Last edited by Raijatsu; October 06, 2007 at 12:33 PM.
woot, woot! first post
amazing chapter! the shocking ends of both fermium and our favorite bitch gabrielle made this chapter so awesome since they were unexpected and well kick@$$. and the individual part's title were awesome especially with the bible reference ^^
the continuations of each battle went nicely with flames's recalling his torture indirectly, amaterasu's taking out his anger on the wrong person and thus proving his childishness, amiti's cockiness over his decision, and gabrielle's ultimate defeat by her student. it was nice to see a somewhat human side of gabrielle; i'll miss writing her.
so will jacques take over the fight now?
if jacques is fighting next depends on the nxt writer. I'd like to see how he takes out Belle and her Helios/innocence
I'd really liked writing Gabbies end because it was unexpectd even for me. Somehow after re-reading it I thought *oh you just killed her* it seemed to have written itself.
Last edited by Raijatsu; October 06, 2007 at 12:56 PM.
Amazing chapter and you can't imagine how I love your titles... they're wonderful, Rai. How creative.
It's a pity that Gabrielle died. it was so much fun seeing her fighting with Magier. But I guess it's the best when some characters can finally find their end. Otherwise our story would burst under the amount of charas XD. But Gabrielle and Fermium won't be the last people who died there.
I like the way you wrote this chapter. It was slightly different from your other chapters although I cannot exactly tell where the differences are. All I can say is that I really enjoyed this chapter and can just hope that the two or three writers in front of me won't write about the exorcists escaping from the camp so soon because I have a gorgeous idea for the end of this arc.
And whoa...I can't wait for THAT ENDING SPOILER-THINGY
well hope you have to wait a long time for it because this will be my last chapter ^^
Oh then...of course...I hope that it will appear in Volume 2X-I-dunno-what.
At least quite late. Because I really cannot think of an ending of our story XDDD
I'll hope we'll write longer than the manga is drawn. mayb even with more chapters ^^
I'd really like to know how the manga ends before writin my last chapter so I can later make an epiloge of a peaceful world. It would be a shame if we write all ends well in hoshino writes everybody dies XXD
I think so, too. Let's end Hoshino-sensei's manga first (what will last a long, long, long, long [...] long time before it ends, please).