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enis
August 10, 2006, 07:07 PM
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/6356/editingchallenge2qm3.th.png (http://img49.imageshack.us/my.php?image=editingchallenge2qm3.png)
How is it? :F

La_Muerte
August 10, 2006, 07:10 PM
good job, looks really clean

sao
August 11, 2006, 12:41 AM
hmm its pretty good, well i guess the only thing that could have been changed was in the 2nd panel when he was shouting, you could have maybe used a bold setting to indicate it was shouting to make it look different from normal speech.

Other than that could have also probably cropped the pages to remove the white edge on the side so that it look nicers.

Good job nonetheless

shinwei
August 11, 2006, 09:32 AM
That "HENGE!" in the 2nd panel is slightly too high to be considered centered. But the rest of the panels look very good to me. You have a good sense of text size and position.



Other than that could have also probably cropped the pages to remove the white edge on the side so that it look nicers.


For cropping, usually it's better to decide a standard width and standard height with your group, so readers aren't looking at images with different widths and heights all the time.