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kyubisharingan
October 27, 2006, 02:28 PM
I cleaned this from the LQ raw from Bleach 249. hopefully i'll join a scanlation group. It looks pretty HQ wouldnt u say? :smile-big

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/699/page071rr1.th.png (http://img62.imageshack.us/my.php?image=page071rr1.png)compared to http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/4905/page071xm6.th.jpg (http://img182.imageshack.us/my.php?image=page071xm6.jpg)

ibra87
October 27, 2006, 04:50 PM
I cleaned this from the LQ raw from Bleach 249. hopefully i'll join a scanlation group. It looks pretty HQ wouldnt u say? smile-big

It's Pretty nice alright. Really good job on this one (though you could post a raw pic for people to compare if you really want to show how skilled you are, which I believe you are).

One thing that bothers me is the speed lines, but I can't be too sure. After all, I am only familiar with Naruto as I don't really look after quality when I read Bleach (usually speed scans). But if it's not HQ (because of anything), then it's pretty good MQ and almost HQ.

Your fault for asking (me) a question :p I always end up posting wrong replies :(

ttxdragon
October 27, 2006, 05:48 PM
first of, nice work,
second, its at best higher mq, because of the following points:
choppy lineart
much dirt around the lineart
the hougyoku in the last panel has too many edges
not reframed

correct those and it'll go big steps towards HQ.


Your fault for asking (me) a question :p I always end up posting wrong replies :(
you're not the only one xD

kyubisharingan
October 27, 2006, 06:24 PM
lol thanks guys :D. i'll post the LQ raw to compare. oh, and the speed lines, lol i wasnt sure wat to do so i just used the burn tool to make it darker[br]Posted on: October 27, 2006, 07:15:30 PM_________________________________________________yea there is alot of dirt. i cleaned most, but since i used the LQ raw its hard to get it all. thanks for the constructive critisism(lol i cant spell today XD).

ttxdragon
October 27, 2006, 07:24 PM
haha, yeah the raws pretty bad and you did some nice work, really...
only thing that you might want to abandon is this sentence: "since i used the LQ raw its hard to get it all"
because a lq raw doesn't heighten the value of the cleaned page but the amount of work ^^

that's not against you - as i said you did good - but a general statement, because that doesnt seem to be clear for many people ^^'

shinji2k
October 29, 2006, 03:03 PM
Not bad at all. I agree with everyone else. Apart from the main problem of dirt in the whites, my only beef would be your grays. Use the gris pattern and then either add some noise (4%) and/or do a film grain(3,0,0).

And yeah, raws are always bad. It never fails :)

kyubisharingan
October 29, 2006, 04:52 PM
Not bad at all. I agree with everyone else. Apart from the main problem of dirt in the whites, my only beef would be your grays. Use the gris pattern and then either add some noise (4%) and/or do a film grain(3,0,0).

And yeah, raws are always bad. It never fails :)


thank you. i'll try that stuff

kadodo
December 10, 2006, 02:28 AM
Nice cleans.