Re: Legend Of The Black Lions
Time for a little fun with extras.
Spoiler: Chapter Special 1: "The Aftermath"
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Chapter Special 1
The Aftermath
(Team Rikkaidai appear to be hanging out with each other, simply roaming the city)
Kirihara: "Tennis these days seems to be different than it was a year ago.."
Renji: "Statistics have shown a raise in interest in tennis, and a raise in reverence for not just tennis but all sports."
Jackal: "So you're telling me the Black Lions literally changed the world of sports?"
Yagyuu: "Not the Black Lions, one man did."
Jackal: "Hm?"
Sanada: "He's right, everything that happened was the result of the ideals of one man- Aisoku Seda."
Yukimura: "He has become something of a legend now."
Niou: "And rightly so. If I didn't see what that guy could do on the court with my own eyes, I know I wouldn't believe it."
Bunta: "I guess it's confirmation enough that we are still talking about them a year later."
Yukimura: "We have definitely not been more united as a team since then."
Rikkaidai: "!!"
(The team happens upon tennis courts where they encounter Seigaku in the midst of a large crowd on the outside of the fence, watching what is going on inside the court)
Yukimura: "What have we here?"
Sanada: "..."
(It appears two men dressed in black cloaks are provoking the crowd)
Cloaked Man 1: "Does anyone dare to challenge the Black Lions!?!"
Cloaked Man 2: "Who is brave enough to play against us?"
Sanada: "You morons are not the Black Lions. Nobody has seen them in over a year."
Man 1: "Ha! Why don't you play us and find out, Sanada!"
Yukimura: "Considering we were on worldwide television, many people know our names.."
"I'll do it."
Everyone: "?!?!"
(A mysterious man comes out from the shadows, dressed in blue jeans and a grey hoodie, so his face is not visible)
Mysterious Man: "It appears many people are imitating the Black Lions nowadays."
Cloaked Man 1: "We're the real thing."
Mysterious Man: "Alright then. How about a match? I'll let you guys serve first."
Cloaked Man 2: "You want to play both of us at the same time?"
Mysterious Man: "Yes, and I would like the out of bounds to be as if it were a singles match."
Momoshiro: "He sure is confident.."
Cloaked Man 1: "If that's how you like your coffins prepared."
(Cloaked Man 1 throws the ball in the air to serve)
Mysterious Man: "..."
Cloaked Man 1: "Ha!"
(The Mysterious man smashes the ball with lightning fast racquet speed back at the server, hitting him painfully in the wrist)
Cloaked Man 1: "Ahhhhh!"
(The racquet falls out of his hand as it shoots off to his partner's hand, doing the same thing)
Cloaked Man 2: "Ughh!"
Yukimura: "Those movements...I've only seen one person move like that..."
Cloaked Man 1: "How were you so sure we were imposters?"
Mysterious Man: "Because..."
(Man begins to take down his hood)
Mysterious Man: "One must first understand genuine before they can understand counterfeit."
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Yukimura: "I knew it.."
Sanada: "To think we had a true lion in our midst..."
Everyone: "TETSUMA?!"
Cloaked Man 1: "..Impossible! You guys were all M.I.A!"
Cloaked Man 2: "Dude we need to run, we don't stand a chance against "Jougen the Herald." This guy is invincible!"
Tetsuma: "Never pretend to be us again, do you understand?"
Cloaked Man 1: "Yes sir!"
(Both of them run away, as Tetsuma looks around at an awestruck crowd)
Tetsuma: "Forgive me for making such a scene."
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I've decided to give Tetsuma a scar going down one of his eyes, and when he is in Pinnacle of Destruction mode, that eye turns red like Aisoku's. I may also make him a little bit sadistic when he is in that mode, kinda like Sanada's signature "Invade like fire" grin. I think this makes Tetsuma a bit more interesting and badass.
Re: Legend Of The Black Lions
If you were gonna keep up the "Everytime Brandnewkid updates his fanfic, I'll update my own!" routine then you really shouldn't have ended the story, lol.
