Aokiji & Luffy

[Trafalgar Law]

Ok, so this would be my.. third(?) coloring, well anyways it was more
job than usual and I got tired towards the end but here it is, please
comment:

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k2...ind/aokiji.jpg

Edit:

[Organizized]

Perhaps it's because it's a bit of an "unclear" panel to color (lots of lines, thin lines), but my first impression is that it's somewhat messy. There's a bit of colors outside the lines and you still have the yellow-ish skin going on (I said green in earlier threads, don't know why) for Aokiji, but it might just be me who has a problem with that.. Nevertheless, it's absolutely okay. Keep spending time on the colorings like with this one and keep practicing.

[Trafalgar Law]

Actually its very messy.. didn't realize it, but I should have looked at it. I have even forgotten to color parts of the picture. When I erased all black dirt and shit I didn't want I forgot to erase the color that hid behind it. >.< Well I got lazy, but to my defense - it's a huge frame and it only took about 50mins.

Edit: I decided to make some small changes, so here it is: