Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions
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-Ken-
Please explain. Shiraishi is stronger than 5th counter Fuji. He also embarass Fuji either the same way or a lot worse than Tachibana did. I don't see how a player on that level got stated to "definitely" be not on same level. I'm debating score should be 2-2. But if you want to suggest another way entirely, please show utterly dominating proof of Tachibana supperiority to back it up.
Otherwise, it's debatable. And I think debatable certainly doesn't mean definitely.
I think Tachibana might beat Shiraishi 6-4 or something like that. Far from 2-0 right now.
Explain why Nationals Shiraishi is better than Nationals Tachibana? I don't have to explain anything; it's a given in the PoT story. Shitenhoji as a whole was created to have a team from Kansai dominate a Tokyo team, and that team was Fudomine. Konomi said this in an interview. It's a given that during the Nationals Shitenhoji was a naturally better school than Fudomine because Konomi purposely made them with that intention.
Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions
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Brandnewkid
Explain why Nationals Shiraishi is better than Nationals Tachibana? I don't have to explain anything; it's a given in the PoT story. Shitenhoji as a whole was created to have a team from Kansai dominate a Tokyo team, and that team was Fudomine. Konomi said this in an interview. It's a given that during the Nationals Shitenhoji was a naturally better school than Fudomine because Konomi purposely made them with that intention.
And this show that Tachibana was better than Shiraishi how? I don't understand this at all. Which school is better doesn't mean a thing. It's player on their own level. What I'm seeing here is
Shitenhouji is better school than Fudomine, but Tachibana as a player is better than Shiraishi. Or Shitenhouji is better school than Fudomine, but Shiraishi as a player is better than Tachibana? Which one do you even mean? I'm replying to Fayte story that Shiraishi with golden on get Tachibana take lead by 2-0, and Shiraishi stated I got no chance with golden on, and I disagree with that. What's your point? Exactly?
Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions
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-Ken-
And this show that Tachibana was better than Shiraishi how? I don't understand this at all. Which school is better doesn't mean a thing. It's player on their own level. What I'm seeing here is
Shitenhouji is better school than Fudomine, but Tachibana as a player is better than Shiraishi. Or Shitenhouji is better school than Fudomine, but Shiraishi as a player is better than Tachibana? Which one do you even mean? I'm replying to Fayte story that Shiraishi with golden on get Tachibana take lead by 2-0, and Shiraishi stated I got no chance with golden on, and I disagree with that. What's your point? Exactly?
. . . . Nevermind. Lets just shut up and read the fanfiction.
Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions
If it helps some, I will give my reasoning for why I did it. It's quite simple:
1) They are both team captains, therefore they need to be taken seriously regardless of the amount of screen time.
2) They both dominated the same Fuji
3) Tachibana is known for his fierce strength, Shiraishi is not.
4) They both are on par with Chitose.
In my estimation, they were virtually equal. Some people try to say because Tachibana put a hole in Fuji's racquet, and Shiraishi knocked the racquet out of Fuji's hand, that means Shiraishi is better. I would disagree, because that's quite a stretch to say. It didn't matter if Higuma Otoshi landed or not, the point was Tachibana wrecked Fuji. That was the entire purpose for showing the match to begin with, so that Fuji could grow. I do believe in terms of physical strength, Tachibana has Shiraishi beat for sure. That's why I gave him the edge.
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And what are you going to do with Yukimura? How can Irie make a comeback if his senses are stolen, wouldn't be better that he goes all out? Troll mode won't work on Yuki.
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LetalHawk
And what are you going to do with Yukimura? How can Irie make a comeback if his senses are stolen, wouldn't be better that he goes all out? Troll mode won't work on Yuki.
Did you read chapter 3?
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Fayte
Did you read chapter 3?
Yes, that means Irie's senses never went away and he was trolling?
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LetalHawk
Yes, that means Irie's senses never went away and he was trolling?
Yes, his senses were never taken.
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Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions
When will you post chapter 4?
Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions
Spoiler: Chapter 4: "Beyond the Door (2/2)"
showBeyond The Door (2/2)
Chapter 4
Flashback
(It is the setting of the warehouse in chapter 1, and Ryoga leaves as Aisoku’s eyes turn red)
Tetsuma: “What do you see, Seda?”
Aisoku: “Ryoga was pretending.”
Black Lion 1: “I told you not to trust that guy. He just looks like bad news.”
Tetsuma: “He was pretending how?”
Aisoku: “Ryoga went out from us because he was not of us. Had he been of us, he would have remained with us. His reverence for me was just an act, so he could remain with us to get the information he wanted. He had an agenda from the beginning.”
Black Lion 2: “So now what?”
(The hooded men wait for Aisoku’s orders)
Aisoku: “We go to Germany.”
Black Lion 3: “I’ve always wanted to see Germany.”
Aisoku: “Tetsuma, I’d like to see you privately.”
(Aisoku and Tetsuma have a 1 on 1 conversation)
Aisoku: “I have a question for you, Tetsuma. What is the final door of muga?”
Tetsuma: “Is this a trick question? You told me there are two doors. The Pinnacle of Perfection, and the Pinnacle of Destruction. . .”
Aisoku: “What if I told you those were merely the prerequisites of an ultimate final door?”
Tetsuma: “!!”
Germany
(Tezuka and Tetsuma are clashing, and the score is tied at 4-4)
Tetsuma: “Tezuka, if you can’t defeat me, then you have no chance.”
