REMAKE- [New Manga] Shapiro: Chapter 1 & 2 {Thought Wanted}

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---------- Post added at 10:44 PM ---------- Previous post was at 10:41 PM ----------

I would Really enjoy some feed back, Dispate the blurry one's from what you did get from it what do you think? Should i continues with this these draft pages or just start anew. I have had these same characters in many different Manga novels with all different goals so i decided to bring them all together in this one novel and just let there goals grow within it.