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    One Piece Ryoshi

    Hey everyone.I'm an amateur manga artist and I would like to show you my manga named Ryoshi.It's a on-going manga so I'll keep working on it.I would like to know what you guys like about it,what you don't like about it and so on.
    Before I go on and post the pages I would like to say that this is a shonen,action,fantasy manga.I'm telling you this because most people who see this tend to overlook that and start giving advices that are not consistent with this genre of manga.For example,some would say "there isn't enough romance" others would say "the art isn't good because it's not like that" then they show me some shoujo manga whit tones of screentones and a lot of pretty looking characters.There's nothing wrong whit shoujo mangas but you can't mix it up with shonen style and people should know that when attempting to give an advice or criticizing.
    So now that that's out of the way I'm going to post my amateur manga for all of you to see.











































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    Re: Ryoshi

    Oh, good to see a dA artist here^^ and hey, that's good stuff!
    Some pages got some 'black' part fixed, but not others. I guess you're still finishing the material^^ The story is funny and pretty insteresting, I'm curious about the ryoshis now. A shame it ended suddenly xDD Hope we'll be seeing the rest soon^^ Great job!

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    Re: Ryoshi

    Yes I'm coming up with more interesting plot twists and cool stuff in the upcoming pages.

    Spoiler: Tarabostes,the big army looking guy...he's not a Ryoshi,he is "something" completely different.

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    But then, Taratoles is also special somehow, right??
    I'm looking forward to see the rest!

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    You mean "Tarabostes"?
    Oh,indeed he is.The fact that he's 3 times bigger then a normal human being ,says a lot.

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    Re: Ryoshi

    Yeah, irk, sorry about writing his name wrong.
    And now that you mentioned, you do have a point, lol.

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    Yes,his origins lay in the bible.
    The holy book says dictates that at some point,angels came down from heaven and mate with the humans,thus a new breed of giants was created.
    They were called Nephilim.

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    Re: Ryoshi

    I like what i'm seeing here. interesting stuff. Can you link me to you dA account. i'm writing my own manga so I love to see other people's artwork and read how you portray your own artwork. I'm going to keep an eye on this one. seems really interesting work.
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    Re: Ryoshi

    oh amazing man you should really keep at it and never give up but dont forget the most important thing is that the arcs have to be very good and interesting and try creating new stories cuz maybe you can create something as good as dragon ball or one piece but overall its great well done.

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