Naruto Chapter 440

[-Ren Boy-]

Hello Guys, My name is Anbu RenBoy well I am starting to review naruto from now on.
This might not be up to standards of people like KnuckleHeadNinja and 1Truesensei but just read and you might actually like this :tem. Oh Yes I forgot all pictures that should have been seen on this, well i dont know how to do it sorry so bare with the clicking on the link please.

Well for the last 2 chapters (3 because that was when the kyuubi was re-introduced in our lives) kyuubi has been causing trouble to the destroyed konoha.Well now it has come to the point where 8 tails have been released. Naruto has no confidence in himself and is stressing himself out by trying to answer a question that basically can't be answered in the narutoverse. Well we was left off with our JAWS LEFT OPEN at the end of the chapter BECAUSE(drum roll)

We was also re-troduced to another character
This Man...http://i603.photobucket.com/albums/tt116/Anbu_RenBoy/MInatoyamikaze.jpg
Look at that cheeky smile lol



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How Can One Little Fox Cause So Much Trouble
Yes, I know this is random to the subject but look in the real world Foxs are supposingly weak but in this Kishimoto makes this fox have the chakra of over a million average shinobi's (exagrate). And what makes it worse he is the strongest of the tailed beasts so basically he is in the top of the food chain. And in the normal world foxs are normally getting hunted, Poor things :( I should cut him some slack.
Well now naruto/kyuubi have released the 8 tail and not-suprisingly he broke out the CHIBAKU TENSAIIIIIIII (i like the name it is catchy). Nagato is just regretting the fact that he volunteered to capture the beast. WRONG IDEA! well he knows he is in deep S*** but what does he say..."At This Rate I'll Have To Make A Bigger One" Wtf. If you looked in the last chapter Nagoto was bleeding through his nose due to straining his body and his chakara. I think there is a contrast between pain and the Kyuubi. Well during these last chapters people have been thinking since naruto cant control the kyuubi there is no stopping this demon, But really there is no stopping pain. He must have the chakra of a TAILED BEAST :O DEN DEN DENNNNNNNNNNNNNNN lol. But for countless number of chapters nagato has decided to do a jutsu which is very destructable and for countless number of times. Konan has said..." Nagato dont do it you'll strain your body. Wonder what she would have said if Nagato had to use the bigger Chibaku Tensai


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"What A Reunioun, AWWW
Well you got the Fourth, Naruto and the Kyuubi. S*** this is something like jerry springer. everyone scream JERRY JERRY JERRY lol. Well you got Kyuubi screaming that he will rip Minato apart. And Minato who is calm is explaining to Naruto who is. To me Kishimoto re-introducing these two characters was a brilliant idea.Why? who remembers the start of the manga/anime when u saw minato on top of gamabunta fighting off the kyuubi. Now they meet again after 439 chapters and it makes people wonder if these two people who have so much hate for eachother cross paths again.



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Naruto...I'm Your Father (Darth Vader Voice)
not much to say but
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS the truth has finnaly been unfold. It has taken Naruto himself 440 Chapters to find out his father was the hokage. I started giving up hope to if naruto was ever going to find out. And if Naruto didn't find out I think he would have been his own person and he wouldn't know when he is ready to be hokage. but now he knows his father was a hokage...Maybe he is more confident about sitting around in a seat giving out orders and getting into a fight once every 10 years (Hokage posistion) The smile from Naruto was touching because since these last chapters naruto may have a smile on his face but he is still sad of the death of the countless number of people. but finding out his father was good for him but finding out his father was the 4th was exstatic.



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Oxy-MORON!!!!
Minato and Naruto leave the Kyuubi whining like a Big moron he is. Well this is a first since proberly Part 1. Narutos crying Awww lool it takes a lot for this boy to cry and to me it emphasises that naruto is really strong he just needs some encouragement for him to regain his mental and physical strength. And thats where minato comes in.
LOL What a punch no one was expecting that. People would have thought naruto would have ran in slow motion like baywatch crying DAD. Well it wasn't and naruto starts asking Minato why did he lock the Kyuubi in his own son. What a dad :mad. Well kishimoto makes naruto have a little bit of a oxymoron saying he doesn't know whether he is happy or angry.:s confused boy lol



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From the pages before we can conclude that madara is decieving sauske and team hawk and also pain and konan. The only two people who I think he is not decieving is Zetsu and Kisame (fish man). Reasons...I dont Know.

