Antares
August 06, 2009, 07:02 AM
I don't know if there is a thread with similar meaning of the discussion topic i wanted to make, because i sought it before but i haven't found it. So i made this thread.
I know Devil Fruit is a great trademark of One Piece, but i apologize if i will rant a little about this. Not its specifications of power, not its categorization (Logia, Paramecia, Zoan), not the Fruit itself. But it eventually comes to me as a little bit of disappointment, because of the method a Devil Fruit is gained by a character.
Luffy found it inside a chest and just ate it because he just likes to eat anything. Blackbeard gained it by killing his nakama because he previously saw the fruit in the hands of Thatch. The others, if they were explained, i don't remember.
But the point is, it's by chance. Coincidence. Fate. Someone doesn't have to train his physical strength rigorously, for example, to get this fruit. Someone doesn't have to struggle in his/her studies and knowledge to be a genius before he/she can get a Devil Fruit. Someone doesn't have to achieve a certain level of maturity, or compassion, or bravery, in his/her heart to be able to get it.
"Hey, what's this strange fruit i picked up in this forest while i was hanging out with my friends? Wow! It's the God God Fruit! I become God!"
You can blame me for whining too much, but i really expect a genius like Oda can invent a great method for achieving a Devil Fruit, so that someone who will get it actually deserves it.
For a puny example (a bit long):
Shiro is a boy attracted by nature's power. His hometown was a peaceful village, in which the citizens made their living by mining gold and silver from the abundant amount of those two resources of nature. But then a band of pirate cruelly attack the village, terrorizing the citizens by robbing all their houses, killing all who opposed without mercy.
Being a bold yet disciplined kid due to the teachings of his parents, Shiro fearlessly and secretly gathered the adults in the house and asked them to form a guerrilla force in order to drive the pirates away. Many laughed at him and mocked him, "What does a kid know about our circumstances? One move from us and our entire family will be killed. Shush, go away, boy, just do it yourself if you're really determined."
Since then, Shiro couldn't stop thinking and planning about the ambush he would do. He waited for the pirates in the forest while hiding and setting various deadly traps. One by one, the pirate crews were killed, falling into a hole full of scorpions and snakes, stabbed in the head or head by a swinging guillotine triggered by an ankle-level thin threads, and so forth. The boy Shiro was just so determined to destroy all the pirate members, he didn't realize that his parents were kidnaped and taken hostage by the pirate leader.
Shiro was told to reveal himself and surrender. He punches the pirate leader with all his might, but it was in vain. A kid's punch couldn't even make a famous pirate with 80 million beri bounty so much as flinch. Yet, on and on Shiro punch, even as the pirate leader lift him hanging with only one hand.
Shiro tried his hardest. Punching the air and hoping his little fists would reach the vile pirate and banish him away from this village, from this mountain, from this earth. Because he just couldn't let his parents die because of his actions. He just wanted to protect his family, which had given a true blessing to his life, to his determination, to complete his self.
Then, a vision. Inside Shiro's head. In his mind, he saw an eerie tree of some sort, bearing one strange-shaped light which the floated in the air. The light hovered closer to Shiro, and it emitted a glow Shiro recognize as an almost human voice. "Do not fear me. I am a living being, just like you are. The cries of your heart i listened. It kept me awake. Tell me. What made your strong soul burns with such agony?" Shiro cried in his mind, "My parents...they are bound to be killed by this vile, greedy man. I don't want that to happen. I don't. I don't. Let him kill me, but not my family. Not my sanity."
"No," that strange light said, "I will not let your family die. And i will not let you die. Your will to protect is strong, mightier than anything. Then, Shiro, i will give you my life. My life, which is going to make you stronger than this world itself." the vision in Shiro's head vanished, then he could taste something sweet in his mouth.
A juicy strange fruit unlike anything he had eaten before.
Shiro bit. Swallowed. It was delicately sweet, and a little bit sour. But then his consciousness took place. He was in the middle of his punching toward the air while being lifted by the vile pirate. Then by the next punch by Shiro, the whole island suddenly shook. Shiro saw a crack in the air he just punched. The crack widened to the ground, and widened even more to the pirate leader's hands. The pirate screamed in agony while his whole body is falling apart, showing his muscles, his bones, his insides, crumbling away like a rusty house struck by lightning storm.
The 80 million beri pirate literally fell into pieces. Pieces of meat, gore, liquid and bone.
Shiro was shocked. Seeing what he had done. But he quickly regained his composure, and stared ahead. "From now on, there'll be no more mindless killing in my presence. I'll protect my family from vile men such as him. I'll protect my family. And this world."
This was the beginning of a man later known to the world as Whitebeard.
Cheesy, i know. I just created that story as i began to type. But i think i've made my point across. I just hoped, from a man as great in plot making as Oda, that the way to get a powerful Devil Fruit can be more deserving to a character, instead of putting a coincidence. Again, i'm sorry for the rant. :amuseYour thoughts?
