[Translation Check] Can someone check

[stlwright]

Can someone tell me if this is right.

ひどい仕打ちをする彼氏(隣人タナカ)より俺のほうが良いと言わせ
I was able to say that I was better than his boyfriend (My neighbor
Tanaka) who mistreated him.

[mikkih]

ひどい仕打ちをする彼氏(隣人タナカ)より俺のほうが良いと言わせI was able to say that I was better than his boyfriend (My neighbor
Tanaka) who mistreated him.

This is not a full sentence: Manga phrases often do not have a period(。), but this is an open sentence. If the sentence were ending with 言えた/IETA, then your translation sounded just fine.

言わせる= make/force someone to say something.
It is not "able to say something."

If you did not cut in the middle of a sentence,

<1>言わせ/IWASE　is probably followed by something like たいたいのか（？）/tainoka or　る　つもりか（？）/ ru tsumorika in other bubble.

XXXと言わせたいのか：Do you (Does s/he) want to make me say that XXX
XXXと言わせるつもりか：Are you (Is s/he) going to make me say that XXX

<2>The other part of the compound sentence will follow.

XXXと言わせ(て),:You(he/she) made me say that XXX, and ...
XXXと言わせ(ておいて):While you(he/she) made me say that XXX , ...

By the way, is this a boys'-love manga? <HIS boyfriend>　Otherwise, I would assume that the translation would be "her* boyfriend." If "I" am speaking to the person who has been abused, then translation can be "your boyfriend."

Anyway, CONTEXT is needed.

[stlwright]

Right the ending was supposed to be iwaseta. (And it is BL) Thanks


This is not a full sentence: Manga phrases often do not have a period(。), but this is an open sentence. If the sentence were ending with 言えた/IETA, then your translation sounded just fine.

言わせる= make/force someone to say something.
It is not "able to say something."

If you did not cut in the middle of a sentence,

<1>言わせ/IWASE　is probably followed by something like たいたいのか（？）/tainoka or　る　つもりか（？）/ ru tsumorika in other bubble.

XXXと言わせたいのか：Do you (Does s/he) want to make me say that XXX
XXXと言わせるつもりか：Are you (Is s/he) going to make me say that XXX

<2>The other part of the compound sentence will follow.

XXXと言わせ(て),:You(he/she) made me say that XXX, and ...
XXXと言わせ(ておいて):While you(he/she) made me say that XXX , ...

By the way, is this a boys'-love manga? <HIS boyfriend>　Otherwise, I would assume that the translation would be "her* boyfriend." If "I" am speaking to the person who has been abused, then translation can be "your boyfriend."

Anyway, CONTEXT is needed.

[mikkih]

I hope that you figured out how to translate the sentence by now. Without any context, I cannot tell WHO made WHOM to say that "I am better than his boyfriend ... ."