Parents Believe In There Children!
Wow. Minato and Naruto have spent only 14-17 pages together and they are going on like they have been father and son for Narutos life time. Minato believes in Naruto BELIEVE IT. Maybe this is the encouragement naruto needs to become a great ninja. But sadly minato has to leave us once again as his "Chakra Is Fading" I dont know how minato had the ability to restore the seal but some things dont need to be answered.


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Fight Till The Death
Now you see pain looking up at one big JAWBREAKER wondering how he is going to eat this. Nah he has finally noticed that the fox has disappeared which is entirely wrong. The fox is still in naruto whining about how hard his life is. He has basically been re-sealed. There you see a bird eye view of Naruto proberly looking at the Chibaku Tensai. Maybe he is being nostalgic about how he doesnt want to use the foxs powers ever again. Maybe he feels the fox is too strong that is was able to get out that jutsu. Who knows

Rating: Epic Chapter 9/10 the best thing about naruto is his personallity I think. And when he lost his determination it made me sad. But when he had his little talk with minato heee regained his seat as on of the most determined characters in anime history

Prediction: Well we will be re starting the fight between Naruto and Pain and both of them still have a large amout of chakra left. Naruto is proberly in full power sage mode and as nagato stated. If chibaku tensai takes a lot of chakra and he was planning on doing a one with a bigger scale then Nagato must have a lot of chakra left. I have a feeling that these are the final chapters for nagato due to the fact that now it is comfirmed that Tobi is the real Angonatist and naruto still has to face him. Who knows

Btw comments would be nice telling me what is did wrong and what i need to do to improve these reviews

[1TrueSensei]

I liked the review overall. The tone you "speak" in is very conversational, which makes it an enjoyable read. Now for the criticism:D

The first big thing is the spelling. Having as few typos as possible makes for a neater, more professional looking review all around. Understandably most of what we spell out is Japanese based, and with many of us being native English speakers we tend to miss things quite often. But it never hurts to refer to the manga if you're not sure of a proper pronunciation.

Another thing that sticks out to me (and this is because I not only read constantly, but I'm an editor at my university newspaper) is the grammar, especially tenses and verb agreement. One thing that you might consider doing is using Microsoft Word to type your review first, kind of as a rough draft. The spell and grammar check is usually pretty good at catching those things for you if you miss them, so once you're done and everything checks out with the rough draft, copy and paste it online.

Those were the only things that stuck out to me. I enjoyed reading your review because I like seeing the chapter through other people's eyes. The same goes for the entire story, actually. Someone else will always catch something you don't, and once it's introduced to you you find yourself enjoying the story a little bit more. That's the beauty of these forums.

P.S. A really good program to use for editing the manga panels (I say good because it isn't half bad plus it's free:D) is Picasa from Google. It's pretty intuitive to use, but if you ever need pointers I'm here to help through PM or whatever. And if you already have it on your computer, Photoshop is pretty good too. It's partially responsible for the gems that -Flash- drops every week as far as presentation goes. But just keep working at it, and you'll find yourself improving week after week. I really did like the tone of the review, so once it's cleaned up it's gonna be a joy to read.

[-Ren Boy-]

Lol thank you for you criticism
see i made this chapter entirely to get criticism
everyone knows your good and there proberly was a time when you started reviewing and you was not as good as you are today
you telling me the things I have done wrong might help me for the next review and so on
Much appreciated
Anbu Ren Boy

[Baron Hugenstein]

Nice Review, I like the tone in which you write in. Granted I don't do any reviews for Naruto, but it is nice to see what others think and see.

I also agree with TrueSensei's points: the grammar and the spelling;
I personally use Microsoft word for making a rough draft and wikipedia and the chapter for any information I might need.

Also, it would be nice to use pictures instead of links to them, makes the reading of the review much easier; you can use www.imageshack.us to upload the pictures; this is just an opinion of mine:D.

Keep up the good work:kkthumbs

[-Ren Boy-]

Thanks sarry
lool yh that was a big let down not knowing how to upload photos. i learnt like 10 minutes ago because of the comment TrueSensai gave me
I could easily do this chapter over again but what would be the point
not saying im not consistent with this but finding out what i did wrong could help me with my next review
Thanks for the criticism much appreciated

[KnuckleheadedNinja]

I like the review, it was a good one. Like Sarry and Sensei, i like the tone in which you wrote it.