I know Devil Fruit is a great trademark of One Piece, but i apologize if i will rant a little about this. Not its specifications of power, not its categorization (Logia, Paramecia, Zoan), not the Fruit itself. But it eventually comes to me as a little bit of disappointment, because of the method a Devil Fruit is gained by a character.
Luffy found it inside a chest and just ate it because he just likes to eat anything. Blackbeard gained it by killing his nakama because he previously saw the fruit in the hands of Thatch. The others, if they were explained, i don't remember.
But the point is, it's by chance. Coincidence. Fate. Someone doesn't have to train his physical strength rigorously, for example, to get this fruit. Someone doesn't have to struggle in his/her studies and knowledge to be a genius before he/she can get a Devil Fruit. Someone doesn't have to achieve a certain level of maturity, or compassion, or bravery, in his/her heart to be able to get it.
"Hey, what's this strange fruit i picked up in this forest while i was hanging out with my friends? Wow! It's the God God Fruit! I become God!"
You can blame me for whining too much, but i really expect a genius like Oda can invent a great method for achieving a Devil Fruit, so that someone who will get it actually deserves it.
For a puny example (a bit long):
Shiro is a boy attracted by nature's power. His hometown was a peaceful village, in which the citizens made their living by mining gold and silver from the abundant amount of those two resources of nature. But then a band of pirate cruelly attack the village, terrorizing the citizens by robbing all their houses, killing all who opposed without mercy.
Being a bold yet disciplined kid due to the teachings of his parents, Shiro fearlessly and secretly gathered the adults in the house and asked them to form a guerrilla force in order to drive the pirates away. Many laughed at him and mocked him, "What does a kid know about our circumstances? One move from us and our entire family will be killed. Shush, go away, boy, just do it yourself if you're really determined."
Since then, Shiro couldn't stop thinking and planning about the ambush he would do. He waited for the pirates in the forest while hiding and setting various deadly traps. One by one, the pirate crews were killed, falling into a hole full of scorpions and snakes, stabbed in the head or head by a swinging guillotine triggered by an ankle-level thin threads, and so forth. The boy Shiro was just so determined to destroy all the pirate members, he didn't realize that his parents were kidnaped and taken hostage by the pirate leader.
Shiro was told to reveal himself and surrender. He punches the pirate leader with all his might, but it was in vain. A kid's punch couldn't even make a famous pirate with 80 million beri bounty so much as flinch. Yet, on and on Shiro punch, even as the pirate leader lift him hanging with only one hand.
Shiro tried his hardest. Punching the air and hoping his little fists would reach the vile pirate and banish him away from this village, from this mountain, from this earth. Because he just couldn't let his parents die because of his actions. He just wanted to protect his family, which had given a true blessing to his life, to his determination, to complete his self.
Then, a vision. Inside Shiro's head. In his mind, he saw an eerie tree of some sort, bearing one strange-shaped light which the floated in the air. The light hovered closer to Shiro, and it emitted a glow Shiro recognize as an almost human voice. "Do not fear me. I am a living being, just like you are. The cries of your heart i listened. It kept me awake. Tell me. What made your strong soul burns with such agony?" Shiro cried in his mind, "My parents...they are bound to be killed by this vile, greedy man. I don't want that to happen. I don't. I don't. Let him kill me, but not my family. Not my sanity."
"No," that strange light said, "I will not let your family die. And i will not let you die. Your will to protect is strong, mightier than anything. Then, Shiro, i will give you my life. My life, which is going to make you stronger than this world itself." the vision in Shiro's head vanished, then he could taste something sweet in his mouth.
A juicy strange fruit unlike anything he had eaten before.
Shiro bit. Swallowed. It was delicately sweet, and a little bit sour. But then his consciousness took place. He was in the middle of his punching toward the air while being lifted by the vile pirate. Then by the next punch by Shiro, the whole island suddenly shook. Shiro saw a crack in the air he just punched. The crack widened to the ground, and widened even more to the pirate leader's hands. The pirate screamed in agony while his whole body is falling apart, showing his muscles, his bones, his insides, crumbling away like a rusty house struck by lightning storm.
The 80 million beri pirate literally fell into pieces. Pieces of meat, gore, liquid and bone.
Shiro was shocked. Seeing what he had done. But he quickly regained his composure, and stared ahead. "From now on, there'll be no more mindless killing in my presence. I'll protect my family from vile men such as him. I'll protect my family. And this world."
This was the beginning of a man later known to the world as Whitebeard.
Cheesy, i know. I just created that story as i began to type. But i think i've made my point across. I just hoped, from a man as great in plot making as Oda, that the way to get a powerful Devil Fruit can be more deserving to a character, instead of putting a coincidence. Again, i'm sorry for the rant. :amuseYour thoughts?