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white silver
November 19, 2006, 04:15 AM
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Here we are again, :tem

First off, to celebrate the 1st OFFCIAL YEAR of MangaHelpers. Congratulations MH! Wow, I can't believe time passed so quickly during my time in MH. And now, Garaku has his "half" completed commentary, which can be viewed thankfully because of this new "board" we have known as the [color=blue]"OP Reviews". Anyways, I'm White Silver to those who don't know me (formerly known as Kunai Jutsu). Garaku and I are taking over the OP reviews done by [color=red]Gold Knight so we stand by your support for more OP reviews to come. So, keep checking our signatures for any "updates". :tem

Thanks to Cez and Kokotas for the Scans and for your support as well!!


Alright now to begin, are you ready????

[font=verdana][color=red][size=1]*Note: This is NOT A 10 COMMENTS SECTION, you may see more than that, this is one of them. And secondly, I'm enforcing spoiler tags (for the sake of scrolling problems)




[b][color=teal]~One Piece Chapter 435: Understand how you feel~





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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]"What's your status?" "SIR, electrified, sir!!"



1. [u]Reporting for duty "SIR": Looks like Enel has stumbled upon a....... moon mole??? Well that would explain all the "burrows" inside. Looks like Enel may have a new friend here. And what's with the gun? Strange how the idea of "vaccuum space" doesn't exist in this moon. Well, surely it must have come from earth, I don't see how and why it should be born in the moon, but what could it be?????

[font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Here's what I think. He has the Devil-Fruit ability to "Fly". Enough to go to the moon. Far-fetched or he has some sort of "spacecraft" that managed to go there!




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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Don't worry Franky, help is on the way!!


[b]2. [u]Shipwrights United!: So, Galley-La's Shipwrights are excited at the prospect of building a new Pirate Ship for the Strawhats. With the very same material used in the Oro-Jackson. Surely it's gonna a really strong and sturdy ship, but for how long would it last? After all, Franky mentioned it's the one tree that kept standing regardless of any event including Wars, so there's something about this wood that's really special. Anyways, it's one nakama the Strawhats should surely take care of, well after that really, really sad event of Going Merry! Well, let's see what it would like in the neartime future.

Hmmm... what happened to the fight with Ace and Blackbeard? Must be for another chapter or so!! Or *gulp* the same type of scene where Hidan finished the Nibi without viewing the fight.




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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]HISTORY IN THE MAKING!



3. [u]The news that would change the future: Hopefully, this is something that has NEVER been attempted or should I say attempted "successfully" in this history of Enies Lobby. Now that it's gone, this may spark a lot of fear amongst the people. How on earth could a fully guarded area be breached by a few pirates and manage to come out in "one piece". Now that this is in the news, people may lose faith in the government, something that shouldn't happen! The possibilities regarding this incident may have an increase flow of crime, pirates, and many other notorious communities, that is if they know "what" happened.


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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]And what about the comic section???

Though it looks like Franky's and Galley-La's nakamas are off the hook on this one. Everything is just pointed on the Mugiwara Pirates. Which may cause a lot more fear (there are only 7 in his crew). I guess the government wants the bounties to focused on them, so that people like Blackbeard may come and hunt him down.




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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Bounties.... it's the latest trend!!


4. [u]The "mystery" behind the news: Zoro grins at that sort of trouble, seems he likes the idea of a high bounty. Well, he DID say he wanted the "heavens" to know his name, so his bounty must rise to the level of at least Dragon since EVERYBODY with the exception of his son Luffy knows and fears him. Being with the future pirate king may also increase his fame. As for the "incomplete" news, looks like Ao-kiji was behind it. After all, he is not like other Law-enforcers that uses the "iron hand" to bring justice. Though it seems he just wants to make the targets as minimal as possible, and that would be the Mugiwara Pirates. The real CULPRITS!!

[font=verdana][color=blue][size=1][color=green]BoffenJL discovered a section in the previous chapters to the reason why the Government has not targeted Galley-La nor Franky's gang, appraently one of Franky's members blurted out that they WERE THE STRAWHATS. Anyways here's the picture:

*Thanks again BoffenJL* :smile-big :smile-big


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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Pay attention it's ST-RRAWWW-HHHAATTTT Pirates!







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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]That face is FINE work of art!! Who did it?


[b]5. [u]How to deal with idiots for "dummies" (1st Edition): Though it seems that Garp's Flaming Fist of Passion does not compare to the "Wrath" of the Nami. The injuries and bruises are beyond compare, even the strongest CP9 technique cannot compare. Fear the Nami, fear her! What kind of pirate crew mercilessly beats up their captain and still not call it mutiny? They really are a dangerous bunch aren't they! Well Luffy deserves it, spending all that money for PARTYING! Well you can't blame him, he is the Captain!




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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]The many faces of SogeKing! Lu Lu La La Lu!


6. [u]Elbaf vs. Mugiwara Pirates, choose your "destiny": Seems like Ussop is in a big dilemma here. If he chooses the path to Elbaf, well he's on his way to become a "brave warrior of the sea". The story changes and he'll come back as hero and rescuer when the emergency strikes. I don't see that happening but it's just one possibility. On the other hand, because of his last battle with Luffy, he may have to live the life as SOGEKING, to adventure and a replacement for Ussop. But it seems to me, like Sanji is up to set things straight!




