
Tarugo-Where?
Page 30
Box: Computer preparing landing...
Box: Fasten your seatbelts. Don't smoke.
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Vegetal-Well, I'd say it's about time we "getta" work, my faithful Nappalm [If I catch the guy who got us stuck up there, I'll impale him with a traffic sign!]
Nappalm-Of course, boss.
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rykarreolacr
August 28, 2006, 04:11 AM
Great job man!!!!
destinator
August 28, 2006, 05:03 AM
Yeah very great leecherboy =)
leecherboy
August 28, 2006, 07:52 AM
Oh, thanks!! :p
leecherboy
September 04, 2006, 03:48 AM
And here's another translation, cooked & served for your eyes only!
In case it doesn't look obvious enough by looking at the cover, in this chapter Vegetal wants YOU! (so, you know what to do xD)
Here's the raw: (reupload: 28/09/06)
http://www.savefile.com/files/113799
That "gift" in page 2 was some kind of magic genie from a really really old anime series (I think I saw it around 18 years ago), but I can't even remember how it was called...
And "that game" really brings back memories... I even bothered to look for the official names in the Limited & 4th editions, mind you... :amuse
So now, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 10 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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(No new names in this chapter)
Page 2
Text on etiquette: To Vegetal
This time the tale's about a lettuce-like character, some very bad seeds and an even badder Vegetal. Doesn't it look like a gardener manual? Yet it isn't, it's about the most craziest series ever conceived by a human mind... well, not really.
You reap...
Page 3
Godh-All dumbasses down there, pay some attention! I'm Godh, on a live connection to your atrophied minds! The Puyajins have already arrived! They're in the ruins of the Duende Tarugo's house! Go there as soon as possible or everything will be lost! [Fuck!]
Godh-Soson Goku still can't make it, he'll be somewhat delayed, so you have to buy time and keep them busy! Go now!
Tarugo-[My home...]
Lancha-(What's this voice in my head? My schizophrenia is getting worse?)
Wilma-Shit! Did I give up on my wish for this?
Wilma-But well, let's go, I hope Soson Goku gets there soon!
Dredd-When you finish with the B-4 form, start signing the red notebook, a signature per page, that way we'll finish sooner, then I'll bring you the register so you write there your detailed bio, and then we'll get your fingerprints...
Goku-[Help me]
Page 4
Nappalm-Boss, I'm reading several groups of beings closing in at great speed!
Vegetal-Very good, I need to get some warming up after so many stupid turns!
Tarugo-I see them! I can see them! For all that is holy! My house, goddammit! My house!!
Someone-Don't worry, mr Duende, let us take care of this. And get off me at once, or we'll crash!
Page 5
Someone-Get your beard outta my face, you stinkin' ape!
Tarugo-Arf, arf, we've arrived! There they are!
Hair-Spiky.
TSP-Are they the Puyajins?
Yansha-There are only two of them, we got advantage!
Chiqrilin-Don't get cocky!
Page 6
Lancha-Wait a moment!
Lancha-Everybody freeze!
Lancha-How come this is starting without us?
Lancha-We bring Chun Gohan! Didn't you send us to retrieve him?
TSP-There's still someone left...!
TSP-Look, here they come!
Page 7
Wilma-We summoned the dragon and asked him to resurrect Soson Goku... but he isn't here yet... and I already feel terribly dirty!
Discolo-Me... blech! too...
Chiqrilin-That's bad news, right?
Yansha-Very bad!
Tarugo-Don't get so down, we aren't resourceless.
Lancha-You can bet your ass on it, geezer!
Someone-But when Soson Goku comes, should we hand him the leadership?
Someone-Man, I don't know...
Someone-That guy just doesn't make the cut to me!
Someone-Well, Discolo, you have some sorta charisma. What if you become the leader?
Discolo-Nobody adresses me that casually ever!
Vegetal-Hey, hey, hey! Wait a sec! Time out! Let's remember why we are here right now!
Discolo-[Gee, it's true]
TSP-[Yeah, what a lapsus!]
Page 8
Vegetal-I am prince Vegetal, from the planet with the same name, I belong to the Puyajin race, same as my underling, Nappalm, and between us two we'll beat you to a pulp and turn this planet into raw material to season a mixed grill! [Fuckers!]
Nappalm-Say, boss, that green dude... Ain't him from planet Vietnamek?
Vegetal-Now that you mention it...
Nappalm-Hwa hwa hwa! What's a weakling from Vietnamek doing around here? [I can't hold iiit!]
Vegetal-Those pea-faces are but a bunch of pacifist ecologist hippies! Where did this one pop out from? [So funny!]
Sound: Ha ha hwa
Page 9
Discolo-So I am...!
Discolo-I am an alien?
Pompon-Godh...
Godh-I... I never knew... I was part... of a sissies race...
Godh-How... how shameful!
Nappalm-But enough introductions for now. Shall we start already?
Nappalm-Let's see... They're around ten in total, I think we should make lessen that difference...
Vegetal-[Coward!]
Page 10
Vegetal-Anyways, this could be fun... Come on, get that product of yours!
Nappalm- Uh-huh! [Let us see...]
Nappalm-This is it!
Vegetal-Here, here, spray here!
Vegetal-At that li'l bug, quick!
Vegetal-Lookie, at that plant too!
Vegetal-At that bird, hurry!
Vegetal-And that small lizard!
Page 11
TSP-But what does this mean? It was you who talked about getting serious!!
Vegetal-Oh... I assure you what comes next is pretty serious...
Vegetal-The ones alive after facing these critters will face us!!
Vegetal-Hya, hya, this so rules!
Page 12
All-Let's get them!
Bird-[Aaggh! Taz wants to eat!]
Ant-[I'llsmackyou!]
All-This isn't gonna be easy, but here we go!
Vegetal-When they finish them all, we'll start trashing this planet. Easy, isn't it?
Nappalm-Simple and reliable, boss.
Box: Meanwhile...
Dredd-Well, kid, we're almost finished. Now you finish filling in this registry book and you take it all so it gets the approved seal... Want a trolley?
Page 13
All-Do it, no mercy!
Yansha-That ant son of a bitch has Chiqrilin!
TSP-I'll go help him!
Page 14
Bird-Igetsmacked!
Lancha-Beware of that plant!
*Sounds gun do in buddhist countries
Page 15
Yansha-Well, we finished the big bird, the lizard and the ant. Now only that beartrap-mouthed eggplant is left!
Chiqrilin-Why didn't you hit it from the beginning?
TSP-Man... I had to play along, the surprise factor...
Lancha-Let me off, bitch!
All-Look!!
TSP-I'm going!!
Page 16
TSP-Fancy this cut!
Vegetal-He, he, he... Surprise...
How come Te Sin Pan can keep his balance with so many arms? Hey, it's a comic-book!
Page 17
All-What... what are these things...?
Vegetal-They're armpit-leechers! A variety of mutant lentils that stick strongly to their prey! They're equipped with a explosives pack and never let their prey go! [Well, they do, but in pieces, like the cheese...]
Vegetal-Hya, hya! Fuck, I'm having a blast!
Nappalm-Say, boss... When do we get to fight? [I'm getting sleepy!]
Page 18
Text on headband: I think with my butt
Text on headband: Me too
Nacho-[You know it... Use condoms...]
[br]Posted on: September 04, 2006, 04:47:33 AM_________________________________________________Page 19
Chiqrilin-Yansha!!
Ulom-Mr Duende!!
All-Those two dumbasses!
Vegetal-What did you think? That this was a game? Yet it is, but it's just that we set the rules here! [Ha, ha, ha... I'm the best at everything I do...]
Page 20
Vegetal-Now, anyone you want from those left can try and beat us in a fight! Choose your turn...
Vegetal-(He, he, their energy is absolutely pitiful...!) [I'm not that stupid!]
Discolo-I'll fight first...!
Page 21
Discolo-Alright, show me what you're made of...!
Nappalm-Let me fight first, boss...
Vegetal-As you wish, it's yours... [Poor guy, he was getting bored...]
Page 22
Vegetal-How about you making sure where you're rushing to, for a change? Huh?
Discolo-Uh... ehem... em... To the chase. I'll smash you with my spectral attack!
Nappalm-Is that so? Then I have a defensive ward from earth spells and a Lord of the Pit!
Discolo-Ah, and do you have the Air Elemental?
Nappalm-Chew on these double lands!!
Discolo-To hell with them, I have a Wrath of Godh you'll crap your pants!
Nappalm-Cheater!
Discolo-Sheer envy! [More mana, this is war!]
Page 23
Gohan-Ah... At last!
Ulom-Sorry, I had forgotten about you...
TSP-What the heck are those two doing?
Havoc-No damn idea! [Some magic stuff...]
Vegetal-Ehem!
Nap.&Disc.-Ehem!
Nappalm-Er... Was that my turn, now?
Discolo-Erm... what? Uh... Yea, yea, of course...
Nappalm-COOL!
Discolo-[Agh, the asshole! Fooled me!]
Page 24
Vegetal-Well... Nappalm, what if you go on with that spider man over there?
TSP-Er... say... who, who?
Dredd-Here I bring you the registry of arrivals and departures, you only have to sign each of them on a signature per... UH? HE FLEW OFF!!
Page 25
Nappalm-Ha, ha, ha, haaa!
Nappalm-I have a piece of you now!!
TSP-So?
Page 26
Nappalm-Well... Too bad for you... It'll take longer...
Sounds: Ouch! Argh! Shoot, stop already!
TSP-Ow ow ow ow [Guh... It stings...]
Havoc-Te Sin Pan! You still owe me those fifty bucks! I won't let you die!
Havoc-Let me stick one of Lancha's firecrackers into your underpants!
Page 27
Vegetal-Nappalm! Finish already ripping the baldy off, I can't wait for my turn!
Nappalm-This is lasting too much!
Chiqrilin-But what kind of grenade did you give Havoc, Lancha?
Lancha-Shut up! The one to save my man will only be me! Any objections?
Ulom-No, but if I were you, I'd hurry if you still want to save something...
Page 28
TSP-(I... I'll use my last strength left to... unleash my... most powerful attack...)
Nappalm-Well... I'm tired of playing already...
TSP-Blast Cannon!!*
*Also known as Kikoho
Page 29
Chiqrilin-Did you see that?
Gohan-It's a boom!
Page 30
TSP-Shoot!
Page 31
Lancha-Nooo!!
Lancha-Fire at will, toast the son of a bitch!!
Vegetal-Shit, dude... This much is too much...!
Page 32
Nappalm-[Hyo hyo hyo hyo hyo]
Goku-I finally got away!!
Goku-I couldn't bear it anymore, I see signatures everywhere!
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leecherboy
September 11, 2006, 03:03 AM
Here's the next translation, just retrieved from some Egyptian ruins!
Were you wondering about that character? Did it look like the authors had forgotten him? Then nope, right on time for his debut, the fatty samurai appears at last! :amuse
Here's the raw: (reupload: 28/09/06)
http://www.savefile.com/files/113835
This chapter also features the last bullfighting reference in Dragon Fall, if I'm not wrong...
And seeing what gets mentioned on page 2, it's time for "Trivia Stuff #2": in most of the chapters from 01 to 14 (except for #10, #12 and this one), there is actually a readers mail section ("The Vegetable Shop, Vegetal's Corner"). Those pages aren't scanned anywhere so there's no way you could see them, though you ain't really missing anything, only readers flaming Vegetal and Vegetal promising to frag them before destroying the Earth... xD
But I'll rant no longer for now. Behold the start of the fight against Vegetal, my favourite chapters in Dragon Fall!!
So there, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 11 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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New name for this chapter:
Yajorobais (Yajirobai): "ya jorobais" literally means "you're pissing me off"
Page 1
Animals forbidden
Page 2
This chapter looks like a mix between Rambo, Apocalypse Now and the Annual Buttkicking Contest (for all the butts that get kicked, ha, ha...). Vegetal, too busy beating up the poor Soson, forgot to handle the readers mail this time. Agggg! Wait till I catch you!
Some ass kicking
Page 3
Vegetal-Come on, Nappalm, finish whoever you want, but do it now![Dang! I'm so pumped up already!]
Nappalm-Ng, ng, ng!
Chiqrilin-What... what do we do?
Ulom-I don't know! What if you shield us?
Lancha-He'll have to step on our corpses!
Page 4
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Page 5
Chiqrilin-It's Soson Goku! He's back!
Wilma-I knew it, I knew there was no hope...!
Gohan-Mister Discolo! Don't die on me! I owe you so much...! I'll avenge you!
Discolo-(Shut up... fucking... asshole... let me... croak... in peace!)
Goku-Shoot, this guy just got owned...!
Chiqrilin-Soson Goku, you came by flying! How did you manage to learn that? Did that master from beyond teach you?
Goku-Well... the truth is... nobody ever told me you couldn't do it... but then I stopped to think about it and that's why I fell...
Page 6
Vegetal-(T... That guy is a Puyajin, I sense his own personal energetic reading!! It's that Kagarrot!!)
Vegetal-(He must be quite the ultra-expert clever fighter as to have fragged both Rolex and Nappalm!! And now's my turn!!)
Goku-Ok, let us see! Where are those Puyajin warriors?
Chiqrilin-[Agh... I can't even stand up!]
Goku-And who are you, by the way...
Vegetal-Your fucking momma!! Aren't you annoying...
Goku-Mom! I've finally found you!!
Someone-[They do share some familiar resemblance, yeah...]
Page 7
Vegetal-Enough bullshit already!!
Vegetal-I'm prince Vegetal, from the planet with the same name, the most powerful amongst all Puyajins!!
Someone-Such brilliant minds... They just named him after the planet...
Someone-If I was called Saturn I'd just kill myself...
Someone-You said it...
Chiqrilin-Say, what's wrong with the guys from that planet? They all react in the same way!
Wilma-That might be an eye irritation caused by the air pollution...
Vegetal-BWAAAH! They had to mention that!!
Page 8
Vegetal-Snif...! Not fair... They needn't to put their fingers on the sore spot...[Sob! Snif!]
Vegetal-I'm sick and tired of this! This is humiliating! I am the Pujajin, and they're not!
Vegetal-Fuckers!!
Vegetal-You, plain encephalogram with a kimono!! I challenge you to a duel between Puyajins to decide the Earth's future!
Goku-[Me?]
Vegetal-We'll do it in the desert behind these mountains! We'll be more at our leisure there!
Page 9
Vegetal-So, there we go!
Chiqrilin-What'll happen now?
Alvaro-Is that a rethorical question?
Nacho-[I can't stand it...]
Gohan-If we could follow them...! But they're too fast, and we'd lose too much time on foot...
Chiqrilin-Wait... Soson Goku said that to fly you only needed to not think you couldn't and...
Chiqrilin-See this? I did it! You only need to not have negative thoughts!
P.P.-[What a thing, I already knew that...]
Gohan-Yeah, me too!
Page 10
Both-Let's go!
Gohan-How can a duel between Puyajins be?
Chiqrilin-As far as we know, we can expect a true show from it!
Wilma-And what do we do?
Lancha-Atchoo!
Wilma-Lancha?
Ulom-Wow! Great! Now's when she lets you have your way with her!
Page 11
Chiqrilin-We made it to the mountains!
Gohan-Why do we stop here?
Chiqrilin-Hey mustn't notice our presence while we watch the fight's development... Soson Goku might need our help...!
Chiqrilin-I have some morbid curiosity in checking the ferocity of a duel between Puyajins...!
Chiqrilin-Let's see...
Vegetal-Cobi-haired!*
Tail-cut!
Monkey face!
Goku-Vegetable!
Big forehead!
Posh!
Vegetal-Dumbass!
Goku-Saturn!
*Remember Cobi, the spanish pet for the Expo'92?
Page 12
Vegetal-Alright, that's enough! Where are the Kehu-ron balls?
Goku-What? You just arrived and you already know about the balls?
Goku-It took me some years to figure out the whole thing! [Notfair!]
Vegetal-I already knew about the Kehu-ron dragon legend because of a documental I watched on CNN, but I kept it a secret so my helpers wouldn't get in the way!
Vegetal-Even though my mission is to reduce this planet into air freshener for Happy Meals(tm), before that I want to gather the balls and ask for a wish!
Goku-You'll have to go fuck yourself and wait for your birthday cake...
Goku-Ops! Did I say that? I got too excited! [You think he'll believe it...?][Too spicy]
Vegetal-Oh, so scary! I'm trembling! Let me ask you again...!
Page 13
Vegetal-WHERE...
Vegetal-...ARE...
Vegetal-...MY BALLS!?
Alvaro-[We could crack a lot of mean jokes about that, but I don't think we'd make it alive to the next chapter]
Page 14
Vegetal-Come on, answer! Don't make me get all violent!
Chiqrilin-No! He'll kill him! [Twice in a row is abusing!]
Chiqrilin-Hold on, Soson Goku, I'm coming!
Chiqrilin-Attack of the Saw!!*
*Also known as Kienzan, his trademark attack
Page 15
Vegetal-Argn!
Sound:Chomp!
Goku-T...thanks... for the... help...
Goku-I can die peacefully now...
Vegetal-Now you widd zee, dittde bazta'd... I widd beat the c'ap outta ya' faze...!!
Page 16
Goku-I... must hold on... use... my new techniques... [I can't feel my legs...!]
Chiqrilin-He, he, he!
Chiqrilin-Wasn't that funny?[Father, our father, who art in heaven...]
Chiqrilin-Some advice, Chun Gohan: stay out of this, got it?
Page 17
Goku-Vegetal!!
Gohan-Go on, daddy!
Vegetal-Uh?
Goku-I'm going all out, your ass is mine!!
Gohan-AAAAAGH!! How shameful, my father is gay!!
[br]Posted on: September 11, 2006, 04:00:44 AM_________________________________________________Page 18
Goku-Er...
Goku-I...
Goku-Say...
Goku-To hell with it!
Goku-Get ready, Vegetal, here comes the "Attack of Peskaito"!
Vegetal-(Uh? What's that aura that surrounds him? His energy level has risen?
Or is that a stitch?)
Goku-With this technique I can provide more power to my Kome-Jame-Ha attacks!
Now you're done for!
Page 19
Goku-Kome... ...Jame... ...Ha!!
Page 20 & 21
No text
Page 22
Someone-[Come on, make all the pages like these last four... Pretty
please...]
Arrow: The letterist
Page 23
Worm-I'm getting so fed up with this...!
Goku-Shoot, Vegetal, it ain't fair... You just went too far this time! Ow, it
hurts! [I have this sinking feeling...]
Bump-I hurt a lot.
Alvaro-Do you get the pun?
Nacho-Uh? Uh?
Page 24
Goku-You asked for it!!
Goku-I'll duplicate the "Attack of Peskaito"!
Vegetal-Your effort will be in vain, I already know your techniques!
Goku-Double Attack of Peskaito!
Peskaito-Atchoooo!!
Page 25
Tooth-Free at last!
Page 26
Gohan-Yayyy!!
Gohan-That's my daddy!
Chiqrilin-Hit'im hard, Soson Goku! [You'll get his ears and his tail!*]
Someone-What are those two doing?
*This is what bullfighters get from the bull after a great job
Page 27
Chiqrilin-So... so who are you? [Your looks of goateed hairy fatass seems
suspicious to me!]
Yajorobais-I'm Yajorobais, the samurai. I wander these lands looking for
tails to cut off with my sword. It's like a sport to me.
Yajorobais-Don't worry, I don't mean that kind of tails.
Yajorobais-I devote myself to this untranscending entertainment* to forget
the bitterness from my past... I was once a stupid young boy who spent all
his savings and his parents' wealth (the latter was more noteworthy) in the
ellaboration of an ultra-sucking fanzine with some spirals and some laminated
pages and with a free holographic stick that turned out to be a total failure
(maybe because it was a monographic about "The House of the Prairie"). After
getting broke and cut out of my parents' will, I decided to keep on doing the
fool.
*Try to say that in a row with your mouth stuffed
Letterist-Bastards...!
Arrow: The letterist
Page 28
Vegetal-Alright, corpse...
Vegetal-Let's dance rock'n'roll!
Page 29
Yajorobais-This is getting very hot!* Listen, kiddos, go look for help! I'll
stay here watching!
Chiqrilin-OK!
Page 30
Nacho-Let's slightly skip some details that get repeated in the following
turns: Vegetal, with his renewed energy, kicks Soson Goku's ass around; the
latter, recovering some strength back and triplicating his "Attack of
Peskaito", kicks Vegetal's ass back, who in return gathers some strength, and
so on for the next two hours like that where Soson Goku quadruplies,
quintuplies and sixtuplies his "Attack of Peskaito", helped by the crib he
had to know how these multiplications were called.
Alvaro-By the way, do you like my new look? I threw away that ponytail that
bothered me so much... And if you don't like it, get lost!
Alvaro-We do this so you don't get bored and complain... [By the way, these
bubbles just got too lame]
Sign: This time you went too far [The letterist]
Page 31
Goku-Now you'll see! I'll multiply my "Attack of Peskaito" by...!
Goku-Hey! The crib! I lost it!
Vegetal-Are you maybe looking for this?
Vegetal-He, he... I'm fast, huh?
Goku-Gimme that paper back, damn you...!
Vegetal-Without this pathetic help, typical of a retard like you, you're done
for! Prepare yourself to receive a "Jumping Jack Flash" attack...!
Vegetal-Quintuplied!!
Page 32
Goku-Ehem!
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destinator
September 11, 2006, 03:07 AM
11 already ? Damn I missed the last chapter >_<
Gooood work leecherboy <3
leecherboy
September 18, 2006, 02:34 AM
Here's another translation, achieved only after getting the Gun del Sol, the Gun del Hell, the Gun del Clock and the Gun del Pizza in a single playthrough!
Resuming the fight against Vegetal, we're going all Ultraman here! xD
Here's the raw: (reupload: 28/09/06)
http://www.savefile.com/files/113841
This chapter features some weird mutant phenomenon, where 12 pages get inked by 12 different people. Why is this? I'll be damned if I know... The only use I can find for it is to date properly when Dragon Fall started: in the year 1994!
And Vegetal's "Cañon Azo" attack on page 7 gave me some headache, until I looked it up and it so happens to be an accurate pun...
