Requiem chapter 1

[zer0307]

The story is based on a world where REQUIEMS( lost spirits that scatter around us, they either be evil or good... Evil REQUIEMS are those who cast revenge to the person who killed or those people who whom he/she had a bad experience with ) scatter around the world. Only those inheritor of dark magic can only sense, see or interact these creatures. Generations by generation, the ancestors of those clans inherit their powers to the lower branch of their clan.

The story runs with the clans who's job is to dispatch these REQUIEMS.

Sacay Riyuji - an inheritor of the Black Lightning technique, made by Sacay Makao, leads this story. He can summon the legendary blade, LOKI, the blade made by Hakai, the famous blacksmith of all generation...
He is also the leader of ZERO, an organization for inheritors, later on the story.


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Finally!!! whew... hope you enjoy...
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Feel free to suggest, react or even COMPLAIN...

[ShinuZERO]

This is pretty good, I like your style. You definitely have the potential to be even better, just keep at it! I can't wait to see more.

[zer0307]

This is pretty good, I like your style. You definitely have the potential to be even better, just keep at it! I can't wait to see more.

Thanks dude... Actually, I only posted 4 out of 12 pages of it... You can still see all of them sooner...

[Googlez_kun]

it does not make really that much sense for me,since it's only those 4 pages
you should post the 12 pages you have so that we can really judge the stuff going on.

[zer0307]

it does not make really that much sense for me,since it's only those 4 pages
you should post the 12 pages you have so that we can really judge the stuff going on.


I need to convert some of the pages into Japanese Style... So... Don't worry, I'll post it here later... :tem

[~FrienD~]

If its digital try adding tones rather than excessive use of lines it'll do wonders. too much detail can be either destructive or constructive(???alchemy???).

i would've like to see the other pages as well, anyways I'm not really that good of an artist so you may disregard what I've said.

[zer0307]

If its digital try adding tones rather than excessive use of lines it'll do wonders. too much detail can be either destructive or constructive(???alchemy???).

i would've like to see the other pages as well, anyways I'm not really that good of an artist so you may disregard what I've said.



Thanks for the advice... I really appreciate it...
Maybe next week, I'll post the complete one...

[marqees101]

i love the style. I can't wait to see you post more pictures up. But the hell is Requiem Form, or what the does it mean?

I like the drawings too... What type of manga is this gunna be?

[zer0307]

i love the style. I can't wait to see you post more pictures up. But the hell is Requiem Form, or what the does it mean?

I like the drawings too... What type of manga is this gunna be?

Ahaha... Actually, the first 4 pages are so called "SPOILERS" (I think) It's like the first episode of Naruto Shippuuden... When the starting scene is when the new team 7 running in the lair of Orochimaru... You know... :D
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SORRY FOR THE INCONVENIENCE... I POSTED THE COMPLETE CHAPTER 1 ON THE FOLLOWING LINK:
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=30645196&id=1188954828#!/pages/RequiemR/113509622005519

Don't forget to become a FAN...
:3

[marqees101]

i became a fan. i like it....

[Kasu]

If its digital try adding tones rather than excessive use of lines it'll do wonders. too much detail can be either destructive or constructive(???alchemy???).


Hm, I'd not say that - on the other hand, I am a bit of a tone-hater and am happy about the frequent decrease in screentones in general in the last few years.

I think it's quite good but I guess you should try to not use those panels with the er.... "diagonal edge" (y'know, like on the last page below) that often.

[zer0307]

Thanks to all the guys who followed the page...

@Kasu---> thanks to the advice... I'll try to apply it to the next chapter...