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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Will we see a pineapple and little sponge-man living inside??


7. [u]Up to the sky, now down below to the sea!: Wow, what an ADVENTURE, first they get to see the sky now they have to travel down the sea! Which I surely doubt with a SHIP, UNLESS Franky modifies it to transform into a submarine. Well, he did say he wants it to travel anywhere, so we're going to find out shall we? But then again, how is it called an island if it's "under the sea"?? Hmm... another Jules Verne "rip-off", first he moon-travel now undersea-travel is brought into the story. We may see a very important person there, a Shichibukai known as Jimbei. In case you forget, he was the partner of Arlong who ruined Nami's village.




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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Ariel-swaaaann. Your prince awaits you!!



8. [u]What "dreams" may come: Looks like Kokoro-san has TOTALLY ruined the image of a mermaind in Sanji's mind. So if we're going to see mermen like Arlong, don't tell me mermaids are of the same type, or do they really come in a form of half-human half-fish form? Anyways, I'm way to excited to find out. An undersea water adventure may bring some good fortune to the Mugiwara Pirates, first of all tom-San the Shipwright must've come from there (being a merman himself), so we may see a LOT of talented people or maybe a new "fish" sword for Zoro!!




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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Is that the "Burmuda Triangle" equivalent


9. [u]The Furorian Triangle: Is Oda implementing one of the most notorious sea's name the "Bermuda Triangle" into his story? It could very well be. What does Furorian mean? Until that is explained, I can't comment this any further.

[font=verdana][color=blue][size=1]Looks like Baxteristic has made a "startling" discovery! The other half of the Grandline is ALSO bordered by the Red Line. Here's the picture:


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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]You mean RED LINES!!

As we know, the First Red Line takes the ship through the reverse mountain. But I don't think it applies here, so possibly, just possibly the Furorian Triangle maybe a vortex or some sort of travel device that would allow a Ship to pass "under" the 2nd Red Line. Merman Island may be beneath it. Many thanks to Baxterstic for finding the picture!



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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]And this is why, there's no such thing as "Pirate Insurance"


[b]10. [u]The Bermuda Triangle Equivalent: Well, looks like Oda DID implement the very same idea for the Burmuda's notoriety. Ships getting lost in a triangle, never to be seen again? Yes, most definitely. But what intrigues me is that a haunted ship that sails that sea! Who could be behind it? Davy Jones himself? Or is it another governement "conspiracy". All I know is, Luffy is going to have another problem over there, maybe before meeting the Blackbeard pirates.




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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]And so the new "Oro Jackson" is completed!!!


10. [u]The adventure begins NOW!: Gosh I have been waiting for this forever. Finally, the ship is completed by Franky himself with a DON! What wonders awaits them in the Furorian Triangle? What dangers lurks in those waters, find out in the next chapter of ONE PIECE!

OOhh, my spine is tingling, as soon as the mysteries are revealed more just opened up. This just feels like an RPG game, only I don't get to play the character! This new ship, and the dreams of the Mugiwara lies ahead in the "New World".




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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]The latest bounty report.......


11. [u]THE MOMENT WE'VE BEEN WAITING FOR: Finally, we get to see the bounties of the Mugiwara. Luffy is an astonishing 300 MILLION BELI. That's 3 times the amount he had before, I guess beating Lucci was such an amazing feat after all! Zoro is in with a 120 MILLION, slightly "over the benchmark", but I believe had the story gone public, he may have reached 200 MILLION. Yes, I think it's still to small for him.

Nico Robin's bounty has increased by 10 MILLION, well she didn't do much though, but being with Mugiwara pirates is the most likely reason why her bounty has increased slightly. Nami on the other hand has only 16 MILLION beli. Again, had the public known the true story, that bounty is way below for Nami. It's a good thing since she may be just a little bit in the dark. Sogeking has 30 MILLION, the equivalent of Arlong. Well, I guess it all boils down to his "sniping" skills. If he had defeated a CP9 member in public that would've been a different story. Chopper is a small 50 Beli, which is insane by the way. Again this proves that the story of the Mugiwara has not been fully shown in public!

Poor Sanji, this is what happens when you become 007. *SMIRK* *SMIRK* *crawls to the ground holding stomach*. HAHAHHAHAH LOL!!! WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!!!!!!! Anyways, it's an astonishing *giggle* 77 MILLION BELI. *giggle* *laughs* :smile-big :smile-big :rofl But here's what I don't get *stops to breath*.. they've managed to get a picture of Nami in a Bikini, why not Sanji???? It's just too weird how they manage to get their photos without the Mugiwara Pirates finding out!

[font=verdana][color=blue][size=1]Thanks to goofy_man and Voldy18 for the corrections. Arlong's bounty is 20 million while Nico Robin's bounty has just increased by 1 Million, not 10!! Sorry about that!!




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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]YEAH, the son of the ROBOPIRATE!!


[b]12. [u]A new Nakama: For those who believed that Franky is about to be the new Nakama of the Mugiwara crew, give yourself a big pat on the back! You are right! Actually it kinda fits into the story don't you think. With a bounty of 44 Million, that's not a lot! But then a proper shipwright in the crew will prove a valuable asset, especially when this guy is a Cyborg! And now there are 8!