Said that, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 12 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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New name for this chapter:
Cañon Azo (Garlick Gun): "cañon ajo" means "garlic cannon", while "cañonazo" means "big-ass cannon"
Page 2
Vegetal-Chomp!
This time it's all about tails (ehem): Vegetal gets his tail cut off as if he was some Mihura bull (the ears in the next chapter), the Smurfs flee with their tails between their legs, I can't make heads or tails out of the rhytmic gymnastics, and last, there's Soson Goku, with the intelligence quotient of a yellowtail.
Rain of beatings
Page 3
Vegetal-Consider yourself dead!
Page 4
Goku-He, he, he... "Tooth for a tooth".
Page 5
Vegetal-You shred my blood... my aristocratic blood!
Vegetal-I... I won't forgive you! I'll never forgive you!
Goku-But dude, don't be...
Vegetal-I don't want this planet anymore!
Vegetal-I'll smash you to a pulp along with the Earth!
Arrow: Baby Dop Tantrum.
Goku-What did you say?
Vegetal-I said: "I don't want this planet anymore, I'll smash you to a pulp along with the Earth". Happy now? [Wash your ears sometimes]
Ink: Chaves.
Page 6
Vegetal-Go to hell!
Peskaito-This is no good... [I can't jack off without hands...]
Peskaito-And it seems Vegetal will destroy the Earth and Soson Goku...
Peskaito-Good gracious, some days you just can't pop a decent boner...
Peskaito-Come on, get going! I know I'll do it! [Hop, dolly!]
Vegetal-I'll use one of my most devastating techniques!*
Vegetal-When I'm done with you, you'll be displayed in an impressionist museum, jerk!
*The zillionth time...
Ink: Sandoval.
Page 7
Vegetal-Get ready for my CAÑON AZO!
Vegetal-Become space poo along with the Earth!
Goku-Say... I don't know how to do that... [Can'tyouexplain...]
Vegetal-Worry not, leave that to me...
Vegetal-CAÑON AZO!!
Goku-I must stop that attack, but... how?
Goku-If I could create a Kome-Jame-Ha powerful enough to counter it...
Page 8
Goku-Let's see, if I managed to multiply my technique with the Attack of Peskaito I could stop his, but without the crib it's too difficult...
Goku-If I had the crib, I'd know how to say for example "times twenty-six"...
Goku-But since I don't have it...
Goku-Attack of Peskaito! Kome-Jame-Ha times twenty-six!
Page 9
Goku-[Shoot, I overdid it!]
??-[Oh my god, not another one!!]
Page 10
Vegetal-What the heck...?
Yajorobais-Shit!!
Yajorobais-If I had known I was gonna die I would have gone buy the Sukebe!*
*Sukebe: old spanish fanzine
The crazy editors strike again!!
Vegetal-The asshole! He's overpowering me!
Vegetal-He'll beat me!! Dang, not, not fair!!
Ink: Nuria P.
Page 11
Vegetal-Shit!!
Ink: Ismael Ferrer.
Page 12
Goku-Uuf... I spent all my strength in that attack...
Goku-I... can't even stand straight ... [My hair weights so much!]
Yajorobais-Hey, dude! You sure rocked the whole place, badass! I still can't believe it!!
Heart-Mom!
Vegetal-Yeah, I'm definately never gonna forgive him!
Ink: Nacho '96.
Page 13
Yajorobais-You nailed it, buddy! What a way of handling the situation! That was some serious power!
Goku-Er... Yeah... Thanks... If you help me to the floor... Cool...! [By the way... who on earth are you?]
Vegetal-You haven't defeated me yet!!
Vegetal-I'll use the moon in broad daylight for my plan! Now you'll see!!
Vegetal-I'm gonna clear the sky!
Ink by: <weird signature> [That is, Sergio Bleda (T.N.)].
Page 14
Vegetal-Shit! I didn't remember that if I want to see a wanning moon to transform I'll need to wait for the night! I can't wait that longer!
Vegetal-Wait... I think I have some emergency stuff for those times...
Sounds: Search, search
Sounds: Seek, seek
Ink: German Garcia + J. C. Gomez.
Page 15
Vegetal-Ah, here's the moon wanning kit!
Text on box: Rip-o-matic
Vegetal-Now I turn it on... and it's ready!
Vegetal-Go fulfill your duty!
Ink: Jose Miguel Alvarez.[br]Posted on: September 18, 2006, 03:34:22 AM_________________________________________________Page 16
Text on gear: Crescent / New / Full / Wanning
Doll-Dang... All that thrill for this...
Page 17
Vegetal-That's it! At last, a wanning moon!!
Vegetal-Now.
Vegetal-It's the time...!
Vegetal-And after several seconds...!
Vegetal-...My power will be full!
Ink: Javier Pulido
Page 18
Yajorobais-Fuck!
Goku-Geez, that Michael Jackson...!
Peskaito-Useless... I just can't... [Am I lacking lubrication?]
Ink: Anna Coll
Page 19
Vegetal-Now's when I erase you from the census, asshole!!
Vegetal-Say goodnight, spermatozoid!!
Chiqrilin-Shucks!
Chiqrilin-We go back, Chun Gohan! There's something we must discuss with Soson Goku!
Page 20
Goku-Er... well... "Goodnight, spermatozoid". That's it, did I say that properly?
Goku-Listen?
Page 21
Vegetal-Go to hell!!
Vegetal-I'll turn you into fast food!!
Page 22
Vegetal-Crap! That was close!
Vegetal-Ha, ha, ha! Fleeing is useless!
Vegetal-I'm much bigger and stronger than you! You can flee, but you can't...!
Vegetal-Go get him, Azrael!
Goku-By the smurfs...! I mean... Shoot, this just gets worse!
Inking by: Alex Samaranch
Page 23
Yajorobais-This can't go on, I must stand out!
Yajorobais-Hey, you, ape face, dare and fight me!
Vegetal-I'll get you, microbe...!!
Vegetal-Be that...!
Note: "Orujo" is a strong grape liqueur. And doesn't have 300 degrees, but 40-55 degrees.
Page 24
Vegetal-...As it may!
Vegetal-Crap, he moved!
Yajorobais-I... was so outstanding... yeah dude...
Yajorobais-I... think I rather let him fight for himself...
Yajorobais-Or else... he can go get fucked off!
Page 25
Gohan-Are you sure we're doing the right thing coming back, Chiqrilin? Even to ask that?
Chiqrilin-I am, fuck, I am!
Yajorobais-Ops, this sucks...
Vegetal-Now ya've pissed me off!!
Page 26
Text on top and on right side: The Vegetal from the 1st and last panel and the Soson Goku from the last one were inked by Albert Monteys. The rest weren't, under the excuse that he didn't get Soson Goku right. Shoot, he could have made something else up, like he had to study or something...
Vegetal-It's the end, cockroach, you'll shout till you die...!
Goku-Heh... I wish I had enough strength to shout...
Vegetal-He, he, he... "Get in shape with Jane Vegetal".
Vegetal-Now we'll do... Legs twisting, one...! Two...!
Page 27
Yajorobais-Huh?
Yajorobais-(A... a tail...! I'm... so suddenly eager to... to cut it off!) [Come on! Let's go! Hop!]
Yajorobais-(But it's... so big... I don't know if I'll dare...)
Vegetal-And now, our next exercise...
Vegetal-Let's do crochet work with your intestines!
Page 28
Arrow: Tarradellas pastrami*.
*Tarradellas is a famous spanish brand of pastrami
Goku-Ow!
Page 29
Goku-[Ow ow ow ow]
Yajorobais-Arf, arf, pant! I did it! I still can't believe it...
Yajorobais-If he wakes up I'll be screwed! Luckily for us, those kids went to look for help...
Chiqrilin-Now that you mention it, Yajorobais... Say, we have a question... Who were we supposed to ask for help?
Page 30
Chiqrilin-Whad do you zhink mighd haff bozhered him?
Gohan-No idea, dude...
Vegetal-Damn you! You'll pay for this affront!
Vegetal-Cutting my very tail off!
Page 31
Vegetal-Ops... I didn't remember I was using my tail to hold my pants in place!
Vegetal-Ehem...
Yajorobais-Now, kiddos! It's the time! Let's attack between us three, now that he's groggy!
Vegetal-You mean to do something to me, you hairy pig?
Yajorobais-In case you didn't know, I was the one who cut your tail off, and I'd do it again!
Yajorobais-So show more respect!
Page 32
Vegetal-So it was you!
Chiqrilin-Ow, ow, ow...
Chiqrilin-Don't look back, Chun Gohan...!
Goku-I... must try and do something... I gotta use my... last strength... to repel... Vegetal...
Vegetal-And you, whimps, that do nothing but slip away... IT'S YOUR TURN!!
Nacho-[Howdy, we never appeared in this issue!]
Alvaro-[About time!]
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destinator
September 18, 2006, 03:24 AM
Leecherboy has a avatar now xD,cool!
Thanks a lot for the translation^^
rykarreolacr
September 18, 2006, 03:32 AM
Thanks man! it's great. :thumbs
leecherboy
September 18, 2006, 04:08 AM
Thanks! :p
Leecherboy has a avatar now xD,cool!
Thanks for noticing :). Behold the cutesy! :3
leecherboy
September 25, 2006, 02:41 AM
And another translation, equippable only after getting an S Busting Level against GeminiMan.exe if using DrillMan.exe's "Cross" (a.r.m.o.r)!
The reference at the cover page is so obvious that I'll get kicked if I try to explain it! xD
Here's the raw:
http://rapidshare.de/files/34361039/dragon_fall_13.zip.html
http://www.savefile.com/files/113864
You might want to know what the authors mean at page 2... Then here comes LB-kun to the rescue!
Trivia Stuff #3: a long story short, in page 2 the authors are supporting that old lame Sukebe fanzine (remember from last chapter?) by beating their rabid detractors.
And now, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 13 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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Page 2
Nacho-Happy now, mister Riera?
Alvaro-We enjoyed it!
Soson Gokuh is a kid that was raised in the foothill of a mountain with his granpa without any contact with civilization. Some day, a blonde girl on a wheelchair went through there... weeell, I think I just missed the point, I mean, the anime.
Not welcome, mister Vegetal!!
Page 3
Goku-Man, Chiqrilin, I'm glad you crawled your way here... I was actually thinking on you to...
Chriqrilin-Go die at once!
Page 4
Vegetal-And now I'll completely terminate you, you'll regret having come here to stop me!
Goku-Hey... Chiqrilin...! Dang, I'm serious here, fuck!
Goku-You must use my energy... As I can't even rise my eyebrows... I'll hand you the energy of the whole planet, that I've been accumulating...
Goku-Here, take my hand...
Goku-Electric energy!
Goku-Hydraulic energy!
Goku-Eolic energy!
Page 5
Goku-Nuclear energy!
Chiqrilin-Got it, dude, got it...!
Vegetal-Well, now I'll have my way with the weak-ass kid, in a totally coward despicable way... [Hye hye hye]
Gohan-Uh?
Vegetal-Hya, hya, hya, suffer, little rat!
Vegetal-If you survive this, your brain will be even useless than a pencil sharpener!!
Page 6
Vegetal-He, he, he...
Gohan-Gog.
Finger-Poke!
Chiqrilin-I... I've managed to... gather... the whole... energy...
Chiqrilin-And... now...
Chiqrilin-Kwak!
Page 7
Vegetal-This shit-face kid is done for...!!
Chiqrilin-Hey, Vegetal!!
Chiqrilin-We aren't through yet!
Chiqrilin-Energy Ball!!
Page 8
Vegetal-Crap... My hands are busy right now!!
Vegetal-Damn sucker!
Vegetal-Tee hee hee hee hee.
Page 9
Chiqrilin-Now you'll see!
Page 10
Goku-Way to go, Chiqrilin!
Yajorobais-Yay yay yaaay!
Yajorobais-You'll surely get his ears and his tail!*
Chiqrilin-I knew... I'd make it... [He he he][Arf! Pant!]
Ch-They didn't count on my astuteness! **
*This is what bullfighters get after a great job
**This guy seems to be Chapulin Colorado, a mexican character
Vegetal-He, he, he... We Puyajins are hard nuts to crack... [Ow, it stings...!]
Page 11
All-What do we do?
All-Shit, I wasn't expecting this!
Goku-Wait a sec: Chun Gohan!
Ch-I suspected it from the beginning.
Goku-It just happens his tail is growing!
Gohan-Uh?
*If you buy it, that's nice...
Goku-Chun Gohan, watch closely the hole Vegetal made in the sky! Look at the moon that is showing! Don't look away from it!
Gohan-The moon?
Box: Dedicated to Belinda Carlise. We love you, Belinda! B.C.F.C*
*Belinda Carlise seems to be a singer who sang about the moon ¬¬
Page 12
Vegetal-No! I can't allow that!
Vegetal-I won't let you! I'll beat you senseless before that!
Vegetal-I'll kill you, and I'll smash you, and I'll make mince meat out of you, and...!!
Vegetal-Iiiiiiiiiih!!
Page 13
Goku-That's it, son! Now, use your newly adquired strength!
Vegetal-Wait a sec... Even though he looks that big, he's no more than a frightened child... If I face him and I intimidate him...
Yajorobais-C'mon, Chun Gohan, hit him hard!!
Chiqrilin-Yeah, man!
Vegetal-Look, let's forget that, I'll just try and cut his tail off and that's it!
Page 14
Vegetal-I have to...!!
Vegetal-Mom!!
Chiqrilin-God, he's gonna have such a huge crash! I don't want to watch it!
Yajorobais-I do!
Vegetal-Help me...!!
Page 15
Vegetal-Argn!
Vegetal-Agfs! Lucky thing my reflexes are sharp!
Chiqrilin-Blimey, he sure knows how to bounce around, those Puyajins are badasses!
Yajorobais-Bah!
Vegetal-Buf! I'm safe!
Page 16
Vegetal-Ba... s... ta... rd...!
Yajorobais-Yay yaaay!
Chiqrilin-Well, done, Chun Gohan, you caught him!
Vegetal-Got it, fuck, got it...!
Page 17
Goku-Shit... Chun Gohan can't control his monster form...!
Goku-Now we have a whole new problem!
Yajorobais-Agh... that... that tail... so... so big...! I... I can't resist... I have... I have to... [Ow... I hurt all over!]
Page 18
Yajorobais-Aaaah!!
Yajorobais-Go get fucked off!
Vegetal- Uh-huh! Now your days of being a giant ape are over, disaster will fall on you![br]Posted on: September 25, 2006, 03:40:36 AM_________________________________________________Page 19
Box: At the other side of the Pirineos...
Page 20
Boss-Let's see... The tunnel for the general road must go through the marked zone.
Worker-But I think the time we have to do it is too little. It'll be some serious bitchin'!
Boss-I'm sorry, but my superiors wish to promote themselves now that they've gotten that far up, so it rather be finished when they come along with the press to inaugurate it...
Page 21
Boss-Well, I'm glad to say the inauguration will take place tomorrow... Your men were really fast...
Boss-Thanks for your hard work, you can go now. As you were paid per hours of work, I think this sums up to around ten pennys...
Vegetal-Agf...! At last!
Page 22
Vegetal-Arf... Come on... up we go! [Ow, my hernia!]
Chiqrilin-Vegetal... I... won't... let you... go!
Box: And the last dramatic chase takes place...
Vegetal-Ow Ow Ow Stop at once, man!
Chiqrilin-[Eat this, sucker. The wisdom tooth, that hurts more!]
Snail-Walk a little faster, slowpokes!!
Chiqrilin-STOP!!
Vegetal-Got it, man, got it...
Page 23
Ship: Initiating take off sequence. Establish yourself in the compartment.
Chiqrilin-Damn killer... You won't escape...!
Chiqrilin-Give me a week's time to gather some strength...!
Goku-No! Chiqrilin! Don't do a thing, let him go!
Page 24
Chiqrilin-Explain yourself! Want me to not do a thing, or to let him go?
Alvaro-[Hey, he posed a paradox!]
Nacho-[I can't stand it!]
Vegetal-Come on, let's go, now that they're distracted!
Page 25
Chiqrilin-He... He's... gone...!
Goku-Heh, heh, now that's funny... I can't remember why I told you to wait...
Goku-Ow! Ouch! Ugh! Guh!
Yajorobais-Someone's coming!
Page 26
Wilma-Where's my widdle kid!?
Wilma-Anyone who dares to touch him will get pummeled!!
Page 27
Goku-Chicha, dear, you're here!
Chicha-Where's Chun Gohan!?
Wilma-Soson Goku! Chiqrilin!
Wilma-And who's that fatso?
Ulom-Dang, she had to get a cold just when...
Yajorobais-Are they friends of yours?
Chiqrilin-"That one" is Soson Goku's wife...
Yajorobais-It shows...
Chicha-Chun Gohan?
Chicha-Dear, where are you?
Page 28
Chicha-Where's Chun Gohan?
Chicha-Answer, or you'll be eating shield!
Chiqrilin-Well... He, he, he...
Wilma-Where's Vegetal?
Goku-He vanished, he managed to escape!
Goku-Ehem.
Yajorobais-And nobody cares about me...!
Yajorobais-Shoot, not fair.
Yajorobais-Shit... my Toledan sword! [Of course, it wasn't Ginsu!]
Page 29
Goku-How did you get that vehicle?
Wilma-Miss Chicha was on her way here, so she took us along. Besides, we were bringing some extra help...
Wilma-Mr. Sakarin, you do remember him, right?
Sakarin-I'm never ever going to travel again along three women! Godh, the humiliation!
Wilma-So, let's hop into the truck, we must get our arses into gear!
Yajorobais-Again?
Lancha-Dang, look at those two! Me wants too...!
Ulom-Help me get this crappy kid out and stop the nonsense...!
Wilma-LET'S GO!
Page 30
Yajorobais-Shit, I get to go in the back, along with the cattle!
Wilma-Yes, I changed my hairstyle while I was waiting... You were taking so much time...
Chiqrilin-I don't like the thought of the Puyajin escaping... What if he comes with reinforcements?
Wilma-Don't worry, we retrieved some samples of their technology, I'll analyze it in my dad's factory and we'll find out what to do...
Someone-But Lord Vegetal, don't you think we should carry out a massive invasion?
Vegetal-I DON'T! We'll return to base! Right now!
Page 31
Gohan-Ah! Where's Vegetal? And the rest?
Chicha-Wait a sec, young man, let's have some talk about obedience and responsibility! Did I let you go there? Huh?
Gohan-But it's just... My friends...
Chicha-Sure, sure! And if your friends threw themselves off the window, you would too, right?
Chiqrilin-Geez!! Enough!! We're pretty screwed as we are!! We have to find solutions, now!!
Sakarin-We must ask a heavenly being for advice. As Godh disappeared along with Discolo, the only one left is master Peskaito from beyond...
Chiqrilin-And how do we contact him?
Wilma-Yeah, right, a conference...
Peskaito-Yes, I know your situation... The Puyajin escaped after critically injuring Soson Goku and killing the Duende Tarugo, Yansha, Te Sin Pan, Havoc and Discolo, which in turn made his other half, Godh, disappear...
Page 32
Wilma-That's incredible! How could you see all that from there? What kind of perceptions...?
Peskaito-No, no, the thing is, I have been buying my Dragon Fall monthly issues to stay updated... [You know, always on your favourite store!]
Peskaito-In fact, I was busy with another stuff totally unrelated to this...
Text on sign: Terrificly alive: the crazy editors!
Text on magazine: Subliminal advertising
Peskaito-I'm afraid the only thing that can fix this wrong is the Kehu-ron balls... But without Godh, those disappeared too... [Oof... this sucks...!]
Peskaito-But there is some hope. From what I gather, Godh was an alien from planet Vietnamek.
Peskaito-I'll try to locate his native world... Let's see... Yeah, here it is! This planet is a zillion light years away, but it hides the secret of the Kehu-ron balls!!
Text on book: Michelin guide
All-Alright! Then let's go...! To Vietnamek!!
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rykarreolacr
September 25, 2006, 11:05 AM
Awesome!! Thanks dude!!!
destinator
September 25, 2006, 02:17 PM
Thanks so much leecherboy <3
leecherboy
September 26, 2006, 02:16 AM
Thanks to you! :p
Maple Snow
September 27, 2006, 07:40 PM
i was checking this out and it says file been deleted O.O well anyways looks like a fun chapter
Maple Snow
September 27, 2006, 07:43 PM
Wow all of these fan mangas have been deleted except this one well I don't get whats going on but this seems pretty good fan manga of dragon ball I like it.
Is there any other links to the older ones?
leecherboy
September 28, 2006, 03:45 AM
Well, glad you like it. :amuse
I counted on the older ones being deleted, but why isn't chapter 12 there anymore? I upped it last week! T_T
I guess I shouldn't trust Rapidshare anymore...
Anyways, I'll upload them starting by issue 5. I'll post here when I'm done with them all :)[br]Posted on: September 28, 2006, 03:16:57 AM_________________________________________________The-ere, raws for 05 to 12 reuploaded, and an alternate link for 13 added.
I just hope I don't have to do this again any soon... :s
leecherboy
October 02, 2006, 02:26 AM
Here comes another translation! You didn't even have to sneak into The Patriots' HQ armed with a pack of cigarretes and a Socom to get it!
And seeing the cover page, what can I say? "Life is like a box of cookies", was it? :)
The raw, here:
http://www.savefile.com/files/125426
Before I forget, some correction about last chapter's "Trivia Stuff" (in case anyone reads those): the magazine Riera owned wasn't the "Sukebe", but the "Kabuki" (it'll appear quite later on).
Some space jargon is in this one...
And by the way, Trivia Stuff #4: this chapter's title references an old spanish comic by the creator of "Mortadelo and Filemon"...
So now, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 14 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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New names:
Frigo (Freeza): "frigo" means "fridge"
Feyo Harkoñen (Feyd Harkonnen): This one seems to be a character played by Sting in a David Lynch movie based on the Dune books. I know nothing about these three, although... xDD
Page 2
Goku-What was my name, again?
This one goes about how, after getting rid of Vegetal (that's a way of putting it) the good guys have to go to Vietnamek (you get the joke? ha, ha, ha) and spend the whole damned chapter trying to do so. Will they make it? Ah, who knows.
Wilma, botched jobs deliverer
Page 3
Peskaito-Wait a sec! This is not that simple! On top of the planet Vietnamek being that far away, some stuff happened there, that might have affected its original population...!
