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    Chapter Sixty: Treachery Has a Kind Face

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    Chapter Sixty: Treachery Has a Kind Face

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    Re: Chapter Sixty: Treachery Has a Kind Face

    Shit!!!
    Gomen, but don't worry, this was meant in a positive way....
    I will read this all now. Yosh!

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    Re: Chapter Sixty: Treachery Has a Kind Face

    i warned you that this was long (i wrote it the last week of april)

    shot! i forget to put one of the options: "i'm still reading it..." lol

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    Re: Chapter Sixty: Treachery Has a Kind Face

    I can say you that it takes me more than half an hour to read through all this, maybe an hour. English is not my mother tongue so it will take it's time :P.


    But I am glad that it's so long.
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    Re: Chapter Sixty: Treachery Has a Kind Face

    oh sorry; i forgot to include more options but it's too late to change the poll


    take your time too! that's why i broke it into mini arcs so you can remember where you left off ^^
    Last edited by rhapsody blue; May 22, 2007 at 02:33 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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    Re: Chapter Sixty: Treachery Has a Kind Face



    what a huge chapter, I liked it and that's a compliment: because I goddamned hate reading but anyways nice work

    and to end
    Discover the fantastic world of Toriko
    Parental advisory: do not eat while you read!!!

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    Re: Chapter Sixty: Treachery Has a Kind Face

    whoa you actually finished reading it?!?! you're the first

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    Re: Chapter Sixty: Treachery Has a Kind Face

    OMG, I was so so........enchained by your super long, amazing, wonderful, funny, sad, romantic, fighting, creepy chapter. OMG, never read such a chapter before. I worship you <3.
    Everything makes sense, the import of known facts and their connection was awesome. It was so detailed that I saw an anime or a movie proceeding in front of my mind's eye.

    Yay for Jaques and Lione fight. I am also looking forward to every fight, especially Amaterasu's since he has not got the chance till now. indded, it took me 1 hour and 15 minutes to read it. I know slow but it can't be helped. my, this was exciting.

    But the most impressive was, that we really seem to share the same thoughts. It's no joke when I say that I thought Amiti were a traitor and I dreamt of a scene when Magier, Jaques and I.A. attack the HQ. Even the scene with the back door and Amaterasu conformed my thoughts. Hell, this is fucking great.
    LOVE LOVE LOVE

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    Re: Chapter Sixty: Treachery Has a Kind Face

    i'm glad that you liked it; i read my chapter a lot so i know that it takes a while to read it too

    did i make jacques and lione bad@$$ enough? I hope so

    now the big question is: what is going to be the outcome of this event? ^^

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    Re: Chapter Sixty: Treachery Has a Kind Face

    Wonderful chappie =D Loved the first omake especially~! ((In my head through, their argument desinagrates into a slap fight XD))


    err........ Rinvak's uniform has pants, but thats not really visible on the one pic I drew. ((Is she even in it right now? She was dragged right out of bed right?))

    Woo!!!! Hope there's some action left for me in 66 ((yeah right XD)) Cleanup/General Angsting is harder to write for me D:
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    Re: Chapter Sixty: Treachery Has a Kind Face

    just finished (about half an hour)
    well I need to think a lot before writing the next chapter
    I still don't know which fight I'll write since I'd love to write about my guardians but well, jaques is my main chara.

    anyway.... I love your wrirtng style snoogen and you made jaques bad enough

    btw. how doe Tabithas goddes song exactly work?
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    Re: Chapter Sixty: Treachery Has a Kind Face

    Quote Originally Posted by Djmewmew View Post
    err........ Rinvak's uniform has pants, but thats not really visible on the one pic I drew. ((Is she even in it right now? She was dragged right out of bed right?))
    yeah, i knew that she had pants underneath but i think it's human nature to cover that area XD

    i'm sure that you'll have plenty to write since your fight only deals with i.a., eny, and you.


    Quote Originally Posted by Raijatsu View Post
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    btw. how doe Tabithas goddes song exactly work?
    sorry! i didn't notice that you posted before me

    ummm... i assume that her spirit deity comes to her aid when she summons it but i would ask her. i kinda guessed
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    Re: Chapter Sixty: Treachery Has a Kind Face

    well then she should do it in chapter 66 it's her chara

    I'll stay with my characters ^^
    more gabby sharpshooting ;D volume 4 will be full of action I guess

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    but it shall be fun reading and writing!

    can't wait to read the jacques/lione fight

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    Re: Chapter Sixty: Treachery Has a Kind Face

    Ah yush. Goddess song, keep forgetting to post more info on it. Too busy procrastinating, reading fanfiction XD hehe? Steph, your use actually turned out to be on the money, as she's got a wind spirit that I imagine would be useful for just that reason.

