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MXC
May 28, 2008, 12:21 AM
KK, This is my first time cleaning anything, and the first time I use Photoshop in about 6 months.

I did this to try and Help Kuu Scans to keep releasing Air Gear, which I love.

This images are the Tests they give for Cleaners.

I know they are not great or anything, so I would like some pointers as to what and how to improve, don't worry, I don't take offense from bad comments, just try to keep it constructive :p

FIRST Original Image (Needs cleaning and Leveling, plus some redrawing)
http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk245/MXCorp/Redraw.jpg

MY ATTEMPT
http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk245/MXCorp/RedrawDONE.png

SECOND and THIRD Original Images: (needs Joining, Leveling, cleaning and Redrawing)
http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk245/MXCorp/Splice1.jpg
http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk245/MXCorp/Splice2.jpg

MY ATTEMPT
http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk245/MXCorp/spliceDONE.png

chiresakura
May 28, 2008, 09:11 AM
I'm not really sure what kind of standards you're cleaning for, so I'll point out the general stuff. Your first page looks nice, but I think the specks in the white areas are part of the image. Dust-specks tend to be lighter in color, smaller, and often rectangular-shaped.

Your spread looks good, though a bit dark. I think you lost some light gray tones, and the highlights on the clothing look a bit dark to me. Some of the backgrounds got inked over, too. Also, I don't know how Kuu does SFX, but the plaid pattern doesn't match the original pattern.

You already did the hard part, though (stitching the pages together), so any other adjustments should be easy. Nice job ^^

MXC
May 28, 2008, 10:14 PM
Thx, I will sure take a look at those, gonna have to search around and see what it all means since I never did any of this before XD

Thx for the feedback mate, much appreciated ;)