Peskaito-Some time ago there was a terrible atmospheric change and almost all life on the planet was devastated!
Wilma-Bu... But what do we do then?
Wilma-Is all hope lost?
Peskaito-Humm, let's see... No, all of them didn't disappear... Some 100 people were left, more or less... though after that...
Peskaito-There was an stupidity epidemic and 50 were left.
Peskaito-And then came the toad plague... Sure, it was actually a huge toad, it ate at least 14 people before being neutralized... ...And then the cooking oil poisoning... ...And the gas explosion... ...And the bus accident... ...And the...
Page 4
Wilma-But come on! How many are still there? Fuck!
Ear-Beeeep!
Peskaito-Well... Relax, relax... I was just enumerating them... Let's see, there are actually some people left in Vietnamek...!
Peskaito-Exactly there's a bunch of natives devoted to the shepherdry of milk sea breams and the cultivation of wild sweet potatoes... A very risky cultivation, by the way...
Wilma-Ah, finally! So there are some! How many, can you tell me?
Peskaito-Well... Lemme think... There's left... Suso, Venancio, Pacorro... There's also Rufo there... Segis... No, not that one, he croaked when the bus thing happened... And...
Wilma-A handful? There are just a handful? What about the balls?
Peskaito-Yea, yea! The balls are there, you needn't worry about that...
Page 5
Wilma-Good, then let's go to my parent's house. We'll come up with a suitable plan there!
Some time later...
*The Pill Corporation's logo is a "G" because "Pill" = "Gragea"
Wilma-Well, we've been gathering all the space warrior's technology we could find: the energy measurement systems, Rolex and Nappalm's capsules, Rolex' armoured uniform, their matches boxes, etc...
Wilma-Now we'll see what we do with all this...
Chiqrilin-A carnival?
Page 6
Chiqrilin-Well, for the moment we know we won't be doing any carnival.
Text on box: Tools. Especially heavy.
Wilma-We must research thoroughly how these capsules work. Maybe we could use them to go to Vietnamek... They're in the garage...
Wilma-For the time being, we've calibrated their power and energetic comsuption. It's very high...!
Wilma-We'll start looking for a key code that allows us to translate all its software and program it according to our needs. In the meantime we'll proceed with a scrupulous upkeeping of the mechanisms.
Goku-What if we try simply operating all the switches to see what they do? Wouldn't it be easier?
Page 7
Wilma-Thank you, thank you so much for your expert advice...! Now we know which button we didn't have to push!
Wilma-C'mon, let's keep trying, we have a ship and 37 buttons left!
Sakarin-This guy would be able to find the self-destruct button in a Coke vending machine...!
Wilma-WELL, FROM NOW ON WE'LL DO IT MY WAY! ANY DISCREPANCIES?
Someone-No, not at all!
Chiqrilin-What about those gadgets? You guessed how they work yet?
Wilma-They're energetic measurers, I'm still deciphering their metric codes.
Page 8
Chiqrilin-The energy unit seems to be a blinking triangular thingie. Look, if I scope on Yajorobais, it shows a cipher of 3 triangles...
Yajorobais-Is that a lot?
Chiqrilin-Can't say for sure... Now the plant at the corner shows 5...
Wilma-Well, it's evident we still have a lot to learn about their technology. [Heh, heh...][Stop touching things, fuck...!]
Several hours later...
Wilma-I got it! I deciphered their codes, now I can understand how it works!
Wilma-The seat's equipped with a vital support system for long travels, the command set is totally manual and is located above the pilot's body.
Chiqrilin-And that square box there is the screen generator?
Wilma-No, it's the portable fridge... Be careful where you put your chubby fingers on!
Page 9
Wilma-I'm gonna check the ship systems. Get out, this is monoplace.
Chiqrilin-And why you?
Wilma-Because I'm cuter!
Chiqrilin-Ah, sure...
Wilma-Did you ever...! How do I always manage to hang around guys with the intelligence quotient of a clam? Oh well...
Wilma-...I'll perform a general checking!
Wilma-Uh huh, the tank needs some fuel... Lucky thing I suceeded in deciphering this advanced form of language...!
Wilma-In this house we don't lack a thing. I'll do a flight test as soon as it's ready to take off.
Text on container: Acme - Rocket Fuel
Page 10
Wilma-Already full!
Wilma-Very well... Programming the starting sequence... We'll start smoothly, with a short flight first...!
Chiqrilin-Sure thing, it did fly away, yeah...!
Goku-Say... My method was faster...
Page 11
Wilma-This isn't logical! What... what could have failed?
Wilma-AAAAHG! The fuel! The feeding system used a different blend! How didn't I think about analyzing it?
Wilma-All! All is lost now! There aren't any more ships now! What are we gonna do? [BWAAAAA]
Chiqrilin-Seems like things are getting hard...
Someone-Listen, not everything's lost yet! If any of you accompanies me, I'll show you something that might be of interest!
All-Mr. Pompon!
Pompon-Yes. Now that Godh isn't around, I get too bored, so I came down here to lend you a helping hand!
Page 12
Pompon-I know a place where an object Godh told me about lies... It could be an space ship, but I'm not sure...
Pompon-...If any of you comes to check it, we'll clear any doubts...
Pompon-Well... I see we have a volunteer...
Pompon-So, get on... Calm down, it has some good suspension... Ha, ha, ha, ha...
Pompon-We're finally there!
Wilma-Dang, I hadn't made myself comfortable yet.
Page 13
Pompon-It was this place where Godh arrived in when he was a little kid...
Wilma-S... Say... It's helluva cold in here!
Pompon-What we're looking for is over that slope... It could be an space ship, but I'm not that sure...
Wilma-Let us see...!
Wilma-Listen... your name isn't Forrest Gump, is it?
Wilma-Sheesh, it must be the ship that brought Godh along from Vietnamek! He probably was evacuated when the climate change happened...!
Pompon-Yeah, his parents surely decided to keep him safe sending him here...
Page 14
Wilma-Looks like the systems are in good condition, but I'll have to work on them from scratch...
Pompon-Godh told me this "box" obeyed him. It should activate by voice...
Wilma-We'll see... Let's try. Activate systems!
Wilma-Good, it works! Godh must have reprogrammed it to the local language! I'll arrange a flight test!
Wilma-Listen! Check all systems, and if everything's in order, fly off to the closest planet! Now!
Page 15
Wilma-But... it's... going away!!
Pompon-Elementally... The ship's software is conceived to avoid misunderstanding of the commands... a security measure. If you wanted it to take you along, you should have specified it...
Wilma-Good... So good... And I guess it, after following my orders accordingly, is right now on the closest planet! Right?
Wilma-So how can we get it back?
Text on mace: Very heavy
Pompon-Well... He, he, he... We might need... An space ship... Uagh! Ouch! Ow! Uack!
Page 16
Back home...
Wilma-BWAAAAAAAAH!
Bird-Fuck!
Wilma-We'll never be able to go to Vietnamek!! I feel so bad, so miserable, and there are only dumbasses around me!!
Goku-(Who's she referring to?)
Someone-Relax, dear. They told me about your problem, and I think I can help you...
Wilma-Dad!
Chiqrilin-The owner of the Pill Corporation! The most notorious scientist in the world!
Yajorobais-Let me see, let me see...!
Brief-What? How can you say I'm testin' the whore? Show more respect, young one. We shall begin to work right now on my space project...
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While work starts, at some bottomless distance from Earth...
Frigo world! The space warriors fortress...
Doctor-Yeah, he was so beaten up that instead of putting the medicine into his body, we put him into the medicine.
Text on bottle: Syrup.
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Vegetal-I barely escaped with my life... It sucks!
Vegetal-That Kagarrot asshole is dangerous! [Ow, I got one nail broken!]
Eggplant-Well, well! How do you like this? It's none other than commander Vegetal beaten to a pulp! [He he he]
Vegetal-Do me a favour, Eggplant, and refrain from messing with me! Ok?
Eggplant-Oh, come on, great hero, everyone's talking about your great feat in the Earth...
Eggplant-It seems it was a real slaughter... of Puyajins... heh, heh. A wind-up automata would have done a better performance...
Vegetal-Is that so? Is that so? Then why doesn't mister Eggplant tell me what should I do facing a planet riddled of dangerous madmen with wild power and totally irreducible! What would mister Eggplant do, huh?
Centurion-[Where did I hear about that people before?]
[br]Posted on: October 02, 2006, 03:25:59 AM_________________________________________________Page 19
Vegetal-What about mister Frigo? He assigned this mission to me. He'll be angry!
Vegetal-He'll send me to the latrines!
Eggplant-C'mon, kid, don't be so hard on yourself. He'll probably see the funny side of it, as he always does...
Eggplant-Precisely it was him who sent me to look for you...
Vegetal-Judas!
Box: On the Earth, due to relativity and snob stuff like that, time quickly flies by... The building start two weeks ago already...
Box: ...The supply of building material arrives non-stop...
Box: ...And some mistakes on concepts are corrected...
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And at last, the work ends...
Wilma-Well, people, this stuff's finished now! Let's have some look at it!
Wilma-After I show you the whole thing, we'll designate those who shall go to Vietnamek...
Chicha-[But you're so cute!]
Wilma-This is the airlock, with the suits ready. In this floor there's no more than an store room and the maintenance controls for the engines...
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Wilma-This floor is the living compartment, with the beds, the kitchen, the W.C... The crew must be three people at most, or else, there wouldn't be enough toilet paper...
Wilma-But that's small talk compared with the true core of the ship...
Wilma-The navigation bridge! You control everything from here. Before the taking off, the selected ones will learn and get used to the controls...
Wilma-This artifact uses a high efficiency fuel, so it'll be able to go to Vietnamek and return without any filling up. The complete travel will take a couple of months, in on-board time...
Wilma-The plan goes as follows: three of us will go there, they'll request the balls diplomaticly and will ask for the wish...!
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Wilma-Now we'll only have to find three volunteers for the mission...
Wilma-By the way, Soson Goku, thanks for not touching anything, it was very thoughful of you...
Goku-Yes, well... Whenever you see fit, you hand me the keys, ok? [Tee hee hee]
Wilma-Oh, of couse... In short, as we're talking about the volunteers, I'll go of course as the chief of the mission...
Chicha-Say, dear, have you seen Chun Gohan?
Wilma-Chun Gohan?
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Ship-Caution, the taking off sequence has just started! Back off from the launching site!
Wilma-I have a terrible feeling!
Chiqrilin-Wilma, wait! Hand me the keys for Soson Goku!
Ship-The crew has a minute to hold tight to their seats before the ignition starts!
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Ship-Only 45 seconds are left until the ignition takes place!
Gohan-I... was just looking at the buttons so colourful and... [They were so round and tempting...]
Wilma-My fate, it's my fate...
Chiqrilin-Listen, Wilma, the outside gate is closed, what is it that...?
Wilma-Nothing, forget it... No turning back down... Come on, hold tight to your seat...
Ship-Caution, 10 seconds count-down!
Ship-9...8...7...6...
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Ship-3...2...1..
Wilma-Now you might experience some kind of pressure on you during the take off, don't worry, it's a common thing...!
Ship-Ignition!
Brief-How weird...! The ignition should be instantaneous... [And talking about weird things, I've been running for 10 seconds and I'm barely two meters away...]
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Chicha-Gee, my widdle boy! He's being taken to the ignote unfathomable space!
Goku-Uh? Whatever did'ja say...?
Ulom-Fuck... She sure talks as a teacher...
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Ship-Artificial gravity activated, the crew can move away from their seats now...
Wilma-"Can move..." Gljglj...!
Wilma-F... Fucking damned pressure...
Chiqrilin-Agfs... Chun Gohan? Were you in time to hold tight to your seat?
Chiqrilin-No... It seems you weren't.
Wilma-Well, all this was too sudden. Let's review things... It could have been worse... It could have been Soson Goku the one here now, but instead I'll spend two months with his son and Chiqrilin...
Wilma-BWAAAA!!
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Wilma-Oh well, since we're already flying and there's no helping it, I'll show you how the equipment works as we go along...
Wilma-...And then, as this travel will be very long and I don't want to see your faces everyday during two months, for my mental sanity's sake, we'll proceed to hibernate ourselves.
Someone-And what is this?
Someone-And this?
Someone-Ops, I broke it!
Someone-Say, Wilma, what was this for?
Wilma-Oh, God Oh, God Oh, God Oh, God
Someone-Come on, Wilma, it's not that bad... Get outta the emergency capsule...
Box: Meanwhile... Somewhere on the Earth...
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Someone-Doctor! How's the work going?
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Gore-I'm in a very basic phase of the project... But so far so good...
Gore-Where have you been in these last months?
Gohan-I had some matters to settle... I gathered info on my own... I don't trust you little robot-spy...
Gore-My "little robot" never left the individuals for 4 or 5 years, you should not worry about that... In fact, I just sent it after Soson Goku's child... I guess his genes will be more useful for my project...
Gohan-Any news from your stray sheep?
Gore-#VIII came out defective and it got involved with a loser*, I can't be bothered to look out for them...
Gore-My last models, which I've been working on until recently, are much more versatile and powerful... I don't think they'll trouble me at all.
*See D.F. #05 (if you don't have it, get it now!)
Editors-Haw haw haw.
Arrow: Yes, it's them...!
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Let's leap into time and space again (shoot, I'm dizzy!)
Someone-Let me get this straight... Did you neglect the mission's success while you were looking for some balls?
Vegetal-But it's just...
Feyo-Yes, you already said it, they weren't your run-of-the-mill balls... So what were them? Chinese balls?
Vegetal-Alright, I'll tell you... they were the Kehu-ron balls, 8 plus the white one, which after being gathered would grant a wish to the user, whatever it is... But the balls are now lost and I've wasted my mission for nothing...
Frigo-Well, I must say I find this matter about the balls really interesting. I'll send our astropaths to seek their traces in the whole galaxy. We'll find out their origin and we'll use that secret to our army's advantage. I'd appreciate it if you tell me everything you know...
Vegetal-Good!
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Box: A while after...
Text on door: Isolated cell for dangerous lunatics
Vegetal-I swear I say the truth! You must believe me! I'm not craaazy!
Frigo-Of course I believe Vegetal. His story confirms the old legends about the magical balls in Vietnamek. If I don't take him with us is so he doesn't place his own interests before ours again.
Frigo-Worry not, my faithful Feyo, as soon as we get to Vietnamek, we'll get all the info about the balls from them... and then we'll get their livers. LET'S GO!
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Maple Snow
October 02, 2006, 03:35 AM
Thanks, and hey come check out my scans sometime. and is there anyone doing these scans if not I might think about doing them.
leecherboy
October 02, 2006, 03:39 AM
Alas, no-one is scanlating Dragon Fall at the moment. I'm so unlucky... :darn
But if you wanna do it, you'll be more than welcome! :)
leecherboy
October 10, 2006, 02:30 AM
"Here's a translation. I hope this isn't Chris' translation..." (sorry, I just wanted to do a "I hope this isn't Chris' ..." joke xD)
I won't comment on the cover page, because you probably know more about it than myself...
So here's the raw:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/n8uoo2
Following the overall Alien theme, Gohan's quote in page 10 is taken straight from the movie.
Featuring Trivia Stuff #5: Ridli Scott, yeah. He was one of the characters created by Cels Piñol for his "Fanhunter" sagas (comics about a resistance group against the anime & manga opression). This one is Nacho Fernandez's version, that looks quite better than the original. As he says, he did appear in Dragon Fall before, in chapter 05. (There, Moenova. Happy now? xDD)
And now, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 15 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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Octopuses are cephalopod animals, from the same family as the squids, which possess unique traits such as having eight limbs, changing its color and squirting an ink jet when they get angry. Ah! And they also can't be cooked in tomato broth. After these precise news, I just want to add: In the boundless space, no one can hear you scream, luckily.
Invasion!!
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Explorer Vehicle: "Wilma-I"
Crew: An unlucky woman and two dumb guys
Destiny: Where St. Peter lost his halo
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Text on sign: Storage
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Wilma-Jeez... Looks like we arrived at our destiny...
Wilma-Well, let's see, let's get busy!
Wilma-Delouse and dress yourselves, and go have breakfast! I want the crew on the bridge in an hour!
Chiqrilin-Shoot... it's not like we're in the army!
Gohan-Yeah, that's true, we're just three of us here...
Wilma-Don't argue, we'll keep some order and discipline in here, you men lack it badly! And be careful with the W.C. lid!
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On Earthie...
Brief-Let us see, I think we have some little trouble...
Brief-The space ship took off very suddenly and without performing a previous check on all systems. Our computer has revealed the errors that could show up after some time... and two weeks have gone by already!
Brief-The errors predicted by our computer would affect the backup electric supply, the artificial gravity, the ventilation system, the communications, and what is worse, the Virtua Fighter machine on board...!
Brief-Even though all this is conditioned to a short-circuit of some pack of generators located in the most hidden spot in the ship circuitery... However, the safe thing to do is to contact them and warn them so they take steps...
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Bridge of the "Nos..." Eh, of the "Wilma I"...
Wilma-Alright! Checking all systems, we couldn't do it before the taking off...!
Someone-Radar system -GZZZD-....
Someone-Communications active.
Someone-Navigation control correct.
Someone-Air conveyor at full power...
Someone-Microwave working.
Someone-Hey, stop eating pizza and keep checking...!
Sounds: Beep Beep
Wilma-Hmmm? Where is Vietnamek?
Chiqrilin-Uh... you should know... right?
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Gohan-This is not our system!
Wilma-Man... that goes without saying...
Chiqrilin-[We'd be kinda screwed!]
Wilma-It's weird... We've been awakened no more than a month ago since we took off from Earth...
Wilma-And now it shows we've been diverted a few degrees from our course; we're in a dead zone...
Wilma-Wait a sec, wait a sec...!
Wilma-The computer can answer all our questions...! Let's consult it!
Gohan-How can you do the "O" with your big toe?
Chiqrilin-Will I ever suceed at flirting?
Wilma-To ask the questions... and NOT that sort of questions... you use the binary connection keyboard...! Ok?
Gohan-Ah!
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Wilma-It'll be better if I input the queries myself...
Side note: Ah, we're sorry for the ones who hoped to see Wilma in underclothes like in the original manga.
Computer-Answer to first question: the ship has changed its course and waked the crew prematurely following the emergency procedure 08!
Computer-Answer to second question: we obey a protocol for emergency situations... A S.O.S transmission was intercepted and the rescue sequence was triggered...
Chiqrilin-Whose was the idea of programming that nonsensical procedure?
Wilma-It was my daddy, who is sorta humanitarian...! And sorta <cursing>...! [Ok?]
Wilma-Come on, let's finish this as soon as we can...
Wilma-Let's see, play the S.O.S transmission from that poor tormented soul...!
Voice-SO, C'MON!! ANY SON OF A <cursing> IS GONNA RESCUE ME <cursing> ALREADY...? (DAMMIT...)
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Wilma-Ehem... It seems the poor guy is going through a hard time...
Wilma-Ok, let's clear things. The computer guided the ship to the original source of the transmission, so...
Wilma-We're in front of the planet the transmission came from!
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In a matter of minutes...
Computer-Preparing systems for the landing sequence!
Wilma-Everybody man your stations! Fasten your seatbelts! Pray to Saint Joseph!
Someone-W... what... what am I doing in the next room?
Someone-Say... I guess some repairs will be in place...
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Wilma-Well, let's go outside... According to the computer, the air is breathable...
Wilma-And the temperature's normal, so let's move without fear...!
Wilma-I... I guess my daddy overlooked a little detail...
Octopus-Help, a monster from another planet!
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Chiqrilin-Wilma! Are you alright? We'll go down right now!
Wilma-Heh, I'd like to know how...
Chiqrilin-Well... We're here now...
Gohan-By the way... have you thought how we'll go up later?
Wilma-[And they can actually fly...!]
Wilma-Well, enough, you must know I just had contact with a being from another world!
Wilma-It was a creature that gazed at me with menacing eyes and a creepy fierce look...!
Wilma-...Despite its repulsive appearance and their vicious purposes, the critter wasn't barely this tall, so we ought not to have trouble to finish it!
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Wilma-...If there was ever a need to... Of course...!
Wilma-He, he!
Gohan-Wilma... look!
Chiqrilin-We're sorrounded!
Wilma-What?
Chiqrilin-What if we say we came here to evangelize them...?
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Wilma-W... Who are you?
Oct-We could ask you the same.
Oct-Yup!
Oct-Yeah!
Oct-Something's for sure, they're alien invaders!
Oct-Yup!
Oct-They're here to dominate our pacific free planet!
Oct-Man, "free" is a way of putting it...
Oct-Yeah, well, the truth is... With that despotic queen...
Oct-...And those repressing cops with weapons and quite some nerve...
Oct-But first things first!
Oct-I have an idea, let's create a movement against the invaders!
Oct-Yeah! And Donovan will be the leader!
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Sculder-Well, ok, back off please!
Mully-We're special agents assigned to those kind of situations! Nobody interfere!
Sculder-Greetings in the name of my Government!
Wilma-Ah, good gracious, somebody who knows about diplomacy.
Someone-Wilma, look at those guys!
Sculder-Captain, you know, we want no witnesses!
Captain-Sir, yessir!
Wilma-WHAT?![br]Posted on: October 10, 2006, 03:29:40 AM_________________________________________________Page 19
Peskaito-(Mmm... This isn't any good!)
Peskaito-(When new pupils came, some time after the fight against Vegetal, and asked me to train them, I was fine with it...)
Peskaito-(...The only problem is...)
Peskaito-(...They destroyed my house for training, they ransacked my fridge and left me living in my car...!)
Peskaito-(...At least they accepted to sleep among the ruins...)
Yansha-I still think the fault was yours, for getting that loser resurrected!
Tarugo-Is that so? You lasted seconds without him!
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Octopussy queen palace...
Queen-So you came following a S.O.S petition...
Queen-In this world we want nothing from strangers... nor their help...
Wilma-Ah... So... So nice... Then... Can we go now? I promise not to tell about the slaughter your soldiers did with the bunch...
Queen-You think I'm stupid? You'll never leave this planet... I won't take the risk of the F.P.F meddling in our regime of prosperity and harmony...
Queen-Guards! Confine them in... the subterranian!
