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deathshadow25
February 24, 2007, 11:36 PM
Flames walked down the mountain path as the twilight shined behind him casting a shadow across his path. It' been five days since he left the cave and he spent 3 weeks inside even though it felt like he was in there for a day at most.

"I just guess time moved slower in there" Flames stomach grumbled as his thoughts drifted to food, He began thinking about fuits and vegetables but then he remembered the delicious food they had at headquarters, Spaghetti and Meatballs, Pudding, Pie, beef stew, fresh bread mmmmm the fresh bread. When Flames came too he had drool dripping over the side of his mouth.

"Oh my I'm beginning to act like those guys back at headquarters..." Flames dropped his head and then began laughing it was the first time in a long time. "I guess starting to behave like them isn't the worst thing."

He started to remember his first day at the order and he saw the exorcist called Stephanie with green hair at first he was curious as to how she came about having green hair, then he stood tall and scared her away with his girth figuring that she was what they called an akuma after all with her green hair and the look on her face she didn't look human. It wasn't until later that he was told that she was another exorcist but not after scaring her away for a second time using his wolf innocence, they called Lycanthropy. Once he learned English it was easier and he went through rigorous training with the leader who taught him about battle strategy and he was formidable he didn't even activate his Innocence once at least not until he lost control then Lione began to get scared of my Innocence.

"I guess he won't have to worry now...."

Flames put his left hand into the satchel he carried feeling what he was told to bring. He also held up he spear he held in his right hand .

[Flashback]

three orbs of light appeared before Flames looking as if they were shining brightly under rippling water

"The protection you seek will be given to you as well as 2 other gifts one from each of us"

Flames stood before the first orb of light

"I am Matchitisew the Executor, I have a gift with which you shall win all of your battles, and If you lose you shall bring shame to the deaths of your comrades"

It was a spear with 3 edges (Authors Note:It looks like the one the girls holding in this Image I know it's small http://www.freewebs.com/progenitor_of_ka05/mirage.jpg

"It's the Cheveyo Lansa only once every 100 years does a warrior come who can wield it "

"With this you can..."

[End Flashback]

Flames picks up his head and sees the mansion, he looks up at the sky and it's filled with stars but no moon.

"It's night already.."

Flames exits the path and only about 30-40 feet from the front door when 3 figures appear. One appeared to be female while the other two are male.

DINGDINGDINGDINGDING

The alarm tripped Flames decided to make his move and ran towards the figures

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"Maybe I should have sent someone to follow him, he could've encountered trouble..." Lione spun around his chair and looked out the window with the corner of his eye

"No moon tonight.."

A couple of shadows in the darkness appear followed by some whispering

Lione turned out to the window and he could see three distinct shadows

"Intruders? Could it be...? I hope they don't think I'll make it easy for them to get even an Inch closer!" Lione pressed a button under his desk

DINGDINGDINGDINGDING

"Now lets try the new security system that our research team created." Lione then flipped open a compartment on the armrest of his chair revealing a button he pressed it.


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Flames ran trying to activate Lycanthropy but it wasn't working so instead he pulled out his spear and ran towards them at full speed.

"Oh crap it looks like their not as stupid as I thought." growled Magier. A buzzsaw arose from the ground and came towards her fast she stood still and drew her katana when it came within inches of her she swung her katana destroying the blade.
"Oh my did I do that?"

Traps were springing up everywhere and that annoying alarm was beginning to irritate her some arrows started to shoot from the trees and those buzzsaws were popping up everywhere.

BOOOOOOM

"Sorry that was my fault hehehe, These exorcists sure know how to have fun, stepping on that mine tickled" said I.A in between fits of laughter as he caught an arrow that almost punctured his eye.

A savage native to the land knocked I.A back and he almost had his head sawed off by one of the buzzsaws.

"Who are you?" the savage said holding spear

"We're your worst nightmare come true" Magier ran towards him ready to take off his head and it looked like I.A was ready to turn him into dust on the other side. The savage readied his weapon, but he obviously had no idea who he was dealing with

"Makai no En!" a blue wall of fire separated Flames and The Noahs.

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Flames was ready to fight when two walls of Flames appeared separating him from his two attackers. A boy appeared he was relatively short compared to Flames and he looked angry

"Head into the mansion we can handle this!" spat the boy

"We?"

"Yes we'll handle it!" A girl came came flying out followed by a little girl through the front door who Flames recognized as the exorcist Tabitha.

Flames stared in shock but then adhered to the boys words. As he ran into the mansion he spotted Lione.

"Lione! I have the 'protection' you asked for!" Flames threw the satchel to Lione, he caught it and noticed that in Flames right hand he was holding a spear.

"Whats that!"

"It's a present from the ancients"

Lione looked at Flames confused and then pulled out a crystal the size of a bowling ball from the satchel

"Ummmmmmmm..."

Flames grabbed the crystal and started murmering words in a language Lione didn't understand

"Mitexi Meda, Eyota Shaman, Tehya Satinka, Olathe Angeni"

The protection was activated, a glow slowly emanated from the crystal and shield of light began to form around Flames and it slowly began to expand

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The two walls of fire blocked Magier and I.A but the third one was hiding and came out to greet the 3 exorcists. Zeran looked at him with intensity

"Do I know you?" asked Jaques

"Are you saying you forgot?!"

"I would, but I'm sure I've never seen you in my life because that face of your makes me nauseous and I would've sent you to hell for that tear-stained face"

Zeran got furious and ran towards Jaques

"Ougi: Makai no Enj-"

Then a wall of light surrounded the facility and it was slowly expanding

"Zeran STOP!" shouted Rivnak

Zeran stopped his attack but instead within a few feet of Jaques he slashed at Jaques across the cheek. The wall of light kept coming but when it came in contact with with Zeran it swallowed him but when it came close to Jaques it shot him back.

