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    Critiques for my drawing

    Hi all, i recently got into drawing using paint tool SAI and im having loads of fun, but i would like to know if im heading in the right direction skill wise. Ive noticed an improvement myself but i'd like to hear an outside voice. Thanks, and i appreciate your honesty in advance.



    Attached is one of my newer works, you can check out more of the at my deviant art page here:
    http://johnajodah.deviantart.com/

    Thanks again!

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    Re: Critiques for my drawing

    I think it's a big improvement over your other work and you can definitely find yourself as an artist in Sai. If you want advice on how to evolve from here, i would recommend trying less simplistic styles (eyes that look more detailed than a curved line and a circle, for instance) and trying to portray your characters in more three dimensional poses. I can see you're already doing that, but you can do even better.

    This is pretty good work, though, so keep it up and keep improving!

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    Re: Critiques for my drawing

    thanks for the advice, you are totally right, i appreciate your honesty

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    Re: Critiques for my drawing

    Its pretty nice. Though... the nose and mouth needs some work. Maybe a little realignment will do. Ganbatte!

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    Re: Critiques for my drawing

    yeah i realized that after i uploaded it too haha. in the stuff im working on now, i always make sure its aligned

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    Re: Critiques for my drawing

    the hair, try to add some darker shades in some point and add some hair strand to make it better.
    and the background - hair color is too similar. try to add some contrast in the bg. or pattern could work too.
    try using water,blur & oil water tool in SAI,its good for blending the shirt.

    how many layers did you draw this?

    i hope this helps,im looking forward to your next artwork! keep it up! keep improving!

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