My manga storyline

[MadWalker]

i got make some storyline and it from my researches
and idea and theory
so i making a manga of my ideal story

i not good in making a story board but i make a manga script(dun seen like it =x)

anyway
i post a short first chapter here
some of my friends find it interesting but i working hard on the
name myself first...
and i do have to consider character too(i working on that too)

i do like some comments for my story
i can allow you to read it but not copy/edit it and use as your own...

happy reading
(but do pardon my english =P)

<title>Dragon Tail
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There was once the legend of the Constellations, those mysterious beast was powerful and many worship them as god. However, there are evil cult wanted to control those beast and used them to take over the world. They was yet defeated by the user of the constellations who can use not only the mysterious beast but also the nature itself.

Time past fast and many started to forget the nature itself,
and so the God was forgotten, and the user of the constellations was seperated....

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?(girl): 'pant' 'pant' ...*weak voice* "What happened here?"

The warehouse was full of gangers who were injured and blood was almost everywhere, in the centre of the injured was a young boy. He was injured too and blood covered his body.

?(girl): *weak and scared voice* "what happened..."

The boy then turn his face and look at the girl directly. His face was covered partially with blood, but one thing that made the girl scared was his eyes, they were no normal eye... They were the eyes.. of the Legendary Dragon of the Constellation.

?(girl): *weak voice* ... "No... NO!!!"

(Suzaku) woke up suddenly and realised that it was just a dream; a dream of the memory she can't forgot, a long-lost friend.
As she wipe off her sweat with her pyjama, she realised it was time for her to wake up, it was the start of a new term, a new school and she will get to know more new friends.

Suzaku's Mother open the door and saw her pale face.
"Are you fine? You look pale."

Suzaku: "I fine, just a nightmare."

Suzaku's Mother: "Well, breakfast is ready, quickly go and get change. You don't want to miss your first day in school"

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Granny: "Can you help put that here,thank you."

As the movers were moving furniture into the new house of the Granny, a teenager was busy packing his bag and was ready to get changed.

Granny: *shouted while looking upward the stair* "YOU DO NOT WANT TO MISS YOUR FIRST DAY IN SCHOOL, RIGHT?"

Teenage boy: *reply back* *shout* "FINE, I AM JUST GOING TO CHANGE, SO PLEASE DON'T NAG!"

Granny: *thought* [ that boy.. i wonder if i should put him in "that" School..]

Mover: "where should i put this, madam?"

Granny: "Oh! please come with me."

Granny: *shouted to teenager boy* " YOU GOING TO BE LATE!!!"

Teenager boy run out of the kitchen which surpised his granny.
*with bread with butter on his mouth, a bag on his side*

Teenage boy: "Bye!"

Granny: "Orochi!!"

Mover: "you sure got a energtic grandson"

Granny: "yes. And i do hope he can change his habit of doing things last mintue."

Orochi run out of his house and ready to go to his new school.

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The First Encounter of the Past
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On the way to school...

(Orochi run past Suzaku on the way.)

Zhu Qing saw Orochi run past and saw he was wearing the uniform of the school she going to.
Orochi turn and look at Zhu Qing..

for the moment there...

Orochi : !? *that weird. she look somehow of familiar, did i meet her before?*

Orochi : "Hi! My name Orochi ! Nice to meet you!"

Suzaku: "erm.. Hi..My name is.."

?(girl): "Suzaku!"

A girl come out and meet Suzaku..
Before she turn back, Orochi was gone..

Suzaku: *that weird.."

?(girl): "So we going to the same school? Great!"(happy face)

?(girl)->Sakura
Sakura: "By the way who was you talking to, anyway?"

Suzaku: "huh? no one."

When they reached the gate of the school, there was a commotion which cause the surround student to gather but not going near, Daxiong was there with the boy who Suzaku meet this morning.

Suzaku: "that boy..!"

Sakura: "huh? you know him?"