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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Yet another unexpected chapter this is. A new ship and a new crew member on board. We have yet to find out about Ussop/Sogeking to be united with the crew or his destination to Elbaf. The story's pace is good and steady, lots of interesting revelations that is to be revealed soon. The island of Merman may prove the next destination where Jimbei (the Shichibukai)may meet the Mugiwara Pirates. Once again a he may have some unfinished business with Luffy after what he did to his partner Arlong! Thanks for your viewing. SO COMMENT AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! :smile-big :smile-big





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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Yes Sanji, I feel you *smirk* really..... (dies laughing)!

mugen
November 19, 2006, 09:57 AM
very funny and entertaining
appreciate you taking time to do this

voldy18
November 19, 2006, 11:23 AM
Mmmm... Didn't Robin have 79.000.000 before? So that would be 1.000.000 more.

Oh and I also lol'd at Sanji's bounty picture. Just priceless. :rofl

Usopp has it best, he just can pretend he isn't Sogeking if need be. :XD

Mugiwara_no_Jack
November 19, 2006, 12:12 PM
Nice as usual!
Great job!

goofy_man
November 19, 2006, 04:59 PM
Errors in your comments:
--Arlong's bounty was 20 million Belli, 10 million BELOW Usopp/SogeKing's bounty....
--voldy's right on Robin...it's only a 1 million Belli increase for her, not 10 million like you pointed out.

Great job, anyhow!!

Garaku
November 19, 2006, 05:04 PM
Yay comments!

Hehe totally got the Spongebob and Lil Mermaid reference :p... though not quite sure about the insurance one... :oh

How'd you come up with the moon mole theory by the way? I'm sorry if I seem slow, but I just can't make a mole out of it.... :s

Furorian Triangle...hmm... I think someone said that it meant darkness or something... either way it is definitely cursed! :tem

white silver
November 19, 2006, 07:37 PM
[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]@Mugen: Thanks for the compliments!!

@Voldy18: Yes apparently there's a mistake in the bounty, I'll go to correct it! Too bad Sanji didn't have the same impression as the other guys who got the bounties. As for Ussop, I think thing will turn out fine!

@Mugiwara_no_Jack: Thanks a lot!

@goofy_man: You know what, I should hire you for auditing my comments before I post it!!

@Garaku: Well, you know mole's "dig", so I assumed that it was a mole, a moon mole that is. As for the insurance joke, well you know you can get insurance when you're in some sort of accident, although this doesn't apply to the pirates right? Did you check the pictures, we used the same ones for about 70 - 80%, WEIRRRDD!!

So Furorian means darkness eh?? Hmm... yup, it's definitely a kind of route 66!


*Goes to update comments*

weixiaobao
November 19, 2006, 09:35 PM
well your number 1 fan is back, after work and all.
Eventhough you and Garaku have alot of thought and discussion before decided to do the comments seperately. I want to support both of you but just can't since one spoiler another. Anyway. Good job! I like the way you give credit to other.

Well i just gonna quote myself from the other post.



0- Great job

1- my rabit theory failed, it turn out to be a man which fulfilled half of my other theory a mole (the man here probably dugging for hole on the moon) (that's why there are holes on the moon)

2- the way the pictures showed the hard work (not) they put in (as I see it, it would took them years and years to finished a good ship)

3- the Ice Admiral had made the Strawhats more famous (YAY)

4- I don't get it- Zoro is one of the hero who save Iceberg-something guy. They should give him all the free swords in the world (but then again if that happened it would not be Oda's style)

5- Usop want to be a strawhat, he like Nami (sky island arc-refused to get the rich without sharing with nakama) so USop want to adventure to Elbaf with nakama

6- 100% Jimbei (like others post before me) would showed up, plus maybe the returned of Arlong. (who know)

7- I think (i know not sure) I was the first who made the connection of the mystery-triangle and The bermuda triangle, I read Doreamon (it a manga for younger kid) (read it long time ago. Note: Naruto's author (can't remember how to spell his name) had read it too). There was a volume about the triangle. It was about robot who created the disappereances and planning to erupted the volcanoes (underwater) into a chain of reaction and destroy the world.

Connection: we know about underwater volcano in One Piece when they meet Mr. 2 (the steam). And we know Jimbei and merman who rule the underwater they can do that too. So they maybe behind the ship disappering and planning something big just like Crocodile's BW and Flamingo's The new age.

8- speaking of impossibility (sometime i forgot this is just a manga)

9- totally love it (made me laugh so hard) I think the chapter desevered a 5 out of 5 because of this. Oda keep surprising people. His style is most unique. Sanji pic which made (credit go to other who thought of it and upcourse Oda) Sanji can go undercover. Chopper's bounty, I thought it have something to do with Foxy's pirate crew. Hillarious, everybody thinking Chopper will got a 50 million berries and we got the 50 right. Robin didn't do anything in that chapper (beside slappying spandam's face) got only a million up is understandable. If she got like a 500 million berries raised it would caused chaos. What good a bounty if nobody claimed it (too afraid to face the criminal). Sogeking and Nami both desevered more. But sogeking didn't defeat any cp9 member, while Nami's surprise face sompensate for that.

