Raruto Sisepuede Chapter 02

[leecherboy]

Rata was kidnapped, so what'll happen now?

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Also, look forward in two weeks to the long-awaited, suddenly-released Kakasi Gaiden!

[unok-kun]

Page 4 - That SMS with leet and symbols is even hard to know it has a meaning, let alone decyphering it... The purpose of SMS language is saving keystrokes and make typing faster. Typing that doesn't save any keystrokes and it takes even longer to type on a cell. Something like this would work better, imo: "Rata wz kdnapd. Goin afta him. Rkord Tn8 Ninjs if im nt bk :D"
Pg 12 - Well, this is more like personal choice, but I think "nerd" would fit in better than "freak". I mean, I still don't get at 100% the nuances between geek/nerd/freak, but I think it'd be more like nerd. And that the Spanish word "friki" comes from "freaky" doesn't mean it must be translated like that, when it's used in a different way.