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Akash
March 06, 2010, 05:53 AM
hello,
i am learning colouring manga. this is my first colouring. can anybody please help me point where i have gone wrong.
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/9955/coloured1.jpg

manfregara
April 03, 2010, 01:08 PM
OMG!
This is your first attempt?!?!?!?! It's wonderful!!!!

Airianna
April 04, 2010, 11:41 AM
A first attempt! Brilliant job.
The clouds look a bit bumpy. But I think its fine.

Maybe add the highlights to the black haired girl and experience with textures for the clothing.

I look forward to seeing more coloring from you! :D

Akash
April 10, 2010, 04:56 AM
thank you guys,

i know i messed up the sky.

here is my next attempt. i have tried to give texture to cloth but didnt get what i expected :(

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/7813/narutotrail.jpg
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http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/3200/029sx.jpg

Magikabullet
July 01, 2010, 02:22 PM
very nice job!

really the second one great...
I think you can even see an improvement :)

LadyHyacia
October 10, 2010, 06:57 PM
Whoa... amazing.
I've made over 10 recolorings,
but it's still not as good as yours.
The eyes look a little... bizarre (just a tiny bit)
and the clouds' outlines look a little blurry.