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Thread: DMS's fanfic: A Demon: Reborn.

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    Registered User 英雄メンバー / Eiyuu Menbaa / Hero Member DarkManSharingan32's Avatar
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    DMS's fanfic: A Demon: Reborn.

    Hey guys, you ever wonder what happened to Gaara?
    Well, almost a year ago i started to write this fanfic about him.. and his climb back to greatness.
    I know I know, you probably all could have guessed it.... but whatever.

    Anyways guys, I'm looking for feedback, and just ideas on the general direction.
    I only have two chapters done, and my brain caved on me before i got to finish my third. (As soon as finals are over I SWEAR i'll finish it.)

    The chapters aren't long... and I really try to give them the feel of the actual manga.
    I don't really know how long it will be... but i would guess somewhere around 10 or so chapters.
    (If someone could MAKE me schedule it... it would be greatly appreciated. lol)
    So go ahead, give them a read... and tell me what you think.

    (P.S. Kusachu... don't get on my case too much. I just need some motivation...lol)
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    And finally...
    My dream is to see this thing made into a manga.
    So of there are any generous artists out there who would like to give it a shot... give me a PM.
    Make my dream come true.

    A Demon: Reborn
    Chapter One: Whispers From the Leaves
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    End of Chapter 1

    Chapter Two: Test and Unrest
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    End of Chapter 2
    ~Elemental Manipulation at its Best~

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    Re: DMS's fanfic: A Demon: Reborn.

    hmmm.... interesting enough to made me keep reading..
    PS>>>I love your use of describing the environment...

    Anyway look forward for next chapter...

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    Re: DMS's fanfic: A Demon: Reborn.

    good!

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    Re: DMS's fanfic: A Demon: Reborn.

    Interesting.... Can't wait for the next chapter
    Errr somehow I can't imagine Temari's new hair... (maybe I'm lack of imagination)
    Keep up the good work


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    Re: DMS's fanfic: A Demon: Reborn.

    Wow, I really quite enjoyed this. The descriptions are very good and I can really feel the mood of the whole thing. I'd love to see more of this!

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    Re: DMS's fanfic: A Demon: Reborn.

    Alright guys...
    Chapter 2.

    Tell your friend about the fanfic, and see if they like it as well.
    Chapter 3 might be a while... i'm still trying to figure out how put it together.
    ~Elemental Manipulation at its Best~

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