10- My other theory of Franky not joined is also now proved to be incorrect. Before i thought there no way Franky will left Franky's family (especially if they got bounty). But now it made sense why he must joined luffy. (wikipedia) also show a hint that Franky joined Strawhat bc Luffy draw his carpenter as a cybor.

11- Once again good job. Can't wait for White Silver's comment. And I was waiting to have the first post but it was not bold and I didn't noticed that this is new.

One random thought- Died 4 kids (nah that too old of a joke)

white silver
November 19, 2006, 09:53 PM
well your number 1 fan is back, after work and all.
Eventhough you and Garaku have alot of thought and discussion before decided to do the comments seperately. I want to support both of you but just can't since one spoiler another. Anyway. Good job! I like the way you give credit to other.

Well i just gonna quote myself from the other post.



[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Thanks for your support! Me and Garaku really thank you at the bottom of our hearts. Even moreso for me, being my Number 1 fan (want an autograph??).

Well anyways, for your comment no:

6. It is said that Arlong and Jimbei were teammates, surely Jimbei maybe as cruel as Arlong but calm and collected as Mihawk. Remember the Shichibukai are all "notorious" pirates that gave up their title for the government, so there must be something about Jimbei that we do not know. And being in the Underwater Territory, Luffy may be in one big disadvantage!

11. Well the comments are here, so you'll have to wait again next week for the next chapter's comments!!

Don't bother with 4Kids, surely many people know the sad truth, and to those who don't we must broadcast it (the original) in front of their faces!!

weixiaobao
November 19, 2006, 10:09 PM
[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Thanks for your support! Me and Garaku really thank you at the bottom of our hearts. Even moreso for me, being my Number 1 fan (want an autograph??).


I do, really do :thumbs



[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]
Well anyways, for your comment no:

6. It is said that Arlong and Jimbei were teammates, surely Jimbei maybe as cruel as Arlong but calm and collected as Mihawk. Remember the Shichibukai are all "notorious" pirates that gave up their title for the government, so there must be something about Jimbei that we do not know. And being in the Underwater Territory, Luffy may be in one big disadvantage!

11. Well the comments are here, so you'll have to wait again next week for the next chapter's comments!!

Don't bother with 4Kids, surely many people know the sad truth, and to those who don't we must broadcast it (the original) in front of their faces!!


Yup to 6 and 11 and don't bother. and what with "for your comment no"?

Anyway I gonna change something in my personal menu so that it show i am your #1 fan. (maybe a banner but I don't have one and don't know how to put in the signature)

white silver
November 19, 2006, 10:15 PM
what with "for your comment no"?


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]It's "number"!!




Anyway I gonna change something in my personal menu so that it show i am your #1 fan. (maybe a banner but I don't have one and don't know how to put in the signature)


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Hmm... you know you can request for your own personal title, like me "White Ace". As for the signature you can go to your Personal CP on your left hand menu then click "Forum Profile Information". Scroll below and you can see a signature text box, you can place in text or pictures if you remember the [img] tag then you're fine to put in pictures. If you want to place pictures in your sig, you have to apply for photobucket or imageshack to upload your pics, then you can paste the link under your [img] tag!! Thanks for appreciating me a lot (you'll make signatures eh), why not send some *paint* products in my paint thread.

weixiaobao
November 19, 2006, 10:18 PM
[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]It's "number"!!

[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Hmm... you know you can request for your own personal title, like me "White Ace".


Oh, and cool can i have a personal title. YIKE

and sexy avatar.!! But not as sexy as manga helper.

white silver
November 19, 2006, 10:24 PM
But not as sexy as manga helper.


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Are you sure about that movingstone-san *eyes sparkle with pure evil with horn coming out of the head*

weixiaobao
November 19, 2006, 10:27 PM
[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Are you sure about that movingstone-san *eyes sparkle with pure evil with horn coming out of the head*


sure about the own personal title

and sure about Manga helper if the avatar could show the lower part a bit then I am not so sure.

wait its your dream girl so if i adore her. You will murder me. So I will not speak the truth (eyes sparkle with pure evil horn coming out of the head)

white silver
November 19, 2006, 10:32 PM
sure about the own personal title

[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Yes definitely, you can request any admin to do that for you!



and sure about Manga helper if the avatar could show the lower part a bit then I am not so sure.

[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]You have noooo idea!!!



wait its your dream girl so if i adore her. You will murder me. So I will not speak the truth (eyes sparkle with pure evil horn coming out of the head)


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]*Turns into Yamato's threatening face* I hope you'll look for somewhere else, right movingstone-san?? *pats movingstone's back*

weixiaobao
November 19, 2006, 10:39 PM
[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Yes definitely, you can request any admin to do that for you!

[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]You have noooo idea!!!

[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]*Turns into Yamato's threatening face* I hope you'll look for somewhere else, right movingstone-san?? *pats movingstone's back*


lol you almost as funny as One Piece (huge compliment) anyway so that we don't get too offtopic. Anyway, I stop spamming now.

Anybody. When you think captain Morgan and Kuro and Gin will showed up again? Next chapter? or next volume? or next year? (oh this is more offtopic so just ignore me, and just compliment and comment on how great whiteace-sama and his work)

white silver
November 19, 2006, 10:46 PM
lol you almost as funny as One Piece (huge compliment) anyway so that we don't get too offtopic. Anyway, I stop spamming now.