Suzuka: "erm.. no, just meet him once"

Sakura: "wow, i think he handsome and cute, but look like he have to go pass that bully first"

Daxiong was a well-known school-bully student whose many teachers and students who don't dare to go near him. Because he big and scary looking like a bear, many choose to run off before they get notice by him.

Daxiong: " Hey! You heard me, give me your lunch money"

Orochi: "You talking to me? sorry i don't have any money with me"

Many surrounding students nearby are shocked and back-off when they saw Daxiong's face turn redder.

Daxiong: "Then I'll treat you"

Orochi: "Nope thanks, i brought my bento" *smile*

Daxiong then send a punch to Orochi face.

Many students in the surrounding, some back-off while some run-off, and few say: "That guy's a goner!"

But Daxiong was shocked, Orochi have moved a step to the side to dodge the punch.

Daxiong was mad and try to punch but he keep missing,

Orochi taunt: "So this is your treat? It not good, you have to work hard on your speed, even a snail can dodge it"

Surrounding students: "!"

Sakura : "WOW! Not only he good-looking, he also can dodge all the punchs that Daxiong send"

Suzaku: "But this might not end if he keep dodging..."

Orochi suddenly disappear for a second which shocked many before he appear with his right hand grabbing Daxiong's face.

Daxiong: "!?"

Orochi: "Snake Drive"

Orochi then send Daxiong off the ground and slam him back to the ground head first with a movement as if like a snake.

Many students were shocked by the outcome but still stay near when they saw the bully was knock-out cold with just a hit.

Orochi: "Sorry. I think i overdid it"

Then a student from no where appear, after looking at Daxiong, he look at Orochi and say
"Well well, you sure are good, my name is Byakko Yamashita, what your?"

Orochi: *smile* "Orochi Yamaoto"

Byakko:"How about a short fight?"

Shi Long, a teacher in the school appear.
"Who say you guys can fight in the school now? break it out and go to your class, and i have to take this boy to the restroom now."

He then lift Daxiong, depend the big-sized bully, and take him to the rest room.

Byakko: "Too bad, we'll fight some other day"
and he walk off.

Sakura: "Wow! Byakko still act cool. but i think that guy was cooler and better. what was his name again?"

Suzaku: "Orochi Yamaoto".

Sakura: "Orochi, that werid for a name, but i hope I in the same class as him, gonna make him my prey!"

Suzaku: *sweating*

somewhere in a tree nearby the incident.
Tenryu: "that Orochi guy is holding something back. To use just a move and able to knock Daxiong out."
*showing out his eye."I think i would like to try him out myself."

Suzaku and Orichi

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the second script chapter
i will starting to do a sketches name on the first chapter when i got time

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The School of User
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First is the new student go to the school hall for the opening ceremony, the prinical have his opening speech to welcome new student to the school while welcoming

back those who was in the school before and back as seniors.

Prinical is the head of the Yamada Family and grandfather of Tenryu. His mouthaste is very unique which many new students can't stop to look at him, what also

make him stand out more is his height and also his bright green eye. his mouthaste, spilt up in two, like a dragon with it long whisper. when he open his speech, all fall

fall silent as this is no ordinary school, it only let in students who are "User", also the school location itself is also very magical, all normal human who go near the

school, wouldn't see anything extraordinary, also if they were to about to go in the school, they will forgot the thought of going into the place, and turn around and

walk away, however the place is under the barrier of the principal, this barrier also serve as a protection.

Prinpical: "Welcome to this school, new students, and to those who students and teachers who are back, welcome back. this is the school of "User" and we will let all

the student to use their power and let them to learn and discover what their soul and power lie with, however, we do not encourage you to use the power for fighting

or abusing for wrong-doing. Like what i witness this morning, that student will be punished for bully, and i do also hope the one who was self-defend himself to not to

overuse his power. Let all have a wonderful day and i do hope you learn as you go"

As the prinpical end his speech, all the teachers and students applause before being dismissed to go to their own classes.

