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Goodluck with your story bro hope you dont destroy to many characters in the process while boldly claiming to follow the heart of Konomi. Your understanding about shounen character creation is...

-Hence the "If Kintarou is too loose" emphasis on the word if, and to be honest you have given us the feeling that Kirihara will win as you clearly seem to be fanboying

- I don't belive that...

You seem to choose to fail to address some issues,

ill Simplify,

-Konomi would not change Ryogas personality to such a degree and then suddenly back again he is not bipolar to our knowledge. I...

Well if this is the case you may want to rework Ryoga's speech in chapter one. I'm sure most would agree that his characters traits when created were that of a narcissistic lone ranger outlaw that...

Fayte, Kintarou will never loose to Kirihara on the basis that he is Ryoma's rival, making him loose to anyone other than people close to or better than Ryoma's skill level would inturn make Ryoma...

I dont belive renji was at a greater level than kintarou at the time kirihara lost to him. while this match was going on kintarou was taking points against a full string oni and we all know oni's...

Registered just to say I think this is going great :)

Kintarou 3-3 with Kirihara is a bit unbelievable though, lets see how it ends but i could never picture Kirhara playing evenly with kintarou...