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Wilma-Well, that's it, it's over!! We didn't need to come, and now we're screwed like never before in the fucking comic!
Wilma-But the sure thing is that none of those charming hospitable thick heads sent the bloody signal...!! If I catch that unfortunate guy I'll give him reasons to call for help!
Someone-Must I understand you answered my transmission?
Wilma-What? Who are you?
Ridli-Sergeant of Marines Ridli Scott, veteran of Acheron, Montjuich and the Lazo Lila, currently active for the F.P.F (Federated Planets Federation). I was on a surveillance mission, when I got captured...
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Wilma-What? It was you who sent the transmission?
Ridli-Indeed, after I got stuck here I set my walkie-talkie at full power and tried my chances... [A trick from my times in Beirut...]
Wilma-He sent the signal with a... walkie-talkie?
Ridli-Well, kiddos, now that you're already here, explain your escape plan to me!
Chiqrilin-Euhhh?
Chiqrilin-No... We don't have a plan yet, all this just took us by surprise...
Ridli-Ah...!
Ridli-Ok...
Ridli-WHAT?
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Ridli-Isn't there any cursed escaple plan? We'll rot in here!!
Wilma-No! I don't wanna die like this! So far from my home!
Gohan-Say... I'm hungry, I'll knock and ask when we can eat here...
Octopus-Alarm, alarm! The prisoners escape!
Gohan-Listen, I wanted some sandwiches... [Dang!]
Ridli-Boy... You made me believe in Santa Claus again... Now, let's go get my stuff and scram off...!
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Octopus-The prisoners escaped from their cell along with the F.P.F prisoner!
Queen-Neutralize them! Cut their retreat, go and destroy their ship!
Chiqrilin-Reinforcements are coming!
Wilma-We must avoid them and get out of here!
Gohan-I'm hungry.
Ridli-I don't think we need to avoid them to get out of here, if you'll excuse me...
Ridli-Well, I've picked "my stuff". Now it's time to dance Rock & Roll.
Wilma-I thought you had come on a surveillance mission!
Ridli-Well, you never know what you will find in these worlds...
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Octopus-Halt! You won't go on!
Octopus-Hand your weapons and surrender.
Alvaro-[He, he, they call me Mr. Photocopies]
Nacho-[Make that "Mr. Lazy"]
Wilma-What a mess! It's a trap!
Ridli-Hmmm, we won't go down without a fight! (I always believed you were a fool, Scott... etc...)
Octopus-[Hey! You!]
Wilma-Eh... I'm sure there must be a way of getting out of here rather than in pieces, like the cheese... Ah, sure! Chun Gohan, come 'ere!
Gohan-Ok!
Wilma-Say, you're very hungry, right? Yet our ship has plenty of food! Ah, if we could ever make it to there! But...
Gohan-Is it?
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Octopus-So...? Do you give up?
Octopus-I... I don't like that look!
Oct1-Sir, the helmet-haired kid is looking at us with a hungry face!
Oct2-It's psychological warfare, don't give in!
Oct3-I'm... I'm giving in... somewhat...
Gohan-LET'S GO! TO THE SHIP!
Octopus-Hey!
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Wilma-I diddit, I diddit...!
Chiqrilin-Curses, he sure runs, he's hit the hyperspace!
Ridli-Shoot, how lame, no corpses nor blood!
Octopus-Y... Yes... Majesty... They're storming their way out.
Octopus-No... please... don't ask me to explain the details...
Octopus-Halt! Stop in the Octopussy queen's name!
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Octopus-H... HALT!
Octopus-HALT!
Octopus-HALT AT ONCE, FUCK!!
Wilma-Look, the ship is deep there!
Ridli-[Excuse me...]
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Wilma-The ship... is still in one piece!
Wilma-Chun Gohan! As you have that superpower, and as you can fly, could you reach us the door?
Gohan-Ok!
Wilma-Hey!
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Gohan-That's it, now you can reach the door! Right?
Octopus-Let's get them, blow their ship away!
Chiqrilin-Quick, Wilma, don't waste time, we have to try and ready the ship! They're coming in squads!
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Wilma-If the ship has gotten the slight imperfection, he'll pay it in kinds...!
Ridli-Come on, marines, stick your butt in there! I'll cover you!
Octopus-Activate the blow-to-smithereens ray!
Ridli-That's my specialty!
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Wilma-Looks like the navigation controls work, I'll have to start believing in miracles too!
Wilma-There's no time for a taking off sequence! Everybody get in, I'm hitting the ignition!
Ridli-To hell with all!
Wilma-Hyperspace!
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leecherboy
October 10, 2006, 02:32 AM
Here you are, another translation, faster than the time it'd take a cat with giant ears to solve wind-based puzzles (Visions)! :)
The raw's here:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/kwpn0s
Seems like in this chapter, other unknown visitors arrive, though I bet these don't come from any comic out there.
And for some reason, this chapter's title is the same as DF 14...
But now, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 16 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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After doing an "octopus party", our friends escape from the octopus planet and lose themselves in the procellous space. They'll find out that the best essence is always in the tiny bottles, or something like that.
Wilma, butched jobs deliverer
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Wilma-Shit!! After knocking over this junk, now we follow a ground level trajectory. We must recover verticality to exit the planet...!
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Chiqrilin-If we keep it straight we'll exit the planet the same...
Wilma-Yes, if a mountain doesn't get in our way!
Wilma-The worst of it all is, we can't stop to maneuvre! The crash would be extraordinary...!
Someone-Hey, gal, there's a pilot seat stuck into the floor down here...!
Octopus-Boy, I don't know about you, but this ground level flight is ticking me off...!
Queen-What? They managed to get on their ship and fleed! You're a bunch of inepts!
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Queen-And that guy went with them!
Queen-Those useless men... Go guess where they are now. If I were to meet them, I'm sure they wouldn't...
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Wilma-INCREDIBLE! The ship has withstood it! And the clash diverted it upwards!
Wilma-We're saved!
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Octopus-Majesty... Do you want us to follow them in mad pursuit?
Queen-Go to hell...!
Wilma-We're done for!
Wilma-All these hits screwed half of the ship's systems! Errors are everywhere!
Ridli-This girl sure has changes of heart.
Alvaro-Attention, attention! Since we've always had lots of Ibañez humour in this comic, we'll do now an Ibañez ending!*
Nacho-Relax, it's just an optional ending, but we couldn't resist doing something so topical and typical anymore!
*Francisco Ibañez is the author of the spanish comic "Mortadelo and Filemon". Every chapter in these end the same way as in the next page.
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Gohan-Dang, yet I'm still hungry, and I can't hold on, I'm about to start biting the chair...
Chiqrilin-Ah, okay, I'll take care of that! I'll cook a dish so good you'll lick your metacarpus...!
Wilma-What is it gonna be for you? C-4 with onion?
Ridli-No way... I can't stand onions...
Chiqrilin-Here you are, a succulent dish of pickled octopus with...
Wilma-OCTOPUS...! OCTOPUS...!!
Chiqrilin-But guys, I swear I didn't mean it as a joke... I didn't realize... I... I...!
Chiqrilin-DON'T BE MEAN!
Arrow: Canibal octopus from the Antares.
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Alvaro-And now, let's go back to normality...
Nacho-As far as it goes...
Gohan-Well, I'll go fetch something, I can't bear it anymore...
Chiqrilin-Can we go on with all those errors, Wilma?
Wilma-So... figures... after all, we might keep going without repairing it until we get to Vietnamek. The main power system is holding on, yet hardly. The most minimal tension difference could blow it.
Wilma-Let's keep it stable. Or else, we'd need to go outside to do the repairs and...
Ridli-[Eh-uh? Where did she say she's going...?]
Gohan-Listen... I only put an omelette inside the microwave and...
Wilma-Chiqrilin, honey... Can you help me with the spacesuit...?
Ridli-(Where did she say she's going?)
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Box: Sideral depths... Lame Space Military Station 9 of the F.P.F.*
Al-Admiral, we received a S.O.S transmission originated in the Tako planet (emitted days ago).
Arrow: Al, mix of vulcan, romulan, klingon and filipine
Ackbar-Kiko, Splok, look at this, it's from Ridli Scott!
Arrow: Ackbar, mix of octopus, sea bream and Popeye...
Ackbar-Seems like his surveillance mission on the Tako planet was a failure. We'll have to rescue him from there...
Kiko-Someone will have to go where no other man has gone...
Ackbar-That's what I guessed, so get your ship ready, Kiko. Yours is the responsibility to rescue Scott.
*Federated Planets Federation... In case you missed issue 15... What the fuck, if you missed it, get it, lazy!
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Kiko-I can't believe it, Splock, action, after such a long time!
Kiko-The Enterprisa and I have been through a lot... I can't wait to get there, Factor 5 mister Zulu!
*Enterprisa (Enterprise): "prisa" means "hurry"
Box: Frigo world...
Warder-I will mnot b'imng dhe food do a madmamn agaimn... eva'!
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Vegetal-Turn the alarm off and ease the garrison or I'll turn your sight off forever! Heard me?
Lucas- Y-yes, sir, whatever you command.
Vegetal-And now, give me the location of Frigo's ship...
Vegetal-Quick!
Lucas-Y...Yes, sure. Let's... let's see... All points out that the ship is located near the position of the planet Vietnamek. They'll arrive in some hours...
Vegetal-Darn it! There's no time to lose! Those usurpers won't snatch my balls away! [See you later, Lucas!*]
Lucas-I wonder... who might dare?
* Lucas is the spanish name of Daffy Duck. And "Hasta luego, Lucas" ("See you later, Lucas") is as funny a phrase in Spain as "see you later, alligator" in english.
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Vegetal-Quick, there's no time to lose!
Vegetal-I won't let them take my prize! I discovered the balls' secret! They belong rightfully to me!
Vegetal-Even if this means to face my superior, Mr. Frigo, I'll do what I must... From now on, I have no bosses...!
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Wilma-Dammit! Who told me to travel with those two clumsy guys? Well... nobody did, actually... And to top it off, in the darkness I fell again through the hole in the bridge...! Ow, my rear...!
Wilma-Let's see... I think it was around here...
Chiqrilin-Wilma, the scanner detected a space device closing in on our position! What do we do?
Wilma-I see it. It's still far. We might be in time to dodge it if I fix this quick...
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Wilma-But come on! What the heck is this? Who's throwing toys in the fucking middle of nowhere? Those Toys'R'Us guys certainly spread themselves!
Wilma-Boys, I'll finish fixing this and I'll bring you a gift!
Box: Minutes later...
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Wilma-"This" is the space device. I wonder what is a space toy doing around the space depths...
Gohan-Does it have sounds and blinks?
Chiqrilin-"Shipyards from origin world". That brand is unknown to me...
Ridli-Careful, explosives might have been hidden inside! I'd get it...
Chiqrilin-It does seem there's something inside...!
Chiqrilin-But c'mon, guys... Talk about chickens!
Chiqrilin-AH!
Chiqrilin-Come, look at this! It's not a toy ship!
Ridli-Yeah, I knew it all along...
Wilma-Are you going, Chun Gohan?
Gohan-My ass!
Wilma-Shoot... and he seemed stupid!
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Chiqrilin-Look what fell when I shook it! The ship is for real!
Commander-And my headache is, too, doesn't it kill you...?
Wilma-And where did these things come from? From Smurfland?
Commander-Miss, please...!
Commander-As a matter of fact, we come here looking for asylum and temporal refuge.
Commander-We're the Littlenauts, from a weird parallel dimension, the Littleverse. We've been suffering the chase of the Baron Bhinge and his mutt-soldiers...! We just need a refuge to recover our strength...
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Commander-I'm commander Ranntanplan, chief of the group...
Robot-I'm Squintron and this one down here is Minimatron (no, we aren't dance collections), we're the robots on board...
Girl-I'm Puppet, the cute girl on board, and I have the hots for the commander...
Commander-Please!
Robot2-I =tic= am Bugghy =tic= and my partner's =tic= name is Goodyear. He =tic= doesn't speak too much, but he packs some =tic= punch.
Chiqrilin-What do we do with them, Wilma? Will we apply the rescue protocol to them too?
Wilma-Sure, why not? I don't think their needs are so big. We can cover them without trouble!
Commander-Very funny!
Wilma-Oh well, the ship is up and running. With our current course, we'll make it to Vietnamek in a couple of days. We have to get ready, accomodate this people anywhere...
Chiqrilin-I'll go bring the cookies box...!
Commander-Hey!
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Meanwhile, on Earth...
Brief-Well, I finished the back-up second ship...
Ulom-Fu... Fuck!
Brief-In anticipation of any mistake, this ship will go and meet the another one, so it was developed to reach the maximum power and speed...
Brief-This time, the crew will consist of me and Soson Goku, for whose sake a training system has been conceived inside the ship...
Brief-But could someone take these handcuffs off him fucking already?
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And another launch happens...
Someone-Good luck!
Ulom-Say... what a feeling of Deja Vu, huh?
Lancha-I hope this crap finishes soon, this is getting tiresome...
Alvaro-[Now, now. What about the issues we can keep on doing?]
Nacho-[You're right...]
Yajorobais-And what will Soson Goku's training consist of?
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Brief-Yes. So at the same time you do exercise, you reload the generator batteries.
Brief-I figured the system while watching my hamster... The greatest discoveries come when you watch the simples things in your life, what they say it's true!
Brief-At this speed, we'll encounter the "Wilma I" in a week.
Brief-You keep running, you know, 8 hours per day.
Box: In the another ship, the crew tries to go back to normality...
Wilma-The whole telecommunications circuit has gone to waste, we'll have to use the capsule's one!
Wilma-Could someone check if the capsule controls even work...?
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Wilma-I repeat... Could someone...?
Gohan-Tee, hee, hee... Got ya in the middle of your flight...!
Panel: Ejection ON
Wilma-Thanks... Too kind of you...
Wilma-I WANT MY MOMMY!
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Chiqrilin-What's that about Wilma going away in the capsule!?
Gohan-Well... I...
Ridli-Is that bad?
Chiqrilin-She's moving away at a constant speed! She's now 15 kilometers away, a rescue is impossible!
Ridli-Can't we maneuvre the ship?
Chiqrilin-The controls were so broken that Wilma settled the course and removed all the power, we can't veer around...!
Chiqrilin-The only hope left is that the capsule had autonomy to maneuvre and come back here... But only Wilma knows about that...
Chiqrilin-There's no choice... We'll keep going to Vietnamek...!
Ridli-Why does that name sound familiar?
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Wilma-Let's see...
Wilma-Let us recap...
Wilma-Is it possible, or even plausible, that what I think is happening to me is actually happening to me...?
Wilma-YEEEEEEEEES!!
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Wilma-Good grief... There's still some energy supply... I'll see if I can maneuvre to go back to the ship... But I'm not used to the capsule's panel yet...
Wilma-Well... I have time enough to learn... [Dang!]
Ridli-So, Vietnamek... Now I remember why it sounded familiar...
Ridli-Explorers from the F.P.F have already gone there on surveillance missions like mine...
Ridli-...And as far as we know, none made it back! They didn't even manage to communicate with base!
Ridli-Nothing!
Ridli-We have to be ready for anything... We musn't drop our guard. The less time we stay there, the better...
Minimatron-Oh, yeah, we'll step into action, commander!
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While they get prepared in that ship, other space devices advance...
Brief-Well, enough for today...
Brief-Don't be like that, I'm tired too! I've been counting your laps and I'm all beaten...
Vegetal-I'll get the balls, this time they must be mine...!
Vegetal-Either I grab them or I rip mine off!
Wilma-Let's see... This one was the ignition... No, shit, it's the lighter! Let's try this one...
Wilma-The radio's totally apart and I can't put it together again... Bwaaah!
Wilma-Relax! I must concentrate!
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A couple of days have gone by...
Someone-That there is Vietnamek!
Someone-At last our travel ended!
Ridli-No sign yet of that chick?
Chiqrilin-No trace of her... We'll have to land without her... I'd like to know where she is...
Chiqrilin-Good grief, there we go. Brace yourselves, turbulences are coming...!
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Chiqrilin-Er... Now that I think about it... Seems Wilma forgot that the ship had to perform the last maneuvre...
Ridli-Why does it need to perform it...?
Chiqrilin-To avoid THIS!
Someone-'Coulda been killed!
Gohan-Look... Wilma's chair is not stuck in the upper floor anymore...
Chiqrilin-No... It's now stuck in the ceiling...
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Chiqrilin-Well, at least we mustn't worry now about the height the door's at...
Ridli-Good, I'm ready to go out...
Commander-We'll do some exploring too! Go forth, Goodyear!
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Ridli-But geez! Who is that dwarf? Buzz Lightyear?
Chiqrilin-I hope it at least reports if it finds something...!
Commander-Goodyear has the mission of exploring and not taking part, he'll come back soon with the data on this planet!
Chiqrilin-We already got them... We're a hell and a half away, without Wilma and without any friggin' idea on what to do...!
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Not too far from there...
Soldier-The warriors came back from their last incursion...
Frigo-Good... That makes 4 out of the 9 balls ours... All is coming along just fine...
Frigo-Once we have all the balls... The omnimode power will be at our hands!
Predator-...The omniwhat power...?
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leecherboy
October 16, 2006, 02:29 AM
Well, another translation, not as hard as getting the javelin and the golden armor to defeat those Red Arremer badasses!
About the cover, we're getting a sentai-theme here! :)
Here's the raw:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/38c2iv
And about the chapter... There's really nothing to add about the translation.
So well, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 17 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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New names for this chapter:
Prf. Bito (Dr. Brief): nothing special here, I guess
Apedreator (Predator): "apedreador" would mean "stonethrower"
Dodotia (Dodoria): "dodot" is a well-known bloomers brand
Zafion (Zargon): "zafio" means "rude", so "zafion" would be "a very rude one"
Gñ (Ginyu): this is a sound effect for effort
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Vegetal wanted to score some nice grill at the beach, but Soson Goku (who is somewhat dense, truth be told) insists on finding the balls to ask for a pineapple-peach ice cream as a wish. He's so silly...
Go! Go! Power...!
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Ridli-What happened here?
Chiqrilin-Maybe some hooligans' victory celebration?
Commander-Minimatron detected traces of firearm energy... The slaughter has been recent...!
Ridli-Hey! My search team signals on my radar... It comes from those hills... It's my partners! [What do my ears hear?]
Ridli-Come on, we'll solve the mystery and report back to the F.P.F!
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Ridli-Let's run towards the hills!
Chiqrilin-Hey... don't be so hasty, I'm short-legged!
Ridli-Ok, let's get in, we'll assure our position and...
Chiqrilin-Cut the crap, marine, we're not The Dirty Dozen...!
Gohan-Hey, Chiqrilin, look, I'm mister Discolo!
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Ridli-Very well, I'll enter head-on! Hold on, boys, I'm coming...!
Soldier1-Peace, brother! What brings your karma over here?
Soldier2-Hey, guys, if it isn't sergeant Scott!
Soldier3-Yea... I shoulda suspected it, I'm getting bad vibes...
Chiqrilin-But trash that, sicko!
Gohan-Dang!
Ridli-But what the fuck are you doing, bunch of junkies!!?
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Soldier-Mister Harkoñen, we bring the fifth ball!
Feyo-Good, throw it to me and resume the search, Mr. Frigo wants us to be quick on our feet!
Soldier-But by our good Lord! Didn't you notice those balls are like watermelons?
Feyo-Ow... Guh... Ow... Ouch!
Soldier2-He sure is quick on his feet, I'll say.
Predator-Well, that's enough, we have lots to do, I'll go out with the incursion group to the new target right now!
Predator-Mr. Frigo is in a hurry, Vegetal's coming this way and might cause trouble!
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Ridli-Well, guys, I'll stay here, I must re-educate these dummies and contact with the F.P.F. "Your road roams through a different path than mine".
Chiqrilin-Well, we will use the ship's ball-scanner to begin our search...
Wilma-T...The proximity alarm!
Wilma-Another ship...! Another ship from the Pill Corp.!
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Bito-Attention, calling the occupant in the Pill Corp Capsule I. Professor Bito here.
Wilma-What!? Dad!! It can't be! Help me, I only have 3 hours of air left!
Bito-Listen, girl. Do you still have propelling power?
Wilma-Y...Yes, there's still some...!
Bito-Very good, I opened the hatch B and I'm placing myself in a side position, try and enter through it...!
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Bito-Wilma, dear, be careful in here, this is set at Zero-G!
Wilma-Dad! This is so marvelous...!
Wilma-I was so scared! How come you're here? Who else is with you?
Goku-Hey! You rescued her already?
Wilma-I'm going back to my capsule!! I'm going back...!!
Bito-Come on, girl, don't be silly or I'll cut your allowance!
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Vietnamek...
Chiqrilin-Let's see, according to the ball-scanner the ball closest to us is located south-eastwards.
Chiqrilin-Yet besides, here it shows there are 5 balls together in the same place farther to the west, that's funny...
Commander-Let's go towards that ball nearby, there might still be villagers there...!
Chiqrilin-Geez! What's wrong? We aren't gonna chew 70 kilometers on foot having a vehicle just here! Are we?
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Village of Navatalgordek...*
Villager-It's terrible!
Villager-We're in grave danger! We have been receiving emergency calls from neighbouring villages before completely losing contact with them!
Village-We just know the arrival of some strangers was announced and then a destruction orgy blasted them, and it all ends there!
Village-We must be prepared!
*Navatalgordo is a spanish village
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Villager-Mister mayor! Some strangers have arrived in the village!
Mayor-The strangers! The strangers!
Chiqrilin-Ehem... Merry folks... We are travellers who have come here looking for a certain object... If you could lend us a...
Chiqrilin-[...Watering can?]
Chiqrilin-S...Something tells me we have no fan club here at all...!
Chiqrilin-Come on, run!
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Someone-Very good! Target on sight!
Someone-Ready for incursion!
Predator-You know what to do once we get there...! Right to the central building!
Villager-Sir... More strangers... That way!
Mayor-Good, now they'll see! Us being vegetarian and pacifists doesn't mean we are idiots! Ready for counterattack!
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Predator-Very good, now, massive attack!
Chiqrilin-Hey, look, all hell is breaking loose there!
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Apedreator-I'm Apedreator, servant of Mr. Frigo, master of countless worlds! We seek the magic ball that is in your possession!
