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Translations: Bleach 595 (2)
@_@ Takes longer than it looks...
I iz n00b.
Last edited by AcidCherry; March 09, 2011 at 02:31 AM. Reason: fail img tags
On the bottom right panel, you didn't center one of the bubbles. (Yeah, I know it says that on the solution to align right one of the bubbles. I didn't like it, but maybe other readers do.)The "futon" one looks good even if you aligned it to the left. On the bottom left top panel, the "I'll scream" is too close to the the edge of the bubble. However, overall, this is pretty good for a first try.
Try different fonts as well. (politely refrains from bashing Anime Ace)