[font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Yeah we should! Haha, funny as One Piece!! Though you got a "few" extra posts at that!!



Anybody. When you think captain Morgan and Kuro and Gin will showed up again? Next chapter? or next volume? or next year? (oh this is more offtopic so just ignore me, and just compliment and comment on how great whiteace-sama and his work)


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Well if it's a prediction regarding the next chapter, I don't think this is offtopic. Maybe we will see them, but not in the Grandline! I'm pretty sure halfway they'll go back to the 4 Blues (East, West, North and South) before going back to finish the trip on the GrandLine. Thanks again for your compliments!

bax
November 20, 2006, 01:14 AM
Ooppsss.. real life caught up to me, and I'm quite busy this weekends. But the trouble ends already, and now, I'm here ^_^

Let start with first thing first. Now, I'm impressed on how Franky is letting the Galley-La to help him building his dream ship. If it's only Iceburg, it's understandable. Perhaps Franky knows that he needs the best to build the best ship.

About the news of Franky Family and Galley-La, yeah, I thought so that they'll be not given bounty at all. But, it doesn't mean that the Marines will leave them alone, especially if Spandam is still alive. However, I agree that somehow he bounty has been a trend. It seems like pirates are racing to get their bounties raised. But do they think that what'll happened after that?

As for the SH bounties, it was shocking on two sense. Shocking that the some bounties went high and some are really stupid. Oh yeah, don't even remind me of Sanji''s pic. Hillarious. Luffy's bounty got raised by 200%!! His bounty is now even higher than the Shicibukai Kuma! And not too far from Flamingo's. What happened to Chopper. Look Chopper is a reindeer. The problem is can 50 belli can even buy a reindeer? Totally underestimated :p

This chapter, while not being so fun for me, but the bounties announcement covered the whole chapter. Yeah, for me, it's a relaxing chapter, so it's expected after such a long shocking arc.

white silver
November 20, 2006, 05:15 AM
As for the SH bounties, it was shocking on two sense. Shocking that the some bounties went high and some are really stupid. Oh yeah, don't even remind me of Sanji''s pic. Hillarious. Luffy's bounty got raised by 200%!! His bounty is now even higher than the Shicibukai Kuma! And not too far from Flamingo's. What happened to Chopper. Look Chopper is a reindeer. The problem is can 50 belli can even buy a reindeer? Totally underestimated :p


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Yes, like I said, the fights between the Strawhats and the CP9 are kept in the dark with the exception of Luffy. Had everybody witnessed each fight, they would know how extremely dangerous they are. Especially for Franky!



This chapter, while not being so fun for me, but the bounties announcement covered the whole chapter. Yeah, for me, it's a relaxing chapter, so it's expected after such a long shocking arc.


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Well, it was quite fun for me! And I agree on the bounty revelation, great way to keep the pace. It seems that every chapter we see something new!

The Boff
November 20, 2006, 10:19 AM
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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]HISTORY IN THE MAKING!



3. [u]The news that would change the future: Hopefully, this is something that has NEVER been attempted or should I say attempted "successfully" in this history of Enies Lobby. Now that it's gone, this may spark a lot of fear amongst the people. How on earth could a fully guarded area be breached by a few pirates and manage to come out in "one piece". Now that this is in the news, people may lose faith in the government, something that shouldn't happen! The possibilities regarding this incident may have an increase flow of crime, pirates, and many other notorious communities, that is if they know "what" happened.


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[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]And what about the comic section???

Though it looks like Franky's and Galley-La's nakamas are off the hook on this one. Everything is just pointed on the Mugiwara Pirates. Which may cause a lot more fear (there are only 7 in his crew). I guess the government wants the bounties to focused on them, so that people like Blackbeard may come and hunt him down.


well i see your point here but i think youre forgetting 3 text bubbles that are the reason as to why the Franky Family and the Galley La shipwrights got off the hook, and being that im such a nice guy i have them right here:


http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l99/boffenjl/One_Piece-380-13.jpg


bubble 1: asked by the marine. cause they dont know who the hell these dudes are they dont know about Franky the underworld boss of Water 7. what they have in front of them is a small army. and one of the marine dudes wanted to know who the hell he was fighting.

bubble 2: Zambai was probably not thinking at this moment he just answered in the heat of the moment. they are not Straw hat pirates. but im guessing the adreniline rush in him just wanted him to scream a little.

bubble 3: actually it makes a hell of a lot of difference. by officially declaring themselves as SH pirates, they actually managed to get under the radar off the government. cause when the marines reported back to higher authorities they must have said: the straw hat main crew attacked the cp9 but the rest of them held us at bay, there was about 60 of them.


that must be the reason why its nothing about Franky Family or the shipwrights in the news. cause no one besides them know that they were on Enies Lobby. to the world it was just a bunch of Straw Hats :D

white silver
November 20, 2006, 11:36 AM
[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]That's a good one BoffenJL, I'll update my commentary now (you'll see it in blue)!!

Garaku
November 20, 2006, 07:10 PM
Hmm... ya they did declare themselves as part of the Strawhats, but then that still doesn't protect them as indivisuals.
The marines made it crystal clear that they wanted EVERY single member of the crew when they labeled the great and awsome Chopper with a measly 50 bounty.

