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Thread: Editing Challenges

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    Re: Cleaning Challenge #01 - discussion thread

    Just commenting, but I liked des and Jamie's cleans so far. Good job, I think! Of course you'd have to receive the final word from Fnuck... XD

    And @ Brede, keep it up!

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    Re: Cleaning Challenge #01 - discussion thread

    @fnuckale: i've handed in my 'homework' on the cleaning challenge #1 thread like des

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    Re: Cleaning Challenge #01 - discussion thread

    okay so for des, jamie and brede:
    you know the lines beneath zoro's right arm? (7th panel) well it's suppose to be lines that shows that zoro's jacket is a bit bent.. dont do a whole straight line! .. and you also lost the jacket in the process of redrawing x)

    Also, when you redraw those STRAIGHT motion lines, you should either well redo them all (takes a lot of time) OR use the Stamp tool:
    how does this work? well first of all
    • ALT + click on a line that is ORIGINAL
    • press shift (dont move your mouse before pressing shift) and go down or up (toward the part of the line that is missing), by pressing shift your clicker goes vertically (well in fact 90°x angle from the starting point)
    • click and move the mouse! and it reproduce at that place the same drawing that was where you ALT+click (and the surrounding of that alt+click point, if you move your mouse around..)

    !HOWEVER! the shift technique may not work to get straight lines, because the scan is bent! In that case, you just have to follow the original line before clicking to copy the ALT+click path


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    Re: Cleaning Challenge #01 - discussion thread

    that was part of his jacket? *runs off to try out silveril's tip*

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    Re: Cleaning Challenge #01 - discussion thread

    yeah look at the other panel: he has a jacket that goes around ^.^,
    or even at the left of the katana that is at his belt, you can see a small part of the jacket...
    Also, where would you expect THAT part of the jacket to dissapear ^.^
    Hope my small and quick tut is going to be helpful; and If you have ANY question about it just ask


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    Re: Cleaning Challenge #01 - discussion thread

    Quote Originally Posted by silveril
    Also, where would you expect THAT part of the jacket to dissapear ^.^
    erm...maybe it got torn off during the fight?

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    Re: Cleaning Challenge #01 - discussion thread

    lo
    Quote Originally Posted by Brede
    erm...maybe it got torn off during the fight?
    lol

    I'm not submitting mine. Anyway it's already suppose to be due but I only did this for a practice. =)

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    Re: Cleaning Challenge #01 - discussion thread

    Quote Originally Posted by Jamie
    I'm not submitting mine. Anyway it's already suppose to be due but I only did this for a practice. =)
    Hm =/ your version already looked nice...



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    Re: Cleaning Challenge #01 - discussion thread

    oh even if it's only for practice .. and if your are 1day late it's not that bad, and you should submit it over!
    Because having Fnuck judgment WILL make you progress as he can see.. like every single details that arent right.. So you can only get something good out of it


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    Re: Cleaning Challenge #01 - discussion thread

    here is my attempt let me know what you guys think


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    Re: Cleaning Challenge #01 - discussion thread

    cobra: motion lines in mid panel.. some have white noise on em
    also the shirt line are wrong :O

    anyway here's RUSH version (Twoflower did most of the work.. i just redid the elbow and redrew the swords)
    sorry i forgot to keep the untypesett version... but you can still see the redrawing caus it didnt cover it much of it ^^
    http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/813...c416p132jv.png


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    Re: Cleaning Challenge #01 - discussion thread

    ......

    One detail drew my attention ..... the sword grip....

    Cobra has done it great, but in RUSH version the grip is all black with one white spot.....

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    Re: Cleaning Challenge #01 - discussion thread

    that's because on the settei pre i saw it's all black
    but you are right cobra did a great job on it.. damn shoudv watched the previous frame


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    Re: Cleaning Challenge #01 - discussion thread

    Well thanks for the comments... dind't know much of what I was doin cause I have never read one piece before so all I could go off of was this single page, and what I see of the shirt lines done on Rush's version, it does not look like he redrew the lines he just left what was their and redrew the rest of the shirt... correct me if I am wrong.

    As for my take on the drawing of the jacket/shirt whatever it was I though that instead of it whipping around where you could see only the outside, I figured that it would show the inside of the shirt, cause when you make a movement like that the wind catches it and blows it open on one side and closed on the other, and it is closed on the other side. I toyed with the idea of making it look a dark grey (which I thought looked really cool) but figured that would be to close to coloring it rather than cleaning so I decided to put in some lines.

    Oh and about those lines in the mid frame... ya didn't do anything to them, but I guess I should have, oh well, might just do somethin to pass the time.

    Thanks for the comments though.

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    Re: Cleaning Challenge #01 - discussion thread

    well it can't be the inside of the jacket caus we see the zipper xD
    for the motion line on the shirt we did do the motion lines longer.. but it can't be all the way, and it has to seem bent


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