Mayor-We're responsible for that sacred object, rennouncing to it would be a dishonour!
Apedreator-Yeah, I know, just what the previous five mayors told me!
Mayor-Eh... I think we can live with it...!
Warrior-You can cut to the chase now, boss, we have the sixth ball!
Apedreator-Good, you go back to the ship with it, we'll go to our next target!
Warrior-Got it!
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Vegetal-Well, well, well...! Thanks for handing me my first ball, this present will make me reconsider my initial thought of erasing you all from the map!
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Someone-Blimey, I didn't think I'd see you again this soon...!
Vegetal-You!
Eggplant-Seems like you're now facing Mr. Frigo... Good, that's my chance to fight and sweep you.
Vegetal-So that's your idea... Very nice, let's see how well you fare.
Vegetal-If you want this ball you'll have to come get it...
Vegetal-Eggplant...
Box: Meanwhile, in a place we all know...
Octopus-Majesty, here are allies from the F.P.F.
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Queen-Well, well, if it isn't the brilliant agents from the F.P.F in one of their usual "missions of peace"!
Kiko-Indeed... We have no intention of starting hostilities, we just came looking for...
Queen-You have not!? Of course, good old F.P.F guys never start hostilities; they just storm through the planet wiping it all to get their agents!!*
Queen-This is war! You hear? It's war!!
Kiko-...Get us up, Scotty...
Frigo-What!? Vegetal already arrived!? Darn it, it's too soon!
*Issues 15 and 16... Go get them, fuck!!
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Feyo-Wait a sec, there's a chance to stop Vegetal on his tracks; the Ranger Special Forces!
Frigo-Sounds like Chuck Norris to me...
Feyo-I'm talking about the Commander Gñ's special operations squad! Their combined force has made them the best combat unit in our army, they'll eliminate that rebel!
Frigo-Hmm... Well... I don't know... Vegeta is a Puyajin, and those are not your usual enemies...
Feyo-Yes, well, I know they have two tails, but that won't pose any problem!
Frigo-Agreed then... Call my military chiefs Zafion and Dodotia, let them bring Commander Gñ!
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Far from there...
Someone-Almiral Kiko, we received some signals coming from the faraway world of Vietnamek, it's Ridli Scott...
Kiko-What? What's he doing there now? I hope he has a good explanation!
Kiko-It's his fault a serious diplomatic incident just happened!
Frigo-Well, no time for further explaining, Vegetal already arrived and he's ready for anything!
Gñ-Worry not, we'll take care of it immediately!
Frigo-Just a warning... I won't accept a failure, though if you fail while fighting Vegetal, my opinion on the matter will be the last thing you'll have to worry about...
Feyo-Bah, please, boss, you're overestimating him!
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Vegetal-So well? Giving up now, piece of vegetable with a snout? [Fuck, it stings...!]
Eggplant-Wake up already, old friend, my orders are to keep you here at any cost. [Fuck, you bet...!]
Vegetal-Very well, then this is my cost...!
Vegetal-Your vital constants!
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Eggplant-Ya' kidding?
Eggplant-No... Seems like the man was dead serious.
Chiqrilin-One of the Vietnamek balls...! Finally this is starting to get anywhere!
Gohan-And... you saw who's beside it?
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Chiqrilin-Vegetal!! For how long have you been here?
Gohan-How does that matter? We're screwed!
Vegetal-Well, I had my fun, enough wasting my time!
Vegetal-This'll be long and hard, let's get the first ball already and...
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Vegetal-Who...?
Vegetal-...On earth are you...?
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Chiqrilin-So they are?
Gohan-The russian circus, maybe?
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All-We're the Ranger Special Forces! Give up, Vegetal!
Vegetal-Ok...
Vegetal-...I give up...
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Yellow-A wise move, you're no rival for us...!
Pink-You'll never beat our combined power!
Vegetal-GEEZ!! THIS IS IT!! ENOUGH BULLOCKS! IF YOU'RE GONNA FIGHT, DO IT NOW OR GET LOST!!
Pink-W...What...?
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Red-You won't raise your voice to us again...!
Red-Go on Rangers!
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Vegetal-Tee, hee, hee...
Yellow-Done!
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Someone-Vietnamek! We finally made it!
Someone-We must go down as soon as possible!
Wilma-Preparing landing sequence!
Bito-Let's be careful, turbulences might come!
Goku-And what's this button for?
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Wilma-What did you do, swine? You've activated the emergency ejection! We're gonna craaaash!!
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Apedreator-What was that?
Soldier-Mister Frigo, commander Apedreator reports on an object which has fallen at the sea in the south zone...!
Frigo-Meteor impacts don't worry me, I want immediate reports on the Ranger Special Forces' operation!
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leecherboy
October 16, 2006, 02:34 AM
So here's another translation, but remember: 9 out of 10 grandfathers who throw their demonic possessed grandchilds off a helicopter get pummeled later!
About the cover, we're getting too "independent"! :)
Here's the raw:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/m7a6or
I guess there's nothing to comment on this one's translation. But the next one will surely earn another "Trivia Stuff" (going so far as to include "that guy" there, the assholes... xD)
And now, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 18 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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So this comic is about some kid who was an alien and had a tail, but he got it cut off, and goes to a planet full with aliens, who had no tail, not because they got it cut off, and they go and start fighting. That's that.
More than a thousand elephants here!!!
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Vegetal-Don't think you've defeated me...! [...Be sure of it...!]
Vegetal-This party has just begun!
Red-That's not how I see it... I rather think you can stand straight because today's not a windy day...
Red-Time to give you the coup de grace...!
Gohan-You think they have noticed?
Chiqrilin-How could they? Aren't them quite distracted? You shut up and run!
Commander-I think we disagree with our part of this deal.
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Wilma-Arf... Gasp... We made it by a close call... And who knows what this green water contains...!
Goku-Hey... Wilma, I can't swim!
Bito-Neither?
Soldier-Mister Frigo, the astropaths have detected another space device landing here, the bio-scanner reveals it has a crew...!
Soldier-...We discovered two natives from planet Earth and... another Puyajin!
Frigo-What!?
Frigo-Quick, contact with the Ranger Special Forces at once, I must assign them new instructions!
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Frigo-Attention, Ranger Forces, leave Vegetal however he might be and go intercept the newcomers in this planet!
Red-But... why? Shoot, it was almost finished...
Frigo-Don't argue... Go and eliminate them... A Puyajin is with them... Exterminate him... Beat him to a pulp...!!
Red-Sheesh, better luck next time... We shouldn't get Mr. Frigo angry.
Yellow-I'd dare say he already is.
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Feyo-But, Mr. Frigo... Why do you insist on eliminating any Puyajin...? We're neglecting our interests!
Frigo-I already told you they're not your run-of-the-mill guys... I have reasons to fear the Puyajins as a whole!
Frigo-Puyajins weren't the original inhabitants of Vegetal, that was managed by a very advanced pacifical civilization, the trufus (some repressed sissies), who were exterminated and erased from the face of the planet by the Puyajins through their farts, and they appropiated their technology and their discount tickets for the Kentucky...!
Frigo-It all seems to reckon that the main trump for their victory was the figure of the Super-Puyajin... a chosen one among them with exceptional power and abilities!
Someone-Holymother! It's The Cure.
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Frigo-Despite the Puyajins currently existing can be counted one-handedly, there's still the possibility that the Super-Puyajin emerges amongst them! If that being of extraordinary powers appears... I... I...
Feyo-Well, okay... I never knew that was such a big deal... I understand your worries.
Frigo-Good, now that we've sorted that out it's time to resume our main mission... Where's the next ball?
Box: In a village several kilometers away from the previous one... South-eastwards from our position...
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Villager-We're being attacked, we're being attacked!
Villager2-T...thanks for the warninglgl...
Soldier-That's it... here we have the ball!
Apedreator-Warn Mr. Frigo that we already got the seventh ball, we'll go get the two missing ones...!
Villager-[Dang... It took me lots of work to hide it...]
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Far out there...
Vegetal-Well, well... it seems they left me for dead...! Grave mistake!
Vegetal-I'll get my revenge...! They'll regret it for the rest of their lives...! That might be just a couple of hours!
Vegetal-But first, I'll heal my wounds... I'll cauterize them with gunpowder, like in the John Woo flicks...!
Vegetal-Here it is!
Vegetal-As I'm badly hurt everywhere, I'll spread it all over myself, as if I was seasoning the stew...! [Ow, this itches...!]
Vegetal-Well... And now, the match...!
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Wilma-Well, what do we do next?
Bito-We must use our survival kits and search for life signs with the bio-scanners.
Goku-And... who has all that?
Bito-The ship, we left them on the ship! And it's sinking!
Wilma-Yeah, I'm not wrong when I say there are only dumbasses around me...
Goku-Relax, Wilma, there they come some misters, we'll ask them for help!
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Red-Those must be the newcomers!
Yellow-The retard-looking one seems to be the Puyajin!
Wilma-A...And who are you, misters...?
Wilma-(I don't like this, they wear the same uniform as Vegetal...)
Goku-Listen, could you lend us a hand?
Red-A hand? Oh, yes, of course, and even both too...!
Red-Guys!
Red-Lend them a hand!
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Goku-HEY!
Goku-Mommyyy!
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Red-Ops... I'm sorry... Maybe we were too rude...?
Red-We're the Ranger Special Forces! We follow instructions from Mr. Frigo, and our instructions are to annihilate you!
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Soldier-The Special Forces have already intercepted the newcomers.
Frigo-Very good, I don't want mistakes, I want them owned with no qualms!
Box: "Then we'll take care of that tiresome Vegetal".
Vegetal-He, he, he... They're so busy with the search of the balls that they neglected the ship entrance's security... From now on it's as easy as pie.
Vegetal-And also from now on I've decided I'll stop watching so many John Woo films! [You can't trust what you see there...]
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Vegetal-It's here...
Vegetal-Frigo's private room!
Vegetal-It's refrigerated to keep his body temperature below zero... as in his home world.
Vegetal-Almost nobody's so tough as to stay more than a minute here without collapsing from the freezing... Well... Except for me, of course... Atchoo!
Vegetal-There are the balls, I knew the greedy guy had hid them here!
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Vegetal-Now I'll throw them out of the window pretty far and I'll follow in an instant...!
Vegetal-Let's send this glass flying, then!
Computer-Warning, warning... Impact of great magnitude in window 48 of the level 2!!
Frigo-Those are my lodgings, the balls are there!
Feyo-(He hid them in his room? Won't they also be kept inside a sock?)
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Vegetal-Argh... To... To think I didn't remember our ships have gummygas glasses to absorb pressure change shocks... [Fuck... It stings...]
Frigo-Quick, all you come with me, to my private chamber!!
Vegetal-Very well, subtleties are over! Go get fucked off!
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Vegetal-There, far away!
Frigo-Vegetal! You...!
Vegetal-Man, the Spice Girls... Well, I'm going, hasta la vista sissies!
Frigo-Stop him, he's taking the balls!
Someone-Egghs... Sir, if you... let go of... our throat... maybe... we can fulfill... your command...
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Zafion-We'll split to ambush him!
Dodotia-Sounds like a plan!
Box: Meanwhile, quite far from there...
Chiqrilin-Well, I think we were late once again...
Chiqrilin-Wait a sec, look at this! The ball-scanner points that the five balls that were together have been spread! There's something going on, let's go get them!
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Chiqrilin-Look, Chun Gohan, a survivor! He was probably trapped under the debris...!
Tente-(Yeah, right, trapped...! I went into hiding as soon as I saw those wild beasts coming... And if it weren't for that fucking critter...!)
Chiqrilin-He's just a kid. His family has probably been killed, he's helpless...
Tente-(Well, now I'll work on recovering every loss, I'll use the magic balls to resurrect all the people that have croaked, and I'll expel the invaders from the planet.)
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Chiqrilin-Worry not, you're coming with us, okay?
Tente-But... but, my family, the invaders...
Chiqrilin-Yes, yes, I understand it might have been a hard blow for you, but clinging to these ruins won't do you any good, we'll protect you.
Tente-But it's not that...
Chiqrilin-Look, kid, I know what I'm doing! I want no arguments, you'll come with us and you won't open your mouth again until you're asked. Understood?
Chiqrilin-Now let's go search these five balls, we must find what's happening...
Squintron-Look, commander, there are already three of them.
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Gñ-Well... I don't think we should wear the helmet anymore, my face's all fried!
Wilma-Say... I think I prefer you with a helmet...
Wilma-Well, save for the hairy guy, who is more like a pretty stud...
Bito-Wilma, dear, don't you ever stop thinking about the flesh?
Gñ-About your opinion on the matter, beautiful maiden, we rub our armpits with it. Now close your eyes and it'll all be quick.
Goku-Hey... Excuse me, like I was saying before being interrupted...!
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Gñ-Still alive! Can't be. Mixed team!
Goku-A mixed drink? No thanks, alcohol burns my insides and...
Burter-I knocked him out temporarily! What a guy! Ready to use the Big-Power-Pistol!
Gñ-Hey, I am the boss!
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All-Ready to shoot!
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Meanwhile...
Vegetal-I'm leaving them behind, but I mustn't lose them, I rather they follow me.
Vegetal-They'll also have to gather the balls, but they don't know that my senses can locate the balls, and can locate both of them too. It's something I learnt to do while I was on the Earth. hits to my head, so of course...]
Vegetal-What I'll do is to lure them into a given place where I'll set up several traps...
Vegetal-...And they'll fall for them like simpletons... Ya ha ha ha ha...!!
Page 27
Vegetal-This is a good place.
Vegetal-I'll use the resources from the kit I brought from my capsule, it's a good thing to think ahead.
Page 28
Meanwhiley...
Gohan-Hey!
Chiqrilin-Dang... Everytime we get more crammed in here!
Chiqrilin-I hope we get to the place before a mutiny rises.
Squintron-It's useless, commander, they are sitting on the hatch.
Commander-Squintron, throw a couple of missiles!
Commander-Definately, I protest against this situation!
Vegetal-Well, I'll activate the trigger and leave the device ready to detonate as soon as the most slight pressure is detected.
Worm-[Oh, no! I'm not safe even here!]
Text on book: Idigoras guide to explosives
Page 29
Vegetal-Uh huh, here comes that greasy Dodotia...!
Vegetal-Once he gets to the "X" spot and tries to take the bait it'll all be "Boum", "Uaggh" and it's over...
Dodotia-Huh? The white ball!
Vegetal-It's all ready, I set the device under that stone to withstand only the weight of the stone and the ball, so when Dodotia barges on with his zillion kilos the "pee-pee-pee" will sound and the fatass will have some funny blowing up...!
Dodotia-Vegetal must have dropped it while running away... Well, if he hasn't missed it yet, it's not my fault...
Page 30
Dodotia-Mr. Frigo will be glad if I take it to him, he might not make me go looking for Vegetal once again...!
Vegetal-B... But c'mon! Why doesn't the device explode?
Vegetal-It must have short-circuited because of that mammoth's weight... Doesn't it kill you?
Vegetal-And one ball to waste!
Sound: Pee-pee-pee-pee-pee-pee-pee
Vegetal-Oh, Godh... I put the wrong bomb under the stone! Shit, shit, shit...!
Page 31
Vegetal-I have five seconds to turn the device off... Where did I put the remote control? Where, wheeere...?
Vegetal-Uaggh! [...And it's over]
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Dodotia-That unexpected isolated explosion seems suspicious to me.
Alvaro-[We normal people simply say: What the fuck was that...?]
Nacho-[Alvaro, please, it's the culturizing element...!]
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leecherboy
October 16, 2006, 02:39 AM
Another translation, but don't mess with demons with spiky red hair or you'll get blasted by a "Gou Hadouken"!
This one's cover is dedicated to the series that opened the gates to manga in Spain! (of course, along with Dragon Ball itself) :3
Here's the raw:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/4gtzrn
Trivia Stuff #6: In page 16, that's "Chiquito de la Calzada". That's the name of a spanish comedian that was popular some 15 years ago, coined a lot (and I do mean a lot) of funny catchphrases and spawned a lot of impersonators. His influence is there even today (for instance, in the spanish version of Raruto chapter 05 xD). I've been translating my way around these catchphrases, but oh well, here he is "in person"... :)
So well, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 19 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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Page 1
Vietnamek is about to E-X-P-L-O-D-E
Page 2
Don't say I didn't warn you
Page 3
Let's go back to the another freak...
Gñ-That's it, it's final! Nobody can survive the Big-Power-Pistol!
Wilma-[Can you guarantee it, huh?]
Bito-[Wilma, dear, please!]
Burter-By the uncorrupted pencil of Saint Bill Waterson. Look at that, commander!
Page 4
Goku-Though we normal people don't call this mix, we call this "huge whooping"...
Goku-Yah' seam ta' 've gottin' meh angree...!
Someone-Yeah niggah'...!
Guldo-What... what do we do, boss...?
Gñ-This... this kid ain't normal...*
Gñ-We have no choice but to resort to our combat machine. The Megawickedstuffzord!
*Another of this story's eternal mottos...
Page 5
Meanwhile...
Vegetal-I'm kinda bored of getting roasted every hour...
Vegetal-Uh?... Dodotia's chased me to here. [Dang, I'm burned out!]
Dodotia-Uh huh, I knew following your roast traces would take me to your hiding place, cowardly rat!
Vegetal-Hey, I didn't do anything to you... I chewed the bomb that was meant for you! [Got it?]
Page 6
Dodotia-That's the least of it, my commands are to terminate you and recover Mr. Frigo's balls...
Vegetal-Why's that? He himself can't find his? Logical...
Vegetal-And you...?
Dodotia-That just was your last irreverence, Vegetal...
Chiqrilin-Look, there up front! Another one of the balls!
Page 7
Chiqrilin-How nice, how nice, we have two already!
Tente-(This is somewhat fishy...)
Gohan-Chiqrilin, I think I sense a presence nearby... We should move it...
Chiqrilin-Jus' a little longer, kid, catch your breath! [Pretty!]
Vegetal-Come on, shitty fatty... I'm not afraid of you! [Though if you keep pummeling me like that, I'll start to worry...]
Vegetal-I'm tougher than you think!
Page 8
And a stone's throw away from there... If it's Hulk or the likes who throws it...
Gñ-Here it is!
Gñ-The Megawickedstuffzord!
Gñ-Attention, Rangers, let's go to the Megawickedstuffzord!
Page 9
Wilma-That's so nice... They get on and it breaks apart... This is what I call a good entrance.
Bito-No, dear, you're wrong. It is rather morphing.
Page 10
Gñ-Here comes the great Megawickedstuffzord! The ultimate weapon!
Gñ-All resistance is futile, prepare to die painfully...
Wilma-Daddyyy...!
Wilma-I wanna go hooome...! [What an awesome junk...!]
Page 11
Zafion-Well, well, so nice of you... You found that ball for me... Right, shrimps?
Zafion-Now, come here and hand it to me, and I'll pretend you weren't snooping around here...
Zafion-By disintegrating you!
Chiqrilin-I... I don't think your offer is a good deal.
Zafion-OBEY!!
Chiqrilin-Y... Yes... Whatever you say, ma'am...
Page 12
Dodotia-Really, Vegetal...
Dodotia-You sure you want to keep on fighting?
Dodotia-You've already taken more trashing than Bruce Campbell in the whole "Evil Dead" saga!
Dodotia-It's already weighting on my conscience. I say we stop playing around and I frag you on the spot...
Vegetal-No... no way dhudhe... I only... waz ztudyin' you... Oghay? [Now I'n zerious...]
Dodotia-You're serious...?
Page 13
Vegetal-That's it... You've forced me to... I didn't want to resort to this, but I'll use the great ultimate weapon that will finish you...! I don't like low strikes, but this situation asks for it!
Dodotia-What the fuck are you talking about?
Vegetal-About this!
Editors-[Hey, we do this too!]
Page 14
Dodotia-Wow! What an amount of food! Is it all for me?
Vegetal-Sure, man... Sure, it's all yours... I think I calculated it right.
Dodotia-[Argf! Chomp! Gnouf! Glub! Slurp! Grasblss... I... I can't keep goiinggg...]
Vegetal-Yeah... dead right. [So, playtime's over!]
Page 15
Alvaro-[NACHOOOOOOOO! You forgot page 16! Torpedo! What do I do know? Do I tell the Cow Joke?*]
Chiquito-Harl!
Nacho-Mmm? 16? Whaaat?
*The Cow Joke was also related to "Chiquito de la Calzada" (see below). It was a joke rumoured to be the best of all jokes ever. Evidently, nobody ever told it.
**"Chiquito de la Calzada" (that old man there) is a famous spanish comedian. That "Harl" was his pet word.
Page 16
Vegetal-Well, well, things are going my way... [Come to daddy...]
Vegetal-Now I have to find the eight balls...
Peskaito-Good, you see? I told you that you could use some exercise! If you follow my training, you'll soon reach Soson Goku's level...
Peskaito-He just made 417 more levels...!
Yansha-You think he's pulling our leg, Mr. Duende?
Tarugo-Can't tell. Look, as for me, I can't stand being idle...
[br]Posted on: October 16, 2006, 03:38:21 AM_________________________________________________Page 17
Zafion-Those kids were very nice... First I'll finish gathering the balls, and then I'll search and eliminate them... It'll be fun!
Vegetal-Eh... wait a sec, I sense Zafion's presence not too far from here... with two of my balls!
Vegetal-Very well, let's get him! This one will go down more easily than Dodotia.
Gñ-You're doomed.
Gñ-Say your prayers!
Arrow: Fist.
Arrow: The another foot.
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Goku-Fear not, Wilma, I shall battle with him!
Alvaro-[Gee, that was so knightly just now...!]
Nacho-[Yes, my fair lord...]
Goku-Well, that's it... I lost.
Page 19
Vegetal-Stop there, cutey!
Vegetal-Don't get excited, this is no date.
Vegetal-Holy moley, always the same!
Page 20
Vegetal-This sucks!
Frigo-You did lose contact with Dodotia!? Where's Zafion? And Vegetal? And my balls?
Page 21
Frigo-I've conquered thousands of galaxies, I've ruled millions of planets... And when you think the whole universe is under your thumb... Something so insignificant as some balls... escape your reach!
Someone-[And now?]
