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Schwindelmagier
February 10, 2007, 05:05 AM
Chapter 08 a song of temptation and desire

"Tse, such useless Akuma. Even can't beat those vermins", Magier groused. "Lucky you I have other plans, otherwise you would already be dead."
She turned around and the exorcists disappeared out of her sight. The place she was going to go to now, would have enough exorcists to kill, to have fun with. Soon, the town lay far behind her.
The shadow of the girl became longer the more the sun sank. The coat she had worn before annoyed her, so she took it off. Now she wore a black skirt, black knee socks paired with black boots, a dark jacket over a white chemise. Her hands she had engulfed behind her back reposed in black fingerless glove. Her whole appearance seemed to merged together with the shadow. And then, she began to whistle:

"Exorcists, the trash of humanity...I love to strangle, to kill, to tear them.
Exorcists, the vermins of all living beings...aren't even worth to be pitied.
Kill them, tear them, strangle them, viscerate them, play with them.
Send them to hell, let them betray.
God, those cowards...their time keeps running away.
Like the blood that flows out of their dead bodies.
Exorcists, the trash of humanity...I love to strangle, to kill, to tear them.
Exorcists, the vermins of all living beings...aren't even worth to be pitied..."

She stopped. The church was nearer than she thought. On the top of a hill, there it stood. The building made of pure white stones was covered with dark red splots that nearly were of epic proportions. Blood.
Magier smiled.
"Maybe I exaggerated it a little bit", she said, laughing in her sleeve. "I can't wait to beautify the church with some dead exorcists."

"Do you want me to kill you?"
"I...I won't let you pass."
"Do you really think a vermin like you can stop me."
"Innocence hatsu- arrrgh..."
SPLASH
"Sleep well, little exorcist"

"Haha, exorcists are really fools....as well as all the other humans", said Magier while the church came closer and closer. Suddenly her face turned seriously. "I hate humans."
She closed her eyes.

..."Kill her!"
"With pleasure"
"W-wait, what are you two talking about?"

Magier instinctively touched her forehead. An annoyed yet regretful face stared at the dirty ground. Then she began to laugh.
"After all, you got a just punishment", she said, then watching at the church.
"I guess it's time to pray."

deathshadow25
February 10, 2007, 10:11 AM
ooooooo another chapter I'm excited

Your character is vile but in my head she's super hott

rhapsody blue
February 10, 2007, 10:35 AM
Yay another chapter! This a is a good way to spend the time while we wait for the next manga chapter!

I liked your chapter! So descrpitve and the best part was you told us what happened at the church earlier :)

Schwindelmagier
February 10, 2007, 10:45 AM
Yeah, thankies ^_^
This is the part at the church you meant, ne:

"Do you want me to kill you?"
"I...I won't let you pass."
"Do you really think a vermin like you can stop me."
"Innocence hatsu- arrrgh..."
SPLASH
"Sleep well, little exorcist"

and this this is part of Magier's cruel past:
..."Kill her!"
"With pleasure"
"W-wait, what are you two talking about?"



ooooooo another chapter I'm excited
Your character is vile but in my head she's super hott


Haha, thanks a lot ^___^

Djmewmew
February 10, 2007, 05:17 PM
Whee~ I'm quickly becoming addicted to your character 8D She's just so much fun~ X3 I luff her little song, I can totally see her walk/skipping down a street singing that at the top of her lungs and getting werid looks because of it. =3

deathshadow25
February 10, 2007, 05:33 PM
Yay another chapter! This a is a good way to spend the time while we wait for the next manga chapter!

I liked your chapter! So descrpitve and the best part was you told us what happened at the church earlier :)


I agree whole heartedly

If we have to get another break like the last one we might get up to chapter 100 !!

Koen
February 10, 2007, 06:47 PM
Very cool, magier is looking everything clear. This could be a cool arc and nice song :D

Schwindelmagier
February 11, 2007, 04:23 AM
Thanks a lot, Djmewemew, Koenosaki and Deathshadow. I am glad ya like it.
Yeah, the song. I had to think about something really sadistic and that was the result xD. And one part even rhymes.
"Send them to hell, let them betray"