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    Registered User 初心者/ Shoshinsha / Beginner ahfei's Avatar
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    ZeroFly

    I'm currently making a manga but only have 7 pages so far. Its a One Piece style manga called "ZeroFly". My plan is 300+ chapters. I will post it when I fininshed 4 chapters, for a reason(spoiler).

    I even wrote a theme song for it called "Let It Fly".

    Here's the 7 pages without any captions.















    Any comments are more than welcomed. Now I really need a scanner cause i dont have one. Feel free to donate though. hehe. PM me.

    Sorry if the sizes are too big.
    Last edited by ahfei; October 28, 2007 at 11:19 AM.
    "I only said I can cook; I never say my cooking is edible"

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    Re: My Own Manga Series - ZeroFly

    I like it. A couple of things bother me though. The people look kinda stiff and a lot of them are leaning to the left when they should just be standing up straight.

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    Re: My Own Manga Series - ZeroFly

    Fairly good concept,i like how you screen tone and how you shade ,but the art needs work.

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    Grin Re: My Own Manga Series - ZeroFly

    I like your artwork, its so cute. Keep it up.


    You truly deserve the title of Yondaime Hokage

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    Re: My Own Manga Series - ZeroFly

    keep up with it.i'm been doing my own mangas too and you have to go back and change things till there just right. keep up the good work.

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    Re: My Own Manga Series - ZeroFly

    It's interesting i like the idea

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