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    Could someone criticize that cleanning?

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    Last edited by Ana Clara; February 15, 2014 at 09:13 AM. Reason: I replaced the image

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    Re: Could someone criticize that cleanning?

    The redraws look very good. There are some mistakes, but you can only see them with the raw next to the clean.

    There is, however, still a lot of dirt and noise on the page. Watch this video and you'll be able to easily check your pages for leftover dirt/noise: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jwT0-W0YO4A
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    Re: Could someone criticize that cleanning?

    Thanks for the help.
    Could you make a suggestion about how to fix this mistake?
    I tried to make this piece of the suit jacket seems like cloth, but I couldn't.
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    Last edited by Ana Clara; February 15, 2014 at 08:34 AM.

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    Re: Could someone criticize that cleanning?

    You mean something like this?
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    You add an empty layer, you outline the missing part with Pen Tool, you stroke it with white brush (1px tip), then you use soft eraser to slightly erase half (or so) of the line's width. And voila~
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    Re: Could someone criticize that cleanning?

    Quote Originally Posted by Gradonil_Ral View Post
    You mean something like this?
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    You add an empty layer, you outline the missing part with Pen Tool, you stroke it with white brush (1px tip), then you use soft eraser to slightly erase half (or so) of the line's width. And voila~
    No, actually I meant the part on the bottom of the books. It seems cubistic.
    Last edited by Ana Clara; February 15, 2014 at 09:57 AM.

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    Re: Could someone criticize that cleanning?

    Oh, that.

    1. The leg should be slightly wider.
    2. There should be more books filling the white space.
    3. The jacket should partially cover said books - it shouldn't go under any of them (like it does now).
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    Re: Could someone criticize that cleanning?

    Also, little finger seems to be missing a joint. Otherwise, really good redraw.

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    Re: Could someone criticize that cleanning?

    Quote Originally Posted by greenskin View Post
    Also, little finger seems to be missing a joint. Otherwise, really good redraw.
    Doesn't really matter since she's covered it with text - http://mangahelpers.com/forum/showth...=1#post3707529
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    Re: Could someone criticize that cleanning?

    I followed the 3 hints, but I still have problems with the jacket.
    But, here is what i've done until now:
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    ---------- Post added at 05:27 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:22 PM ----------

    Quote Originally Posted by greenskin View Post
    Also, little finger seems to be missing a joint. Otherwise, really good redraw.
    Thanks to your comment, I could see how weird the fingers are. I'll try to fix them too.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gradonil_Ral View Post
    Doesn't really matter since she's covered it with text - http://mangahelpers.com/forum/showth...=1#post3707529
    I intend to use both pages, the covered one and the cleaned one. That's why I'm worried about the last one.

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    The jacket's edge isn't good enough yet, but it's getting better. The same goes for the fingers.
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    Last edited by Ana Clara; February 15, 2014 at 03:54 PM.

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    Re: Could someone criticize that cleanning?

    Quote Originally Posted by Ana Clara View Post
    Thanks to your comment, I could see how weird the fingers are. I'll try to fix them too.
    you don't have to redraw stuff, which is already their.
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    about your jacket
    go with something simple.
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    or with Gradonil_Ral's version
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