[AcidCherry] attemps Editing Practice #001

@_@ Takes longer than it looks...
I iz n00b.
Any tips?

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On the bottom right panel, you didn't center one of the bubbles. (Yeah, I know it says that on the solution to align right one of the bubbles. I didn't like it, but maybe other readers do.)The "futon" one looks good even if you aligned it to the left. On the bottom left top panel, the "I'll scream" is too close to the the edge of the bubble. However, overall, this is pretty good for a first try.

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Originally Posted by OneClash

On the bottom right panel, you didn't center one of the bubbles. (Yeah, I know it says that on the solution to align right one of the bubbles. I didn't like it, but maybe other readers do.)The "futon" one looks good even if you aligned it to the left. On the bottom left top panel, the "I'll scream" is too close to the the edge of the bubble. However, overall, this is pretty good for a first try.

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Thank you~ I'll work on improving the placement of text inside the bubbles from now on and try more centering. :amuse

Try different fonts as well. (politely refrains from bashing Anime Ace)