Queen-So then, cartographers?
Octopus-Coordenates have been set, majesty.
Queen-Very good, planet Vietnamek...
Queen-It's time to plan a course of action!
Page 22
Chiqrilin-Well, come on, people, let's not get down, we'll use the ball-scanner to locate the rest of the balls, and then we'll figure how to recover the other ones.
Chiqrilin-But... where did the Littlenauts' ship go?
Gohan-Well, they told me they were pissed off already, that they would scram off and to not open my mouth...
Chiqrilin-And you obeyed them?
Gohan-Mom told me to not meddle in grown-ups' stuff.
Box: "Grown-ups?!"
Squintron-Where do we head to, commander?
Commander-We head to the adventure, Squintron... We're Littlenauts!
Page 23
Quite a long distance from there...
Bito-Look, Wilma, a meteor just fell... Behold one of Nature's most unexpectable phenomenons.
Wilma-It sure is unexpectable...!
Wilma-IT'S VEGETAL!!
Vegetal-Holy Godh, we weren't enough people here...!
Vegetal-What the heck are you doing here? How did you get here?
Wilma-E... err...
Vegetal-(Wait a sec! How many of them will have come? Won't also be here that two-legged danger Kagarrot?)
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Wilma-Wow... Such a fine lad... Do you come here often?
Bito-Wilma, please... leave the flirting for later!
Wilma-But he's too hot...
Vegetal-(Ingenous... He, he, if she knew.)
Zafion-I seemed to notice when we met airborne that you carried a ball with you, if you were so kind...
Vegetal-Ah, do you want it?
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Vegetal-Then take it!
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Wilma-Oh, no, with him being so handsome and all...!
Vegetal-Open your eyes, girl, the good lad is gay, I have more chances to flirt with him than you!
Page 28
Burter-I have the trace of the two fugitives.
Guldo-I can't breaagh...!
Recoome-Back off!
Jeice-Gimme a break!
Gñ-Perfect, follow it, Mr. Frigo wants a total annihilation!
Vegetal-Well... again I recollect the fruit of my effort...
Vegetal-I have three already, he, he, he!
Wilma-Are you alright?
Page 29
Zafion-Oh my, no please, I don't like chicks one bit, don't grab me like that... how shameful!
Vegetal-I warned you. And about you, Zafion, I guess you'll follow Mr. Frigo's orders until the end, right?
Vegetal-Are you ready to fight to the death for those balls?
Page 30
Zafion-Don't make me, Vegetal... You know for me to surpass your attack capability, I must go through a change I don't like at all...
Vegetal-Bah... That just sounds like bluffing to me, I doubt you're able to go over my power... you're actually scared shitless...
Vegetal-Sissy...
Zafion-Alright, you asked for it!
Zafion-There goes the super-change!!
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Vegetal-Say... Listen, why do we have to slap each other? Couldn't we have some fun any other way?
Zafion-Uh huh!
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leecherboy
October 20, 2006, 02:35 AM
Here you go, and if you see a black sword with a huge eye, don't pick it, it may have too much "calibur" for you!
This one came out around December... oh, was that obvious? :)
Here's the raw:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/u9c85l
Yet another unexpected visitor, this time they come from "Astronicks", that seems to be another old spanish comic (there's just no end to these, is there?)
Oh, and I had to change the Christmas joke in page 2, because in English it made no sense... But's it's actually pretty close to the original one... (though you'll be used to that already, knowing my translating accuracy xD)
Now then, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 20 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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New name:
Nil (Neil): nothing special here
Page 2
Chiqrilin-Listen, it's already Christmas' morning. Why were you so late?
Santa-One of my reindeers lost its tail.
Chiqrilin-And you went to the veterinarian?
Santa-No, to a "re-tail" shop to get a new one.
Kano gets married, Jordi Sanchez Navarro had a daughter and seems like this is beside the point... but what'd you expect, life goes by, people gets married, have children and you just feel older and it's not fair, it isn't right. And speaking about rights, in the institute for human rights they have such fine cooking...
Careful... don't get Christmacked away
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Wilma-Say... I don't want to butt into your business, but if you don't turn around, you'll drown...
Wilma-Well, man, it was just a suggestion!
Zafion-So then? Are you convinced of my power increase?
Zafion-Or wanna keep dancing?
Vegetal-G... get fucked by a tranny. [Damn you to hell]
Bito-The truth is, Wilma, I don't think this one is a safe place neither. Let's go before they remember we exist...
Page 5
Gñ-We got you!
Wilma-I think it's quite late for that... isn't it?
Gñ-Now we'll end what we started. Prepare to die!
Gñ-It's nothing personal... I'm lying, I do love it! Hwa, ha, ha, ha!
Recoome-Man, stop spitting!
Zafion-Hey, you, assholes, let us be. I'll take care of them all.
Vegetal-(That... that's it, if I make use now of her being... distracted...)
Page 6
Wilma-Come on, go, get her, she's going down...!
Arrow: Pure ice.
Bito-Wilma, dear, we can't trust anybody in this strange place, but it you meant to help him, your screwed it good...
Wilma-I... er... you think so?
Page 7
Feyo-Mister Frigo, the Rangers have found Vegetal wrapped up in a fight against Zafion. They ask for instructions!
Frigo-Good... Let them wait and see what happens. If by some joke of fate Zafion was beaten, let them take care of Vegetal. And for good!
Chiqrilin-We're screwed. To make it to the closest location in the ball-scanner we will spend days wasting shoes...
Chiqrilin-With no supplies...
Chiqrilin-Nor Penthouse.
Chiqrilin-Nor goodies.
Gohan-...Nor Donettes.
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Chiqrilin-What da fuck!! We can actually fly!
Chiqrilin-Had already forgotten, rats!
Chiqrilin-Weeell, this makes things easier. Now we can go and make it there in a flash!
Chiqrilin-Come one, let's go, quick, to the point where the balls are together!
Chiqrilin-Now everything will be fine, you'll see.
Chiqrilin-So c'mon, and you, boy, how well can you fly?
Tente-T...That is one...
Page 9
Tente-...Very stupid questiooooooooooooooooooooon!
Gohan-I guess he couldn't fly, Chiqrilin...
Chiqrilin-Is that so? No shit, Sherlock!
Gohan-At least he fell on a soft spot, a tree.
Chiqrilin-Not sure, not sure.
Page 10
Chiqrilin-Well, now we know you can't fly... We'd better not take these decisions without consulting you, agreed?
Chiqrilin-Is there anything else we should know?
Tente-Well, when you found me, I was about to travel towards the residence of the great elder, the progenitor of us all and master of the magic balls.
Tente-Only he knows how to gather them and summon the great spirit.
Chiqrilin-What? You knew all that? And why didn't you tell us?
Recorder: Look, kid, I know what I'm doing! I want no arguments, you'll come with us and you won't open your mouth again until you're asked. Understood?
Tente- CD-Rom multiband product very handy for these situations...
Chiqrilin-[Er... Youth madness... Ehem.]
Page 11
Chiqrilin-Well, er... Let's not hold grudges here... C'mon, lead us to that damned place and we'll teach you to fly... huh?
Squintron-This planet doesn't offer too much diversity.
Commander-Indeed, Squintron, maybe we should look for a more fertile world.
Bugghy-My commander (tic), I sense readings (tic) in the proximity (tic) scanner (tic).
Commander-It's the Baron Bhinge's mutt-soldiers, they chased us all the way here, rise the defenses! [Well, I guess]
Page 12
Commander-LET'S ATTACKKKUU!
Guardian-Fire the heavy artillery!
Someone-Hey!
Squintron-They're whooping us, commander!
Page 13
Bugghy-Preparing (tic) emergency (tic) evacuation!
Minimatron-It's not my fault, it's not my fault.
Squintron-The navigation computer has gotten all wrecked, sir.
Commander-ENOUGH!! Let's keep our cool!
Commander-Goodyear...
Page 14
Zafion-Ah, that was the one who were to be Mr. Frigo's succesor!
Zafion-That's what you get for groping my ass, sexist dwarf!
Vegetal-Okaaay... Alright, I admit I went way too far, but it's my nature...
Vegetal-Couldn't we reach any diplomatic agreement?
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Zafion-I think there's no other way around it. I follow Mr. Frigo's direct orders.
Zafion-Though I'll do it with pleasure!
Vegetal-[Poop...]
Zafion-Now I'll stone you with all the stones and boulders on this place!
Zafion-And without you saying "Jehovah".
Vegetal-Your panties got transparent...
Page 16
Vegetal-Perfect, diversion phase complete!
Vegetal-And now, my secret weapon.
Vegetal-This dart will produce a total amnesia about the latest 24 hours on her.[br]Posted on: October 20, 2006, 03:34:40 AM_________________________________________________Page 17
Zafion-Gee... Where am I? This is a foreign place.
Zafion-Was I on a mission? I can't remember...
Vegetal-Twisted but effective...
Page 18
Vegetal-Very good, ladies, the game's over! I won't be the punching bag for this story to be funny anymore. This is taking a lot of issues already...!
Nacho-Rubbish, man!
Alvaro-Just your figments!
Guldo-Do you think he's bluffing, commander?
Gñ-I don't think so, it's more like he believes he can beat us.
Gñ-This robot was conceived to face the giant apes you Puyajins turn into, and you can't anymore. How do you hope to be a fair rival for us?
Vegetal-I can fix that too!
Page 19
Vegetal-Now I wear your same size! Shall we start?
Page 20
Guldo-Aah, this shakes too much!
Burter-I'm falling!
Gñ-Haarl!
Recoome-Hey you, pay attention to the sign!
Sign: Shake.
Gñ-We must counterattack, we'll use the most powerful weapon in our arsenal!
Recoome-No man, not anymore... [Fuck, he's like the girl in "The Exorcist"!]
Arrow: Talk about a creative script, fuck!
Page 21
Gñ- Energo-Sword!
Gñ- Energo-Slash!
Bito-Oh my god, Wilma, this is the end, what do we do?
Wilma-[Dad, sit down...]
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Gñ-[Energo-Screw!]
Vegetal-Tsk, tsk, too bad...
Vegetal-You thought you could surprise me with that attack? You always do it the same way, I did watch the series!
Vegetal-Now it's my turn, advertising for Meccano!
Page 23
Someone-Hey, you got the wrong sign!
Sign: Applause.
Vegetal-(Where's my T-shirt?) KIAAAAAAAAA.
Page 24
Vegetal-How do you like this, asshole in a can...
Vegetal-And what will I do with you now? Can you come up with something...?
Recoome-What do we do, commander?
Gñ-We won't go back to Mr. Frigo defeated! We must flee from this planet!
Page 25
Someone-It's there!
Someone-The great elder's sanctuary!
Gohan-Do you think he will be home?
Chiqrilin-Considering the landscape, I don't think he can choose.
Gohan-Say, from up here you can throw such cool spits...
Chiqrilin-Shut up, pig!
Tente-Great elder, I'm Tente and I come with some foreigners!
Page 26
Elder-Enough mocking with the "Great Elder" stuff, got it? Let's see... what do you want?
Chiqrilin-Are... are you the progenitor of all the inhabitants in Vietnamek?
Elder-Yes! Anything wrong? It's a job that wears you down a lot! You try doing it, if you don't believe me!
Chiqrilin-I... er... look, sir, there's no time to waste, I need your help!
Ufo-First invasion group set in the orbit, sir.
Ufo-Awaiting attack commands...
Page 27
Guardian-I... I give up.
Puppet-Certainly, their uniforms are not the mutt-soldiers'. Who might them be...?
Commander-We'll find out now!
Commander-Green face, antennas, spiky ears... They are inhabitants of this planet!
Page 28
Someone-Indeed, we are their guardians. We act behind the shadows.
Commander-Uh, who?
Snix-I've teleported to your ship. Don't be afraid, I mean you no harm. I'm the Snix commander, my soldiers mistook you for more invaders...
Snix-While your champion fought, I researched your ship and your equipment, I see you're not hostile...
Snix-...That's very beneficial. I want to ask for your help to expel the invaders that are slaughtering the giants in Vietnamek.
Elder-Hear me, I'm well-informed about that unpleasant matter of the space warriors. In fact, I detected them while they were coming close to our planet months ago.
Chiqrilin-Is that so? So awesome!
Elder-Why do you think I came here, a hell and a half away?
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Elder-Here I also have my loyal bodyguard, Nil.
Elder-Say hello, boy.
Nil-Harl!
Chiqrilin-But don't you mean to do anything, listen?
Elder-Do you think I'm Hannibal Smith? I have my own problems.
Tente-But... great... er... elder, I came in search of your knowledge to counter this threat!
Elder-I understand, you lost your kin, huh?
Elder-Good... This is what I'll do: to you, a much more young vital one, I shall transmit all the magic balls secrets... But before, somebody get the Whitney Houston karaoke for the boy, c'mon!
Page 30
Goku-Say... What happened? Where's the robot? [Dang, I've gotten something broken...]
Goku-I don't feel its energy, but there's a very big one! It's that... Vegetal!
Vegetal-I think I'll pass on tortures and bitchings.
Vegetal-I'll squash you flat with a stomping!
Vegetal-...And it's over!
Vegetal-There you go!!
Page 31
Gñ-Quick, my multiuses!! Now!
Vegetal-Shit!*
Bito-Holy mother... And I thought after meeting your friends that I had seen it all there was!
Wilma-They're right when they say: "The truth is out there".
*Another classic in the series...
Page 32
Certainly, out there is something, and it's no lie.
Octopus-Attack order confirmed, there we go! By our octopussy queen!
Octopus-What the fu...!?
Octopus-In the name of the octopussy queen! Who dares to invade our aerial space?
Martian-Look, dear, we have been planning this invasion for two years and it won't be you who wreck it...!!
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leecherboy
October 20, 2006, 02:37 AM
Here you go, and if you see some 3rd energy, don't mess with it, or you'll have to call the red-haired chick to take care of the dinosaurs!
Here's the raw:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/yx1h82
Now then, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 21 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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Page 2
Martian-Yet no! I'm not Lunar Skull! And I'm not exactly coming to save the Earth a couple of times!
Martian-And it's not my fault if the yankees are quite the copycats!
Martian-Fuckers!
Alvaro&Nacho-[Dedicated to Albert Monteys. You're the one!]
*Lunar Skull was a character in an old spanish comic by Albert Monteys. He somewhat resembled these martians.
The thing is about Wilma, Chun Gohan and Chiqrilin getting to walk around the procellous space and get into a planet called Vietnamek (you get the joke? huh?). Then they find every kind of aliens: octopus, littlenauts, snixs, martians, etc. So, that about: "In space, no one can hear you scream" is nothing but bullocks.
Turbospaceadventuuure
Page 3
Alvaro-Pay attention, squad! We'll clear up the situation a bit with a simple explaining diagram. [This is getting too confusing...]
Nacho-[That about simple, it depends on who gets to work his ass off on it... right?]
-Mr. Frigo wants to get all the balls, but the ones he had were stolen from him.
Arrow: His helper Feyo.
-His loyal agent Apedreator goes in search for the ones still to be located, a few by now...
Apedreator-Hail.
Arrow: Self-destruct.
-Vegetal, after beating Frigo's warriors, Dodotia and Zafion, must face now the Ranger Special Forces...
Arrow: Soson Goku goes to see what's going on...
Arrow: Commander Gñ!
Arrow: Wilma
Arrow: Her daddy
-Chiqrilin, Chun Gohan and the native child, Tente, consult the "great" elder, but the gramps is a senile grouchy one...
Chiqrilin-[Harl...]
Elder-[I want to get a better retirement pension!]
Elder-[Or else I won't lift a finger!]
-As for Chun Gohan, he spends his time instructing Tente on customs and behaviour ways of kids their age...
Gohan-(Since he's all green...)
Gohan-(I can't tell if he's pulling his booger or his epigastrium.)
Page 4
-The Littlenauts contacted with the Snix, and they're willing to join forces for a common goal...
Snix-[I'm almost there!]
-The F.P.F arrived to Vietnamek and found Ridli Scott...
Ridli-[It's... it's not what you think.]
Text on boxes: Hachish, pot
-And the planet Tako invaders, in broad revenge against the F.P.F, just met some competence above the planet...
Octopus-Foreigners!
Martian- Plan-wreckers!
Alien-[Pst, listen, we were passing by...]
Alvaro-And well, that's the bulk of it. I know we haven't done a detailed summary about everything that happened in the whole saga, but you're supposed to have been following the story, aren't you? Or else, go buy the previous issues, fuck... we get our living money out of it!
Nacho-Or do you think we are state-maintained? [As if we were pandas or that Beckham...]
Page 5
Goku-Man, Vegetal, I saw you soaring through the sky while I was coming, where did you land?
Vegetal-Just guess... [Big-mouth]
Text on etiquette: "Plesent flom" Pekin
Vegetal-Iiiiih! It's him! The monster!!
Goku-[Who, me?]
Vegetal-(I'm done for... Just this one being here means I already have no chance.)
Vegetal-(Dang!)
Vegetal-(Unless... I do...)
Vegetal-Ahaha! You're screwed if you think you can beat me, before that you'll have to battle these space warriors that are under my commands here!
Page 6
Goku-Very good, now you'll see!
Jeice-Here he comes again...!
Recoome-I don't know why we should worry, he's a weakass, I'll stop him.
Recoome-Holy!
Goku-Good, I'll take care of each one of your underlings, Vegetal... And then it'll be your turn!
Vegetal-Oh, no! Don't fuck with me! You'll do that? The horror...!
Page 7
Below earth, in the Snixville complex...
Snixcom-...That's the situation. If we join forces, we'll expel these alien invaders from our planet.
Commander-But why haven't you proposed that to the big inhabitants in Vietnamek? They should also be interested...
Snixcom-Truth be told, we don't worry at all about the fate of the giants, given that we plan to rise someday and take the control of the planet. We're superior in numbers and weaponry, and the less they are, the less ammo we waste.
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Commander-Wait a sec, it's not fair, we won't go through there, I refuse to help a power which shows no respect for the rights of...!
Minimatron-Well said, commander!
Snixcom-If you don't accept to help us, we'll tear your ship apart into pieces... I hope you all like playing puzzles...
Commander-Eh... Of course, I am a man of honour, and when I give my word to help someone, I fulfill it without a doubt.
Puppet-[Ehem!]
Snix-Snixcommander, we detected another alien ship above Vietnamek, doesn't look like reinforcements, but as a whole different float!
Snixcom-Well, this asks for a change in the strategy! Find out all you can about that new ship, the situation gets complicated!
Snix-At your orders, commander.
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Snix-Snixcommander, we've detected a different ship from the other two, its energetic trace is totally unlike them!
Snixcom-Uh? But...!
Snix-Snixcommander! Another signal different from the previous ones. A bunch of them! A planetary invasion float. What do we do?
Snix2-Which one do we fight first?
Snix3-Which strategy shall we follow?
Snix4-Do you want us to prepare a mass-suicide?
Snixcom-Please... Don't abandon us, our situation is desperate. The end of Vietnamek is near.
Commander-Don't know, Puppet... I feel pity for this guy.
Puppet-Alright, I'll help him volunteerily, because you asked me to!
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Gñ-This fight must end! Now!
Gñ-Use your respective powers, the opponent is worth the energy waste! [This is starting to hurt...]
Recoome-I agree, I'll use my special strike!
Sergio-[Wow, wow, I'll note it down.]
Recoome-The Halitose Cannon!
Page 11
Recoome-Poop... I only got one.
Goku-That was close, I was lucky.
Vegetal-Yeah... real lucky.
Vegetal-(Fuck, and he seemed stupid!)
Page 12
Recoome-This time I'll aim better. [Aspirate! Aspirate!]
Vegetal-Ah, no, not again! I won't let you!
Vegetal-Here, darling, toast your insides!
Page 13
Recoome-M... My zeezh... Whede... whede ade zhem...?
Vegetal-H... Here... stuck all over m... my face, in a shrapnel way... glglgl. [Ow, this smarts!]
Recoome-Now you'fe gozzen me angdy fod good! I'm gonna sweep you, baszadds...!!
Sound-ASPIRATE!
Vegetal-Hey... he's sucking all the air in!!
Goku-I... I'm suffocating. Ggggg.
Vegetal-[You're breaking my heart!]
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Recoome-Oh, no... a stitch is getting the best of me!
Fly-[Dang, so stinky!]
Vegetal-Well, well... We have already gotten rid of one, and one of the most chunky ones, too. Who wants to be next? [Curses, it didn't seem this easy.]
Goku-[Wait a sec... Didn't Vegetal say before...?] [Shoot, I can't remember...]
Page 15
Guldo-Leave them to me, commander, I'll teach them!
Vegetal-That... that free sample is gonna be our opponent? It's just a midget!
Goku-[What did he say? What...?]
Box: Meanwhile... On the stratosphere...
Octopus-That's beyond a joke, the bullshit is over! Let's charge and attack!
Octopus2-Wow [So ugly, man...]
Page 16
Vegetal-Now you'll see, dwarf!
Guldo-Heh!
Page 17
Vegetal-What... What the fuck ha... happened?
Goku-I'll take care of that guy!
Guldo-(He, he, he, they don't know my power consists on stopping the time and manipulate reality at will. I'm really the strongest in the special forces... I'm gonna have some fun!)
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Elder-I bestow my hands upon you to give you my power so you be the one who risks his life...
Elder-Once you possess that knowledge, you'll know the word that gathers all the balls in a spot. In the meantime, my servant, find out if his friends have a pure heart, to see if they are worthy of going with him.
Nil-It's already checked, master. Their heart is pure, there's some cholesterol in there, but always below the required minimum.
Elder-Perfect.
Elder-Now, go and gather the balls. Remember you can ask for three wishes plus the bonus one. Make the victims resurrect, the invaders disappear and whatever you come up with...
Chiqrilin-Gee... What a face...!
Gohan-[Ow, these stitches ache so much...!][br]Posted on: October 20, 2006, 03:36:28 AM_________________________________________________Page 19
Tente-I see the light, I feel the power, now everything's clear to me! [Fuck, I sound like an advertising for consoles!]
Elder-Very good, now that you have all my energy level, go gather the balls and lure the whole attention of the enemies over you! [I... ehem... will go visit a sick relative... in Swiss or Miami!]