Re: Legend Of The Black Lions
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Brandnewkid
If you were gonna keep up the "Everytime Brandnewkid updates his fanfic, I'll update my own!" routine then you really shouldn't have ended the story, lol.
It's all about you, isn't it? Ironically, you're desperately trying to make me out to be you by playing the hypocrite and accusing me of doing the very things you yourself do. I mean "first time" obviously means "routine," come on guise, that's no logic fail. I must have forgot I was the one who made my thread because of you, updating my posts to compete with your thread, and spamming F5 to raise my views so it looks like my thread is just as successful. But hey, at least I don't have an inferiority complex.
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It's all about you, isn't it? Ironically, you're desperately trying to make me out to be you by playing the hypocrite and accusing me of doing the very things you yourself do. I mean "first time" obviously means "routine," come on guise, that's no logic fail. I must have forgot I was the one who made my thread because of you, updating my posts to compete with your thread, and spamming F5 to raise my views so it looks like my thread is just as successful. But hey, at least I don't have an inferiority complex.
But ... I was just kidding around, and I don't do any of those things that you're accusing me of :/. I've said it before and I'll say it again, I don't care about "views." I just care about my story, lol. I'm too confident enough in the quality of my stuff to be worried about views, lol.
Re: Legend Of The Black Lions
Re: Legend Of The Black Lions
Spoiler: Chapter Special 2: The Offer
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Chapter Special 2
The Offer
(The crowd goes crazy in shouting questions at Tetsuma)
Fuji: "This isn't good..."
Echizen: "We need to draw them away."
Yukimura: "Sanada?"
(Sanada nods)
Sanada: "Echizen, lets go."
(Ryoma follows Sanada on to the court as they both stand in front of Tetsuma, facing the crowd)
Sanada: "HAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"
Echizen: "HAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"
(Auras explode and engulf both Sanada and Echizen)
Sanada/Echizen: "SILENCE!"
(For a moment, as people look at Tetsuma, there is a slight glimmer of Aisoku in the midst of the auras blending together. His eyes red like fire, and his hair white like snow. The crowd becomes silent out of fear)
Everyone: "!!!!"
Momoshiro: "D-did you guys see that?.."
Kikumaru: "Yeah...I saw Aisoku for a second. Scary."
(Both Sanada and Echizen return to normal as they both turn to Tetsuma)
Tetsuma: "I suppose now is the time to answer questions."
Echizen: "Where have you been, Tetsuma?"
Tetsuma: "We are still here. Sometimes in plain sight, sometimes not. I've been keeping watch on all of you as well. We are always on patrol at local tennis courts whenever we are not being called in by the JTA to make evaluations of players. Seda gave the leadership of the Black Lions to me, and then disappeared...even I haven't seen him in a long time. He claims this was all part of his plan."
Sanada: "Plan?"
Tetsuma: "Well for one, it was to get many of you publicized by the match we had, join the ATP world tour, and take his ideals with you. The Black Lions were never supposed to win the match that day, and the only person that knew this was Seda. In doing this, you would have the opportunity to change the system from within and keep it that way."
Inui: "To think he thought this out to this extent...he is scary brilliant."
Renji: "He knew if the Black Lions won the match, the world would feel victimized and it wouldn't be united. Unity was a major part in establishing a foundation for his plan."
Tetsuma: "Now then, time for the big news. Despite your ages, the higher ups were extremely impressed with all of you who played against us last year. They want to offer all of you spots with the pros."
Everyone: "!!!"
Tetsuma: "The Black Lions are already in the league and leading it."
Atobe: "What is your rank?"
(Everyone turns to see Atobe come out of nowhere, as Tetsuma sees him)
Yukimura: "..."
Tetsuma: "I'm currently number 1 in the world, and undefeated in offical matches."
Everyone: "?!?!"
Atobe: "Well then, I suppose it's time we give you some competition."