Suzaku and Sakura is in the same class and as they go in to the class, they saw Tenryu sitting at the near end corners of the class

Sakura:"Tenryu! oh wow! i wanna sit next to him!"

however many girls are fighting for the seat next to Tenryu.

As Suzaku go near,
Tenryu:" Oh, it you, Suzaku-chan"

Suzaku:"look like we in the same class this year, tenryu-san"

Tenryu:" Sorry but can you sit next to me?"

Many girl who heard this was angry but Suzaku just sit down on that seat, causing many girls to be more jealous.

just then, Shi Long teacher come in, :"sit down class, i will your home-class teacher, take a seat fast"

Many student just randomly sit down, and the teacher count to call out the name for attendance.

Shi Long: " ..... Orochi Yamamoto"

the class: "!!"

Suzaku: *that guy in the same class?*

this cause many other student in the class to be shocked as someone who defeat Daxiong easily to be in the class.

Shi Long: "Orochi Yamamoto, isn't he here in school this morning?"

but before he go to the next name, the door slide out and there was standing Orochi, who was sweating and panting.

Shi Long: "your late, orochi. if there any excuse?"

Orochi:"Errrrrrr.. no.. i was at the toilet"

Shi Long: "ok, take a seat, how about that seat at the back"*pointing to the seat nexr to suzaku*

then in a flash, orochi was in the seat, which cause many to be shocked.

Tenryu: *that guy, i knew it, his speed is very fast, but i wonder who faster*

After the attendance, another teacher come in, it was Suzaku's mother, she wave to suzaku before shilong go off.

Suzaku's mother: "morning class, i looking forward to this class and i will be your english teacher, let have a small introduction to know each other well"

"let start with the end corner at the left", pointing to orochi

Orochi stand up and say (with a straight face):" my name is orochi yamamoto, nice to meet you " and he sit down

Suzaku's mother:"why not say some...."

Byakko stand up suddenly and say:" my name is byakko and my goal for today is to fight orochi" looking at orochi

Suzaku's mother:"well, i want to know more on you guy, but a fight look interesting but..."

Tenryu:"is the lesson not User exercise fight?"

Suzaka's mother:" well.. ok"

many student were shocked but they do want to watch a fight too

Orochi:"why i dun have a say?"

Byakko:" Are you a chicken?"

Orochi:"nvm, i accept the fight..."

they go to the field behind the school

an announment was given and many students go to the field as they want to watch the fight.

Byakko was ready and waiting in the field.
orochi walk up.

"Byakko will win for sure, he from the Yamashita"
"the legendary of the white tiger"
"look like that guy a goner"
"but byakko challenge him, right?"
"maybe it good if he decline?"
"i bet this morning that guy was lucky to defeat daxiong"
"a one sided match.."

Tenryu heard most of the whisper and tot:"hmm.. i doubt that, that orochi have not even show his strength, i think byakko is the real goner"

Sakura:"man! i hope prince orochi beat that byakko stalker and make him shut up for good! GO PRINCE OROCHI!!"

Suzaku:"prince?" *sweating and depress*

Byakko:" LET GET THIS FIGHT OVER"

Shilong:"is this alright to have this fight?"

Prinical :"i do want to enjoy a good fight"

Shilong:"are you listening to me?"*sweating*

Suzaku'sMother:" i want a clean good fight here, no cheating, START!"

before orochi can say anything " what?"

Byakko charge toward orochi and he hit orochi...
to find out he miss

"What!? didn't he hit that guy?"
"no way!"
"where that guy disappear too?"

Tenryu*ho! look like it over*

Byakko: "eh?"

Orochi suddenly appear just in front of byakko , causing byakko to catch off guard
"Sorry, but i prefer to done this fight fast"

"Snake Drive!"

but before orochi can send byakko to the ground

Byakko:"me too, but too bad it over for you"
byakko grab orochi hand and uses

"Tiger Paw!"

byakko hand finger become sharp and he stab orochi in the chest


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