Simply like the chapter stated, Aokiji most likely manipulated the government's view on the whole Enies Lobby invasion.

But nice captures anyway :amuse

goofy_man
November 20, 2006, 11:53 PM
Hmm... ya they did declare themselves as part of the Strawhats, but then that still doesn't protect them as indivisuals.
The marines made it crystal clear that they wanted EVERY single member of the crew when they labeled the great and awsome Chopper with a measly 50 bounty.

Simply like the chapter stated, Aokiji most likely manipulated the government's view on the whole Enies Lobby invasion.
Yeah, I agree with the point of Aokiji "editing" the story of what happened at Enies Lobby.....wasn't he the one in charge of that location? Forgot if he was....

Speaking of Aokiji...I have a feeling that he is going to gather a special Marine unit to handle the Straw Hats, according to his judgment of Luffy and his crew. Members of that unit would include:
--Smoker
--Tashigi
--Hina
--Django
--Fullbody
Not too sure about Garp, Coby and Helmeppo....but knowing Garp, they'll be included....


Note: If you missed the pattern in the special unit members, stop reading One Piece. Seriously.

bax
November 21, 2006, 08:20 AM
Oh yes, just a thought though, wel if the Red Line is circling the globe, that mean the SH would have to cross it once again at the half point of GL right? So, in your thoughts, is it possible that the Merman Island is actually beneath the Red Line? I mean, they wil not cross it like before or fly over it, but rather dive under it.

weixiaobao
November 21, 2006, 10:50 AM
This chapter, while not being so fun for me, but the bounties announcement covered the whole chapter. Yeah, for me, it's a relaxing chapter, so it's expected after such a long shocking arc.




don't even remind me of Sanji''s pic. Hillarious.


Contracting statement, hillarious but not fun. lol lol :gigglebunny :gigglebunny :gigglebunny :gigglebunny



bubble 1: asked by the marine. cause they dont know who the hell these dudes are they dont know about Franky the underworld boss of Water 7. what they have in front of them is a small army. and one of the marine dudes wanted to know who the hell he was fighting.

bubble 2: Zambai was probably not thinking at this moment he just answered in the heat of the moment. they are not Straw hat pirates. but im guessing the adreniline rush in him just wanted him to scream a little.

bubble 3: actually it makes a hell of a lot of difference. by officially declaring themselves as SH pirates, they actually managed to get under the radar off the government. cause when the marines reported back to higher authorities they must have said: the straw hat main crew attacked the cp9 but the rest of them held us at bay, there was about 60 of them.


that must be the reason why its nothing about Franky Family or the shipwrights in the news. cause no one besides them know that they were on Enies Lobby. to the world it was just a bunch of Straw Hats :D


genious, good point. and also i thought the navy or marines thought that all of them die die during buster call



Hmm... ya they did declare themselves as part of the Strawhats, but then that still doesn't protect them as indivisuals.

Simply like the chapter stated, Aokiji most likely manipulated the government's view on the whole Enies Lobby invasion.


Like i said they believe to be dead but Aokiji definitely involved in this. like Robin bounty (she freaking almost kill Spanda, accually she torture him pretty good), and yet not much of a raise



Yeah, I agree with the point of Aokiji "editing" the story of what happened at Enies Lobby.....wasn't he the one in charge of that location? Forgot if he was....

Speaking of Aokiji...I have a feeling that he is going to gather a special Marine unit to handle the Straw Hats, according to his judgment of Luffy and his crew. Members of that unit would include:
--Smoker
--Tashigi
--Hina
--Django
--Fullbody
Not too sure about Garp, Coby and Helmeppo....but knowing Garp, they'll be included....


Note: If you missed the pattern in the special unit members, stop reading One Piece. Seriously.


Garp will not included, since he have to deal with shank and WB. Anyway dun listen to goofyman about everything except "stop reading One Piece" We need more ONe Piece so he can start a mob and destroy 4 kids. :shakefist



Oh yes, just a thought though, wel if the Red Line is circling the globe, that mean the SH would have to cross it once again at the half point of GL right? So, in your thoughts, is it possible that the Merman Island is actually beneath the Red Line? I mean, they wil not cross it like before or fly over it, but rather dive under it.


Oh my gosh, no one thought of that, genious, genious. White Silver should put this in first post included credit go to bax.

white silver
November 21, 2006, 09:35 PM
Oh yes, just a thought though, wel if the Red Line is circling the globe, that mean the SH would have to cross it once again at the half point of GL right? So, in your thoughts, is it possible that the Merman Island is actually beneath the Red Line? I mean, they wil not cross it like before or fly over it, but rather dive under it.


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]That's an interesting point. Yes, I agree I've never thought of the other "half" of the Grandline. But it's already stated, to get to the Merman island, one must pass through the "Furoura Triangle"!

Anyways here are some things we need to find out:

1. Does the Red Line actually circle the globe?

2. Does the Grandline begin at Reverse Mountain and does it END at the reverse mountain?

bax
November 22, 2006, 03:55 AM
Anyways here are some things we need to find out:

1. Does the Red Line actually circle the globe?

2. Does the Grandline begin at Reverse Mountain and does it END at the reverse mountain?


I believe it is!

