Be Done and Be Gone

**yukihime03** · June 14, 2012 08:09 AM

Originally Posted by goldb

Of course you are, I read your article

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Originally Posted by xi0

Remind me not to google "Loki Leg Spread" again...

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Originally Posted by scav

those loki gif, u guys are groupies or what?

**goldb** · June 14, 2012 03:59 PM

Okay so I read your article/story and I liked it. It was good, though I expected more to be honest. It was quite informative, solid structure and I found out things about Tom that I didn't know(mostly because I've never looked him up) but it felt like you were trying to convince the reader of his qualities; be it personal or professional and it's easy to tell that you are a fan writing that IMO.

**yukihime03** · June 15, 2012 02:58 AM

Well, that's all I can do for an article that I wrote the night before the deadline.

And yeah, rather than an article, it's more of an argumentative text in which I try to persuade people to like him.
We have printed the magazine, but it turned out that the article was too long so my friend cut the last two sections. It ended rather abruptly but well.. we had no choice. I didn't put much hope in my own articles, but at least by compiling it with the articles from my friends and designing it to be a simple but good magazine, I think we will still get good score for it. *shrug*
Even though I didn't expect much from the content of my own writing, I still want it to be perfect in grammar and spelling. I hope there's no grammatical mistake.

**goldb** · June 15, 2012 05:15 PM

Originally Posted by yukihime03

Well, that's all I can do for an article that I wrote the night before the deadline.

And yeah, rather than an article, it's more of an argumentative text in which I try to persuade people to like him.
We have printed the magazine, but it turned out that the article was too long so my friend cut the last two sections. It ended rather abruptly but well.. we had no choice. I didn't put much hope in my own articles, but at least by compiling it with the articles from my friends and designing it to be a simple but good magazine, I think we will still get good score for it. *shrug*
Even though I didn't expect much from the content of my own writing, I still want it to be perfect in grammar and spelling. I hope there's no grammatical mistake.

Not that I recall, I'll check again tomorrow if you want....