Kisei

[LaughingMan]

Hello everyone, I'm new to the site. This is my second story creation that I'd like some criticism on. By following the link below you will find the first two chapters, out of the five that I've completed, [and yes there's a long way to go until completion.]

http://lethal-boss.livejournal.com [You'll have to start reading from the bottom up because of the way livejournal is set up ]

I also have a deviantart page [http://iboss.deviantart.com] which I will be using to upload the character's designs, because I have intentions of making this into a manga. If you're an artist [that believes he can draw at my level, swiftly and in a lot of positions and] who is interested in this story or some cool producer guy, you could PM on this website because I would be very interested in beginning a full fledged manga. Thanks for your time and enjoy [I hope...]