My First try at cleaning. :]

[Jaquilar]

I tried first time cleaning.
Index - tried to redraw hair there... (VERY BAD)
RAW
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7314/wizardryindex230001.jpg
Clean
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/8586/newbiehqclean.png

LoveRU?
RAW
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/4712/1364593toloveruch12203a.jpg
Clean
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/3531/newbieclean.png

And a random manga
Clean
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/8965/48550725.png

[Doragon]

I'll give the clean for the first two an MQ. The redraw was okay for the first one, imo. And about the last one... Well, where's the raw? I'll give it an MQ/HQ (cause you left some specks), but I want to see the raw.

[Jaquilar]

I'll give the clean for the first two an MQ. The redraw was okay for the first one, imo. And about the last one... Well, where's the raw? I'll give it an MQ/HQ (cause you left some specks), but I want to see the raw.
Sorry i dont have the random manga raw.. it run away somewhere or disappeared...
here few more cleans :D

Claymore
RAW
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/3924/claymore09209.jpg
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/2449/claymore09210.jpg
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/2651/claymore09212.jpg
CLEAN
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/3508/claymore09.png
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/6899/claymore10.png
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/391/claymore12.png

Soul Eater
RAW
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/4117/souleater0610003.jpg
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/3189/souleater0610004.jpg
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/4899/souleater0610005.jpg
CLEAN
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/9749/souleater0003.png
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/1466/souleater0004.png
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/8594/souleater0005.png
Criticize it PLOX :]

[Digitalr]

Well, they're not good. Not even the one that Doragon labeled as MQ/HQ, as it's absolutely not MQ/HQ (tip: check the greys). Your greys are all messed up in most of your cleans, I like your first two cleans even though it looks like detail was lost (greys again and blurry at times). The redrawing needs a lot of work too.

All in all you need a lot of practice but you'll get there eventually

[Doragon]

Eh, I guess I was too nice on criticizing? Well, w/e, since you can't show a raw for the third one, I guess it's an MQ. About Claymore, well you fucked up the greys so its an LQ/MQ. I'll give the one on Soul Eater a solid MQ.

[The Ama]

The first page is alright. Overleved it a bit and just a little bit blurry.. If you're going to use the reduce noise filter on photoshop make sure to keep it at 1 max of 3 and maybe even 4 or 5 if you absolutely have to. But make sure to level a bit to rid of that grayness. (I'm assuming you've used this filter because I made the same mistakes with my first cleans)

The first two of the soul eater pages had been overleved a bit.. There isn't much need to level with RAWs such as those.

The Claymore cleans, as stated, are blurry and the grays look rather bad. I'm pretty sure the grays look terrible because you overleveled both the whites and blacks. :/

Your To-Love-Ru clean, I'd say, is the best out of all of them.