Chiqrilin-I just have one doubt, listen... if you couldn't fly... how were you to get to this place so fucking hard to reach...
Tente-Er... That's the authors' blame, they first think about the spoofs and then the script...
Chiqrilin-Alright, then come on, let's gather the balls and fix this mess!
Tente-Er, dude, show some respect, I have the power...!
Chiqrilin-[Yeah, and He-man too!]
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Vegetal-We change the strategy! I'll take care of the dwarf, you go beat the rest of the forces!
Goku-Very well, but I still think this doesn't match what you told me in the beginning.
Goku-If I manage to remember what he told me...
Guldo-He, he, he.
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Guldo-(He, he... With my special senses, I just need to concentrate, hold my breath... ...and I isolate myself from the time stream...)
Guldo-(When I use my power I like to be witty... I try to entertain myself with the situation, with the time I have...)
Goku-Dang, I...
Goku-Ow, my knee!
Vegetal-You stuck it into my eye, retard!
Guldo-Well, well, let's polish the act a little further!
Page 22
Vegetal-Now you'll see, paranormal ball of shit, I'll stick all those eyes of yours into your fifth one!
Goku-Ow, my pancreas!
Guldo-Agf, agf... I surpassed myself this time... I barely can't hold it!
Guldo-Now I'll present them with the party's finale, and I'll blow them away once and for all!
Page 23
Maaan, I was forgetting about those ones...!
Soldier-Mr. Frigo, we have readings of very different frequencies from multiple space ships. We could only recognize the broadcasting band of the F.P.F. The rest of them, a whole bunch, are astonishing!
Frigo-WHAT!?!
Frigo-(I... I can't let those shitty F.P.F pariah-savers wreck my plans... I must do something!)
Frigo-(I've waited a long time for the moment to get the balls... They won't shit it!)
Frigo-Well, the space warriors won't stay motionless before a threat. Prepare the counter-offensive. [Camera two, don't film, fuck, the trick is showing...!]
Feyo-But sir... We haven't even been attacked!
Frigo-That's the better, man, we saved ourselves some punishment...
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All-ASSAULT!
While the first wave of space warriors departs to its target, other ones also start planning their next move...
Snixcom-WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE!!
Commander-I think I'll relevate him from command, he isn't in condition to take iniciatives...
And other ones... er... try to overcome a painful hindrance...
Vegetal-You went to far 'ere, babey!*
Vegetal-I think you've started to get me angry. [I needed to let that out of my system...]
*Someone actually said this.
Page 25
Guldo-Now you'll see, assholes. I'm saving the best for last... [Just a moment, "pleese"]
Vegetal-Where did he go...?
Goku-[Ow... what a... smash...]
Vegetal-Let's be careful... He must have left a trap set and gone into hiding!
Vegetal-We must find him!
Goku-Whe... where are you going?
Vegetal-Where might he be? Where?
Goku-The... the tree! It's the tree!
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Goku-This tree will fall anytime soon, stay in these soft bushes while I hold it... Hmm... a very sophisticated trap, in my opinion...
Vegetal-Hey!
Goku-Jeez, it doesn't fall... The tree is like this... kinda tilted... What a dumb thing... Huh?
Vegetal-Jeez... The soft bushes were alien prickly pears, take some pears, son of a bitch... freak!
Goku-[Dang, dear...]
Goku-Gee, look, it's the asshole-ish dwarf...
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Goku-For a green guy, he's quite purple...
Vegetal-This guy suffocated... He was holding his breath, but he couldn't go on... What the heck was he doing?
Vegetal-A... A MAP!?
Gñ-That dummy... He always was the nit-picky one... Oh well, he paid for his mistake.
Jeice-Now we'll fight you two! This nonsense is taking too long, and you are too!
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Jeice-Say... how do we share them out...?
Burter-I don't wanna fight the moron, it's embarassing...
Jeice-We play rock, scissors, paper!
Burter-Ok, but don't pull tricks, you're too crafty in this game.
Vegetal-We... we are being raffled...!
Goku-[Shoot, me wants too...!]
Bito-But Wilma! How are you so calm? In no time they'll finish that couple of losers and they'll come to get us!
Wilma-Look, daddy, after all that has happened to me... I'm even curious to know what they'll do with us... [With some luck, I might get the hairy guy...]
Jeice-Cool, I get Vegetal, resign yourself, big guy!
Burter-He always wins, there must be a trick...
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Feyo-Apedreator is going for the second last ball, but still hasn't located the last...
Frigo-Taking into account that the ones I owned were stolen, we should assure the success of our people...
Frigo-We can't send surveillance forces because we're in the middle of a counter-offensive, so I'll have to use the astropathy...
Frigo-It's not a very exact science since it's based on one's own perceptions, but its reach is almost unlimited... Let's see...
Frigo-Uh huuuh, I got them! I located the place!
Frigo-Good gracious, I was frying my frown!
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Feyo-Very good, we'll send Apedreator towards there!
Frigo-Do as you please, but I'm going there right now.
Feyo-Whaaat!?
Frigo-I don't want to use more men in the middle of this crisis, I'll take the risks myself!
Frigo-(Well... The truth is, after so many screwings, I've decided to do things by myself so we fucking succeed at once.)
Frigo-I won't back down, I'll go there!
Feyo-I'll warn Apedreator, sir, I'll tell him to join you as soon as he can.
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Feyo-Weeeell... Now's my chance.
Feyo-Let's see, people, Mr. Frigo left me on command, so from now on I'll be the one taking decisions!
Feyo-Let's go get those invaders! I want war!
"Indeedly", the invaders have started quite a war...
All-LET'S ATTAAACK!
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Martian-They already engaged in combat! How dare they?
Martian-Ready for radar! Now!
Jim-Watch, Splock, the concentration of attacking ships. They're from the planet Tako, they might be the offensive we expected from that nutty queen.
Splock-That's logical, Jim. A logical bitching.
Commander-The attack has started. We must do something, now!
Snixcom-I am already... I am... [So then, where is a hook...?]
Goku-Say... What are all those guys above us fussing about?
Vegetal-It's not like this situation is fit for a street party.
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leecherboy
October 20, 2006, 02:39 AM
And another translation; after all these months, it sounds weird to say: "2 more to go!"
I recently realized the cover references some "sinny" comic :)
Here's the raw:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/wtef5s
That quote of Ridli Scott is supposed to be a mix of quotes from Alien 2. It wasn't easy to get them right...
But well, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 22 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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New names for this chapter:
Pis (Jeice): "pis" means "pee"
Albornoz (Burter): "burter" sounds like "bata", that is a similar clothing to a "albornoz", that means "burnous"
Page 2
How do you like all this mess! It turns out our heroes and some guys are bumping each other and they suddenly bump (you get the joke, huh?) into an invasion of martians and octopuses that falls on them. Those critters seem to be the unfriendly type, but they don't know who they are teasing. The situation is pretty bad!
Don't touch my balls!!
Page 3
Aaatention: to my right...!
With respective weights of several tons and 70 kg, and with some huge power in them... Albornoz and Pis!
Vegetal-I don't like this circus...
Goku-Well, I do dig the clowns...
And to my left... With more or less the same weight, because even though one of them is more short and big-head, the other suffers some head-emptiness... Prince Vegetal and Soson Goku!
Gñ-The winner couple will get the amount we all put on the line and the phone from "The Mississippi"!*
Sound- Bewarein'! Bewarein'!
Gñ-The losers will lose their right to breath... You can get started!
* "This night we'll cross the Mississippi" was a spanish late-show that (among other things) had this phone, which instead of going "ring, ring" went like "bewarein', bewarein'"
Page 4
Meanwhile, in the faraway place we already know...
Frigo-Uh huh, there's my target!
Nil-Master, there comes a new visitor with looks of having few friends and lotsa victims...!
Elder-Poop! I didn't expect him this soon!
Page 5
Frigo-Let's see! Who manages here...?
Nil-The master... err... isn't home now. Do you want to leave a message?
Frigo-I have a very urgent one, boned olive... For him to be so kind as to die! I think I'll deliver it myself...
Nil-Yes... please.
Elder-So you finally discovered my sanctuary...
Frigo-Psch... It wasn't hard, now give me the ball you own and your end will be relatively painful...
Page 6
Chiqrilin-I've sensed that powerful a guy... He's already made it to the elder's house.
Chiqrilin-Good thing we hurried and beat the heck (or the Vietnamek, ahaha...) outta there! Let's go to a well-safe place and then you'll do the summoning to gather the balls!
Martian-Let's attack! No holds barred!
Soldier-Look, boss, more different ships!
Soldier2-Fuck!
Page 7
Octopus-Majesty, our air space has been invaded by Cabbage-Head and his flying saucers! Asking for instructions!
Queen-Annihilate them! Show them who's boss here!
Octopus-Combat crew from the invasion ships 14 and 15, concentrate yourselves in the martians incursion, let the two ships head to these coordinates!
Page 8
Man-This is the situation, sirs: the octopuses have spread a 20 invasion ship float through the entire sky around the planet Vietnamek!
Ackbar-There's also a martian invasion ship, which two closeby ships have engaged in combat with, and one from the space warriors, which is there as cannon fodder...
Ackbar-Almiral Kiko asks for authorization to launch a suppression attack and repel all the invaders from this planet. Decide upon it now!
Snix-All is set.
Commander-Very good, get the toy outside!
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Commander-It's there... Our main weapon!
Page 10
Commander-Okay, now the next step is making use of the diversion induced by the battle they're busy with, we'll create another ones and force the flag ship to get alone. Then we'll blow it with this megacannon!
Commander-Without a leader, the octopuses will fall back!
Puppet-And the rest of the individuals?
Commander-Easy, we'll repeat the system until we eliminate them all!
Snix-This megacannon fires self-propelled projectiles with superatomic rippin' heads. One of them alone is enough to cause a several kilometers wide destruction!
Snix-We'll split their flag ship in half, in a single shot!
Page 11
In the meantime, Albornoz is giving hell to Soson Goku thanks to his superspeed...
And Pis measures his strength against Vegetal in a hand-to-hand...
Nacho-Er... Sorry... I always thought "hand-to-hand" sounded funny.
Alvaro-(Kids...)
Pis-C'mon, Albornoz! Let's combine our strikes to finish them!
Page 12
Pis-Special fast ball!
Albornoz-Ok!
Pis-To the infinite and beyond!
Vegetal-Blast, it's charging at us, we must stop it with something!
Vegetal-"Famous last words".
Page 13
Vegetal-(And I didn't want to be in the middle, too...)
Sound: Smacking
Arrow: It's just to change and not get you bored...
Goku-Blimey, Vegetal! Did you notice? Lately I'm faster at coming up with ideas!
Vegetal-(I'll kill him... ...lots.)
Gñ-I don't like this... they could turn the tides in their favor. I'd rather go ask Mr. Frigo for advice.
Page 14
Chiqrilin-Good, this seems like an isolated place. There aren't even trees, nor vegetation, nor animals, nor water, nor tele-boxes, nor dog craps... [I mean, we could die here and nobody would notice...]
Chiqrilin-So there, Tente, it's time for the summoning! The conditions are ideal, let's proceed!
Tente-[Dang... They're so hasty!]
Tente-Very good. First I'll gather the balls in a spot using the specific words only the great elder knew.
Gohan-At last!
Chiqrilin-After all we've been through...!
Tente- COME-HITHA', BIATCHES!
Page 15
Wilma-Daddy, look!
Wilma-They're having the balls!
Juan-They're "having a ball". You get it, you get it?
Alex-[Pathetic.]
Apedreator-Hey, the balls!
Apedreator-Where did they go!?
Chiqrilin-Look, Chun Gohan, it's incredible!
Chiqrilin-The balls are gathering by themselves!
Page 16
Chiqrilin-So, now they're all gathered? Will you summon the dragon?
Tente-You mean the big horned snake? Yes, I'll call it...
Tente-Appear, big horned snake! I summon you, dammitall!
Page 17
Kehuron-Here I am... The almighty dragon...!
Kehuron-Them... It's them, the same assholes as ever. Why me? Why mine?
Kehuron-Among all the 9 balls in the galaxy, they had to choose mine!!
Chiqrilin-Listen... It's just...
Tente-You're known, huh?
Kehuron-"You need to forget those guys", they said! "Spend some holidays in a far place", they said!
Chiqrilin-But this time it's not about Soson Goku!
Kehuron-But of course! I wouldn't resurrect that one not even in exchange for wild sex! I'll call my cousin and you will see!
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Dragon-Let's see... What's wrong here?
Kehuron-This is my cousin...
Dragon-Are you the ones who torment and trouble my poor cousin with your stupid requests?
Chiqrilin-No... The one requesting is him...! [Get us outta this mess, please...!]
Tente-[Coward...]
Tente-Oh... powerful snake, we request the use of your power to grant us the allowed three wishes plus the bonus one...[br]Posted on: October 20, 2006, 03:38:33 AM_________________________________________________Page 19
Dragon-Very well, ask your three wishes, if they aren't related at all with this couple of losers!
Gohan-Then... What if he asks him to resurrect Discolo and bring him here? As he's a native, it might work...
Chiqrilin-Unheard of... he had a good idea! [Is he ill?]
Chiqrilin-Listen, Tente... Ask him to... bss, bis, bss, bis.
Tente-Bss, bis, bss, bis...? What kind of wish is that? Define it...
Chiqrilin-Don't play the funny guy! That is a typical comic speech resource! Ask him to resurrect the Vietnamek native Discolo and bring him here now!
Arrow: Head shake
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Tente-Let's see... I want you to resurrect the Vietnamek native Discolo and bring him here. Will you be able to do it?
Dragon-Nothing is impossible to me... I even know the Cow Joke...!
Dragon-Granted, then...
TSP-Huh?
Yansha-Discolo, your halo disappeared!
Tarugo-These fixatives nowadays just suck...!
Discolo-I'm being called by the Dragon... They made it!
Discolo-And now... I feel a pulling from a powerful force...!
Someone-Won't that be the stitch?
TSP-There's Godh!*
Peskaito-Dang, another one who gets away before paying!
*You get the play on words?
Alvaro-Nacho, please!
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Discolo-Huh? Where have I popped out?
Discolo-This is... is...!
Discolo-These trees... This tidy clear sky... These vast plains...
Discolo-Yes! I know where I am! It's incredible, marvelous, but true!
Discolo-I'm in Glory! I was so eager to visit it! [Long live Spain and flamenco!]
Nacho-[Ehem!]
Frigo-Huh...? The balls are being used without my consent! Who gathered them?
Arrow: It's bad taste to show how an old man is being beaten, even for us...
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Frigo-I can't allow it! I'll show them who I am!
Jim-The intervention was approved! Let's sweep those assholes!
Splock-Jim... I don't understand that sexual metaphore.
Jim-You shut up, Splock.
Another loud Williams' soundtrack.
Octopus-The martians are concentrating their fire on the motherships! They already rendered one useless!
Octopus-Enough playing "Top Gun"! Let's throw all we have at them!
Page 23
Octopus-You didn't need to be so literal!!
Commander-The main ship is at range, ready for the shot!
Snix-Loading the projectile!
Commander-Lock the target, we can't repeat the shot!
Page 24
Commander-Shooting after a 5-countdown!
Octopus-Majesty... The martians are retreating, something made them back off.
Queen-Ah, we're the best, we're badasses, we're...!
Commander-1... Zero! FIRE!!
Martians-[Run run]
Page 25
Snix-There goes!
Snix-There goes...!
Snix-There goes!
Commander-What... what... what the fuck happened?
Snix-Darn it, they told me they had fixed it!
Page 26
Commander-What do you mean?
Snix-Well... There's a key piece in the cannon that has been malfunctioning for some time; the drum that hosts the projectile in the barrel!
Snix-Due to an excessive heatening, the rotor lost its brake and spins beyond its expected mark, setting the projectile in the inverse direction to the shot...
Snix-...This way, when the triggers of the drum and the projectile are pulled, the latter goes in the reverse direction, towards the floor...
Snix-I trusted they had repaired it... But it's not like it gets a lot of use so...!
Commander-You mean some huge bullshit like that has gotten us without the cannon?
Puppet-[My, what a man...!]
Snix-The matter is not that simple!
Commander-Ah, isn't it?
Snix-The projectile hasn't exploded yet, its sensor activates the ignition when it's penetrated deep inside the target... It pierced through the cannon, the floor, and it heads to...
Snix-The core of the planet!
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Simultaneously... (That is, at the fucking same time, curses!)
Pis-Prepare yourself for our great Thunder Twister strike!
Albornoz-Prepare yourself for that twisty-whatever...
Vegetal-There they go again!
Goku-Geez!
Pis-Let's combine our weapons!
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Albornoz-There goes mine!
Vegetal-The... the two shots have joined!
Arrow: Baron Ashler shot.
Vegetal-Quick... let's dodge it!
Page 29
Vegetal-It can... It can change directions!
Vegetal-What a heck of a beam!
Page 30
In the battlefield...
Octopus-Those "space marines" are shit...
Octopus-Look, captain, the space marines.
Ridli-Awright, marines, I want a nice clean dispersal this time, it's a fucking bug-hunt!
Martians-Desintegrator beams set, torture tools ready!
Martians-To the assault, we'll conquer this planet!
Page 31
And in the Snix Quasar Energy Central... a scene happens again.
Both-We're all gonna die!! [Everyone of us!]
Puppet-Come on, come on! What do the readings say?
Snix-380,000 and keeps going down... The device could have gotten wrecked in the shooting failure, it might not explode.
Snix-Or... it might...
Snix-The explosion was produced at 20 km. from the core. It didn't reach it fully, but the expansive wave fissioned it... The ultimate disaster is estimated in a mere fifteen minutes!!
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Snix-Full warning, evacuation warning, everybody get on his transports!
Ackbar-Almiral Kiko, we detected hints of a plausible total catastrophe over Vietnamek!
Kiko-I'd think so, almiral Ackbar, that's expected with Scott on the loose...
Ackbar-You don't understand! The planet can blow at any moment!
Frigo-You were so nice gathering all the balls!... Though it was too rude of you to start asking for the wishes without me! [You've gotten me very, very angry...]
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leecherboy
October 20, 2006, 02:40 AM
Here's another translation; the next one will be the last one. Can you believe it? I can't! xD
Here's the raw:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/tsfwv7
In this one, Ridli has another quote from Alien 2. And Vegetal almost exactly quotes in page 12 a character from an early latin parody comic: "Groo the Wanderer".
But well, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 23 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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Page 1
Fresh lettuces
50 cents
Page 2
Martian-Missy! Hey! Missy!
I admit I'm starting to get confused with those summaries, which, on the other hand, I'm sure nobody reads. And after looking at the covers (this issue's, for example), I can't tell if this is a comic or the informative pamphlet of the grocery next corner. Ah, by the way, this issue is about transformers (Mr. Frigo, as a sample).
Get your cheap martian!!
Page 3
Frigo-So then? What do you argue in your defense!
Frigo-It's just in case you tell me something funny before I frag you.
Gohan-Wait a sec! Look!
Gohan-The dragon disappears.
Dragon-Fuck... It's true...
Frigo-What happened?
Tente-The great elder must have croaked.
Page 4
Frigo-WHAAAT?
Tente-The magic balls were created by the elder, and they nurtured from his very vital force. This way, if the elder dies, they lose their power and become inert. So is written... [The astute guy must have seen it coming and didn't protest against us gathering them...!]
Chiqrilin-Wow... o... oh, what a sad regretful death!
Frigo-Shit, if I had known, I wouldn't have got his kidney out through his mouth! You oughta have told me!
Chiqrilin-[You did that? I'm so envious!]
Tente-Does that mean you owned him?
Frigo-Well... err... I guess I killed him a little...
Frigo-But come on! What is this? I don't explain my actions! I'm Frigo! I don't apologize, I kill!
Chiqrilin-Poop... I thought we'd make it alive for a moment...
Page 5
Far from there...
Vegetal-Do you still have some surprise in for us... good lads...?
Pis-Well... considering that you can't do squat by now... I think I'll use some more relaxed refinated method, yet deadly effective...
Albornoz-Is that so?
Pis-Let's read the Kabuki!*
Pis-Well, well... Starting by the editorial!
*Kabuki was another spanish magazine about mangas
Page 6
Wilma-Can you actually believe what this degenerate was gonna do? In front of ladies, too! [For Riera's sake!]
Albornoz-Someone will fly the heck out of here! Yaaaaaaah!
Page 7
Wilma-I agree!
Wilma-That's it! I can't take this anymore, we go back to Earth stepping on whoever we might need to!
Bito-About that matter... Didn't you sense a magnitude 10 tremor some minutes ago?
Wilma-How should I know, but we go right now. Come on, let's get a move on.
Vegetal-[Wow, what a woman!]
Bito-But dear, do you know where you're heading?
Page 8
Someone-The first transport has left.
Someone-Immediate evacuation!
Pilot-Second transport here, everything set, give us the cue.
Control-A clue? It has a crown but is not a king...
Snixcom-And... and the foreigners?
Box: "I let them go, on the condition that they go get lost somewhere."
Puppet-Get us out of here, Squintron, on the double!
Commander-[Quick! Quick! Quick!]
Squintron-I don't have jump coordinates, I'll have to improvise them!
Page 9
Frigo-It isn't right! Not fair, shoot!
Frigo-You have no right to do this to me!
Frigo-After all the work I've put into this, now the result of my efforts has been taken from me! Ungrateful country! [Dang... I sound like a celebrity...]
Bito-Let's see, dear, where the fuck are we going to?
Wilma-We're going to anywhere a space ship is, of course!
Page 10
Wilma-Sheesh, this is nice. Could you point us to a place where we can get a space ship?
Vegetal-Geez, hello!
Frigo-Sheesh, what a coincidence, we weren't enough people here!
Vegetal-I said that before....* [Copycat...]
Frigo-Must I understand that as a disrespect?
Vegetal-Beep, beep, the line's busy, the line's busy... [Get fucked off, Queer Duck...!]
Frigo-Another irreverence else and I frag you! [Don't make me!]
Vegetal-I doubt it, I'm too hot. You won't waste things like that...
Vegetal-I've known you for a long time, queen of the desert!
*DF #18, Vegetal says: "Holy Godh, we weren't enough people here"
Page 11
Frigo-What... what do you mean by that?
