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  1. July 29, 2011 04:21 PM #376
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    Blush Re: Request a Full Translation Check For Nurarihyon no Mago

    Erm, I hope this is the right place to post this. This is my first time posting a translation and I need a lot of criticism and help with this.
    The sentences I didn't understand are marked in red.
    Sentences that didn't sound right are marked in blue.

    Nurarihyon no mago chapter 163

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  2. September 27, 2011 11:06 AM #377
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    Re: Request a Full Translation Check For Nurarihyon no Mago

    Quote Originally Posted by Meiun View Post
    ｐｇ１１

    Enchō- I feel that "Keidoro" and "Janken" mixed well.
    〝ケイドロ〟と〝ジャンケン〟がまざった感じかな

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    Enchō- I think I understand...In order to save themselves、they're going to seriously come and kill you.
    わかっていると思いますが…人間は自らが助かるため君を殺そうと本気で来ますよ

    ｐｇ１３
    Enchō-At that time, you and your Nura Clan, will be burned to a crisp by human hatred.
    あたしらが勝つってことは...その時君と君の奴良組は人間の憎悪で焼き尽くされるってことだよ
    Hope you got your translation checked and proofed by now. I didn't go over your translation, but here are couple of suggestions.

    ～感じかな： It's like ～　（not "I feel that ～ "）/ケイドロ needs a footnote, or simply translate it as "tag (game)"/わかっていると思いますが: As you know (It is not "I think I understand") Also translate "人間": humans / I didn't see the translated txt for あたしらが勝つってことは/
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  3. December 20, 2011 11:45 AM #378
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    Re: Request a Full Translation Check

    Hello. Can someone please help me check my translation? It is the first chapter of Tetsugaku Letra. The chapter is pretty long (around 60 pages). I'm still learning Japanese so any criticism will be great.

    The sentences I am unsure of are in red and my comments are in blue. For thoughts I've put "name of person thought".

    Thank you for your help.

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  4. January 04, 2012 01:45 PM #379
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    Re: Request a Full Translation Check

    Quote Originally Posted by KazeYuki View Post
    - 赤地にカミナリさんの印が入った靴...
    - Those red shoes with a thunder mark...     (The shoes have a lightning mark but doesn't kaminari mean thunder?)
    カミナリさん/さま (kaminari-san/sama)　would cover a thunder, lightning, and an oger-like creature with 1 or 2 horns wearing a pair of pants made of tiger skin. If you see a lighting mark, just use "lightning" in your translation.
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  5. March 08, 2012 09:20 AM #380
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    Re: Request a Full Translation Check

    Quote Originally Posted by KazeYuki View Post
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    皆の粗を探しては、学校の裏サイトへ書き込み続けた。
    Kimitaka thought - I continued to post everyone's flaws I found
    - on a site behind the school's back.
    学校の裏サイト = unofficial website/forum where anonymous can post anything about their school (mostly abuses about other students). Similar with "2ch".

    So, in this sentence, "school's secret forum" or just "internet" would fit better.
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  6. June 01, 2012 11:36 PM #381
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    Re: Request a Full Translation Check

    Translating a JP manga from ZH to EN. oh boy!
    parts I'm unsure about are in red.

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    Source ZH: http://www.178.com/mh/dongjingesp/14350.shtml
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  7. September 02, 2012 01:24 AM #382
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    Re: Request a Full Translation Check

    If someone could check my translation, I'd appreciated it! This is my first time translating and there were gaps and holes that I just couldn't put together. I posted both the raw and my translated page so please feel free to check those out. I have noted a few sentences that got to me.

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    Thank you very much for you time for proof reading and checking my translation! Any feedback is welcomed and I'm opened arms for any tips! <3
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  8. September 03, 2012 12:01 PM #383
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    Re: Request a Full Translation Check

    Hard to tl without knowing the story, but something like this:

    Like Veronica's castle // again
    I don't want to lose this
    This place must remain peaceful

    Whatever the contents may be
    In order for me to keep on living as Minami Harusumi

    So that people of this world can live ordinary lives

    So that Kamioka can keep smiling

    I will crush the sprouts of anxiety
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  9. October 19, 2012 08:58 AM #384
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    Re: Request a Full Translation Check

    Hi, newbie here. I've done a little amateur translation before but not much, and studied Japanese off-and-on for years but am not at all fluent, so I'd really appreciate if someone could check this over for me.

    It's an 8-page story from a Japanese Psychic Force ('90s fighting game) comic anthology, which I'm doing as a Christmas present for some fellow PF fans. There's one SFX that kind of stumped me, but mostly I just want to be responsible and get it checked. My translation does reflect some artistic license for flow and sense in English (I think if you got too literal with this one it would come off as even more weirdly culture-blind than it already does --- Emilio's from Russia, apparently they don't have Christmas there ).

    Raws: http://imgur.com/a/ZWTEM

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    Thanks so much!

    EDIT: Oh, forgot to ask, if you look this over, please let me know whether and how I should credit you. Thanks!
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  10. December 22, 2012 07:05 AM #385
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    Re: Request a Full Translation Check

    秋彦がおまじないと云うのなら、きっとそうなのだりろう。だが、それだけの意味合いなのだと自分に云い間かせても、視線はキスを落とした唇に向いてしまう。

    Translation:
    If Akihiko says it was magic, then it must be true! However, even though Misaki talked himself into believing this, he could not stop his vision from traveling to the lips that had just planted a gentle kiss on his fingers.

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    Note: That translation isn't mine.
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  11. December 25, 2012 03:29 PM #386
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    Re: Can you help me translate these passages?

    This thread is for member's own translations. Please feel free to upload your translations and request help from other members. Thanks.
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