Hako-Bune (Story)

[vegnadragon]

I don't think that the clothing style fits the time period right.

[Zeltrax]

Not bad, not bad at all! I can't wait to read your first chapter
I really like Ali and his dog, it reminds me of natsu and happy.
The dog is so cute too and Ali looks like a cool guy, I hope you don't make him too generic though!
Nice art by the way

[MonarchTheLegend]

I don't think that the clothing style fits the time period right.

The setting won't be in Biblical Times, so character clothing designs might change. Or I might even keep them.

The clothing that Ali is wearing is an Inner Tunic with a scarf around his neck and some pants rolled up. The Inner Tunic was a Biblical outfit but I added the pants myself cause they fit Ali pretty well.

Not bad, not bad at all! I can't wait to read your first chapter
I really like Ali and his dog, it reminds me of natsu and happy.
The dog is so cute too and Ali looks like a cool guy, I hope you don't make him too generic though!
Nice art by the way

I love the character of Ali myself and the character of Nel. Even if they weren't apart of the story I'm making, they'd stand out alot by themselves.

This is probably way too spoiler-y, but is the Ark in this story definitely the Ark used by the original Noah? (Feel free to keep silent on this, I'm just curious as to what exactly is your Ark since there's various interpretations.)

You're right about that. Since the setting will change, I'm thinking of a way to still add in the ark.

More art will be coming up soon as well. Still drawing art of course and more of the story will be posted soon.

Still hoping to see some replies. Thanks everyone!

[SUUUPPPAAA!!!]

Hola!!! Working on any panels yet?? Or just fine tuning your drawings or story? lol I don't mean to pry but I have high hopes for ya hahaha. And I don't wanna be selfish but I WANNA SEE MORE!!! hahahaha jkjkjk

[MonarchTheLegend]

Hola!!! Working on any panels yet?? Or just fine tuning your drawings or story? lol I don't mean to pry but I have high hopes for ya hahaha. And I don't wanna be selfish but I WANNA SEE MORE!!! hahahaha jkjkjk

Oh sorry for not giving any updates. I've been working on more drawings, and more drawings (Also watercolored drawings.).

I've been fine tuning the storyboard and everything. I'm still trying to create a plot so I can start forming out the main characters and minor characters.

Also working on Chapter 1 rough drafts so I can get the feel of writing again.

As I said before; more art will come, but I am focused on the story as well.

[Booba]

you should submitt this to yen press when u finish the fist chapter