There was once a human girl who was plunged into the world of demons, Akuma Sekai! With only a key and a couple of odd friends at her side, she ventures forth to find her brother, but little does she know of the chaos that will soon consume her world. Truth becomes lies, friends become enemies, a world of adventure and danger lay ahead for Robin Shimizumi!
well there are a lot of things to work on but lets also talk about the things you do well, for one drawing that many pages is an acomplishment in itself it show that not only you love it your dedicated. two you work with manga studio is good as well, now, your characters need work the designs are a little bland and you do a lot of block short legs haha hope that wasn't to painful you need work but with your dedication you'll find you way