Tezuka: “. . . “
(Tezuka smashes the ball)
Tetsuma: “You see, you and I have achieved a state that not many people have. However, there is a final door beyond what we have accomplished, called the Pinnacle of Glorification. There is only one man in the world that has ever found it, let alone walked through it.
(Tetsuma smashes the ball back and rally continues)
Tezuka: “Echizen Nanjiroh?”
(Tetsuma smirks)
Tetsuma: “No, Nanjiroh gave up when he reached the Pinnacle of Perfection. “
Tezuka: So who is it?
(Tetsuma hits a forehand dropshot aiming to the right as Tezuka runs to where the ball will land. All of a sudden as the ball is on his racquet, he is able to slice instead and change directions and gets the point)
5-4
Tetsuma: “Our leader.”
Japan
Shiraishi vs Tachibana (5-5)
(Shiraishi and Tachibana continue to rally, as Shiraishi lifts his racquet straight up in the air)
Shiraishi: “Round Table Shot!”
(Shiraishi smashes the ball to Tachibana)
Tachibana: [[ I need to get this before it hits the ground ]]
(Tachibana runs and jumps in the air in his Abare Dama stance)
Shiraishi: “!!”
Tachibana: “Lions Roar!”
(Tachibana smashes the ball with the frame of his racquet. Double the normal amount of (abare dama) balls appears, flying towards Shiraishi in the likeness of a lion’s head opening his mouth. Shiraishi becomes struck with fear by the intimidating attack and cannot move)
30-15
Fuji vs Atobe (3-5)
Atobe: “I can see your every move!”
(Fuji smacks the ball but Atobe does a return ace)
15-0
Atobe: “Be awed by my prowess!”
(Fuji breathes in and out heavily)
Fuji: “No. . . I’m not done yet. . .”
Atobe: “Yes you are!”
(Atobe smashes it and gets a point)
30-0
Fuji: “. . .”
Sanada vs Oni (6-5)
Sanada: “Burn black, like hellfire!”
([BA]Sanada spins and ground-smashes the ball, as the shot turns black)
Oni: “No, I refuse!”
(Oni connects with the ball with his frame but struggles with the power of it)
Oni: “Take this! BLACK TOMAHAWK!”
(Oni returns with his strongest shot)
Oni: “You’ll never return that shot, boy.”
(Sanada then teleports and appears to be in the air, falling downward in the Rai position)
Oni: “!!”
Sanada: “DARK LIGHTNING!”
(Sanada does a downward slash as he reaches the ground, and releases a massive black lightning bolt directly at Oni)
Oni: “!!!”
(The ball knocks the racquet out of Oni’s hand and cracks the frame)
Oni: “To think a shot would be so powerful as to knock the racquet from my grip. . .It was an honor to play you, Sanada Genichirou.”
Sanada: “Same to you.”
7-5 (Sanada wins)
Echizen vs Kazuya (6-5)
Kazuya: “I never knew this was inside of you.”
(Screen shows an Echizen in Pinnacle of Perfection)
Echizen: “I’m enjoying this.”
(Echizen serves full force)
Kazuya: “Fast!”
(Kazuya jumps back and returns it)
Echizen: “Heh. . .”
(Echizen jumps up and smashes all the balls except two)
Echizen: “Samurai Drive!”
(The two balls spin against the net cord and get cut in half, as 4 extra pieces fly towards Kazuya)
Kazuya: “Haaaaaaah!”
(Kazuya struggles but manages to hit all of them back)
Yukimura vs Irie (5-5)
(A serious Irie smashes and gets a point)
30-0
Irie: “What now, Yukimura?”
(Yukimura is out of breath)
Yukimura: “Impossible. . .”
Irie: “Your tricks are just mind games. Unfortunately, you are playing against someone who understands the human mind better than most. My mental control is too high to be effected by your ability.”
Yukimura: “I see…well then.”
(Yukimura’s face changes)
Yukimura: “I’ll just have to win without it.”
Kirihara vs Kintarou (3-5)
0-40
(Kintarou smashes the ball)
Kintarou: “This is it! I won!“
Kirihara: “I will not let this happen again…HAAAAAAAAAAAAA”
(Kirihara yells as black and purple aura suddenly explodes around him, as he smashes the ball and hits Kintarou’s head and Kintarou falls to the ground)
15-40
Kirihara: “HYA HYA HYA!!!”
Kintarou: “. . .”
Chitose vs Krauser (5-3)
Chitose: “This is the 38th shot.”
(Chitose swings and gets the point)
30-0
Krauser: “Your gravestone is now complete.”
(Chitose looks behind him and sees the cross shape)
Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions
Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions
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Fayte
Also, you've seemed to write off my story already like you know what's going to happen or has happened. There are a lot of things I PURPOSELY misled the reader to believe. That is a writing technique that some people don't understand, which is why I've been able to predict more correct things about PoT than anybody on this forum.
Im trusting you on the misleading the reader part Fayte so this fanfic is still good. (For some things you better be misleading us lol)
But I beg to differ on this note. Unless you specifically mean PoT and not SPoT as I will take it back immediately if you did.
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Unless you specifically mean PoT and not SPoT as I will take it back immediately if you did.
Yes I mean PoT because I was hardly active on this site when SPoT came out.
Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions
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Fayte
Yes I mean PoT because I was hardly active on this site when SPoT came out.
Anyways, Im reading this and I dont even like fan-fics. In other words dont waste time on ppl dissing it until youve done. Not worth effort dealing with full criticisms on an unfinished series.
