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    Registered User 初心者/ Shoshinsha / Beginner
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    Need feedback

    There's manga I'm scanlating and i still havent settled on cleaning and typesetting method for it..
    here is how i cleaned it before
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    and here is what i tried today
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    ,the grays are bit smoothened out and im not sure since im fan of cleans like this,since i cleaned this too though its HQ scan
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    ..any feedback will be appreciated
    So as reader which one seems more nicer for eye ^^
    Last edited by Lukis; March 15, 2012 at 12:17 PM.

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    Registered User 初心者/ Shoshinsha / Beginner Raenef's Avatar
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    Re: Need feedback

    first it is best if you post the raws with the cleans that way the cleaner can get a better look at your cleaning

    i am not a cleaner as i wont make comment to that

    page 1
    panel 1
    move it down

    panel 2
    not centered

    panel 3
    bubble 1 not centered
    bubble 2 not centered, maybe try out another layout of the text

    panel 4
    bubble 1 not centered, make the text bigger
    bubble 2 if you put the questionmark in yourself, then it is too high, if you left it from the raws (what we normally do) we live with it
    the "HO" dont rotate it that much it gets difficult to read then

    panel 5
    bubble 1 not centered, increase size a bit
    bubble 2 not centered, increase size by 1 or 2 pt

    panel 6
    a bit to the right

    panel 7
    increase size by 1 or 2 pt and move it down

    panel 8
    minimal down and think over the layout of the text


    page 2
    panel 3
    change layout of the text

    panel 4
    bubble 1 not centered
    bubble 2 a bit down

    page 3
    panel 1
    bubble 1 change layout of the text
    bubble 2 not centered
    bubble 3 not centered, increase size a bit

    panel 2
    bubble 1 not centered
    bubble 2 move to the left

    panel 3
    bubble 1 increase size by 1 or 2 pt, move a bit to the right
    bubble 2 increase size a bit and move it to the left

    panel 4
    bubble 1 change the layout, avoid the hyphen
    bubble 2 avoid the hyphen
    bubble 3 not centered, increase size

    panel 5
    not centered increase size a bit

    panel 6
    not centered, increase size a bit

    panel 7
    increase size




    if you compare speedcleaning and hq, hq is the one looking nicer but most groups to speed nowadays the main question is what your group is doing or the group you wanna join
    Was glänzt, ist für den Augenblick geboren,
    Das Echte bleibt der Nachwelt unverloren.
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    The genuine remains intact for future days.

    - J.W. von Goethe (1749-1832), Faust I (Vorspiel auf dem Theater)

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