Joint Review of Bleach 489: March of the StarrCross

[mattiaildivino]

uhm, I don't really understand: I sometimes do that,I don't sometimes. actually,that's not really a mistake...actually I was talking about more important things,not punctuation

[OtakuModeEngage]

Gauhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~.............................. Its crap.
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If you were hoping for a Bad-ass Ichigo moment, or answers to this confusing arc from the all seeing Urahara, you are sadly left displeased. Ichigo shows amazing skills, impressively crushing or rebounding Quincy arrows with his bare hands, but failing to wipe the floor with the Quincy; allowing him to take a second form, a form similar to Arancar’s Resurrección or a Soul Reapers Bankai. Will Ichigo find this new power difficult to overcome? It is hard to say, but many readers were surely hopping to see Ichigo squash him effortlessly. However this development suggests that Ichigo still has a way to go.

As for Urahara, the soul societies lazy genius and seemingly most knowledgeable and in-the-know man, we see him playing around with the Arancars; his purpose in entering Huaco Mudo, just as his true powers have always been, remains hidden. But perhaps that’s the way we love Urahara the most, the man who never reveals his hand until it’s time to strike.

[vagabond87]

Isnt this done for latest chapter Otaku? We ar doing review for previous chapter if im not mistaken

[alphabeta]

uhm, I don't really understand: I sometimes do that,I don't sometimes. actually,that's not really a mistake...actually I was talking about more important things,not punctuation

Like?

Gauhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~.............................. Its crap.
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If you were hoping for a Bad-ass Ichigo moment, or answers to this confusing arc from the all seeing Urahara, you are sadly left displeased. Ichigo shows amazing skills, impressively crushing or rebounding Quincy arrows with his bare hands, but failing to wipe the floor with the Quincy; allowing him to take a second form, a form similar to Arancar’s Resurrección or a Soul Reapers Bankai. Will Ichigo find this new power difficult to overcome? It is hard to say, but many readers were surely hopping to see Ichigo squash him effortlessly. However this development suggests that Ichigo still has a way to go.

As for Urahara, the soul societies lazy genius and seemingly most knowledgeable and in-the-know man, we see him playing around with the Arancars; his purpose in entering Huaco Mudo, just as his true powers have always been, remains hidden. But perhaps that’s the way we love Urahara the most, the man who never reveals his hand until it’s time to strike.

Vaga's correct. That's a part for the next chapter. Are you gonna write a new one, or should we crop characters this time?

[Mrlazsa]

mattia you really did a great job with the analysis
alpha is right about the commas but is just a punctuation error, nothing serious, if you write your piece using word it will correct it automatically. you don't have anything else, except small things like some s you probably just forgot to type (like in line 2: suggest and calm) and other typing errors (line 19: reallt) .
once again great job

[alphabeta]

Whatever, we'll cut characters this time. I'll write my intro/outro now, and than laz's gonna publish it.

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O.K. review's ready to be posted. I'll PM laz with the instructions.

Thanks to everyone

[mattiaildivino]

mattia you really did a great job with the analysis
alpha is right about the commas but is just a punctuation error, nothing serious, if you write your piece using word it will correct it automatically. you don't have anything else, except small things like some s you probably just forgot to type (like in line 2: suggest and calm) and other typing errors (line 19: reallt) .
once again great job

Lol,my pal is a genious! he discovers everything . about the "s" thing,thanks,I forgot to type it but obviously I know that the 3rd singular person requires the "s". and, of course, I wanted to type "really" ("t" and "y" are close to each other). my problems may be phrasal verbs and prepositions. that's where I'd like to be corrected

[OtakuModeEngage]

Otaku epic fail... I was under the impression that we were doing the latest chapter, which is why the deadline was after its release. Should have read the instructions better, lol.

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Otaku resigns due to his apparent stupidity

[alphabeta]

Otaku epic fail... I was under the impression that we were doing the latest chapter, which is why the deadline was after its release. Should have read the instructions better, lol.

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Otaku resigns due to his apparent stupidity

What are you resigning from? The review has been published already.

[mattiaildivino]

as far as I'm in this team,I think the new thread can be opened . Otaku this time won't need to do his part,since he has alreday done it

[alphabeta]

as far as I'm in this team,I think the new thread can be opened . Otaku this time won't need to do his part,since he has alreday done it

Yeah, I'll open it in a sec.

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New Thread.

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489 JR is published. This thread is closed.