Chapter 90 - Fate comes soft-footed and deadly
Last edited by Schwindelmagier; November 06, 2007 at 10:26 AM.
Nice conclusion to the battles! I love how you incorporated Zane and co. into the battle scenes without making it dues ex machina.
Magier's death was so depressing! Poor Jacques - who is going to keep him company at night?
So Anlen decided to let Lione go; that is so sweet of her. I wonder what the consequence will be due to her actions and how it will affect the exorcists and the Earl's plans.
Overall, great job!
Last edited by rhapsody blue; November 05, 2007 at 10:55 PM.
so many people died.... so depressing but
yet so wonderful
Thanks a lot *bows*
I am glad you like it though I rushed a little and made some mistakes, spelling, grammar...I even wrote "Finders" instead of "Bookmen" ...hell >_<
Will look through it and kill those mistakes now, hehe.
Oh, I liked this one a lot, great job! Magier's death was so sad... And Gabby and Zeran, too. Gah! T____T Bravo.