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neomaster121
July 26, 2008, 09:15 AM
Well you are gonna read my first review rate it as you please

im gonna use links instead of pics

well so we start of with the colour pages of the first black ninja known to man
man and theres no mistaking that hes not black since he can rap, great work kishi but this guy is seemlying strange. Has anyone noticed the tatoo on his shoulder, what does it say???
http://www.onemanga.com/Naruto/410/
the design of this character is quite unique but i do think that hes not beating sasuke. The way he talks of himself n the tailed beast suggests that he has fully masted control or has found a equal basis of which the 8tails n he don't hinder each other. Could this have been taught to naruto or maybe kishi is showing us one of two things that the 9 tails is a creature far different from the other tailed beasts or that this 8tails host could have been the way naruto turned out if left alone by all other ninjas

the colour spread just pefect in my opinion
kishi could have even have added the first and second as the teachers of the 3rd. It really shows that naruto is benefiting of generations of training
in fact when he completes his latest training maybe he too will create a jutsu for his genration to recognise as genius. The art work is great and is nice to see all of theses characters lined up, even the grumpy 3rd.
http://www.onemanga.com/Naruto/410/02

His way of defence suggest that he already sensed how strong his opponent was as theres no way he would have taken that stance without knowing if he could hold him or not.
http://www.onemanga.com/Naruto/410/06/

Moving onto narutos training with the frogs. I don't know about you guys but i just love it when we get some explanation into the mysterys of the ninja world, and its sort of brings the story back to its early days of when kakashi trained naruto in the use of just normal chakra, now 3 years later and naruto is learning about the next stage of chakra, senjutsu. Narutos eagerness to learn and actively take part is as straightforward as ever.

I have to point out but i think Naruto takes this suggestion of not being quite seriously. http://www.onemanga.com/Naruto/410/09/
Yea he goes onto laughing it off but something in narutos mind connected with pa frogs words. Maybe he thought back to when first learning rasengan, when jiraya told him to focus on the paper but then as soon as he had a dot it was simple. Or maybe something that jiraya tried to do with naruto over the 2 year time jump that caught up with naruto in that moment.

well as always naruto wants to do the fast route and theres always a catch isn't there.

It seems that if naruto takes the time to just sit still and feel the natures energy naruto will then take years, years he doesn't have, but if he uses the oil, which automatically attracts nature energy towards him and into his body naruto quickly looses control and becomes this http://www.onemanga.com/Naruto/410/13/
Quite ironic since the same thing happens to him with the 9tails chakra, both opposing opposites which both threaten narutos way of life as a human. the internal 9tails and the external nature energy. This to me is furtherly confirmed when pa frog goes on to talk about ballance http://www.onemanga.com/Naruto/410/15/
maybe the previous hit to the head will knock it into naruto that if he has the balance then he can become a sage. Balance being a key feature i feel throughout the manga going far back to his tree walking etc. Something which i believe hasn't be directly pointed out to naruto, maybe they all just assumed he knew.

I'd just want to make the point that pa frog says the statues are the remains of the people who turned into frogs and not the training which turned them into frogs then statues http://www.onemanga.com/Naruto/410/16/
the veiwing of all those who failed has seemed to have made naruto realise how difficult the training in and i find naruto's expressions continuely intriging. Also as i look at the frogs statues they all seem extremly pleased, as if they had find enlightment.

We also know get the reason to why jiraya looked so bad in hermit mode, http://www.onemanga.com/Naruto/410/17/
he too failed a little but still succeeded

Now its back to the 8tails host and sasukes team hawk and it seems that hes made short work of juugo and sugetsu, but im more interested in what hes attcually saying, "the 8tails beast a killer bee" "when the batttle gets goin your gonna be humiliated before you get poppin" Could these lyrics be a forcast onto whats about to happen. With the 8tails. Is sasuke going to humilate him or become humiliated, and by popping is this whats going to happen when the 8tail host unleashes or is kishi telling us that Sasuke will unlock his true powers in this fight. I think kishi maybe hinting clues here quite smartly and i love how its weirding out team hawk.

Well i just want to mention that naruto says his ways the same as j-mans, but its not, i believe with the 9tails inside him him transforming into a frog due to the overflowing nature chakra may have an effect on thet 9tails. I believe that kishi will show us a new lvl beyond what pa frog expected. When naruto accidently unleashes 9tails chakra while overflowing with nature energy, a power of which will be new to pa frog, i believe it will alst for a split moment before naruto gets control over both the 9tails sealling it back in and the nature chakra, thus signyfying the end of the first step, but thats just a prediction.

It safe to say that both the 8tails and sasuke are quite over confident but who is the 8tails talking to when he says gotcha
http://www.onemanga.com/Naruto/410/20/
Has he heard a message from his tailed beast who knows, but i think we are going to be finding out a few things in the upcoming fight.

Well all in all this chapter was good.
Some nice insight into the naruto world and some great art
i also think kishi has droped messages into the chapter quite well and i believe we will understand the meanings later on

all in all i give the chapter a 8 out of 10

hope you liked reading my first review

Nath Uchiha
July 26, 2008, 09:38 AM
well so we start of with the colour pages of the first black ninja known to man
man and theres no mistaking that hes not black since he can rap, great work kishi but this guy is seemlying strange. Has anyone noticed the tatoo on his shoulder, what does it say???
http://www.onemanga.com/Naruto/410/

I tihnk it probally says 8. Nice review you could tidy it up a little bit with headings and bold ect though :)

neomaster121
July 26, 2008, 02:30 PM
well thanks more points on how i can improve for a next review would surely be useful

Sherbetmayhem
July 26, 2008, 07:39 PM
Very nice review - you covered all the major points really well! I like what you suggested about the 8 tails' song possibly being a hint from Kishi to the readers :) A couple of suggestions for making the review easier to read:

- Separate it into themes, using headings, such as: 'Plot', 'Dialogue', 'Art,' 'Characterisation', 'Themes and extras', and possibly even predictions for next week.
- Be really careful with your spelling and grammar - make sure you're using capital letters, full stops, commas, and make sure you run it through a spell check first.
- Add some images so it's easier for us to see what part of the chapter you're talking about :D

Really well done - a good first review! Keep up the good work!

Sherby xxx

bean
July 27, 2008, 09:47 AM
tattoo says "iron"
http://www.onemanga.com/Naruto/408/05/

you gotta be on your A game if you're going to start doing reviews.

neomaster121
July 27, 2008, 10:17 AM
tattoo says "iron"
http://www.onemanga.com/Naruto/408/05/

you gotta be on your A game if you're going to start doing reviews.

lol cool thanks for pointing that out

edit

n thanks sherbe

i'll be sure to remember that for my next review