Character Art

[Montai]

Hello everyone :D Just posting some art of game project that I've been working on. If you want to tell me what you think, just go hard on me. That'd be great.

I'm going to start with these for right now. If this catches on, then I'll post more. Hope you guys like.
Good Guys-------------------------------------------------------

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b379/Atnom/SheaNa2.png
Name: Sheana
Age: 19
Weapon:Rods/Giant Bats
Abilities: Summoning, Healing magic.

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b379/Atnom/Sin-EB.jpg
Name:EB
Age:22
Weapon: Giant Swords
Abilities: Shatter Artes

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b379/Atnom/Xzarren.png
Name:Xzarren
Age:22
Weapon: Guns/Grenade/Rocket launchers
Abilities: Peirce Artes


Villians-------------------------------------------------------

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b379/Atnom/Character-Sin.jpg
Name:Sin
Age: 500~
Weapon:Unknown
Abilities:Unknown

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b379/Atnom/Fallen-GodBeast.png
Name:Udine
Age: 500~
Weapon:Claws
Abilities: Black magic:Water/Ice


http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b379/Atnom/Whys-1.png
Name:Whys
Age:Unknown
Weapon: Katana
Abilities: Arcane Artes/Time Magic
Thanks in advance.

[eperia]

nice char design.
especially the outfits and poses are amazing.
i´m going to appraise your single stuff..better to say: i´ll try it =P

Sheana
nice body and color sheme.
but it´s a bit sad,that i can only see her back.
myabe a front view or other poses would be fine.
her dress is amazing,only the ribbon is a bit disturbing,means a bit to much...

EB
my own experiences shown me that it´s a bit difficult to design male characters.
that´s why i really like to take a view on such a male design.
his head and hairstyle are typical shounen,easy to put him to the good guys lol
the scull on his belt is a bit confusing,maybe you should change it or give eb a scullsword,´cause he´s a sword fighter :tem
[or he already got one and it´s only missing here..]

Xzarren
a front view..amazing=D
you draw face very well and i like her outfit:b
i´d like to see her with a rocket launcher.

Sin
nice try to create a villian.
i think it was a good idea to give him gown and hide his face.
the spikes on his sleeves are a bit to much for my taste.
maybe he try to make the neddles more thinner or you put them away.
so it reminds more on the witchking from lotr...
but all in all nice concept..especially the snakes=P

Udine
female villians..awesome.
especially water is a nice element to give a char a typical look.
i like the idea of this water dragon/snake[?] on her head.
can she also control ist or better to say:
is it more like hair or can it fights separate?
can you make a scetch with a front view?i´d like to see more of the details in her face.

Whys
omg..why does he reminds me on sasugay from shippuuden O__o''
however,i like the pose and the color sheme for this character.
his green eyes are really an eyecatcher,´cause the rest of his clothes and styles are more blue..
maybe you could make some more versions of his katana.
the refelections are great and i recommend you to keep it up =P

[Montai]

nice char design.
especially the outfits and poses are amazing.
i´m going to appraise your single stuff..better to say: i´ll try it =P

I really appreciate it. No person has ever done this for me the way you have :P Thanks

Sheana
nice body and color sheme.
but it´s a bit sad,that i can only see her back.
myabe a front view or other poses would be fine.
her dress is amazing,only the ribbon is a bit disturbing,means a bit to much...

Yeah, sorry. Next time, I'll show a front and back view. The ribbon does look crappy. I don't know why I drew it so small. It would suppose to be a bigger ribbon.

EB
my own experiences shown me that it´s a bit difficult to design male characters.
that´s why i really like to take a view on such a male design.
his head and hairstyle are typical shounen,easy to put him to the good guys lol
the scull on his belt is a bit confusing,maybe you should change it or give eb a scullsword,´cause he´s a sword fighter :tem
[or he already got one and it´s only missing here..]

lol. You know your stuff! Sorry, I didn't give him a skull-sword. You mind if I use that idea for a sword for him? Sounds like a nice idea. I'm bad with hair, so if it seem typical, I couldn't help it ;P

Xzarren
a front view..amazing=D
you draw face very well and i like her outfit:b
i´d like to see her with a rocket launcher.

I'll draw her with a rocket launcher, just for you :P I like all of my characters, but she's one of my top favorites. :D

Sin
nice try to create a villian.
i think it was a good idea to give him gown and hide his face.
the spikes on his sleeves are a bit to much for my taste.
maybe he try to make the neddles more thinner or you put them away.
so it reminds more on the witchking from lotr...
but all in all nice concept..especially the snakes=P


I love making these kinds of bad guys. I tried going go a really evil feel for it. He is the Main baddie in the game, heh. I'll just remove those sealing tags from it. Looks kinda overdone. Btw: Whats lotr? Here is an old picture I did of him from 2004: http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b379/Atnom/montaicharactersedited.jpg

Udine
female villians..awesome.
especially water is a nice element to give a char a typical look.
i like the idea of this water dragon/snake[?] on her head.
can she also control ist or better to say:
is it more like hair or can it fights separate?
can you make a scetch with a front view?i´d like to see more of the details in her face.

Yeah, you got it. It can also fight separately from her. Theres actually a back story to her and the reptile.

Whys
omg..why does he reminds me on sasugay from shippuuden O__o''
however,i like the pose and the color sheme for this character.
his green eyes are really an eyecatcher,´cause the rest of his clothes and styles are more blue..
maybe you could make some more versions of his katana.
the refelections are great and i recommend you to keep it up =P

Now that you've pointed it out, he does look a bit like Sasuke. :blink haha! I'll definitely make different variations of katana for him.


Thanks a lot. I really, really, really appreciate your critique! You've really inspired me to do better work. ;)

btw: Here is another character for the game, if you want to see it:


New Villian-------------------------------------------------------------
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b379/Atnom/Bilezema.png
Name:Belexima
Age:500~
Weapon: Great Spears
Abilities: Electic/Wind magic

[warbandit66]

I can definately see some potential with these, awesome drawings. It's cool to see someone's own character designs acted upon (I myself have character designs but am finding it difficult to finalise them).

Looking forward to your future developments.

[.:Ice:.]

You draw very well good luck with your manga ^^

[Montai]

It's not for a manga (though I might do that if the game doesn't work out) at all, it's for my rpg game :P

[Montai]

Good Guys-------------------------------------------------------
Redrawn Ryuu:
http://www.toolkitzone.com/vault/stuff/39_Ryuu.jpg
Name:Ryuu
Age: 21
Weapon: Sword
Abilities: Item Potency
Likes: Rich food, Alcohol. swordplay, sleep.
Dislikes: Filth, indecisiveness, loudmouths.
Most important: Friends and Family.
Comment: Don't fuck with me.

http://fc44.deviantart.com/fs33/f/2008/289/c/1/Eternal_l3lue___Color_by_Montai.jpg
Name:Eternal |3lue
Age: Unknown
Weapon: Sickle
Abilities: Bloody Artes