Then the mansion and the exorcists dissappeared.

Hey Guys I'm sorry about the wait but I has to do some rewrites to accomodate for the Noahs, and I got busy and I gave Zeran his revenge. I just hope you guys think its worth the wait :D

Last but not least I dedicate this chapter to snoogen who helped me alot with all of her wonderful ideas and support

rhapsody blue
February 24, 2007, 11:57 PM
Awwwwww... thanks for the dedication!

Anyway, such a good chapter! Yay for finally being protected after nasy Noahs! :) I think your chapter rivaling my in length. Is there a competition? jk jk

I liked how you mentioned the rivalry between Zeran and Jaques. Is my character afraid of yours? lol Somehow I doubt I would be afraid of you in person. I also liked how you included the many traps that Lione had out; such a prepared leader!

Amazing job and keep up the good work! :thumbs

AthrunZala222
February 25, 2007, 12:18 AM
Awesome usage of my techniques!!!!!! :kkthumbs :bows: But usually he says the name of the sword where his technique comes from before he says the atcual technique name. Basically both those attacks were from Jigoku.

AND U GRANTED MY REQUEST!!!! w00t!!!!!!!! XP XP XP by the way since when did I.A join the fray?

All that aside it was absolutely WONDERFUL! *tears up*

deathshadow25
February 25, 2007, 12:22 AM
Awesome usage of my techniques!!!!!! :kkthumbs :bows: But usually he says the name of the sword where his technique comes from before he says the atcual technique name. Basically both those attacks were from Jigoku.

AND U GRANTED MY REQUEST!!!! w00t!!!!!!!! XP XP XP by the way since when did I.A join the fray?

All that aside it was absolutely WONDERFUL! *tears up*



sorry about the sword thing I didn't notice

your welcome I thought it would be a nice thing to do

and what do yu mean by when did I.A join the fray

thanks again for the compliments

AthrunZala222
February 25, 2007, 12:30 AM
it's alright u did good neways ^^

thanks again

umm because it was only Magier and Jacques hunting bookmen down wasn't it? or was IA there all along and I missed his existence?

you welcome XP

deathshadow25
February 25, 2007, 12:31 AM
Oh no I.A was there If I'm correct

rhapsody blue
February 25, 2007, 12:57 AM
Oh no I.A was there If I'm correct


I.A. was always there; he wasn't mentioned in Raijatsu's chapter because he wasn't involved in the torture.

Oh and I read about your rough day so ::muah:: to make you feel better.

tune
February 25, 2007, 02:28 AM
all the battle chapters are amazing~ ;_;
*hopes the battle ends before my turn to write...*

this looks like zeran and jacques will surely clash! :D
i can't wait to know what is the protection flame did was about! :)

Schwindelmagier
February 25, 2007, 03:04 AM
Wow, a cool fighitng chapter ^_^, like it..but say...
is my katana's blade broken now? ;_;
well, nevertheless, I love the light wall that approached and let the mansion and exorcists disappear <3. A very nice idea of protection

Koen
February 25, 2007, 05:21 AM
héhé, and meanwhile I am sleeping... :D

Djmewmew
February 25, 2007, 12:54 PM
I don't think your blade is broken, but the the buzzsaw/chainsaw/whatever's blade is.

Schwindelmagier
February 25, 2007, 12:57 PM
aaaaaaaaaso, thanks.... okies ^_^

deathshadow25
February 25, 2007, 06:30 PM
aaaaaaaaaso, thanks.... okies ^_^


Yea your sword broke the buzzsaw. When I pictured it I pictured Magier versus this giant saw and she stood fearlessly and destroyed it



I.A. was always there; he wasn't mentioned in Raijatsu's chapter because he wasn't involved in the torture.

Oh and I read about your rough day so ::muah:: to make you feel better.


thanks snoog it's very much appreciated

héhé, and meanwhile I am sleeping... :D


Yup, I was thinking you were a little exhausted especially since when everyone found you you had collapsed and you probably didn't get a chance to rest

I also left some unanswered questions in this chapter the spear, what is the wall of light, what is the other gift the ancients gave to Flames

AthrunZala222
February 25, 2007, 07:08 PM
W8 a sec... I'm pretty sure D. Gray Man takes place around the 1840's
I KNOW it is be4 the 1850's
How? Well Lavi and the others were talking about the seclusion of Japan being caused by the Earl of Millenium right? In History the seclusion of Japan didn't end till the 1850's
So were buzzsaws invented in the 19th century?

rhapsody blue
February 25, 2007, 07:11 PM
dgm takes place at the end of the 19th century aka Victorian age.

Hoshino doesn't base her story on facts so there's no need to be historically accurate, right?

Djmewmew
February 25, 2007, 07:50 PM
Its 'a fictional end to the 19th centuy' therefore, the 1800s. And if Komui has a giant fighting robot, can't we have some buzzsaws?

Schwindelmagier
February 26, 2007, 09:05 AM
Ehem *coughs* can someboday please explain me what buzzsaws means, I can't find it in a dictionary xD?

deathshadow25
February 26, 2007, 12:58 PM
buzzsaws are usually used to cut things. It is a serrated blade that spins at rapid speeds usually thay are stationary but I made them move back and forth.

hope that helps

Schwindelmagier
February 26, 2007, 02:33 PM
ah, thanks, now I know what you meant ^-^.