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    Chapter Fifty : Rising Sun

    Chapter Fifty: Rising Sun



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    omg such an amazing chapter! I love, love it!

    You wrote the characters perfectly! The character development was good and I could imagine the interaction in my head. I always envision Amiti as a meek, shy boy so bravo! Are you shipping Amiti/Rinvak or Amiti/Eny? He's 16 btw.

    And when I was reading this, I couldn't help but think of the song "Boston" which suits this chapter very well. The lyrics (in particular "I'm think I'm going to Boston; I think I'll start a new life") was stuck in my head. I'm guessing that the artifact that provides HQ protection was brought to Boston as well bc if it wasn't, my chapter is.... screwed. lol

    Bravo for your first chapter!

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    ^
    I was indeed going for Rinvak/Amiti. ^///^ Thanks for the good reveiw, and yeah, the HQ protection thing is with them, I forgot to edit that in. ^^;;; Whoops.

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    Quote Originally Posted by rosalefay View Post
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    I was indeed going for Rinvak/Amiti. ^///^ Thanks for the good reveiw, and yeah, the HQ protection thing is with them, I forgot to edit that in. ^^;;; Whoops.
    You have no idea how you are leading right into my next chapter idea. That makes me very happy... and kinda freaks me out. Stop reading my mind! jk jk

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    Re: Chapter Fifty : Rising Sun

    wad manga is this?
    Ninja Tactics

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    good chapter very good indeed
    and Boston! my favorite Town in north amrica!

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    Quote Originally Posted by neji1988 View Post
    wad manga is this?
    This is an alternate story line for D.Gray-Man, an rp for us fans. =3 It's not a real manga

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    Woo! Yay Boston =D I gets to write peoples with Boston acents!!! XD
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    Icon art by Tune. You rule! X3

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    Re: Chapter Fifty : Rising Sun

    I can't wait for my turn now. rosa can I say I love your writing without sounded perverted? If so I do omg.

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    Is this turning from a shounen story to a harem story?

    God kill me now if it is.... XD XD XD XD

    why can't ppl leave the damn emo playboy alone?
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    b(^^) good chappie!!! desu la~~~~

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    ummmmmm... how is it becoming a harem story? it's not like one guy is picking up all these chicks and the girls aren't fighting each other for his attention.

    are you talking about zeran? the characters are worried about him which is understandable because people do worry about their friend even if they made a wrong choice.

    besides, there's nothing wrong with a little romance; after all, there is a couples thread

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    really I thought the couples thread was about manga couples

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    I was talking about this... lol

    i should have been clearer; my bad

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    lol ok then it's funny thats for sure

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    Quote Originally Posted by snoogen0120 View Post
    ummmmmm... how is it becoming a harem story? it's not like one guy is picking up all these chicks and the girls aren't fighting each other for his attention.

    are you talking about zeran? the characters are worried about him which is understandable because people do worry about their friend even if they made a wrong choice.

    besides, there's nothing wrong with a little romance; after all, there is a couples thread
    heard about Kanon?

    Yuuichi wasn't trying to pick up girls either but 5 girls already like him it's still considered harem even tho the guy's not trying...

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    Quote Originally Posted by AthrunZala222 View Post
    heard about Kanon?

    Yuuichi wasn't trying to pick up girls either but 5 girls already like him it's still considered harem even tho the guy's not trying...
    but i don't think the girls in the story view zeran that way. they view him as a friend or a comrade not romantically.

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