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    Sweaty Some practice Cleans

    I learned to clean about a month ago but recently I've been slacking off in my cleaning. so i did a few for practice. Any feedback would be appreciated

    http://img64.imageshack.us/f/narutoch51305.png/

    http://img407.imageshack.us/f/narutoch51308.png/

    http://img508.imageshack.us/f/narutoch51314.png/

    http://img26.imageshack.us/i/narutoch51306.png/

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    Re: Some practice Cleans

    Not bad at all. The frame lines look a bit sharp and jagged, but I guess that's better than soft and blurry. My only question is, what did you do with the grays? I only saw one overfiltered gray on the first page, nowhere else. Don't tell me there were there no other grays in the original raw?

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    Re: Some practice Cleans

    I don't think there were greys. not that i remember anyway but i will take another look at the raw. I tried not to use any filters.i only denoised once an at a very low lvls everything else was burn'd.ill give it anothr shot though. thank you for the feedback

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    Re: Some practice Cleans

    Quote Originally Posted by Dark_King View Post
    i only denoised once an at a very low lvls everything else was burn'd.
    Stop doing that. Denoisers are a cancer.

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    Re: Some practice Cleans

    ok i didn't in these two i just burned and lvled what i could.

    Here is the link to view in a reader
    http://img801.imageshack.us/i/godeat...urnofmess.png/



    Here is the link to view in a reader
    http://img221.imageshack.us/i/godeat...urnofmess.png/

    Last edited by Dark_King; November 03, 2010 at 09:45 AM.

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    Re: Some practice Cleans

    Better. Now zoom in and start getting rid of the rest of the noise. Use a brush instead of the burn/dodge tools. Just black and white, since it's a black and white image. You'll end up with a better outcome.

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    Re: Some practice Cleans

    Muuuuuch better. You can see the difference too, can't you?

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    Re: Some practice Cleans

    Sorry for the delay but here is another page i did

    http://img97.imageshack.us/f/psyrench14106clean.png/

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    Re: Some practice Cleans

    Well, you need to get rid of the text in panel 1 and you seem to have extended beyond the edge of the panel frame down at the bottom of the same panel. The fine lines are a bit blurry, especially in panel 3. You've lost some detail that needs to be fixed.

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