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motoh
September 01, 2006, 08:42 PM
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dustpole
September 02, 2006, 07:16 PM
Looks pretty good. Your top Naruto bubble seems a little odd though, kinda like you added extra white to the bubble.

Allashandra
September 06, 2006, 12:01 AM
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Excellent job. Only two minor things to mention the second panel text bubble is a little off where the black meets the white. Panel 5 the white detail lines of kakashi's chin/neck on the right side is not completed. Otherwise it's a great job. You definatly pass.