Romanji to Kanji

[minase_hatsukoi]

Hello,

I have a bit of a problem with translating a song subtitled in romanji from the anime series "Ai Yori Aoshi" called "Akai Hana" or Red Flower, the ED in episode 15. Apparently I can't find translations for it anywhere(it's not even provided with the original cd) and I am attempting to translate it myself, but I need to convert the romanji to kanji down first.

Here is what I've done so far; at least that's what I think the kanji counterpart would be;

Koishikute koishikute kaeri ha ｋaerenakute
恋しくて　恋しくて　帰りは　帰れなくて
Nostalgic, nostalgic there's no way to return

Namida nagashiteta
涙　流してた
My tears are flowing

Kenkashite aenakute aitakute nemurenakute
喧嘩して　敢無くて　逢いたくて　眠れなくて
(not too sure how to translate this one)

Koi wa kurikaesu
恋いは　くり返す
Our love rekindled

Arifureteru keredo wasurenaide
有り触れてる　けれど　忘れないで
It was ordinary, however, I haven't forgotten

Tokubetsu na ki ja nakutemo
特別な気　じゃなくても
It was not a special feeling

Hana wo katte kudasai
はなを　刈って　下さい
Cut down that flower

Aoi sora ni ukanda shiroi kumo ni haeru akai hana
青い空に　浮かんだ　白い雲に　映える　紅い花
The beautiful red flower in the drifting cloud in the blue sky

Soshite anata no ai soete kudasai
そして　あなたの　愛　添えて　下さい
Then treasure this love of yours

Chiisaku sasayaka na ai demo
小さく　細やかな愛でも
This small, simple love

Can someone verify the kanji for me.

Thanks,
Minase

[TitaniumChloride]

Here's a page with the kanji lyrics: http://www.jtw.zaq.ne.jp/animesong/a/aiyoriaosi/akai.html

You're not that far off the original actually. I'm impressed because there's no way I could ever do that.

[minase_hatsukoi]

Woah....so I did make some mistakes. I'd be surprised if I didn't cos what I originally came up with sounded kinda strange so I just wanted to verify.

Thanks alot TitaniumChloride.
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Here is my final translations with the CORRECT kanji.

Let's hope I get it right this time;

Red Flower (朱い花/Akai Hana）

Koishikute koishikute kaeri wa ｋaerenakute
恋しくて　恋しくて　帰り際　帰れなくて
Nostalgic, nostalgic, there's no way to return

Namida nagashiteta
涙　流してた
I shed my tears

Kenkashite aenakute aitakute nemurenakute
喧嘩して　逢えなくて　逢いたくて　眠れなくて
I became restless from the quarrels and my desires to see you when I couldn't

Koi wa kurikaesu
恋は　繰り返す
My love for you rekindled

Arifureteru keredo wasurenaide
ありふれてる　けれど　忘れないで
My emotions are flowing, however, do not forget

Tokubetsu na hi ja nakutemo
特別な日　じゃなくても
Even if it was not a special day

Hana wo katte kudasai
はなを　買つて　下さい
Please buy me that flower

Aoi sora ni ukanda shiroi kumo ni haeru akai hana
青い空に　浮かんだ　白い雲に　映える　朱い花
The red flower reflecting upon the drifting cloud in the blue sky

Soshite anata no ai soete kudasai
そして　あなたの　愛　添えて　下さい
And so, let our love entwine

Chiisaku sasayaka na ai demo
小さく　ささやかな愛でも
Even if it's small and modest

(Note that 朱い is more of an orangy sort of red,
while 紅い is more like a darker red, which was what I originally had)

Somehow there are some parts to this translation that still doesn't make much sense.

Not too sure about ありふれてる and ささやか since in this particular case, they seem to mean more than what they appear to be. It is not something that a dictionary could tell you.