Vegetal-Man, I think I'm not talking about things you can't see. I'm not the one who uses lipstick, beauty...
Frigo-Alright, I admit, I came out of the closet! That's why I hang around good looking sturdy warriors! That's it, I said it! Satisfied now?
Chiqrilin-Oh... jeez... So surprising...
Bito-I'd have never suspected it...
Wilma-Who would have guessed?
Goku-Yeah, I was actually thinking it might...
K.K-[Harl, so exciting, another queer!]
*This guy is Krispin Klander, a gay spanish character from some time ago.
Frigo-Very well, you asked for it.
Frigo-I'll increase my energy to erase you all from the map! Start preparing your gravestone!
Page 12
Chiqrilin-What's this crazy girl saying now?
Chiqrilin-She must be on her menopausia.
Vegetal-Uh oh... Looks like we took it too far! He's gonna bring up all his hidden power... and nobody has ever witnessed how far can he go. [Were we mistaken?]
Page 13
Frigo-Very good... Future corpses...
Page 14
Frigo-Before I turn you into birdseed, allow me...
Frigo-...A last question.
Chiqrilin-Yes... yes... sure... of course...
Frigo-Aren't I more elegant and sturdy now?
CC-[Man, dude, I can't tell...]
Goku-What's the joke? [I don't get it]
Vegetal-Er... you, listen, don't think you've impressed us inflating yourself like the Pink Panther. Let's see how strong you have gotten...!
Page 15
Nacho-Wait a sec, according to the parody laws this comic is supposed to follow, we should do something about reanimating Soson Goku in a healing tank. [As in the original...]
Arrow: Self-cameo produced by an oversized ego.
Vegetal-Okay! Happy now? So then, let's get moving! ["I am in a hurry", as in the song!]
Bito-He's right about that... My knowledge about the climate behavior in special situations allows me to detect that the planet core has been fissioned...
Chiqrilin-[Heck... the chineseman footsteps were his!]
Frigo-Say... I don't mind you ignoring me, honest...
Frigo-If it weren't to say bullshit!
Page 16
Vegetal-Awright, there I go. Get ready!
Frigo-Heh!
Vegetal-Da... ng... H... Has someone noted down that aircraft carrier plate?
Frigo-I think you're beginning to understand. Now you'll see not only my size has increased...
Jaime-Also your private parts'?
Someone-Jaime, please...
Page 17
Ackbar-Every ship back away from the planet now. The catastrophe is imminent!
Ackbar-The octopus are being swatted like flies, and the martians are blowing up after hearing the "Macarena" song we're playing...!
Ridli-What? Retreat now?
Ridli-Ah... I understand... Given the circumstances... Orders acknowledged.
Ridli-Girls, retreat in squads! Let's move like we got a purpose!
Kiko-To all the ships in the float, almiral Kiko here...! Every man for himself, the last one is a sissy!
Page 18
Someone-Only 10 minutes left!
Snixcom-This agression to our village won't be forgotten! We Snix don't forgive! [But keep on running, our rear is getting burned!]
Queen-But the thing that annoys me the most is that we didn't get our revenge!
Frigo-Now I'm having fun.
Vegetal-Couldn't you buy yourself a Playstation, like everybody else?
*Note: I guess those two bubbles are in the wrong order.[br]Posted on: October 20, 2006, 03:40:27 AM_________________________________________________Page 19
Chiqrilin-Well... not too bad, somewhat closer to the target than four shots ago...
Frigo-I like this... Yet even this way, I'm not at my full power... I'll step into my next raw power state...
Wilma-Wants to get even more muscles?
Bito-Gonna blow up.
Gohan-That won't happen not even with the TV commercial gadgets.
Frigo-I don't need your opinions, bunch of know-it-alls! Now you'll see!
Page 20
Sound: SKRRRCHLS! (no translation)
Arrow: Heart attack.
Page 21
Vegetal-What... what is he doing now?
Goku-Wilma, did you see that?
Wilma-No! I don't wanna look! It gives me the shivers!
Frigo-My energy level has duplicated!
Frigo-Now I'm stronger and uglier than ever! I'm having a blast!
Chiqrilin-Well, come on, go get him, bold one!
Vegetal-Say what! Get him, my ass! I wouldn't touch that horrible thing not even while being drunk!
Goku-Whatever you do, do it now!
Page 22
Discolo-What happened here?
Discolo-All the inhabitants in Vietnamek killed, even the great elder! This looks like the ending of "Excalibur"! [And they sure messed up the gramps... Puach!]
Someone-H... Hey... you... look down here...!
Discolo-You're alive!
Nil-Yes... but not for long... I've been told the Cow Joke... listen...
Page 23
Discolo-You're not telling me that bloody joke!
Nil-Ouch, ouch... It... It's not that... ouch... stop at once.
Nil-I... I meant that if you want... as I'm about to pass out, you could fuse with me and...
Discolo-Ah, no, you won't talk me into gay stuff. Not even if it's your last will! I'm a manly man, myself! [Take this, raving gay!]
Nil-N...o, it isn't what you... Ouch, ouch!
Discolo-It isn't? [A pity, I was enjoying this...]
Nil-It's a technique to transmit the energy of the Vietnameks...
Nil-It's something like in "The Highlanders". If one of us is about to die, he performs the fusion and his essence passes on to his brother... [Please, don't hit me no more, I'm sick...]
Page 24
Discolo-Err... well... if it's just that... and how can we do it?
Nil-We are just required to grab our pinky fingers and pull, I'll concentrate and my energy will pass on to you...
Discolo-Oh well... all for the cause... [We look like two schoolgirls...!]
Page 25
In the nearest beyond... Well, I do understand myself!
TSP-Can you find out what's going on with Discolo?
Yansha-And Chiqrilin?
Tarugo-And Wilma?
Peskaito-Relax, relax, I just have two antennas!!
Peskaito-Wait a sec, I'm getting a call through the another line!
Sound: Beep, beep!
Godh-Let's see, mister Peskaito, I'm Godh. I've been resurrected along with Discolo and I've surveyed the situation... Things are looking bad, so I've decided to do the following...
Godh-I have Mr. Pompon looking for the balls, that I reactivated, and with these we'll summon the Kehu-ron dragon and ask him to resurrect the great elder, so the Vietnamek dragon appears and then ask him to resurrect all the fallen ones and put them to safety away from the planet's destruction. Understood?
Page 26
Peskaito-I... I think I lost you around the "looking for the balls" part!
Godh-Doesn't matter, limit yourself to keep the communication on. We must contact the remaining ones there!
Godh-What really matters is that you're perfectly synchronized and communicated. The timing is crucial. I understand the operation is a complex one, but "12 Monkeys" was harder.
Peskaito-Er... I think that one had a bad ending...
Godh-It's the same, forget that example! [Darn!]
Pompon-"I'm not a racist, Mr. Pompon. I'm beyond those things." Blah, blah, blah.
Pompon-Then ask me who's doing the dirty job here while the boss spends his wage in conferences!
Frigo-So then? Isn't anybody going to defy me? Come on, I need a challenge!
Page 27
Gñ-Mister Frigo, the sensor shows that you're here. Where did you disappear to? I've been looking for you all day, and there's nobody in the ship, and this is a chaos and... Mr. Frigo?
Frigo-It's me, dumbass!
Gñ-Blimey, they had already told me that you, after waking up and with no make-up on, looked somewhat worse, but I didn't think...
Frigo-It's not that! I've suffered a metamorphosis!
Gñ-Ah, well, in that case, I wish you an early recovery from that metacarsis, and... what I said, get better!
Frigo-I'll kill him!
Chiqrilin-Attention, I'm getting a direct communication from beyond!
Wilma-Yeah, man, and I make diagnosis by burping.
Bito-[Really?]
Inspired in the Bunny by David Ramirez (another parodist).
Page 28
Godh-Hello, Chiqrilin, it's Godh!
Chiqrilin-It's Godh! [Man, what a coincidence!]
Godh-[Yes, yes...]
Godh-Listen, brat, tell the native child, Tente, to be ready, since at any moment the dragon may appear and we'll have to ask him for the following...!
Pompon-(Sure thing, I'm gonna complain to the sindicate, to the human rights league, to the Anti-Apartheid, and to the Black Panthers...)
Pompon-(He's not gonna get away with this!)
Chiqrilin-And when the dragon appears, he told me to use the two remaining wishes and ask to resurrect all the ones fragged by the space warriors and to get us out of the planet, as it's on its last legs!
Gohan-And the bonus wish? [Can I ask for these trading cards I'm missing?]
Page 29
Frigo-Yet again, they ignore me...
Frigo-You can't say I have any animal magnetism.
Gñ-No way, boss, just your imagination...
Frigo-Very well, they asked for it. I'll step into the third state of my power. The ultimate one!
Wilma-Oh my Godh, he's transforming again. What'll appear now?
Chiqrilin-Don't know. Getting uglier than that will be hard. Unless he becomes Estella's Tarzan.
Die from envy, Onslaught!
Page 30
Chiqrilin-I knew his body just couldn't hold it!
Page 31
Vegetal-He blew up? That's it? He croaked? [Can't be that easy!]
Tente-I don't think so, I still sense him inside there, he went through the change and his power level is superior!
Bito-Geez, so interesting! [I'll take samples...]
Vegetal-What will come out of here?
Vegetal-At any moment he might come out of the smoke... I must be ready!
Frigo-[Ehem!]
Vegetal-What will he be this time? Will I have a chance? I...
Frigo-Ehem!
Page 32
Vegetal-It's... it's a shrimp! The transformation must have gone wrong and he came to naught! Hahahahahwahwahwaaa!
Vegetal-Ha, hi, hu, ho, he, hu, hi, ho!
Sound:Trashing-prum
Vegetal-[Poop, I was wrong!]
Chiqrilin-[We're done for...]
Tente-[So cool!]
Frigo-This is my ultimate state! Now my power is absolute! (Something like the digital television, but kicking ass) You're more finished than David Hasselhoff's musical career! [I warned you...]
Sign: And in the next issue... Vietnamek blows. I swear!
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leecherboy
October 20, 2006, 02:44 AM
So here's the last translation!!
That mouse guy in the cover page is the "Ratoncito Perez", the spanish tooth fairy (who is supposed to give money to the kids in exchange for their fallen teeth) :)
Here's the raw:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/25c13q
Well, this is it! Actually (and unfortunately) Dragon Fall doesn't end here, but since the issues after this one really suck and this one ends the Vietnamek saga, I'm calling it quits here.
So, what I want to say now is: A HUGE THANKS to all the guys who supported me through here, to the guys who even started an scanlation of this, and to the guys who liked my translations! :3
And finally, enjoy! :p
Dragon Fall 24 Translation
by leecherboy (a.k.a. kyo-boy)
*Important note: I'll be using brackets [] for speech that is not within bubbles (speech around the characters, that is)
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Page 2
Goku-Boycott to french products!
*Some ten years ago, Spain and France were engaged in some fight about fruits being purposely spoiled. That's what is meant there.
That things are pretty bad in Vietnamek, we all knew. The planet has turned into a mockery where everybody fights one another. What can one expect to happen to a planet like this? Of course, I'm not telling you. You wished! Read the comic and you'll find out.
The thingie is blowing up.
Page 3
Someone-Emergency state. Only seven minutes until the catastrophe.
Someone-All ships get out of the impact radius.
Splock-[Logical... that's not a donuts!]
Someone-If there are remaining survivors still to be evacuated... fuck you!
Page 4
Frigo-And now you, Vegetal. I saved you up for the end. That's why I hit you with relative softness before...
Vegetal-Yes... too relative.
Vegetal-Thanks for nothing.
Wilma-Yet I'd have preferred him to treat me specially for being a woman...!
Wilma-Men are sexists only to their advantage!
Page 5
Frigo-Prepare yourself for my fatal strike!
Bito-Fuck, it just goes to show the boy reads a lot, because his speech differs a lot from your street jargon...
Chiqrilin-Go to hell!
Vegetal-Not fair!
Gñ-...I'm here only as a decoration... [I'm bored...]
Page 6
Godh-Attention, Mr. Peskaito! Mr. Pompon has already gathered the balls!
Pompon-Guess you appreciate it... [Right?]
Peskaito-Very good, hurry and ask for the wish... My antennas are overheating!
Havoc-So thrilling! This is just like "Surprise, surprise"!
TSP-[If you say so...]
Chiqrilin-The balls have been gathered, they'll ask for the wish.
Chiqrilin-Beep.
Vegetal-[Mommyyy...]
Page 7
Frigo-So then? Can't you fight any more! Valiant dummy!
Vegetal-Bully...
Someone-Don't think you've seen the last of us!
Discolo-I, Discolo, the last champion in Vietnamek, will avenge my people. Get ready! [Chew on that!]
Gohan-Mister Discolo, you're back! Though I see you somewhat changed, you have this different look...
Discolo-Now, now, just your imagination... [Harl...][Doesn't this brazen brat bother you...?]
Page 8
Frigo-Let's do battle, then!
Discolo-[I'll beat the crap out of you, annoying sissy!]
Gñ-I'll help the boss with my special power, that way I'll balance the fight! [And I won't be a part of the landscape anymore!]
Gñ-I'll swap my body with that guy's, who has a great energetic potential, and I'll use it for my advantage!
Gñ-I'll fire him my essence in the shape of a reconcentrated beam, aah!
Arrow: Shitty toad that happened to be around there.
Page 9
Gñ-Outta here, critter, you'll wreck my plan!
Gñ-And now, I can't miss, there I go... aah!
Arrow: Cock-phant that was around there.
Frigo-There goes my "Special Forces" commander...! [Useless..]
Page 10
Discolo-Now you'll see, you little wretch!
Thing-[Way to go, Stretchy!]
Frigo-Heh!
Page 11
Frigo-Vegetal is K.0.'d, and that useless Discolo won't bother me no more. Isn't there anyone else who wants to go for a try?
Frigo-(Sheesh, now that I think about it, I didn't even touch that pitiful guy with a bottle for a head!) [He looked so pathetic to me...]
Chiqrilin-Geez, the sky has darkened!
Daredevil-[He's right, yeah...]
Tente-Again? That means...!
Jim-Listen, Scott, don't you think the sky has suddenly darkened?
Ridli-More than it was, sir? [Poor guy, the stress...]
Page 12
Peskaito-Now! The Vietnamek dragon has awakened again! The great elder has resurrected!
TSP-Good, everything will be fine now! We'll see the bunch again!
Tarugo-And Wilma!
Tente-The dragon is back! We have to ask for the wishes!
Chiqrilin-You... you do it, my voice is fading because of the panic...!
Page 13
Dragon-I'm here yet again! Speak your wishes!
Dragon-And finish at once, curses!!
Tente-Er... So... yes, sure. Oh, big horned snake, we ask you to bring back from the death abyss all those poor tormented souls which...!
Chiqrilin-Shorten it up, brat, things are too bad for you to waste the time!
Tente-Ow, dang, got it, got it!
Tente-Let's see... We ask you to resurrect all the inhabitants in Vietnamek annihilated by the space warriors! [Pleease...]
Dragon-Very well, it's done, they've resurrected. And now, what's your second wish?
Page 14
Villager-Jeez! I'm alive!
Villager2-Me too! Me too!
Villager3-Listen... You...
Tente-Fine, the wish is to put all the people in the planet to safety, taking them to the Earth!
Peskaito-The Earth? Why there?
Godh-Well, we enjoy some good meals here!
Dragon-Good... So be it...
Dragon-I'll relocate them now!
Page 15
Wilma-The Earth! Look, we're home!
Sign: Drink cold Coke
Bito-Shoot, I worked my ass off on two awesome space ships for this? Life is unfair...!
Vegetal-[You bet, I was fleeing from here...]
Page 16
Chiqrilin-Tente, you took your time! Where were you?
Tente-Asking for the bonus wish.
Tente-That Soson Goku and the space warriors remained there!
Wilma-Cool!
Vegetal-And then... why did I come here?
Tente-I guess you were redeemed before the eyes of the dragon after being pummeled like everybody else...
Frigo-But... but where did everybody go!?
Frigo-Geez, look... not everything's lost yet...!
Goku-[Uh... say, where are them all?][br]Posted on: October 20, 2006, 03:44:19 AM_________________________________________________Page 17
Agent-Seismic activity detected, the planetary cortex is starting to fission, there are emanations of melted material!
Agent2-The evacuation was complete, there's no signs of intelligent life down there!
Frigo-I don't know what's going on, but I'm getting bad vibes. We better finish this...
Frigo-...On the double!
Page 18
Frigo-Come on, free sample of sheep brains! Fight, useless guy! [Heck, man, what on earth is wrong with the floor?]
Goku-Bl... Blast! This is looking bad!
Peskaito-Oh, Soson Goku and Frigo remain on the surface of the planet! They are both going to...
Peskaito-Oh, yes... of course... hye, hye, hye, hye...! [How didn't I realize?]
Page 19
Chiqrilin-What's the matter with those two?
Bito-They realized they have a lots of things in common (they hated Soson Goku, they're weakasses and they're cherries) and they liked each other... [Ah, the youth... snif]
Chiqrilin-B... But what? Will you let Wilma get involved with a guy who came to destroy the Earth and everything else!?
Bito-Look, youngster, I was starting to think my girl was the lilly type, so now that she can settle down with a good-looking lad, don't screw it for me, will you?
Discolo-And the great elder?
Villager-Mending his guts, that were somewhat messy, but I don't think he'll make it through...
Godh-In a matter of seconds, Soson Goku's end might arrive... Mr. Pompon, start cooling the "Chateau"...
Pompon-[I took the liberty to think ahead, sir...]
Page 20
Goku-Look, I don't know who you are nor what did I ever do to you, but something's going on and I'm scramming!
Frigo-Ahahaha. So useless, the very planet shook him off, as if he was a mere flea!
Goku-You sure?
Page 21
Frigo-Uh? What is that?
Frigo-T...The Superpuyajin! You're the mythical figure I was so frightened of! You're my nemesis, my enemy!
Goku-Uh, sayz who? [Fuck, dude, my face has gotten so serious! I even seem to be smart and all!]
Page 22
Frigo-You won't beat me, I'll increase my power to its limits!
Frigo-Very well... let's finish this at once!
Someone-Total deflagration estimated in five minutes, bang of two million megatons, flee immediately!
Someone-Sergeant Scott, we have trouble with the impulsor, we can't jump to hyperspace.
Ridli-What? If you don't jump before the explosion, the expansive wave will turn you into confetti! [I'm going.]
Page 23
Someone-Get ready to evacuate the command corridor, this ship is lost!
Someone-Evacuation of the Starcarrier!
Ridli-You won't need to!
Elly-Scott, there's no time for McLane-like scenes!
Ridli-I won't argue over it, Elly!
Ridli-I'll enter through the maintenance gate, leave the access to the impulsor opened and start the engines. We are all leaving here together!
Page 24
Goku-Ouch. [Thathurt...!]
Goku-Ow!
Goku-Ow!
Goku-Ow!
Goku-No more! Please!
Frigo-I won't waste my last seconds. Before this planet goes down the drain, the last thing I want to see is your dumbass face all smashed!
Page 25
Frigo-Heh... It wouldn't have been so easy with Vegetal. He has a greater potential to profit from as a Superpuyajin, but you...
Frigo-...Will just leave behind a beautiful corpse, hya, hya!
Ridli-I'm getting there! Did you do it, Elly?
Elly-Very well, that's it, but hurry, we're putting our lives on the line for you to play hero!
Elly-Reactor gate opened!
Page 26
Ridli-Perfect!
Ridli-I have a guess on where the malfunction is!
Depresor-Scott, for the love of your fellow countrymen, hurry up, only two minutes for the banging, you'll blow up like the World Trade!
Page 27
Frigo-Behold this!
Frigo-I'll make slices for canapes out of you!
Frigo-My laser disk works as a boomerang, when it comes back it'll cut lower than that!
Page 28
Frigo-You can't escape, its psychic tracer pursuits the brain and...!
Frigo-Brain... Oh, Godh...
Frigo-Hey... Stop, there was a mistake... UAAARRGGGH!!
Goku-[Jeez, what a miss!]
Ridli-I have it! I just need a minute and it's over!
Page 29
Elly-Damn it all, we don't even have a minute here! You do it now, or it is over for all of us!
Goku-Does it hurt? [Shoot, kinda disturbing...]
Frigo-Go get fucked off...
Goku-Uh? I sense something huge!
Page 30
Elly-Scott, it's burning our bottom!! There's no time!
Ridli-I know that too well, I'm in the bottom! Hit the ignition now!
Page 31
Jim-All ships to hyperspace, we can't stay anymore, let Scott handle it!
Someone-Jumping to Factor 5!
Elly-At last!
Arrow: Superwicked explosion as in Star Wars Special Edition.
Page 32
Elder-Oh... Vietnamek has... exploded!
Villager-Don't get excited, great elder, you're too old for this!
Chiqrilin-And... Soson Goku?
Someone-I don't sense him at all...
Gohan-Dad...
Vegetal-Well... The space warriors are old history now, and the super-gifted is, too. I think I'll stay here and go job-hunting...
Wilma-Don't worry about that, honey, I can maintain you... [I just want to!]
Elder-What about us?
Vegetal-Stick it into a...
Wilma-For the moment, you can live in our house until we gather the balls again. Then we'll ask the dragon to find you a new home.
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Thank you for reading (or simply scrolling) this far!! See ya!
Paradoxone
December 16, 2006, 03:04 PM
Hi!
I'm so happy that finally someone is translating, better yet, scanslating Dragon Fall. Some years ago when I visited Spain, I discovered this hilarious comedy and bought all the numbers I could get my hands on (about 5). I only know very little spanish, so although the images are funny just by themselves, it's great to fully understand the jokes now ^_____^
I just noticed one thing. All the links from volumes 15+ are broken...
So I just wanted to ask if you plan on uploading them on another filesharing site?
Thanks in advance!
:-Daniel
rykarreolacr
December 17, 2006, 01:35 AM
Thanks a lot for your work man!!!! And I agree, the story after this point gets very crappy.
leecherboy
December 17, 2006, 11:43 AM
Meh, I'm too lazy to upload them again. :p
However, you can get them at http://www.boladedragon.com/dragonball/fotos/dragonfall.php
They're in PDF form, but it's better than nothing, I guess :amuse
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