View Full Version : Looking for an artist and also wanted feedback on a manga idea
kaanon
November 29, 2010, 08:25 PM
I am not going to update this page anymore and erased all the info i put before because I hardly got any responses on this thread. But to all who still want to read the story here is a link to it : http://www.smackjeeves.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=6479&sid=2c1f13a491bacf9df2d4d4e5e6803d96
beltranl
November 30, 2010, 09:43 PM
This story sounds really good, usually I don't finish reading stories that are long because I dont find them as interesting but this one kept me reading till the end. I like this being the end of the first chapter, I imagine a scene where they are looking ahead into some type of scenery, and very convinced. Your characters seem very interesting as well, when I began reading your background info there where a few
things you said here and there that sounded kind of similar to something I am writing so it got me a little nervous, but it is seems it will be very different but good.
Just keep writing and I can't wait till you post more. Good Luck!!!
kaanon
November 30, 2010, 10:22 PM
Thanks for the support, I really appreciate it. I was getting worried that the idea was bad or something because I posted it up on a few sites but didnt get any responses on any of them. Ill probably have a second chapter up maybe in a week or so.
beltranl
December 01, 2010, 09:47 PM
Well you do that, sometimes people don't read the complete posts or just don't like commenting but I like to give people the best and truest feedback I can give so they either improve or keep doing what he/she is doing. And it's always good to have people to confide and share their ideas.
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aldrichcrescent
December 09, 2010, 09:47 AM
Hmmm... where can i see your story.. heheh i wanna take a peek at it :)
beltranl
December 09, 2010, 11:16 PM
Sorry aldrichcrescent^ He found the people he needed so he won't be posting here as much if at all. If only it had been a few days ago you could have read it. Sorry man.
aldrichcrescent
December 11, 2010, 09:39 PM
Thats ok ^^ no problemo... hehehehe:)
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