    So here goes nothing. Prepare for a veeeerrrryyyy long rant. I've been thinknig this out for a bit, which is another reason I haven't posted much on it......I'm still fussing with details (not that I need too, but becuase I can =D) It's also a bit discombobulated, as I'm typing as I remember all my little details

    Goddess song summons up an elemental spirit; Wind, Earth, Water, Fire and Spirit/Energy/Life, listed in order of summoning diffculty. They are summoned by speaking/singing ((speaking the incantation is quicker, but less powerful)) to the element in using its 'true' name. Ever hear the concept of people having 'true' names, and if you knew that name, you'd have power over that person? Like that. Speaking just the name summons the most underpowered least draining version of the spirit, like when Tabby jumps off the train, just enough energy for the wind spirit to cushion her fall. For the longer, more powerful summonings, the incantation is a bit more like the magical language in the Eragon series, but if you haven't read it, I'll just say its the true language of things, impossible to lie in. Always liked the author's concpet of magic, but I'm getting off topic. Tabby only knows these incantations as she's saying them, as the Innocence is feeding them directly to her brain. Its also impossile for others to duplicate, as their are nuances in tones unaudible for earthly ears to hear ((I say that 'cause even animals wouldn't be able to hear the exact depth of the sound)) Tabby can hear these though, as long as she's got Goddess Song activated.

    There are 3 degrees of power she can summon in.
    1) Just the sprirt's name - the spirit appears small and chibi like, small/limited effects, Tabby can still use orginal move set.
    2) Sentence/Scale - Only a couple of couple of words to 2-3 sentences. Spoken is quicker but less powerful. Spirit is about 3 heads tall. Tabby's most used form, as she can attack with both her orginal move set (though the attacks would be more draining than if she doesn't have Goddess Song activated) and the sprirts basic moves. Can't use any of their special attacks though.
    3) Story/Song - For lack of a better title for the spoken version, its called Story, but its not storybook length. This was the degree used when I introduced Goddess Song, and requires a lenghty incantation. She is extremely vulnerable during the first couple of sentences, but as the engery builds, it does form a kind of barrier. She's still vulnerable to powerful attacks, but at that point, you wouldn't be able to rush up and stab her or something. The summoned spirit is from about Tabby's height, to twice her height, depending on how much energy was used Bigger is more powerful, but Tabby could currently hold the largest size for mere seconds. She can't use her orginal move set at this size, and has her movement restricted slightly

    The summoned spirit drains a certain amount of energy per second, depending on its size.

    Other than the fact she's talking directly to the essence of the element, the spirit is held in place by Innocence. The whole purpose of the incantation is to infuse particles of the element (summonded up by speaking to it) with Innocence, giving it shape and form. I did say Tabby's voice was her Innocence, its just manifests itself on her throat. Thats why when using degree 3, she can't use her orginal move set. Most of the innocence isn't in her at the moment, its all in the spirit ((It goes back to her when the spirit dismissed though)) That also means the spirits can be broken down by Noah, but since the Innocence left with Tabby ((The cross on her neck)) serves as the anchoring point, the lost Innocence can be rebuilt, but it takes a lot of energy. Since its also not 100% innocence, (the innocence is just bonding particles of the element together) it might actually be harder to break down for everyone excpet Jacques and I.A, whose ablities can break down the part of the spirit made up of the element.

    When Tabby performs second opening, the ribbon that normally floats around her neck snaps in the middle, and each side spreads down one of her arms. The ribbon runs down the length of her arm to the middle of the back of her hand, with ribbon running from that line straight out, wrapping around her arms, forming a series of bands. Almost makes it look like she's wearing striped sleeves. At the the place where it ends it gives off green energy/light like Lenalee's boots used to.


    Blah. Not done, I have to go do my homework, and my comp is demanding that I let it restart itself. I'll post the last part, the indivual spirit's ablities, later tonight =D Hope you all like how I've fleshed this out <D
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