Since Sarry and Sensei already point out the grammar and spelling mistake, i will like to point out that you didn't cover some of the main point of the chapter. Like, the mask-men controlling the Kyuubi and the bringing peace part.

But overall this was a good review for your first one. As you write more you going to greatly improve. So i hope to be seeing more review from you.

[Nails]

I liked the review overall. The tone you "speak" in is very conversational, which makes it an enjoyable read. Now for the criticism:D

The first big thing is the spelling. Having as few typos as possible makes for a neater, more professional looking review all around. Understandably most of what we spell out is Japanese based, and with many of us being native English speakers we tend to miss things quite often. But it never hurts to refer to the manga if you're not sure of a proper pronunciation.

Another thing that sticks out to me (and this is because I not only read constantly, but I'm an editor at my university newspaper) is the grammar, especially tenses and verb agreement. One thing that you might consider doing is using Microsoft Word to type your review first, kind of as a rough draft. The spell and grammar check is usually pretty good at catching those things for you if you miss them, so once you're done and everything checks out with the rough draft, copy and paste it online.

Those were the only things that stuck out to me. I enjoyed reading your review because I like seeing the chapter through other people's eyes. The same goes for the entire story, actually. Someone else will always catch something you don't, and once it's introduced to you you find yourself enjoying the story a little bit more. That's the beauty of these forums.

P.S. A really good program to use for editing the manga panels (I say good because it isn't half bad plus it's free:D) is Picasa from Google. It's pretty intuitive to use, but if you ever need pointers I'm here to help through PM or whatever. And if you already have it on your computer, Photoshop is pretty good too. It's partially responsible for the gems that -Flash- drops every week as far as presentation goes. But just keep working at it, and you'll find yourself improving week after week. I really did like the tone of the review, so once it's cleaned up it's gonna be a joy to read.

Sounds like a plan, now why did i post in thousands of forums without using WORD because I thought it was cheating? Boy, was i stupid.

[The Flash]

grammar and spelling

IF you want to become a better reviewer?
Then, I'll be honest with you. This was not a good review at all. I'm not trying to pull off a simon cowell on you. But seriously... this was not very good at all.

I enjoyed reading your view/opinion in regards of this chapter.
Remember, an opinion is an opinion. There is no such thing as "My opinions is better than yours". However, it is the way you present your opinion that counts the most.

You failed in that miserably.

Take this constructive critiscm and prove me wrong in the near future.

[-Ren Boy-]

Well hopefully Flash i will prove you wrong
thanks any way

[lavdrim]

grammar and spelling

IF you want to become a better reviewer?
Then, I'll be honest with you. This was not a good review at all. I'm not trying to pull off a simon cowell on you. But seriously... this was not very good at all.

I enjoyed reading your view/opinion in regards of this chapter.
Remember, an opinion is an opinion. There is no such thing as "My opinions is better than yours". However, it is the way you present your opinion that counts the most.

You failed in that miserably.

Take this constructive critiscm and prove me wrong in the near future.
that was a bit harsh lol

it was an alright review, not the best but he just starting, im sure you weren't as good as you are now, when you started??

[-Ren Boy-]

It hurt when he said
"I'd Failed Miserably"
Lol

[weehoo107]

what kills me is that naruto didn't ask questions. like, "what about mother?" for example.


LOL What a punch no one was expecting that.

well, he is the 1# unpredictable ninja. being able to predict what he was about to do would kill the manga. it was also nice to see some humility on naruto's part. and in front of his father too, how touching.

[-Ren Boy-]

what kills me is that naruto didn't ask questions. like, "what about mother?" for example.


Lol thats what im thinking
Is naruto that stupid not to think that parents consist of two people
i think naruto was too happy to find his father was the almight 4th hokage

[weehoo107]

@anbu renboy

naruto was in shock when he saw minato, so that definitely could be why he didnt ask. but i mean c'mon! we don't really know anything about minato [except that his powers kick-@ss and he's a looker], and then we have the perfect chance to learn more about naruto's parentage and massashi blows it. just blows it to kingdom come. and it was the PERFECT timing too...