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KALiZU
April 19, 2008, 12:42 AM
Hope you like.

http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs30/f/2008/109/7/5/__Gin__Ichimaru_Gin____by_KALiZU.jpg

If anyone wants the lineart, just tell. It's much thicker than the original lineart though and doesn't have the grass.

*UPDATE*

V2 (more grass rendering w/ original line colors)

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g21/hoshigaki/18ccopyc.jpg

V3 (same as V2 but with colored lines)

http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs30/f/2008/110/1/0/__Gin__Ichimaru_Gin____by_KALiZU.jpg

Gintara
April 19, 2008, 12:51 AM
Very nice. It has this pastel feel to it. I think you can work more on the sky. ^^

KALiZU
April 19, 2008, 12:58 AM
Thanks! Yeah, I wasn't really satisfied at how the sky turned out. I might work on it some time.

k11n
April 19, 2008, 01:53 AM
I think the sky looks fine.. but i don`t like the gras.
On the other side u were doing a great job with the charakters and the blood! good work!

bigtymer32
April 19, 2008, 03:15 AM
good work and i agree wih the sky

KALiZU
April 19, 2008, 06:51 AM
Thanks a lot guys! k11n, Yeah, I feel the grass needed more rendering. Might do it later. :D

admirenkiwi
April 19, 2008, 07:01 AM
wow :blink
i dont think i could've done better :scry

KALiZU
April 19, 2008, 07:48 AM
Thanks! And BTW, I've updated it now! (Check first post)

weixiaobao
April 20, 2008, 01:45 AM
I like this style
nice :)

Windmillblade
April 20, 2008, 01:47 AM
Gin you a genious, the colors the style looks amazing

KALiZU
April 20, 2008, 02:00 AM
Thanks!! ^^ I'm glad you guys like it!

Meri_maslinkata
April 20, 2008, 11:00 AM
Good work.I like it.

KALiZU
April 20, 2008, 09:38 PM
Glad you liked it. ^^

Ketamine
April 21, 2008, 07:37 AM
I think grass and sky need more work;

For grass; Do one layer per "piece" of grass; and make a clear reflect of the moon in every "piece" of grass (as your moon is giant, it has to reflect, and not just a lil' bit ! ^^)

For Sky; It feels a lil' empty, maybe you could put some lil' clouds; but the better would be, probably, MIST !! It'll be awesome ^^

(Don't forget, as your moon is giant, it has to make some very strong reflects !)

KALiZU
April 21, 2008, 08:04 AM
^ Thanks for the constructive crits!

About the grass, yeah, doing it by piece would be nice, but I'm really lazy, and my laptop's really slow at times when I've got a lot of layers... It's like one brush stroke'll take 20 seconds to appear. O_O

I actually tried putting clouds before the moon, but I seriously failed. >_< But I might try putting mist later. (sounds much less tiresome than the grass thingy) ^^'

Ketamine
April 21, 2008, 08:40 AM
Mmh; to grass, you can reduce layers by making one piece of grass in the left, one in the middle and one in the right in the same layer ! (as long as they don't touch each other, you can!)

By doing it like this, you can need what.. ? 10/15 layers ?

And each time you're satisfied by a couple of layers of your grass, you join them into one ^^

(I know what it is, with laptops, as my screen doesn't work anymore, I have a laptop, 'till my new panoramic screen arrives ^^' And it sucks, i don't color with it.. :/)