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/3152/08kx7.jpg


If the 7 islands are at the Reverse Mountain, then the Red Line shown at the middle of the map is at the half point of GL. And as for GL ended at the same spot, maybe it is. I view it as another Reverse Mountain where it exits GL (so one Reverse Mountain for entering GL and one for exit only).

Gold Knight
November 22, 2006, 05:07 AM
Nice job on that review White Silver. I'm sure it took a lot of time, but you did great ;)

My interest in OP is faltering quickly lately so I'm afraid this probably won't be the first time I'll come late to your reviews. Still, I'm sure the OP fans here at MH appreciate it, so thanks. ^^

white silver
November 22, 2006, 09:01 AM
I believe it is!

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/3152/08kx7.jpg


If the 7 islands are at the Reverse Mountain, then the Red Line shown at the middle of the map is at the half point of GL. And as for GL ended at the same spot, maybe it is. I view it as another Reverse Mountain where it exits GL (so one Reverse Mountain for entering GL and one for exit only).


[b][font=verdana][size=1]Nice one bax, I'll note that in my commentary!




Nice job on that review White Silver. I'm sure it took a lot of time, but you did great ;)



[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Wow, so the "Comment" master has come and visit. Welcome welcome. I appreciate it. You know what? It really did take a lot of time. I can sort of understand how you're going through with this, but to think you would comment 3 different mangas in a row. The pressure must be unbearable. Well, me and Garaku are here to take that package!




My interest in OP is faltering quickly lately so I'm afraid this probably won't be the first time I'll come late to your reviews. Still, I'm sure the OP fans here at MH appreciate it, so thanks. ^^


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]It does, ah geez, it really is getting interesting by moment! Whether you're late or not, it's really an honor for you to stop by! (Have you tried Garaku's comments?)

And yes, as you can see from this thread, there's a lot of support from OP fans!



[color=red]*Note: Just added [color=blue]Bax's discovery on the Red Line in the comment thread! It's marked in blue so you can't miss it!

weixiaobao
November 22, 2006, 10:25 AM
I think the One Piece world is not a planet. It a square. Because they said the island that One Piece was on was the last island on the Grand Line but it nowhere near the Reverse mountain. So to sum it up if the One Piece world is flat square instead of a planet then the Red line and Grand line does not have to circle the whole world (b/c it not a circle)

Another thought, my previous thought is insanely crazy. So I would go with bax on the red line circle the world and that under it is merman island.



I believe it is!

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/3152/08kx7.jpg


If the 7 islands are at the Reverse Mountain, then the Red Line shown at the middle of the map is at the half point of GL. And as for GL ended at the same spot, maybe it is. I view it as another Reverse Mountain where it exits GL (so one Reverse Mountain for entering GL and one for exit only).


So half of the Grand line where started at one reverse mountain and end at another reverse mountain is unexplore? Since you can only enter and exist, the only way to explore it to cross the calm belt which only the marine can go and what about the Emperors ruling the other half of the Grand Line.

So it should not be 2 Reverse mountain but instead only one, the place where the other reverse mountain is is the merman island. (I am a bit confused myself) (so I wish someone changlenge my thought)

bax
November 22, 2006, 10:53 AM
Well, the Coby did mentioned "The New World", which I believe is the other half of the Grand Line. Well, "The New World" literally means "unexplored" or "partially explored". It makes sense in my mind. To reach there they had to go through the Merman Island. But, what is before the Merman Island? Yes, Enies Lobby, where CP9 is situated. No mere pirates can outrun the CP9 (even the Marines are without Lucchy and co).

So, which basically means, only powerful pirates like Shanks or Whitebeard can cross CP9's zone safely. Which I interpret again as the playground where the big biys come to play (high ranked Marines, Shichibukai, 4 Emperors). Which could explain why not many pirates have ever reached there. They had to go through EL and then met the most fearsome pirates there.

As for the Reverse Mountain, there is always another way to bypass it. Remember the Gate of Justice? It leads to Marines HQ. I don't think Marines HQ is on the "weaker" side of Grand Line. So perhaps there is more than one way to cross the Red Line, and the SH crew is on the path where they had to go pass the Merman Island.

white silver
November 22, 2006, 11:07 AM
Well, the Coby did mentioned "The New World", which I believe is the other half of the Grand Line. Well, "The New World" literally means "unexplored" or "partially explored". It makes sense in my mind. To reach there they had to go through the Merman Island. But, what is before the Merman Island? Yes, Enies Lobby, where CP9 is situated. No mere pirates can outrun the CP9 (even the Marines are without Lucchy and co).

So, which basically means, only powerful pirates like Shanks or Whitebeard can cross CP9's zone safely. Which I interpret again as the playground where the big biys come to play (high ranked Marines, Shichibukai, 4 Emperors). Which could explain why not many pirates have ever reached there. They had to go through EL and then met the most fearsome pirates there.

[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Like I said in my previous commentary, it feels like a new story, a part 2 in One Piece! I believe that all the "big" guys are taking place there, someone like buggy is most very unlikely to be there. Well, let us see...




As for the Reverse Mountain, there is always another way to bypass it. Remember the Gate of Justice? It leads to Marines HQ. I don't think Marines HQ is on the "weaker" side of Grand Line. So perhaps there is more than one way to cross the Red Line, and the SH crew is on the path where they had to go pass the Merman Island.


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Indeed, it's either tomorrow or two more days to find out how to pass through the red line. Oda's pace is steady but expected, we may see more in the next chapter!

Luckas
November 22, 2006, 12:41 PM
I think I read somewhere it is possible to enter Grand Line through marine head-quarter, but I never understood the geographical position od Grand Line or Red Line, maybe it's right someone who said the One Piece world isn't a sphere as the earth. I really don't know myself, that thing of Grand Line and Red Line make me feeling very stupid.
Maybe this week there isn't One Piece chapter.

white silver
November 22, 2006, 01:12 PM
I think I read somewhere it is possible to enter Grand Line through marine head-quarter, but I never understood the geographical position od Grand Line or Red Line, maybe it's right someone who said the One Piece world isn't a sphere as the earth.


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Then how would you explain the very same "red" line bordering the "new world" Grand Line and the "reverse mountain" grand line. Think about the redline as the "equator" mark on earth. Let's say the equator is marked somewhere in asia, if you keep heading north eventually you'll end up in America till the other "half" of the equator.



I really don't know myself, that thing of Grand Line and Red Line make me feeling very stupid.
Maybe this week there isn't One Piece chapter.


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]All we be explained. And how is it that you got this idea that there wouldn't BE a One Piece chapter?????

bax
November 22, 2006, 01:13 PM
[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]All we be explained. And how is it that you got this idea that there wouldn't BE a One Piece chapter?????


Go to the spoiler section ;)

white silver
November 22, 2006, 01:16 PM
Go to the spoiler section ;)


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]NA AH! No freakin way. I am an ANTI-spoiler guy. I really really really hate spoilers!

weixiaobao
November 22, 2006, 01:45 PM
maybe it's right someone who said the One Piece world isn't a sphere as the earth. I really don't know myself, that thing of Grand Line and Red Line make me feeling very stupid.
Maybe this week there isn't One Piece chapter.


That's me = someone

dun feel stupid, this is just hypothesis (guess). only Oda know the magnificent truth!!!



[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]NA AH! No freakin way. I am an ANTI-spoiler guy. I really really really hate spoilers!


I am an anti-spoiler guy too but I can't help being a spoiler though.

Luckas
November 22, 2006, 06:13 PM
Sorry to be a bearer of a sad news, but it is confirmed no One Piece this week.

white silver
November 22, 2006, 09:09 PM
Sorry to be a bearer of a sad news, but it is confirmed no One Piece this week.


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]What? How come I have not heard about this before??

bax
November 23, 2006, 01:19 AM
[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]What? How come I have not heard about this before??


That's why I told you to go and read the spoiler section >.> A guy said there is no OP this week.

white silver
November 23, 2006, 01:20 AM
That's why I told you to go and read the spoiler section >.> A guy said there is no OP this week.


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]There's no need. It's already posted on the Announcement Bar!

Adam_xx
November 23, 2006, 06:33 AM
Great read, I agree with you, the bounties are quite low.

Except Luffy's was definately un-expected. xD

weixiaobao
November 25, 2006, 08:07 PM
Hey white silver and Garaku. Can I your guys signature links and stuff in mine so I can promoted more discussion in these comentary sections.
PS. we need more OP fans!

white silver
November 25, 2006, 10:55 PM
Hey white silver and Garaku. Can I your guys signature links and stuff in mine so I can promoted more discussion in these comentary sections.
PS. we need more OP fans!


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Yes movingstone, I don't mind if you do! I'm sure Garaku would say the same!

weixiaobao
November 25, 2006, 10:59 PM
[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Yes movingstone, I don't mind if you do! I'm sure Garaku would say the same!

Yike, Promoting One piece commentary is as important as = world peace
And how you do the link thing and the spoiler tag.
____
just figure out!

Pevee
November 29, 2006, 09:37 PM
you know, what? i guess your promoting one piece commentary is working cause I've never knew this kind of thread even existed......

weixiaobao
November 29, 2006, 10:10 PM
you know, what? i guess your promoting one piece commentary is working cause I've never knew this kind of thread even existed......


HA HA HA, so comment away.... One piece new chapter tommorow so new commenting thread will be here soon (can't wait)

white silver
November 30, 2006, 05:46 AM
HA HA HA, so comment away.... One piece new chapter tommorow so new commenting thread will be here soon (can't wait)


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Wow movingstone! You should be my One Piece commentary promoter or something! Oh yes, RAW day is here, and as soon as the scanslations start coming, expect REVIEWS!

weixiaobao
November 30, 2006, 04:12 PM
[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Wow movingstone! You should be my One Piece commentary promoter or something! Oh yes, RAW day is here, and as soon as the scanslations start coming, expect REVIEWS!

I am your and karaku's promoter anyway... expecting great comments.. And do you know you gonna be in my fiction...???

white silver
December 01, 2006, 04:51 AM
I am your and karaku's promoter anyway... expecting great comments.. And do you know you gonna be in my fiction...???


[b][font=verdana][color=green][size=1]Wow, I'll be honored!

Garaku
December 03, 2006, 04:03 AM
Hey white silver and Garaku. Can I your guys signature links and stuff in mine so I can promoted more discussion in these comentary sections.
PS. we need more OP fans!


Oya sure, fine by me. Have fun with it! ^.^